*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 45

Originally posted by: jia..

Hey Asthu.......i hav already told u a lot......lol dont want to bore u here too......... 😆 😆 😆

chup kar! u never bore me 😆😆

Starting frm the the dressing as i hav told u rest already.......loved the way armi wore watever she removed for him.......tat was damn sweet......then the wayhe looked at her....wen she came out....him looking guiltily at her after tat flashback.......awesomely written......
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thank Youu 😳😳😳

Next.....the dance.......brilliantly written i must say......all the moves awesomely written......very beautifully described.....outstanding....... 👏

owkaii stoppppppp ... on cloud nine .. get me dowwnnnn ... to highhh 😆😆😆

Aww but wat a sad end to it......OMG armi's grey at its peak huh......dont worry abt it ......wud love to see how he changes for good now.......

love da grey shades 😳

once again a beautifully written part......as always love the way u write.....and waiting for u to continue.....

Love ya
Jia

Originally posted by: meow23

gr8888888888888888 part
bad armaan..........heheh

Originally posted by: gidha

KILLER PART!!!!!!!!
PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOON

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey
awwwwwwwww.........
bechara armu naya naya hayna is feeling kay liya time to lagay ga samaj ne 😆
nice prt 👏
👏
cont super soooooooooooonnnnn
luv ya n tak care

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

WooooWWers!!
another inspirer of Katty 😳 !!! She's rullin the FF 😆

Must say ur FF it really!! GUD!, no wrds how to express it, like it a 'raw feelin' aww thank you 😳

Keep it up!!

One Req!
plz PM me when u update ur FF

Thks !

-Natasha

Originally posted by: ~@$hm@~

omg!
omg!
this was great!absolutely wonderful! 😃
You write very well sweetiee 😛

amazingggggg 😃

Originally posted by: saira_1

amazing ff 😳 !!!
you're a really good writer 👏 👏 👏 but i hope armi changes soon 😳 !

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

heyy...it was awesome....wonderful...very well written

the dance, kitchen scene was beautiful but yea the end was sad but as u said he will change soo its f9...it was nice he is feeling kind of jealous from ksg n he wore wat she removed...after all he is a human being bound 2 hav some grey shades n i like grey shades character .. snap (Y) .. same here 😆 😳😳

i loved the way u hav brought ksg hehe...its fun seeing it .. Hahaha thnx 😆😆



sonia/sonu

Originally posted by: nix nd soni

HEY ASTI
firstly i say sorry i apologixe for such a late reply but tum toh sab jaanti ho na yaar...exams!!!!
well now tht i have read d 3 rd part i must say i can say nuthing but one thing tht i am speechless....one question"how do u cum up wid such ideas" haye haye yaar tum toh aksam se ek din maar daalo gi....yaar TOOOO GOOOD ASTI .. thank youuu 🤗
awesum job yaar
sooooooooooooooo amazing....and beutiful
it is ritten so beutifully i jus loved every bit of it but i dun get one thing karan and armaan is d same guy in actual lyf n in d FFa rmaan is from DMG n karan is d actual actor but em reeeelly gettin confused if karan is karan den who is armaan n if armaan is armaann who is karan
?????????????????????
i guess i got u confused tooo
lolz!!!!
hunny it ws jus brilliant yaar...
SHOLON SI SHOLON SI
HAI AAPKI FF KI HAR UPDATE
HUMAARE LIYAY HAI
HUMAARE LIYAY HAI
luv ya asti
sonu

Originally posted by: kvn1983

please update it soon


CHEAT n LUV . . . Bt dnt LuV n ChEaT...
TH'Nk n LuV . . . Bt dnt LuV n THink...
Break d HeArT n LuV. . . Bt dnt LuV n BrEaK the HeArT...
THNK OF IT!