**Captured By Love** POLL p.43 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Sonali06

That was wonderful. I loved the first chapter and I love your Armaan!! 😳 Just loved the way you wrote the whole sequence 👏

thanks so much!! lol i love Armaan being sweet yet dangerous!

Originally posted by: rima791

gr8 part 👏
wow both bros are same 😉
loved ridz daring oops "feisty" character in armaan's language 😛 😆
awesome kidnapping scenes 😳
love the way how angad fell for kripa 😉
plz cont soon 👏

thanks soo much!! lol they actually aren't bros but they might as well be since they have always been together.

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

dude..u did a gr8 job writing that first part! all those details were awesome! im so excited to read more! cont soon.

thanks soo much!! glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: 26javey26

👏

thanks!!!

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

very lovely!!
kripa and riddhima are spoiled!! spoiled to bits!!
i guess the kidnapping will make them realize that their is life outside their own life!! and its a pretty tough life...cuz not everything revolves around money!!

the kidnapping was awesome...lol
how'd angad and armaan get in the house?? juss wondering...i know they are pros but still

wow kripa and riddhima actually kinda put up a fight...but nothing beats a hanky with chloroform and of course two strong guys like angad and armaan lol

wonderful part! loooved it!

yup they are very spoiled and they need a little dose of reality as well so this experience should be interesting for them. lol u'll find out in the flashback how they did everything. thanks!!

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Great chapter! 👏

I'm glad Kripa and Riddhima put up a good fight...I'm sure they won't be easy to handle for the two guys. Continue soon!

thanks so much!! no they wont be easy.

Originally posted by: deeya123

great start
luved it
both angad and armaan m sure has realised that their targets are not easy to handle
waitin to read more

thanks so much!! yup they have!

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great Part
Please continue soon.

THANKS!

Originally posted by: tangina r

This ff is sooo awesome i sooo love it!!!

i could imagine everything happening in front of my eyes😛 & i tottally loved tht prt when both of them said "so much for innocent" after mkin them unconcious😛

con soon n keep it up👏

thanks so much!! lol i was debating whether to change the so much for innocent for one of them, but i thought it connected both incident together nicely so i left it.

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

girll11!!! you rock!! i loved the kidnapping...a romantic kidnapping..love the way you wrote it..i could visualize eveything in front of my eyes..in just 2 of ur FF's u got what every author wants....comments -good ones, work that ppl appreciate from the heart, and above all friends....i see this one taking another turn giving you all you want with lots more...u may feel u dont desearve it but u do!! u are a gr8 frnd, gr8 author and a gr8 human.....hope you get ll you want....the part was great..i saw an episode of captured by love rather than readin the episode...hope ur show reaches the mountain top...im pretty sure it will....and i really like ur concept and the way u put in the prologue, strictness of parents, work goals, aceivemnts, high class things, beilive me i knoe how high class goes...i just dont enjoy it dat much!!its all fake...and yoou showed it the wayy it goes..loved the part and the prologue...

i just had a thought..im gone do a"best-line" for every part..so for this part its "so much for innocent...."


sameera.

that was such a sweet comment! thank you very much! i probably would have given up writing after a while, but after reading everyone's reactions it really touched my heart and i started writing for the readers. Writing in itself is very relaxing, it lets your creativity run wild and i love it. i honestly dont deserve all the love i get from you guys, but i try to make up for it by trying to write good parts for you guys to read. thank you very much!

Originally posted by: Kaj!

After a long time ive come a cross an interesting concept like this. this is very gripping and im hooked to it already. keep up the gr8 work. ur writing is detailed which helps to imagine the actions. 👏 keep it up. now im eager to read more 😆

thanks soo much!! glad u liked it!!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome great . 👏

thanks soo much!!!

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab part
the girls look like a typical rich girls with no care in the world...
looks like the guys r totaly smitten by the girls looks... god help them with their mission
continue soon

thanks a lot!! yes right now they don't have to worry bout anything because their father was always there, so now lets see what happens to them without him.

Originally posted by: **~SoniHinnU~**

oooo numzyyy i forgot to tell u, ur using my fvaourite colour Black, lol, and my favourite combo Black and Red!!!:D How ironic! lmao
I oved this part....the kidnapping was really interesting.....and I actually was hoping Kripa and Ridz would find some gorgeous clothes coz i had a feeling that AA would see them in those clothes!!!! and its the first impression that counts....right? lol
u wanna go bak 2 college???? r u crazy? lol.....im gonna be sooo happy when my exams finish on Friday!!!

haha i really like red and black together too. definitely first impression does count!

yup im dying to go back to college-- you have no idea how much crazy stuff me and my friends do. it ranges from me having a snowball fight in the middle of lecture (the professor glared!), to my friends handcuffing me to the porch of my apartment. we play taboo and cards in the food court, pigging out at my apartment, running through sprinklers, pillow fights, beating each other with rolling pins, playing in the park, having a water fight in a fountain next to a classy restuarant, we went to MANY restuarants, studied all day together in my apartment. it was crazy-- seriously when im with my friends i have the mental capacity of a ten year old, but its really great. so yea i reallllllly miss college.

Originally posted by: sadizzle

wow chapter 1 is on page 8?!?! thats ah first.. 😆 ..nice concept plz continue soooooon! 😳

lol well somewhere around there is a prologue as well. lol!

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

That was awesome; kripa and ridimaa are spoilt girls; hopefully the kidnapping may show them respect some things but aww; there kidnapped. it was actually quite romanic in a way; I'm guessing the captor victim relationship will do a nice romantic theme,e somewhere; its an awesome part; loved all of it; angad and kripa seem like the more tough ones; with a lot of arguing which I'll b looking forward to and rdimaa is tought but more of the innocent types; armaana dn ridimaa will go through theb sweet funny moments and I loved those words 'so much for innocent' ; there was something really powerful in those words. awesome part; now I'm excited and want more lol

Faiza

haha the captor victim relationship is what interested me the most! i would love to be kidnapped by these hotties! thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: tava

that was amazing 👏 👏 👏

thanks!!!

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

Tht was a grr88888 part Numera

it was reli sweet tht armi nd angad hve alredy started 2 fall 4 the 2 girls... but angad seems more workoholic nd a tough nut 2 crack whereas armi seems more.. er girlaholic..lol... nd sweet

plz upd8 soon./// thnx 4 the pm.. nd plz pm me when u up8
xx

thanks so much!!! yeah angad is tougher, he does appreciate her beauty but he knows his limits and knows his work is the most important thing. lol armaan is softer than angad and really does like riddhima.

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!! cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏

thanks so much!!!!!

Thanks for those amazing comments! You guys rock!!

I'll be updating the part in a few minutes 😊!

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Lots of Love,

Numera ❤️

Chapter 2

A loud bang sounds in the room, but this is not the sound of a gunshot. This is the sound of Armaan having difficulty carrying Riddhima into Kripa's room while quietly trying to swing the connecting door open. Obviously it isn't done as silently as it should have been because the door flies open and loudly hits the side of the wall. Angad nearly drops Kripa because of Armaan's sudden emergence from the other room. Then Armaan and Angad place the girls on the pink bed. Armaan looks back at the connecting door and says, "They have a door in between the bedrooms just like the rooms we plan to keep them in." Angad replies coldly, "So then they shouldn't have a problem situating themselves there."

Just then they hear footsteps approaching Kripa's bedroom door. Both sets of eyes dart across the room and to the door to stare at the knob. They hear the steps stop directly in front of the door. Someone knocks on the door and then they hear the maid say, "The car has arrived. Are you girls ready?" Angad and Armaan stare at each other speechless on what to do. Armaan looks at Angad horrified as he says, "Crap! We forgot about the maid!"

Just then Angad whispers something in Armaan's ear. Armaan groans and then in a high-pitched voice says, "Yes we are." She replies, "Okay dear, both of you need to come down quickly." Then the maid turns on her feet and walks away. Angad and Armaan know that she will be a problem for them when they try to get the girls out of this mansion. Angad pulls the handkerchief out and slowly leaves the room to follow the maid in the dark mansion. Armaan soon hears a shriek and then some muffled noises. Then all that is heard is the sounds of Angad dragging the woman's large body to the far back corner of the hall.

Seconds later, Angad enters the room breathing a sigh of relief. Armaan nearly laughs looking at Angad's exhausted state. Then Angad says, "The coast is clear around the entire mansion." Armaan continues, "Looks like Shahshank Gupta didn't see fit to keep any security inside since his girls were going to that anniversary party tonight. He should have known better than that because the security outside isn't good enough to keep us out. Poor Gupta…"

**Flashback**

Angad and Armaan are sitting in back of a black limo reviewing the plan for tonight. As of now, they are carefully looking at the interior blueprints to Shahshank Gupta's mansion. Two rooms are circled in red and both of those rooms belong to the two precious Gupta daughters. Looking at the blueprints of the exterior, it clearly shows that the rooms are on the second floor of the three story mansion. There is one white balcony, which is outside their windows. Angad and Armaan examine the balcony and conclude they can climb up to the balcony with a rope. Once Angad and Armaan can reach the balcony, it will be incredibly easy from there on out. There are huge windows that can be easily accessed, which lead directly into their bedrooms. According to the spies Angad and Armaan hired, Kripa and Riddhima always leave their windows open and occasionally draw the curtains. With all this information and more, they are sure it can be easily done. After they are done going through details and backup plans, Angad and Armaan load their guns.

The limo comes to a halt and the driver, named Kavya, tells them they have reached their destination. Kavya also works for Dilip Khanna and is trusted by Angad and Armaan so he sometimes accompanies them on missions when they need another person. Kavya will be taking care of the technical problems, while Angad and Armaan kidnap the girls and get rid of the security guards.

They are near a forested area and the sun is starting to set. Angad and Armaan inch near the mansion and hide behind the huge green trees scattered around the grounds. Their guns remain in their hands. Angad nods his head towards the security guarding the iron gates. Armaan peeks from behind the tree to see the two security guards stationed at the gate. Armaan starts counting slowly, "One…two…THREE!" The guards turn in the direction of Armaan's voice. Both Angad and Armaan emerge from behind the trees and shoot the two guards in the head, which kills them instantly. The sound of the bullets leaving the guns is quiet enough not to attract further attention. Angad smirks, "Looks like you two won't be needing these" and throws both the guns of the former security guards aside. Armaan laughs and punches in the five digit password to open the gates. Angad calls Kavya saying, "We're in, you know what to do from here." Kavya responds, "Right sir."

As soon as the gates open, Angad and Armaan prepare themselves to fight off at least ten to fifteen other security guards stationed on the grounds. When they walk through, they see six security guards running towards them and trying to pulls their guns out. Angad and Armaan quickly shoot all six in fatal areas. Their blood flows onto the perfect green grass beneath their still bodies. Angad and Armaan step over them to search for more obstacles around the back while loading their guns. Angad and Armaan decide to approach from opposite sides of the mansion.

Angad finds a man leaning against the wall with a rifle in his hand. Angad comes closer to him from behind. Angad quickly places his hands on the sides of his face and with a swift movement to the right, a cracking noise is heard. Angad throws his body to the floor and moves on. Armaan sees another man stationed with a rifle in hand. Armaan slowly inches closer, but accidently steps on a twig, which draws the guard's attention. Armaan quickly slams his body against the wall and strangles him with the rifle. The guard tries to struggle, but Armaan is undeniably stronger. Soon enough the guard's body becomes limp and Armaan tosses him carelessly aside.

Angad and Armaan both arrive at the back of the mansion and shoot down all the remaining guards in sight. After Armaan and Angad are thoroughly convinced that all of the guards are dead, they make their way to the front of the mansion. Angad and Armaan swing the ropes in a circular motion and then release it towards the ledge of the balcony. They tug on the ropes to make sure the hooks is in place and then start to climb up the knots on the rope. They finally make it onto the balcony as the girls are talking about the lack of light. It looks like Kavya has cut the main power off like he had been instructed. Angad gets a text from Kavya saying, "Everything is ready." This means the original driver of the girls has now been replaced by Kavya. Now all Armaan and Angad have to do is wait for the perfect time to kidnap the beauty queens.

**End of Flashback**

After Angad lights the candles in the room, he sees Armaan is in a trance. Angad walks over to Armaan and taps him repeatedly saying, "Armaan… Armaan… ARMAAN!" Armaan finally looks over at Angad and asks, "What?" Angad replies, "Are you going to stand here all day thinking about how beautiful she is and wait for her father to get home to ask for her hand in marriage?!" Armaan looks flustered, "That's… that's not what I was thinking about." Angad laughs, "Fine, whatever. I think we should leave." Angad and Armaan pick up the girls from the bed and walk out the candle lit room and into the dark mansion.

They carefully make their way out the main door and see the same black limo they came in. The front door of the limo opens and Kavya comes out to open the back doors for Angad and Armaan to get the girls inside. Angad and Armaan strap the girls in next to them and make sure to restrain the girls' hands and blindfold them in case they become conscious during the drive. Ten minutes into the drive, Armaan turns to Angad asking, "Did she give you any trouble?" Angad laughs awkwardly, "Trouble? Not a chance. It was child's play!" Armaan looks at Angad bewildered and clears his throat, "Ahem, of course… it was a piece of cake for me too!" A silent pause. Angad finally admits, "She tried to kill me." Armaan breathes a sigh of relief, "Thank God I'm not the only one! Mine is not only a vampire, but she also kept trying to turn me into a woman!" Angad smirks, "Did you just say she's yours?" Armaan stutters, "Well I… I didn't mean… dude you know what I meant!" Angad laughs, "Oh I know what you meant. For your sake though I hope you know that this can never happen Armaan." Armaan smiles sadly, "I know Angad, believe me I know."

Loneliness overwhelms Armaan's grey eyes. Angad always wants what is best for Armaan and the sooner Armaan faces reality the better off he is. It is a nice dream while it lasted; however Armaan knows that their reality would never let them become one and especially not a daughter of Shashank Gupta. Angad's smile also disappears and his lonely reality hits him hard. In their profession, there is no room for weakness and having a woman in one's life would make her a weakness. Rivals love to take advantage of weaknesses, heck that's what they are doing right now by holding Gupta's girls captive.

The limo comes to a halt in front of the iron gates to Dilip Khanna's mansion. Angad lowers his window so that the guard will allow them entrance. The guard opens the gate and the limo drives up to the entrance. Angad and Armaan undo the girls' seatbelts and carry the girls out the car. While going through the mansion, the guards give several lingering stares at the girls in their arms, which makes Angad and Armaan's blood boil. They take the girls up the stairs to their new rooms. When they reach the two doors leading to their separate rooms, Armaan says, "Angad I think we should keep them in one room first so that they don't become chaotic without each other." Angad agrees and they both carry the blindfolded girls into Kripa's new room. They set the girls on the bed and wait for them to awaken from them slumber.

It is a very beautiful room and is identical to the adjacent room. There is a huge luxurious bed in the middle of the room covered with red satin sheets. There are numerous books on the mahogany shelves kept for their entertainment. In the closets, there is a wide variety of clothes that the girls can wear during the stay. The dresser contains a variety of makeup products for the girls as well. There is a bathroom in each of the rooms with a big tub along with essential toiletries for women. There are lamps placed around the room to make it seem less depressing. There are flowers placed in vases on the bedside tables to lighten up the atmosphere. The only depressing part about the room is that there are no windows at all. However, there are two doors; one that connects to Riddhima's room, and the other is the main door to the rest of the mansion. The main door will always remain locked at all times. The room has everything they will need, except for a way out.

Thanks for commenting guys!! The flashback came out longer than i expected so sorry if that bored you guys. I'll try to continue before Friday, but Friday at the latest.

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Lots of Love,

Numera ❤️

heyy there...woww wat a fanfic...i loveddd ittt!!! u are a really good writer..i love the way u describe everything with intricate detaill and very indepth...its really good...love the characters and how they are portrrayed..it looks like a very interesting and exciting fanfic....lol armaan is really funnyy love his characterr and ofcourse angad is the best...woww the girls are soo spoiledd..lol...but then again thas high soceity lifee...love the way u described all that...its alll done really well...lol angad is funnie "so much for being innocent"...lol...wowww they are both attracted towards the girlss...i wonder if the girls will react in the same wayy..i really doubt it..but they will eventually come around..lol...haha armaan called riddhima a vampire...lol..aww u made kkavya a driver...does he have much of a part in the fanfic???...im so excited for the upcoming parts..really want to see the interaction between the four and how the story progresses..great jobb...and yahh i cud u plzz pm me whenever u update...wud really appreciate that...and once again awesome jobbb!!!