Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AR)Prt 14/pge 123-*Note pge 140* - Page 83

nice part.........atlast armaan does realize fully dat he strongly feels 4 ridz.......😊😊😊...
well written......m sorry couldnt reply b4 coz was offline..........😭😭..
waiting eagerly 4 next part.....

thanx 4 d pm.......
continue soon....

luv
vini

a veryyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyy great part.
plzzzzzzzzzzzz do update sooooooooooon.
it is going on soooooooooo nicely.

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

nice part.........atlast armaan does realize fully dat he strongly feels 4 ridz.......😊😊😊...
well written......m sorry couldnt reply b4 coz was offline..........😭😭..
waiting eagerly 4 next part.....

thanx 4 d pm.......
continue soon....

luv
vini

Thanks vivi... glad u liked it

you don't have to say sorry for late comment... i'm also a very late lateef... you can tell by my late updates😳😆

Irsa k i've kinda been a silent reader since u started this ff nd i'm soo sorry bout that i was always just too lazy to comment which was really bad on my part cuz u have an amazing fic going here!! nd u kno wat's the scariest part is that minus the item numbers lol this ff is literally like the story of my life honestly!! its funny how much i can relate to it only diff is that my real life armaan hasn't fallen for me yet:( lol but i'm working on it kinda like ridz:D but anyways meri kahani chhodo aur aap ki kahani ki baat karti kya likhti ho yaar its so captivating every single part has me hooked onto it...haha i can't believe u actually used a website for tapori words i just burst out laughing when i read that but it shows how much work u put into each part nd it was totally worth it that part rocked...anyways i'll just remember to mentally kick myself next time if i don't comment so is baat par plzzz jaldi se update kardo!!

Originally posted by: rashi_23

a veryyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyy great part.
plzzzzzzzzzzzz do update sooooooooooon.
it is going on soooooooooo nicely.

Thanks Rashi... glad u liked it

heyyyy..

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

Heyyy....
Okay sooo to be honest i've been reading your fan fic for a while...but just found time to comment..soorry...just been busy with stuff for school and now schools starting from next week🤢...lol.. i know what you mean... mine starts in two weeks😡

Anyways...I absolutely love your fan fic...you have no idea lol Thanks... i'm glad you liked it

Is this your first fan fic? yeh cuz it really really doesn't seem like it...your soo good! Thanks... but it really isn't that great!!😳 lol

In one of your first few parts..you wrote abt how ridz made armaan aloo paratha..and how he loved them but his ego kept him from telling her the truth...i htought that was a really sweet part cuz he was sooo touched by her making him food.. lol yeh,... Armaan loves a lot of things about her, her cooking being one of his favourites😳

And the zara zara dance scene..whooo haha ridz sure got wild and armaan was liking it...hehe.... Armaan was loving it!!😆
Hmm I guess I would sorta blame armaan too if my clothes were changed and the maid was saying her husband probly changed her clothes..i mean in a way its understandable but she still should've listened to armaan.....
he had no idea where everything was going, so you can't blame him much either

And woah what a jerk armaan is for not even listening to her..she waied for him for 2 hours just so she could apologize and he just left with out even listening to a word she had to say.....jeez men and their ego lol... lol he sure does have a big ego
hehe you actually used a website that had tapoori words and hteir meanings on there? smart move lol...it made that scene even better...
lol😉.... it made the scene funnier when i read it through, though it was meant to be serious...

thank god armaan came back in time to save our ridzy....i knew he had to come back...lol after all he is our HERO😉...
Hmmmm now our armaans in thought...and that to abt ridzy....haha
Armaan your feelings are definitely greater than attraction....try LOVE?lol. lol Your falling for ridz even more day by dayyy
He'll soon realise it was love all along... he's just waited for me to update😆😆...lol

I seriously can't wait till you post your next part...when ever that is lol...continue as soon as you can plzz! will try
And if its not too much...will you please pm me when you post your next part? sure...np😃
I promise to post a comment next time...lol...though it might be a late comment with school starting and all i'll be busy.... lol that's fine... but yeh, do comment😆😳
Seriously I"m addicted to your fan fic...your doing a great job👏👏👏
👏👏👏 Aw, thanks
I bet this is a really long comment...i haven't really looked at the length i just kept typing lolz
lol thanks, i like reading the long comments... keep 'em coming!! 😛😆

I'll be waiting for your next part =) lol

luv mira

Thanks Mira...

Originally posted by: revna

heyyyy..

it was soooo omg...

he actually saved herr!!

thnkxx for the previous pm!!!

i was readin the b4 part....n went to comment thn i found out tht this part is upp!!!

it was soooo guddd!!

thnkxx goood he reached in timeee !!

luved ittt!!

luvs revna

xx

Thanks Revna...

lol, yes he saved her!!!😆