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Posted: 16 years ago

hi heenu.......it was mindblowing part...👏...superb....👍🏼...excellent...⭐️....i luv it from first word to last word...😳.....it was so cute..........the rain scene was so goos and i like the poem bcoz it has very deep thoughts about love......i love how both apologize to their kids bcoz i belive every parent should respact their kidz...........and than i love how kashish wants to eat gol gape which is my favorite food......😛.......the most interstring part i love is how sujal make her forgive him........the best way he applied on kashish.....but hey it always works....😉....than as a good husband n a would be father, he follows her order.....😃....i love this part...........specially bcoz no ria........ple ple ple continue soon.........thanks

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow heenu awesome part loved the sk scene ab jaldi se cont karo
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyllo baby.. how've u been?? jus logged in 4 a while 2 update b'dayz..hope to catch ya on ym soon.. miss u loadzzz.. the fic's rockin.. my fav. fic, as i alwayz say..😉.. a greattt part.. nicely written.. curious to know watz next.. continue soonnn.. take care.. muaaahhzz.. nd i want this>> "😳" ......😉...😆..
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Edited by piHu.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome update.. luved to c them together.... SK Romance at itz best..n wow they're goin hve twins thts lovely.. PLzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowwwwwwww such alovlely part................................kitne pyaar se sujal apni two princeess se baat karta hai................................like the gol gappa scene ....................con't soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey heenu superb part!!!!! loved it completely!!! it was simply outstanding...i enjoyed each and evry bit obviously bcoz it was like SK evrywhere!!!! loveeeeely part jaan seriously!!! ove the scene in the rain, u beautifully portrayed their feelings and the poem u added was just superb!!! and totally apt!! but u've always been an expert in getting apt poems!!!!....then lovely scene in the room, it was soo cute hw he sed she shud get changed so she doesnt catch a cold and she ends up sneezing...hehehehe wot timing, but loved his concern 4 her and then ordering coffee....then that part was soo cute wen he sees her talking 2the baby and she notices him in the mirror...she was so shy hehehe and then Sujal coming close 2 her but then moving down and apologising 2 his babies...it was sooo cute loved it completely....each time they talked 2 the babies was damn cute...loved there little argument on having a prince or princess and wowwww twins!!! awwww am soo happy 4 them!!! and loved Sujals reaction, he got so excited!!!....and then him calling her a little football!! hehehe sooo cute!! aur kya awesome tareekay se manaya Kashish ko usne!!! lolzzz bechari couldnt control herself.....and then ehmm ehmmm loved his line after he fastened her strings!! heheehe and that was adorable!! Kashish ko gol gappe khaane hai!!! ab papa spicy pasand karte hain tho bache bhi wahin khaaenge na!!!...but loved her being adamant 2 eat from the stall instead of a resteraunt...it was soo cute hw he was filling the water and making her eat them!!! simply sweet...overall a supppppppppppperbbbbbb part jaan!!! do update soon and keep up the gr888 work!!!! luv Summi xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
heenu dat was superb part....i loved it.....
plzz update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks a lot guys for u beautiful comments........i m glad u liked last part..........
guys here is d nxt.......i know its a small one bt i hope u would like n again sorry for late post
part-37

After some time,

Kashish- sujal where r we going……

Sujal- kashish in just half an hour this is d 5th time ur asking me this question………can't u wait for some time.ur behaving like a child……..

Kashish- pls sujal tel me na……..n y v r not going back to home, av u informed mom, dad, daksh, anagd……..they r getting worried…….where v r going, y ur not telling me…..she continues……

Sujal- kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………….

Kashish- she looks at him ..n sweetly keep her finger on her lips…….

Sujal- looks at him n his anger vanishes in a min….after seeing her like this…..ok it's a surprise for u…….we will reach there wid in half an hour……..

Kashish – ok………but wat abt mom n dad

Sujal- don't worry they wil return tomorrow.n I av already informed bhai…so he will manage. anything else mam……(while smiling at her)

Kashish- sujal bt .she stops in b/w………

Sujal- do u want to say something……

Kashish- nothing….

Sujal – kashish there is something going in ur mind…….tel me…….

Kashish- nothing..she is looking away try to avoid eye contact…..

Sujal keeps his hand on her .while holds staring frm other……..kashishhhh bato kya baat hai

Kashish (she finally looks into his eyes….. riyaa……i mean…..

Sujal- don't worry bhai will handle her………I w'l xplain everything tomorrow to u…bt today's is just ours. i would like to make our this nite most beautiful…….n winks at her

Kashish looks away……..n trying to control her cheeks not turn to red tomato…..

A smile starts playing on sujal's lips

Finally after half an hour journey they reach at their destination…….

Its place far away frm d city nearly at d end………in a peace…..their r fileds all around…….

Sujal takes d car to parking lot……

He comes out of d car….n opnes d door for kashish….

Kashish- sujal

Sujal- shhhhhhhh

Sujal hand over keys to d watchman…….take kashish inside……..

When they enter d place kashish get mesmerized by d beauty of d place…….d place was just like a village……….a pure indian village look has provided to d resort……..

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Sujal takes kashish to a restaurant inside d resort…..

Kashish- sujal its relli beautiful n how much peace is here…….i like this place n thanx

Sujal kisses on her forehead……..ur welcome sweetheart……bt..its nothing infornt of d gifts u av given to me……..

Kashish- smiles…….

Sujal. Lets go……he takes her to d seats reserved for them……

d arrangement of sitting , dinning r completely Indian…….guests av to sit on d floors……aving beautiful carpets……n square table is in front of them………

waiter brings food wid 8 kinds of vegetables in it , chappati n rice in d plates made up of leaves (patal)………pure vegetarian food it was……………

(hey guys d place I m describing is xactly d same in jaipur known as chok ki dhani)

finally after aving their dinner peacefully after a long time…….sujal takes kashish to their room…..coz he relli doesn't want her to stress more by taking her to somewhere else

bf4 entering into room sujal makes kashish blindfold.n kashish quietly accept it coz she knows sujal is wid her……….

Finally they enter d room……..sujal holding kashish frm her waist…..n brings her in d centre of d room……

Here is d room bt its not decorated one

N makes her stand there.n move away frm her………

Kashish get lil bit panicked when sujal moves away frm her

Kashish- sujal…..

Bt no reponse

Finally kashish opens d cloth frm her eyes…….n slowly opens her eyes….n try to recognize where she is…….

She finds herself in a beautiful room……lights were quite dim there…very cool to eyes…..room was decorated wid roses…….

A smile comes on her lips n eyes starts glittering looking at beauty of the room

Bt after few seconds she starts looking for sujal bt can't find her…..

Wen suddenly rose petals starts falling over her……like rose rain ……

Again a smile appears on her face n this time she opens her hand. Starts looking upward……..

Finally sujal comes frm behind tracing his arms over her n his hands in her……n resting his chin over her shoulder…….

Sujal- do u like it….

Kashish- hmmm beautiful. …….

Sujal- not more than u…..placing his lips over her bare shoulder n shiver move down her body……..

She tighten her grip in his fingers… n start moving his lips towards her neckline

Kashish was feeling weak on her knees…..her heart start taking over her brain.

His snesous moves making her mad……

…..sujal moves his hand on her waist n turns her towards him….n she has her eyes closed……

Sujal moves strands of her hair n tucks them behind her ears……n whispers …..kashish where is my gift

Kashish quickly opens her eyes…..n looks at him. There was naughty smile playing on his lips………

Kashish tries to take her step back wen he tightens his grip on her waist…..

Sujal- don't try that sweetheart…..first my gift…..

Fulfilling his demand was not that much difficult for her bt his gaze on her making it difficult to her……

Finally she make up her mind n take his final step towards him…..n finish that one inch b/w them….

Kashish(to herself)- plss sujal I know ur doing all this knowingly. can't u remove ur strong gaze frm me……so that that I can.i mean………she takes a long breath

Both r kept looking in each other eyes

Sujal(to himself)- awww how cute u looks in this suitation………so how can I leave this chance……now I can't wait to taste ur those luscious lips…..bt y u r taking so much time…………..

Finally sujal closes her eyes. .so that she can feel comfortable…….kahish decides that she will give quick pick to him n leaves……she brings his face close to her……andddddddd

Tringgggggggg tringgggggg

Suddenly kashish takes her step back.sujal opens his eyes…n losen his grip on her waist…….n giving killing look to his phone……

At that kashish was trying hard to control her laughter…..bt to her bad luck she couldn't n start laughing at her heart while looking at him. he was looking like defeated king who has lost all his possession at d last moment when he was ready for his victory……

Kashish goes n stands near d window looking outside……it was beautiful……it was full moon day………n d surrounding of d resort was relli more than beautiful…..it was artifical lake in d resort which was clearly visible frm her room…..d moonlight over d flowing water adding a natural beauty to it……kashish was continuously admiring it……

Sujal comes frm behind n n encircle his arms around her waist….

Sujal- now tel me y u were laughing…..

Kashish – while smiling…….nothing…aise he.is there any boundation…..

Sujal- no not at all mam .bt definitely one has to pay for it……

Kashish- pay. wat do u mean by that……..(she get wide-eyed……).

Sujal- u know I don't like if someone leaves her task in b/w

Kashish- I didn't .it was ur call…….n by d way whose call was that…..i would like to thanx him…..(while grinning)

Sujal- don't worry u can thanks mom later on .bt definitely this time u wil pay large amount……n there will be no disturbance coz I av put my phone on vibration……

Kashish - n y didn't u made me to talk to her……

Sujal(while resting her chin on her shoulder)-don't worry u can talk to her tomorrow…….

Kashish (turns)- ok while creasing his cheeks……sujal I would like to change coz I m not feeling comfortable in this saree.. can i……

Sujal- while smiling y not…..n if u want I can help u out.

Kashish( while looking at him wid a kind of an impossible look)- no there is no need…. I can handle myself

Sujal- bt I can help u

Kashish- ok if u want help .so just do me a favour .pls tel where r my clothes…I mean I aven't brough anything wid me…..coz it was surprise….

Sujal- for u not for me….so ur clothes r in that closet

Kashish- smiles n quickly places her lips on his cheeks. thanks sweetheart….n move towards d closet……

Sujal remain standing there for some time……n than smiles at her innocent n cute behavior

Kashish was looking for her night gown bt instead of her gown she finds her white polka doots pyjamas or like a carpri aving cartoon drawing over it .n her white long t- shirt…..

Kashish looks at sujal….sujal frm where did u get it….i mean I used to wear when I was in switzerland bt now……

Sujal- bt watt now u can wear this now even not here only n at home also……it is cho cute…..i would like to see u in this n I know u like this n feel comfortable in this…….

Kashish- bt sujal…….

Sujal – he carefully takes her to d washroom….now u go n change otherwise I can do it for u….

Kashish smiles at him.n goes inside d washroom…….

After she comes out wearing her nightdress her hairs were tied n she was putting a cloture over it …….she was looking like a sweet young girl……….

Sujal keeps looking at her while sitting on bed ……n finally passes his million dollars smile

Kashish(while making puup[y like faces)- sujal I told u …..look how fatty I look in this…..i know this …now ur laughing at me

Sujal comes towards her…..n holds her frm her shoulder…..kashish I can't tel u how sweet u r looking……just like an innocent young girl……n I must say that u start wearing something like this only in ur routine……just making a lil change in ur

Kashish looks at him .n trying to think that abt what change he is talking abt….

Finally sujal takes his hand towards her hair n take out her cloture .n now ur looking perfect……

Kashish smiles at him n hugs him…..i luv u sujal……

Sujal I luv u too jaan…..

.they apart frm each other after a small hug n her takes to her to another room…….it was a quite small one bt yet beautiful… a soft music was playing there

There was no artifical light in d room….only natural light of moon was coming inside…..

There was a table in b/w on which a bottle of champaign was kept……

Kashish looks at him…n finds how much love, respect n care were their in his eyes for her…..

She says nothing bt sujal understands through her eyes…..n passes a smile to her

Then he takes her to d chair n makes her sit comfortably there. n comes n sit in front of her……

He opens d d bottle n put down champaign in d glasses……passes sweetly one to her

Kashish thinks for once that whether she should take it or not bt then she accepts it quietly

Then both toss their glasses……

N quietly both start aving it . N at d first sip kashish realizes that it was not champaign ., just a plain drinking water in d bottle….

Kashish widout using any words says a thanx to him though her eyes….

N in d same wasy sujal says.-- no need of thanx jaan…

She is totally overwhelmed by his gesture.. tear rolls down her cheek…

Sujal stand frm her chair n comes n sit on his kness infront of her…n wipes her tears n through his eyes tells her not to cry at all…..

She again hugs him….n sujal also do d same while moving his hands through her thick hairs……..

After few seconds they both move away frm each other…… sujal extends his hand in front of her……in act of asking for a dance…..

Kashish happily puts her hand in his………

Sujal helps her to stand n then put his hnnds around her waist….kashish keeps her one hand on his shoulder n adjust her thin n soft fingers of her other hand in his….

Song was playing at d backround

chup tum raho chup ham rahen (both were looking into each other eyes)


khamoshi ko khamoshi se zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do


chup tum raho ..(there were no need of words b/w them for xpressing their feelings for ech other)

aankhon mein kho jaaye aankhen bole haathon se haath (sujal kisses on her forehead n she

closes her eyes)


baahon mein chupkar saanson se jaise dole raat (he moves towards her eyes……n then nose…)

(kashish move towards him n keeps her head on her shoulder )


ungaliyo ko ungaliyo se mausamon ko shokhiyon se baat karne do ( sujal moves her hair frm her shoulder n n places his lips over there)



honthon par honthon se likhe bin shabdon ke geet (finally kashish takes her both hand around her neck)
dharati se ambar tak guunje jismon kaa sangeet (while looking into his deep brown eyes)


bekhudi ko bekhudi se aashiqui ko aashiqui se baat karne do (places her feets over his.n stands on her toes n sujal supporting frm her waist tightly n closes his eyes at his own to make her feel comforatable in her task)


chup tum raho ...( finally she put her lips over her n while moving her hands in his hairs…..n he tights his hold on her waist n deepens d kiss……n it turns down into long passionate kiss n moon was witnessing their eternal love for each other)

hey guys forgive me for my mistakes

luv

heena😊

Edited by angel 16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
beautiful update...............no riya again and twas very lovely described....cont soon.............
Edited by spvd - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
heenu awesome part loved it cont soon

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