*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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lightening

@lightening

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#431

hi aastha
well i have been a silent reader so far but ur latest part compelled me to leave a comment!!!! it was brilliant the way u penned the whole thing dwn. n its been sooooooooooooooooooooooooo long plzzzz update soon i mean i seriously cnt wait 4 u to put up the nxt part.
love u loadsssssss
stutie
p.s.- remind me to take help 4rm u to write the romantic scenes in my ff..lol!!!! .. u r 22222222 good!!

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@R1U2K3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#432

hey, just finished off reading your ff...and God
ur just truly an amazing writer...
i just loved the story..
please continue soon...desperately wanting to read more*
Rukz

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#433

please continue it soon please

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#434

amazing part astha

toooo gooood

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#435

astha after a long time u update😛 it thanku😊😉 so much and ur update is rocking⭐️ so sweet😳 awwsome😊😉 one really a romantic❤️☺️ one please continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Khushiyon ka ek sansaar leke ayenge,patjhar mei bhi bahar leke ayenge,jab bhi pukaroge pyar se hame maut se bhi saansen udhar leke ayenge...!"

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#436

hey the udpate was mindblowing.........u r my mindblowing mahiya.......u rock...........the episod was so romantic..........i love it........i was waiting for u to udpate it..................i love the way ridz call armaan shona it sound so cute..........love that.............i also love how armaan call ridz baby and jaan love reading all ridz dhamak that she do at night............thankc 4 the pm........cnotinue soon.........

❤️MONA

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#437

Awww it was such a cute one Asthu.....👏

So very very adorable!! their pillow fites.......😆😆

so very very adorable really....loved it.....and her remarking that he only thinks about one thing 24*7.....such cute dialogs....😳

And then the teasing bit....her saying i am a dangerous girl......😆😆

and then him retorting from experience earlier....loved the bit of teasing.....

Great update....loving the cute and sweet little treats ur giving girl......😳 Keep it going.....love ya.....🤗

PS: One complain....part was super short....want a longer one next time.....😆

Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#438

Two parts, and no pms!!!

Mann I can't afford to miss out n a awesome FF!!!, plz do pm me pluesse!!

Man, AR are just fillin the world full of love!!

Awesome update darling!!

-Natasha!!

Edited by Ladoo645 - 17 years ago

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#439

hey asthu 😊
thanks for the pm sweety😉
never knew even u liked remix well i also love it😳
awesome parts dear i read two at a time loved them
superb mind blowing fantastic 👏
update soon
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