*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#111

wooooooooow
i luved it really sad
bt hope dey cn gt pased
it n hope armi realsies his feeelings qucikly
it was really gd as usual very emotionl part
updte soon plzzzz

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#112

i cnt believe armaan 😭 !
well written 👏

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Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#113

Heyy Yaar
sorry for late comment was on camp
last 2 parts were very sad....
i want them to sort things out very sooon
rite nw i am hating armaan
plz cont soon
and thanks for the pm

Sonii

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 17 years ago

#114

reallya graet part now armaan can change let see what will happen and please update it soon pleaseeeeeeeee

Give laugh to all but smile to one,
Give cheeks to all but lips to one,
Give love to all but Heart to one,
Let everybody love you
But you love one.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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Huma

@heyy_babyy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#115

I am in tears...Such an intense part...But Im glad Armaan stopped just in time...Hope everything works out..Plz coninue soon!!!

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#116

d part was soo nicely written.............
do contd fast

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--Princess--

@--Princess--

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Posted: 17 years ago

#117

You're an EXCELLENT writer. Continue..

I want to know what happens next...

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#118

it was wonderful astha & very emotinal
thanx for pm
👏

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-SH-

@-Facetious-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#119

hi astha,

just caught up with this ff of urs.......very much different from *childhood crush*......but definately a BRILLIANT one....

Loving this one also...

If u dnt mind then plzz pm me the nxt part...

luv,
shivani 😳

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 17 years ago

#120

amazing part, really well written! im really hating armaan right now! hopefully he makes it up to her, and realizes he loves her!!!! please continue soon!