*Dilojaan tujhpe nisaar*[Upd - page 28 (26/10)]

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys,i initially started this as a post but...........decieded to continue this as an FF........so i start this from a situation............and i am not so.....a gr8 writer......n i dont have any exceptional story........just continuing for a situation as i want...........

i have seen n read many FFs...............ppls have gr8 talent n they change the whole story n characters.............i mean given them new charactyeristisc..........but in my FF every1 is the same..........as themselves.....

Basically based on our lovey dovey couples.............Armaan RIddhima....[For me its KaSh....but readers can imagine KaSu or KaJen as per their wish], Rahul Muskaan, Atul Anjali, and all others......


The situation goes as the following :

During the bike race when AR fall, Rgets hurt very badly in her leg but doesn't tell A bcz she wants him to win the race.

but beechme she finds it very hard to bear the pain & so she holds A very tightly, tightly, tightly & tightly.

& now A is not able to drive properly & so he stops & wants to shout at R. But when he looks at her face he notices that she is just gona faint

So what do u think will happen ?????????šŸ˜†

SO this was the INTRODUCTION of MY FanFiction

And guys, hope u like my imaginationšŸ˜›

vaishu😳 

SILENT READERS PLS REPLY !!! Plsssssssssssssss

UPDATES

Intro and Part - I - Page 1

Part II - Page 2

Part III and IV - Page 3

Part V - Page 4

Part VI - Page 5

Part VII - Page 7

Part VIII - Page 9

Part X - Page 11

Part X (promo) - Page 14

Part X - Page 16

Part XI - Page 21

Part XII - Page 28

Imp notes - page 21 n 25🄱

take care

ā¤ļøVaishnavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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it can happen
very good imagination
well if ridzz will faint armann has to ready to hold her in his arms
so armann be ready
Edited by saylithegreat - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mast imagination yaar šŸ‘ hope this happnes in real DMG also. can u pls continue?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice prediction..i hope it cumz true..!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooohhhhh...reeaallyyy nys !!!
it'll b gud...omg...dts so nys 😃 šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanku evry1 for the support
ok i'll try and continue for u togepi

Part - I
so, lets see
now , he gets off the bike and helps R to get off. after that R faints and our hero holds her like always

Amy : R kya hua utho na utho , and he checks her and finds that her leg has been hurt very badly and was bleeding

now he picks her up and takes her to his home ( assume that sanjeevani is far away than his home )

after that in his home his does the patti and keeps starring at her !!(wow so cute), suddenly, riddhima says in behoshi that armaan mein tumhe harte hue dekhna nahi chahati. main, main tumhe khush dekhna chahathi hoon ( ishq leta plays )

A with a very khush face thinks R has woken up but finds that she is still behosh only

so, with a little worry and crying face he says to R that, tumhe meri itni fikar fir bhi tum dikhathi nahi ho

mujhe pata hai ki tum man hi man mein abbhi mujhse pyaar karti ho

after some time R comes to her senses and A brings her a cup of coffee !!!

R : armaan!! tum mujhe yahan kyun laye ?

A : aur kya karta, beech raste mein mera dimag kharab karti aur behosh ho jati ho aur poochthi ho ki yahaan kyun laya

tumhe to wahin chod dena chahiye tha !! ab bhalaii ka to zamaana hi nahio raha

R : shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! kitna bak bak karte ho !

A : ab tum muh bandh karke coffe piyo

R : kya, main insaan ho , ajooba nahi jo muh bandh kar ke coffee pee sakoon

A : teek hai teekh hai, tum piyo, main khaana lekhar aata hoon

hope u guys like it

if u all want i shall continue

vaishnaviā­ļø

sorry for the short update😳

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow gr888888 šŸ‘
u pls continue this as a fanfic
plsssss
i think u can make a good story !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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arrey waahh....nys yrr...reelyy cute šŸ˜‰
plzz continue...i wanna knw hw she eats food...n i hope she jus tells him dt she still luvs him 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi payal thanks and i shall definitely continue it but tommorrow
i hope it is fine with u
thanks again
vaishnavi šŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wo so fast tu to mast hai yaar
agla part aaj hi likhdo. cant wait
very nice work šŸ‘

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