Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AR)Prt 14/pge 123-*Note pge 140* - Page 60

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Irsa...it was an awesome update...luvd it...da wait was useful....i jus luvd da way u have written da flashback...awesome...looking forward for da nxt update...n thnx for da pm...cont asap...




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Posted: 17 years ago
it was reallyy...sweet for armiii...to not hurt her..
he toke care of her in this state....
n realy liked the wayyy u used the song...
u did an awsumee part...
i wanna knowww..wht will ridzz
do wen sheee wake up....
luved evrytinn....it was jus awsume!!!
thkxx for the pm!!
waitin for the next part...
luvs revna
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: inuyasharocks

woo hoo first to comment. that was gr8 👏 ridz is really cute when she is drunk. i could imagine wutever was happening like i was watching a movie. like always exceptionally well written. awww armaan is developing feelings for our cute ridz. 😳 😳 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon. thnx for the pm 😃



Thanks

Ridz had completely lost it😆...lol...yeh armi's startin 2 get attractd... but ridz accused him so he may ignore such feelings😕
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

hey,it was a nice part...armaan is toooooo caring... 😳 😳 😳 ..
wanna see ridz reaction soon....d flashback part was tooo gud... 👏

continue soon....
thanx 4 d pm....
luv
*vini*


Thanks vini


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Originally posted by: armaans*basket*

OH MY GOD!!! This was your most beautiful and well written part to date. It was amazing man. i could visualise each and every thing. I loved it. update super soon. Awesome job girl

Love
Kiran


Thanks Kiran... i'm so glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: angel1117

wow...veryyyy nice part...i loved armaan in it!!! and i loved the flashback too...now riddhimas gonna feel very guilti for her accusitions! 😆

update pm would be gr88 😊


Thanks..ridz wud soon feel guilty, once she relies SHE was wrong😕.... sure i'll pm u😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anitamalik

That was too good Irsa...You did it again! 👏 The whole flashback was beautifully described...it all fell into place. You are too good of a writer..I throughly enjoyed reading the whole sequence..TOO GOOD! Thanks alot Anita... i'm so glad u liked it😳

What Armaan did was totally right..He kept his emotions aside and helped her out--even when he was at fault for her condition. I'm happy he regretted what he did looking at Riddhima's condition--it was very very wrong. AND Armaan was super sweet in this part 😉 Thanks, yeh he ignored his feelings 2 'grab nd kiss' her 4 now😆... nd helped her 2 the fullest...lol he is VERY sweet😳😆😆

The flashback was portayed very very well! You presented every single detail in order..GOOD JOB! 😊 Thanks

Looking forward to reading more...continue soon! will try asap... Thank u😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hyperash

heyy!!!!
finallly u updated!! lol was waittinn!! lol.. sorry abt the delay
armis sooo sweeet n caring...relli cuuute part...luuveeed ridz singing zara sa jhoom loon..i strt singin tht song randomly sumtimes😛 lol...but nice part...want to c ridz reaction to all this...doo continue soon...will b waitin... will try ASAP
thnks for the pm!! keep em cumin 😉 np... sure😃
luvss aashna Thanks Aashna... glad u liked it😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rockeraryan

gr8 prt bt u need 2 edit it done😃


Thanks

Originally posted by: redi50

nice part
armaan fits in all kind of roles
thanks for the pm
plz continue soon
❤️Heli


Thanks Heli... np😃

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

awwwwww dat was sooo cute
luvin armi man hes great loool Lol thanks
flashback wasnt dragin
very ncly writen flashback thanks
atleast we gt a gd view of wot happned
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part n yes u
mde armi really sweet n sum freind he has god lol lol armi sure is sweet😳... yeh his frends r pathetic😕😆

great wrk
updte sooon plzzz

nizma x


Thanks Nizma
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle94

he wasnt close 2 sweet he waz more den dat... loveing, carein, honest, loyal, trustworthy, etc.... lolz! lolz word sure aren't enough 4 him😳😃
luved thiz prt fabuolouz it waz a nice flashbck n now Ridzy will c how rong she waz bout him unles she doesnt bleve him stil she'll feel guilty whether or not she believs him😕
lolz thnx 4 tha PM do cont soon! thanks Twinkle...np😃

❤️twinkle!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

THAT WAS AMAZING!!! absolutely awesome part.. you wrote it well..Thanks i loved what armaan did.. it was the right thing to do.. i also like how he notices things abut her.. likes those things about her.. and all that..he's starting 2 notice even the smallest things😳 it was a nice long part..lol, took me agez.. but had 2 make up 4 the delay😆
the flashback was not at all a drag.. it was perfect.. it identifies all the details.. i know you just updated.. but please please update soon! lol, will try asap i cant wait to read the rest of it.. and how ridz apologizes to armaan and also maybe.. the start of their friendship!? *fingers crossed*😆😆 thanks a lot for the PM! np...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

Amazing part!!! 👏 I really liked the flashback as well as what Armaan did..Thanks Avanti and I'm glad you're not going to drag the story but rather make Ridz feel guilty!!👏 ..lol... but will she feel guilty 2 the fullest??? or still blame him???😕 Pleaseeee continue soon! I can't wait to read more 😳 will try 2 soon

Avanti



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