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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Hey Vaish...Amazing FF...liked all the parts.. 👏
Hey write longer parts....Plzz continue soon... 😊

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soumya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

hey 😊
nice ff yaar 👏
can u pm me next time u update

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@Karan.T

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

Very nice FF
Sooooooooooooooo good 👏
I really like it. 😃
Continue soooooooooooooon

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Thank u every1 for liking it and encouraging me cuz, i wasn't to cont after shilpa's exit but now, I've written a short part, hope u guys like it

Part - 8

As soon as everyone enters lockers room and get ready for the duties, a voice comes
"ALL INTERNS REPORT TO THE NURSE STATION "
At the nurse station (Keerti=Gabbar singh=GS)

GS : Dr.Armaan andDr.Riddhima, general ward
Dr.Atul and Dr.Anjali, OPD
Dr.Muskaan and Dr.Rahul, Children's ward
Ek naya case aaya hai, wo aap dono handle karenge
So, guys, get to work !!!

At: Arey wah! Aaj Yeh Gabbar meherbaan kaise ho gayi ???
😕
R : kya, gabbar mein armaan ???? 😃

At : kya Ridz, kya bol rahi ho ?? 😕

R : haan, tumne abhi to kaha ki , gabbar mein armaan!! 😆

A : abbey oye, tum mujhe samajhti kya ho ??? 😡

R : batodoon ???

A : haan haan, Batao!!!

R : ek, pagal, buddhu, badsoorat, baddimaag, bathameez, bewafa''. 😭

At : kya bewafa ??? 😉

R : nahi wo''bewafa bhi B se start hota hai na'''

M : arey chaddo yaar, aur Riddhima, Atul ne gabbar me..her..baaaaan , u know, meherbaaan kaise hogayi, yeh kaha that nahi, jo tum samajh rahi ho vo !!! 😆😆😆

R : Oh!! Sorry armaan !! 😊

A : teekh hai!!! teekh hai !!!! 😊

The interns are working in their respective wards. (DMG title track in the background)

In the break at cafeteria

Musky: Yaar aaj to gabber ne vaat laga di hai. Kitna kaan karvati hai na?

Riddhima: you are right. Aaj to sachmuch humne bahut kaam ki hai.

Armaan: right. Bechari Riddhima to aaj hi teek hui hai, agar itna kaam karegi to phir
bimaar pad jayegi.

Rahul : tumhe riddhima ki itni fikar kyun ho rahi hai?

Muskaan: han yaar peheli baar is rahul ne dhang ka kuch poocha hai. Bata na tumhe Ridz ki itni fikar kyun hai? hm hmm

Armaan (staring at riddhima): Vo mere dost hai, aur vaise bhi vo abhi to teek hui hai as a docter main uski fikar kar raha tha. 😉

Atul: Aree yaar Riddhima ko chodo vo to phir bhi teek hai. Mere Anjali ko dekho kitni tired hai. Kuch kha bhi nahi rahiu. Ye lo Anjali ye sandwich kha lo dekho kitni weak ho gayi ho tum.

Anjali :Atul just stop it..

Just then AR's pager rings.

R : di mera page aaya hai, mujhe jaana hoga !! badmein milte hai !

At (in ashaayari's tone) : Jaoo paegaam aaya hai, tumhe gabbar ne jo bulaya hai !! 😃😃

An then Atul and Anjali's page also rings and they both also leave along with AR

Now, Ra : hey, bhagvaan, kis museebat ke saath rukhwaadiya mujhe, mera page kyun nahi bajta'''..??

M : abbey oye, museebat kisko keheraha re !! 😡

Ra : kyun tujhko, kya karegi ??? 😆😆

M : oye, dekh, panga mat le varna 😡

she gets up but hurts herself with the table and is going to fall but Rahul cathches her at the right time and then an eyelocking session !!(RM bachground tune plays) 😉

And then Rm's pages also ring !!! and then session breaks and they moves apart and leave for their duties !!

Meanwhile, AR, go to Dr.Keerti and

GS : Dr Armaan aur Dr.Riddhima, aap donon ko Lonavla aashram jaana hoga, maonthly checkup ke liye! Aur haan, wahan ki caretaker bahar gayi hain, toh, aap donon ko hi bachon ko sambhalna hoga, 1 hafte ke baad aapko inform kardiya jayega ki aapki further duties kya hain !!!

AR : but maam humare patients ?

GS : aap unki chinta mat keejiye, main unhe sambhaloongi, aap, bas jald se jald nikliye !!

AR: yes maam !!

R then goes to Bi for a talk !!

Bi : arey meri bachi,

R : bi mujhe aur armaan ko lonavla jaana hoga 1 hafte ke liye !!

Bi : 1 hafta '''''''''..??

R : haan bi, par, mai khush hoon, mujhe use samajhne ka mauka milega !!

Bi : Riddhima, mera amy teekh to hai na ??

R : haan bi, par, vo mujhe kuch ajeen tarha se dekh raha that, jaise who mujhe pehele dekhtha tha !!

Bi : Toh kya tumne mere amy ke chehere par M se muskuraahat dekhi ??

R : haan bi, mujhe lagta hai, ki vo ab bilkul teekh hai

Bi : tum apna aur mere amy ka K se khayal rakhna !!

R : haan bi, ab main chalti hoon !!

Just when she is going to leave, she trips and falls on or rather jumps(like) on armaan and he handles her and the bi is very happy , and then Armaan breaks the silence and tells bi that he will not be there for 1 week and that she shud take care of herself !! 😉

A : Riddhima, main tumse sanjeevani ke bahar, 2 ghante main milta hoon ! Tum mere saath chalna !

R : teekh hai Armaan, main aajaongi !! badmein milte hai bi !!

Outside Sanjjevani

R : mujhe bolta hai ke 2 ghante mein aao, aur khud ka koi pata nahi'''''(jus then A arrives )

A : Chalo riddhima !!

R : hum tumhare car mein jaa rahein kya ??

A : haan, bus ki tickets nahi mileen !!

R :arey Dr.Keerti ne diya toh tha !! ye rahe !!

A : mujhe nahi pata tha !!

R : acha teekh hai, chalo, warna bus nikal jayengi !!

A : chalo !! aur haan, is baar mein window side par baitoonga !!
R : arey !! nahi, main hi baitoonh gi !!

A : nahi main

R : main

A : acha teekh hain tum bait jaana !!

AR board the bus and then R sits on the window seat and amy makes faces but R sees it and laughs !! But while laughinf, R starts to Cough! A immediately takes care of R but she feels awkward and gets apart !
And then A keeps staring her and R feels odd and asks him why is he staring at her continuosly, but instead of responding, he cont staring her, so, she ignores it !!
And then suddenly, bus puts a heavy break and R falls on A and then the conductor of the bus tells every1 to get down as there is some probs in the bus and has to be repaired !!
Every1 gets down and Armi gives hand to ridz and she gets down! Every1 is told that it will take atleast 1hr for the bus to get repaired so, they can have food in the nearest Dhabbha !!

Meanwhile, Muskaan and Rahul are told that Sanjeevani is Opening a new branch as well as an Old Age home at Manali, so they'd have to go there for 1 week !!
Hearing this, Muskaan gets irritated that she'll have to spend time with Rahul ( her jaani dushman!!) But on the otherhand, Rahul seems to be somewhat happy !
They both meet Anjali and Atul at the locker room !

M : Aul yaar, gabbar ne kar diya na syappa !!

At : K..y..u..n.., Kya hua (eating apple)

An : Atul! Tumhe yeh bhi nahi pata ke in dono ko ek saath Manali mein duties di gayi hain

At : Oh! Phir to kar diya syappa!!

An : I know !

At : par wow, yaar, Manali, kya romantic jagah haina ?? Hum bhi chalein Anjali ?? 😛

An : Oh just shutup Atul! Apni bakwaas bandh karo !!

At : Anjali, dekho, Armaan and Ridz gaye Lonavla, aur abh Muskaan and Rahul manali jaa rahein hai !! Toh phir hamein bhi kahiin jaana chahiye na !!! 😉

M : Haan yaar !! Tum log bhi chalo na !! (Atleast mujhe iss Kaankajoore se toh chutkaara milega na !!)

An :Haan, waise Manali mein jaakar maza toh aayega !!

R : Ok! Phir hum log Dr.Keerti se poochkar dekhte hain !! Toh, humduties ke baad yahin milenge !!

And the RM's pager rings and and they both leave for their duties!! While they are going thru their way, Muski and Rahuls hand clashes by mistake, and Muski start to abuse/scold (in her way ' u guys know how she does it) and starts shouting, while Rahul is calm, and suddenly M slips in the firescape and Rahul catches hold of her in the rght time with one hand ( how cuteee!!)😳 and then, after a few seconds, he pulls M towards him!! And then M is just lost in Rahul's eyes 😳😳!!And the suddenly Rahul realizes wat they r doing and leaves her immediately and M is just left speechless or she remains just the same !!! 😍

Meanwhile, Armidz are in the dhabba and :

A : Arey bhai !!

W(waiter) : Ji saheb! Kahiye kya seva karoon aapki ??

A : Riddhima, tum bolo, kya khaogi ??

R : Armaan, kuch bhi chalega!

A : Abh bolo bhi, nakhre mat dikhao !!

R : Mai koi nakhre nai dikharahi, aur pls tum hi bolo na !! [meanwhile, the waiter looks strangely at them] 😆😆

A : dekhiya, bhaisaheb, aap, ek kaam kijiye, aalo ke paranthe, dahi ke saath le aayiye !!

W : Haan saheb! Paranthe ke saath dahi, vaddiya hai ji !!

A : Tumne uske samne nakhre dikhane ki kya zaroorat thi ???

R : Main koi nakhre nahi dikha rahi thi !!! (Whispering) par tumne acha hi kia jo use bahgaya!!)

A : Kyun ????

R : Vooooo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kuch nahi, vo , kuch ajeeb hi tarha se dekhraha tha, kuch zyaada hi ghoor raha tha !!

A : Acha, uski toh, abhi dekhta hoon !! and gets up''''😡😡

R : Armaan ! Rehene do! Plsss ( and she stops him by holding back his hand!! And A stares surprisingly at her and she almost starts blushing and gets nervous !!) 😳

And the, exactly at that time, waiter brings the food, and seeing that R gets up and clashes with a nail on the pillar behind her and hurts on her finger badly !!!! ................( to be cont...)

Sorry guys i know its a short , but relli wasn't in a mood of writing after shilpa's exit !

And guys, one imp thing, i'll be able to cont only after 19th June cuz, i am on a holiday from tomorrow
so, Pls bear with me
Thank you
vaishnavi 😊

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Nyc part Vaishnavi! 👏

I really wanna knoe wat happens next! But hv a nyc holiday n see u afta dat! 😳

Marisha 👏 👏

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@Karan.T

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Very Nice Update
Just loved it
You written it so well
Great work 👏
Keep continue

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Lovely part Vaishnavi... 👏 Really very cute enjoyed all the AR scenes..Rahul n muskaan scenes were also nice 😳 Lonvala trip sounds really interesting...Rahul n Muski to Manali thts gr8 😉 PLzz continue soon 😊

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asmita

@asu216

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

hey vaishnavi...awesome 👏 ..lonavala,manali..now send atul anjali too somewhere plz 😛 😛 ...thnx for da pm...will be waiting till 19th june...happy holidays 😊 ...

luv,
asmita

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

really an awsome thanks for the update please continue it soon

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urmila

@urmila_17

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

hey wow realy lovely part loved the way u wrote
its awesome 👏
hmm arman and ridz scenes are just mind blwing
wow so now RM are feeling some thing
i guess arman feeds ridz 😉
loved the way atul said even he AA wants to go some where
totally amazing update
thanks for pm
pls pls update it supersoon
p.s: enjoy ur holidays and hope u wont forget us after ur holidays 😆