Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AR)Prt 14/pge 123-*Note pge 140* - Page 84

Originally posted by: kvn1983

"A sister's a sister forever,
A bond that diminishes never,
A friend who is kindly and caring,
A sibling God chooses for sharing.
Few ties as deep and profound
And with so much affection abound
Though some thoughts are seldom expressed
Love endures and survives every test.
Of the constants that rest in the heart,
A sister's a primary part.
She'll always be there when you need her-
You listen, you value, you heed her.
As growth, independence you ponder,
Your feelings grow deeper and fonder;
And life tells you one thing that is true:
A sister's a large part of you."

Thanks Nidha

and loved the shayri/poem btw😳

Originally posted by: desi_angel101

Irsa k i've kinda been a silent reader since u started this ff nd i'm soo sorry bout that i was always just too lazy to comment which was really bad on my part cuz u have an amazing fic going here!! nd u kno wat's the scariest part is that minus the item numbers lol this ff is literally like the story of my life honestly!! its funny how much i can relate to it only diff is that my real life armaan hasn't fallen for me yet:( lol but i'm working on it kinda like ridz:D but anyways meri kahani chhodo aur aap ki kahani ki baat karti kya likhti ho yaar its so captivating every single part has me hooked onto it...haha i can't believe u actually used a website for tapori words i just burst out laughing when i read that but it shows how much work u put into each part nd it was totally worth it that part rocked...anyways i'll just remember to mentally kick myself next time if i don't comment so is baat par plzzz jaldi se update kardo!!

Luv Richa

Aw, thanks Richa... i'm so glad you liked it... will try and update as soon as i find the time to type./..lol

lol don't worry, you're real life armaan would fall for you soon...lol...😳

lol yeh, the website.. it turns out the language is called 'bhindi'😆...lol it shows how much i put into my writing😆😆😛

Irsa, as you can see most of your readers want you to update...and im of them..😆

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Irsa, as you can see most of your readers want you to update...and im of them..😆

I hope you find time!

Love, Anita

Happy Independence day Irsa!

lol Anita!!! it's you... again😆😆....lol

haven't had a chance yaar... have too much geog coursework to do... 😡..and have only started it yesterday!!!... it really wasn't a smart move leaving everything for the last two weeks of holz...lol😕... but will pdate as soon as i can

Happy Independance day to you too😃

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

pls cont soon plssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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sorry yaar, i feel really bad for not continuing since ages, but i have a lot of coursework to catch up on, and have only two weeks left of holz,😕 and i doubt i'll get half of it done... though, i'll try and update whenever i get the chance😳

amagzing work again but plz conti soon just a suggestion from my side i think u should intro atul in ur fiction only he is missing he can add a comedy element in ur fiction and also that rhiddhima should know that it was armaan who mix something in her drink that why she gave a sexy performance . iam not liking that she is apologing to him she should know about this and then armman can realized taht how much he loved her and then armaan can run behind rhiddhima sing song in college etc

Originally posted by: naureen_aly

amagzing work again but plz conti soon just a suggestion from my side i think u should intro atul in ur fiction only he is missing he can add a comedy element in ur fiction and also that rhiddhima should know that it was armaan who mix something in her drink that why she gave a sexy performance . iam not liking that she is apologing to him she should know about this and then armman can realized taht how much he loved her and then armaan can run behind rhiddhima sing song in college etc

this is only my suggestion 2 u rest it is up to u 2 decide

again i would say that amazing work gr8t work

Thanks Naureen... glad you liked it

thanks for the suggestion, will see if Atul could fit in a future character

actually i've already planned out the next 6/7 parts of the story- in my head-...lol..., i just have to find tym and pen them down...so you'll have to wait and see when ridz finds out the truth... but thr confession/first kiss would be in 3 parts max, and then thr romance would start...lol.... and i like the song idea, i'll see where i can squeeze it...lol😳

dying to read more.. PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

hey i tink u r busy with ur work....
but dont forget to pm me wen u update it

wen u updating... waitngg 4 d nxt prt