*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 14

Wowwwwwww Asthu.....🤗

i had already told u .....this part was fantabulously written.....👏

just excellent......a delicate situation written very very maturely and with great care..... 👏

And the scenes next....him feeling guilty......aww hope hefeels even more.......hurt the poor gurl so much.......he needs to get a grip now......each scene written with sheer brilliance........the silence in the car.....armi not liking it.....trying to talk to her with confused thoughts....just outstanding...... 😳

very very eagerly waiting for u to continue....hope ur exams r going great.....dont take too much stress and plssssss take care of ur health.....and hoping u will continue ur other ff soon too.....as u know i love tat too......😳

love ya
Jia

Asthu 🤗
Im so sorry for the late comments like you know im inactive for exams 😳 !
Omg ur fanfic is one of the best FF's i have ever read while reading ur Ff im so engrossed in it and when it comes to and im like "oh no its finshed have to bug her to update again 😆 😆 "
Seriously all words will fall short to describe ur Amazing, outstandin, fantaboulous efoort that you put into you writing 👏
Coming to the latest part im really liking the story line 😳 What Armaan is doing is hearbreaking Poor Riddhima must be in a huge trauma
But on the bright side this will makee Armaan realise his feeling and make him understand physically making someone your's is not what a husband-wife relation is about I love the way ur sending out a msg that Husbands dont own wife's they are supposed to be together by mind even if not physically and a hubby does not have a right over everthing of his Wifey until they metally bond which im sure you will make Armaan realise 😳
I love the way u made Riddhima re-act he totally deserves it
Awesoem update continue super soon till u dont continue i wont either 😉 😆 😆 I love doing this ttoo you
Take Care
Love Muskaan 🤗

hey astha

it was WONDERFULLY WRITTEN....u rock dear...truly rock...hats off 2 u 4 writing it soo maturely

i loved how ridz treated him...how he felt guilty n all...how he tried 2 talk 2 her...everything was awesome...written very nicely...UR A GR8 WRITER

now i wonder how they will over come this situation...n move on in life...how he will seek apology


SONU 😳

heyy astha....
how r ya....hopin yur not badly ill.....get well soon..

awesome part.....it was sad buh cute 😳 ....
true say...it was short buh hoping to read a long one next time 😉

plzzzzzzzz continu soon
and thnx 4 da pm

luv ya,
ridz,
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AWWWW!! Armaan trying to make up, You're in love ARmaan!! Continue soon!!!

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i bloody luved it lool 😉
very short updte doh was lkin 4wrd 2 readin mre
sor 2 hear ur nt feelin wel hope u gt wel soon
n as 4 ur ff luvin it as always
wot else can i say its briliant
n nw i cnt wait 4 da nxt part 2 c wot hapens
between dem sooo much emotion n tension in dis part
i luved it cnt wait 4 da nxt part
updte asap n hope u feelin betr
luv niz xxx
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So emotional yaar
Plz cont. sooon 😉