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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hmm nyc 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 part wah wah kashish ko ghusa aya v.Gud ana bi chaheye tha aha me waz waitin ky sujal ko abi para ky para thapar lol akher usy ghusa aa sakta hai tou y not kashish ko lol i thnk nxt prt mei s ko thapar parh jaye coz agar wo aisy ulty sedhy kaam karta raha tou pyar tou kya donu mei nafrat bi nai ho ge n kashish ko bi itna ghusa nai karna chaheye kya pata sujal ky yun behavior ky pichy bi koi wajah ho...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part
kashish was get sujal to be nice by her attitude
do continue reguarly

Ruhee
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great fic pls cont soon. Wanted to comment abt jyoti's comment. Most people specially bachelors to relax after a stressful day drink or go in for sex hamara sujal toh drink karta hai. once sujal gets married apne aap sudhar jayenge.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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k ke aate hi he looks at her

k in a business lik manner,saare drink ki bottles nikalke s ke saamne rakh deti hai

s grabs a bottle

opens the bottle

& strts gulpin lik a fish wld tak water

naa idhar dekh raha hai naa udhar dekh raha hai,keeps on gulpin it

k with immense surprise is lookin at him,usne kabhi bhi aisa ajeeb sa insaan nahi dekha

then k also gets busy with her work

leavin him alone with his drinks

aft some hr or so

abhi bar almost khali ho chuka hai

& k is free aft the wrk

k ki nazar s pe padti hai

who is so sozzled ki he cant even raise his head

his head is reatin on his srm on the bar table besides the row of some empty bottles

he is shakin involuntraly

she goes 2 him

she is a bit nervous

k-emm..sir!..sir!..

he is not rplyin jst shakin

nudges him hesitantly with a finger

he raises his head a bit,lookin at her with her blood shot red drunk eyes

k-emm..sir..bar band hone ka waqt ho gaya hai,aapka bill sir..

he staggers his hand twrds gis pocket aur wallet nikalta hai

wallet kholta hai,ki wallet falls frm his hand

k s ko wallet uthake deti hai

he looks at her 4 a sec,k ka to darrke maare gala sukh raha hai

& takes the wallet

aur card nikalke table paar rakhta hai

k-sorry sir,v r not acceptin cards these days. wo card swaapper repair pe gaya hai,u hav 2 pay cash

s is still shakin,ankhen kholna mushkil ho raha hai

wallet se jitna cash haath mein aata hai,utna nikalke table par rakhta hai

k-thanku sir

k goes 2 the cash counter 2 pay on his behalf

par k jab pay karke bill leke aur change leke aati hai,she sees s is gone

k-arre wo..

she also sees his credit card lyin there

k-arre ye kahin kho jaega to,kal aenge agar to de dungi

k keeps his things with her
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey plzzzzzzzzzzz cont i loved ur parts
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part 👏
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
nxt day-

rat ko same time pe

thake haare kaam ke bhoj se sarabor mr sujal garewal enter aur apni fixed jagah beth jaate hain

s-miss!

k who was doin some other work turns

s raises an eyebrow as an expression 2 giv him wht he wants

k smiles,in acceptence

& s ke paas jaakar uski drink pour karti hai

k-stone whiskey without ice sir,on the rocks! njoy!

s-thanku

s jst touches his lips 2 the glass

k-sir! i jat forgot sorry!

s looks up,with a bit irritation

k-i forgot 2 say good evenin 2 u sir! gud evenin sir! 😊

s is straight faced

phir jst sips the drink

again-

k-sir! sorry sir i again forgot!

s-wht! [irritated]

k-sir ysterday u forgot ur card & the change [uske dene ke lie haath badati hai]

s takes the card & pocket mein rakhta hai

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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
k-sir the change

s-keep it

k-but sir..

s-keep it! 😡

k chup ho jaati hai,aur s ke samne bottles rakh deti hai so he can hav his fill

aft a while when s is slmost half srunk

& in the meanwhile,k is instructed somethin by her senior

k comes 2 s

k-excuse me sir

he looks at her

k-sir this is a new drink,frm a new brand,sir u can taste it!

s-no leave mw alone!

k-but sir its complementry,jst tate & plz give ur verdict

s-dont want it!

k-but jst a glass,try it,it is new & supposed 2 give highet high & pleasure

s-wht is its alchohol content?

k-the maximum sir 99 percent

s-i want full bottle

k-no sir u cant hav it,u can jst tasre a glass

s-i'l pay jst give

k-no sir its not premitted 2 serve above a glass its a very intoxicating drink

s-i can hadle it,jst give it 2 me damn it!!!!!!!!!!

k-i cant & i will not! [sternly]

kisine bhi sujal se aise kabhi baat nahi ki

uska paara satve aasmaan par pohonch raha hai

s-u...

par tabhi some1 calls,4 servin them & she goes keepin the bottle on shelf

the client gives k order & serves him & pours him drink frm her own hands & gives it 2 him as her usual way

wo client to dheere dheere sippin the drink

so k comes back 2 the bar,& busies herself

s-serve me!

she turns in complete surprise

s-serve me drinks

k-i hav given u ur drinks

s-i am not a worker here,or pay any less,ao y cant i be served

k-bcoz ur drinkin frequency is so high tht i hav 2 sit through all the while ur here jst servin u & only u

s-so do it,thts ur work,tht y ur paid



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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey da cont soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn....... i loved it
thnx 4 da pm........... & do pm me when u will cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aha s k ko force karring lol nice part n s ab har waqt nashay mei hota hai tou k pe dyhan kaisy dy ga n agar dyhan nai dy ga tou wo usy ache kaisy lagy ge lol but i thnk wo k ko force kar raha hai us ko drinks hath mei dyne ko may be s ko wo ache lage agar aisa hai tou bohot he ache baat hai waiting 4 the nxt prt do conti.

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