*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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@yogzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#421

very nice part astha 👏
thanx for pm

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#422

hey,nice part 👏
well written...

continue soon...

luv
*vini*

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jhanvimooni

@jhanvimooni

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

#423

Hey Asthu,

That was yet another amazing part ..it totally rocked ..hehe RIDZ getting in to the JUNGLEE BILLI avtaar..update soon

Cheers

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#424

Hey Aastha..that part was so nice..really romantic..continue sooon!

Anita

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#425

Hi Astha,
Too good the part was...junglee billi...was the best you could you come up with....can't imagine our seedhi saadhi Ridz in junglee billi avatar
I love fun fairs....really really good...& then zara zara touch me touch me....was icing on the cake...
U are one of the most romantic FF writer I have read....love your work...
take care

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#426

hey asthu dat was gr8 part jungli billi .......u know i had read dis 2 parts today i felt after part 9 u didn't update it but today i was just checking it n wat i saw i missed 2 parts

pls pm next asthu
btw gr8 part 👏 ,

chandni

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#427

Wow Asthu!!

Great part!! Haha all seem shocked with junglee billi and so am i.... 😆 Loved the way u penned it down!!

ok the entire fair scene was excellently written. u made so delightful and romantic to read.

I cud jus imagine Armaan's expressions!! 😆 😆 Poor guy wondering wats wrng with his wifey?? 😆 😆

And the dance....u seem to be a master in describing the dance moves huh??? 😳 😉 As they say cheery on the cake!!

brilliantly written Asthu!! Loving the way ur taking this....

Will be waiting for more
love
Jia 👏

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago

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vanita

@suvrati

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#428

hey sweety i am new to ur ff
just read all the 11 prts together
u r an awesum writer i must confess
like jias i have read her prts ttoo as u r inspired by her u did ur work upto mark
srsly u r fab
loved all ur prtsssssssssss
they were so sensitive n romantic too
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
n plz can u pm me when u update ur ff plz

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Soumya Pradhan

@friendly_Soumya

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#429

hi i simply loved your FF,itz too good! n pls can u pm me each tym u update from now on?👏🏻

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#430

ok....here i go asti!!!!

firstly HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!

yaar em extremely sorry k i cudnt read it earlier n i read it form part 5 to part 11 now...u know na y?
ytoh here is my comment!!!
asti jaanu...........kya likha hai..."MUAH"

awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum....infact my favourite part was the one at d court u know....lolz!

tht scene ws brilliant....asti kya likha hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cant do anything but praise u!!!
lovely jus beutiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ufffffff em out of words and this always happens wid me fter reading ur FF's i get out of words..

AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!

continue soooooooooon jaani!!!
hey asti "aaj kal abuhat long long parts aa rahe hai...hnmmm...n i luv u for this"

infact u already know how much i love u yaar dost!!!!!!!!!!

n i wnat d next updt sooon...k? lolz!

luv sonu