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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guts.........i have decide wheter to continue till tonight or tom morning.....so if u feel i shud plsssssssssssssssssssssss respond

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am relli very sorry to my readers😭..i know i am such a dokhebaaz....😭............plsssssssssss forgive me............actualy i am in 12th so.........studies r ther but now its holidays, so i'll try n be regular in updates...............pls guys.......read my updates so that i get motivation.................n plss guys reply here.............

And one more thing guys..........i write this with my frnd....shed had asked me not to reveal her but......since she is now here so...........i'd like to reveal her contribution also..............she is REMA....teogapi....

n now after all bhashans................finally my update.......thanks guys.........thanks for ur support.......now enjoy !!!😳


Recap - ridz hurtz her finger on the pillar's nail.........on a dhabba


Part - 9


R: Ouchhhhhhhh !!!!

A : Riddhima !!!!!!!!!!!!!

R : slzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

A : Ek minute, Bhaiya zara first aid box to lekar aana.

W : Vo kya hota hai ji???

A : Abe''. Patti karne ka saaman.

W : Ji laaya.

Armi holds Ridzy's hand & starts to blow & comfort her
& then Armi dresses Ridzy'z wounds.

R : Thanks Armaan.

A : (main toh ghabra hi gaya tha!) Its ok itni bhi formal mat bano.

W : Ji ye aapke pharante.

A : Haan thanks. Riddhima kha lo

R starts to eat but her wound hurts her.

R : Ouch!!!!!

Seeing this Armaan moves forward & feeds her the piece of parantha & Riddhima keeps adoring & staring Armaan & a drop of tear flows down from her eyes as she thinks of those moments when she misunderstood Armaan but controls her feelings when she finds that Armaan is watching her & the drop of tear falls on

Armaan's hand & there is an eye locking session between the two.

As soon as they finish there yummy yummy paranthas they both leave for the bus as the bus was repaired.

In the bus Armaan is thinking about Ridhima's dream confession 7 decides to speak to her about it. Just then when he turns riddhima's dupatta falls on Armaan's face ( asmaani tune in the background ) he is just lost.

A : Basket main vo vo main vo kal & he keeps staring her.

R : haan Armaan bolo.

A : vo actually''.. kal '.. main '''' vo ''''' tum ''''

R : Armaaaaaaaaaan hello, & she waves her hand in front of his face.

& then Armaan comes to his senses & feels shy

A : Vo''. Main '''' Kuch nahi.

Then Armaan is lost in his thoughts while watching the scenery & decides to sort out things between them.

A : bas.. Riddhima tum ''. Tumhe pata hai ki kal raat'''.

& then he turns & finds that she is fast asleep

After while she leans her head on armaan's shoulder & he feels awesome😍 & when his going to lean his head too, just then she further moves & sleeps on armaan's godh 😍& he feels heveanly.

Now he is almost on cloud 9 & removes her hair( lat ) from her face & heeps his hand on her head & sleeps as well.😳

After some time Ridhima wakes up & finds herself in armaan's godh & is happy this time & lets herself in the same position 😍😍

Meanwhile muski, atul anjie and rahool, got to doc keerti to ask whether atul and anjie can join them also.

At: Mam can we come in ??

GS: yes, aap sab yahan..??

M: mam vo actually'.hum aap se na.. yeh poochne aye the ki kya atul aur anjali bhi hamare sath manali chal sakte hain'??

GS: kyun..koi problem hai kya'..

Ra: no mam'.

Anjie: bas mam hum yunhi'

GS: ok'main doc shubhankar and dr.shashank se baat karke dekhti hoon'.

Interns: yes mam thank u'.

GS: u may leave now'

Meanwhile Armaan & Riddhima reach Lonavla & Rosco welcomes them. Armi plays with Rosco while Ridzy stares at him.

Finding her stare Armaan clicks his fingers in front of her face & she comes to her senses. All the other children (gappu, minni & harsh r also there) come around & welcome them. They all hug them both. Since they hug AR together Ar ger close & close & they are almost in a position to hug each other.😍😍😍😍😍😍

Minnie: hey boyfreid kaisa hai tu. Pat gayi kya ?

R : Kya?

A : Shhhhhhhhh minni chup.

Gappu : kya chup sach toh kah rahi hai vo.

Harsh : Oye chup karo tum dono vo meri dulhan hai.

And then Bua comes.

A : Paeripona buaji (& he touches her feet)

R : hi bua kaise ho aap ?? Kab nikalna hai ? Aur aap phone hi nahi karti. Maine pata hai aapko kitna miss kiya. Maine kitna phone kiya. Aapne ek bar bhi vapas call nahi kiya. Main yahanpar nahi hoon toh mujhe bhool gaye??

While she is going on talking Armaan looks at her smiling

Bua : Bas bhi karo, Kitna bolne lagi ho tum Riddhima. Lagta hai sangat ka asar padgaya.

R : kya??? Aise koi baat nahi hai.

Bua : Accha baba Andar chalo, fresh ho jao. Train ka time ho raha hai. Kabhi aur baat kar lenge.

Bua leaves & every1 bids her goodbye. AR go & freshen up & Ridz wears the same suit which she wore last time on the terrace scene on the new year party.& Armaan wears the balck & red shirt.

Armi is left amazed to find Riddhima Still wearing the Kangan he gave her.( Don't be confused I will explain it in the later part of the story.) & before he asks something about this all the kids arrive for their check up & AR check them up & after that Kids ask them to play cricket.

A: theek hai

Harsh : Ae Girlfriend tum bhi aao na.

R : katy main? Nahi nahi tum log khelo.

Kids together : Darpok Darpok Darpok.

A: Haarne se dargayi Dr. Riddhima.

R : main aur tumse haaro no way. Tumhe phili bar ka score bhi yaad hai Thirty : five or Forty : five.

Gappu : Kya Armaan bhaiya ladko ki izzat ko dubodiya.

Minnie : Kya? Ladko ki izzat bhi hoti hai ?? East or west Girls are the best.

R ; Acha chalo kelte hain.

Gapu : Ok Captain kaun.

Harsh : Boys team ke captain Armaan Bahiyya aur tumharE ?

Minnie : Hamare team ki captain hogi Riddhima didi.

R : ( In minnie's ears ) Par Minnie maine aaj tak cricket khela hi nahi hai. Mujahe nahi aata. Main nahi karpaungi.

Minnie : ( In ridzie's ears) Shhhhh vo sab badme dekhlenge.


While playing she goes somewhere very far so as to catch the ball.

She goes some where inside a bushy area & spots a chemelion there.

R : Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Armaan runs towards the area & Ridz also comes running backwards. Both clash & Ridzy fall. A tries to catch her but is not able to manage & falls himself too. They both fall rolling on each other Ridz gets severly hurt on her previous wond during the bike race (Remember that wound vo abhi tak teek nahi hua) & bleeds very badly & starts almost crying. Seeing this Armaan picks her up on his arms. On his arms she is not fully in her senses😍😍. (chakkar aa raha hai). Armaan brings her till the point where kids r waiting for them. Seeing Riddhima bleeding Harsh & Minnie rush to bring the first aid box.

Armaan rests Riddhima in the bench & dresses her wounds & the kids start palying again. Since Ridhima is half behosh she rests herself on Armaan's shoulder & he takes care of her.😍😍

Meanwhile Keerti Calls AA & RM & tells that Atul & Angie.

GS : Dr.Anjali & aut Dr. Atul aap dono ko All India Internship training camp ke liye jaana hoga😭😆😆. Aap details & ticket Dr. Shashank se le legiyega.

Hearing this Rahul & Atul r vey happy😛😛 whereas our Musky is relly sad 😭 & has a fear iside that how will she mange alone with rahul.😳😳

so now lets see does muskaan realise her feelings for rahul😍😍

i know its a small update but plss bear with me...will def update soon............itna soon that u will say ....arey padne ka time to de................

thanks again guys..........hope u enjoyed the part

vaishnavi......and rema😳


Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
i just read the whole thing and its really good
cont soon
can you pm when you update
Javeria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely update especially the AR moments...can't wait for the RM story and thanx so much for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
hey thanks for informin me bout this story. or else i would never know. please post the next part soon n pm me wen u post okay? thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey superb part...really good :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: 26javey26

i just read the whole thing and its really good
cont soon
can you pm when you update
Javeria


thanx a lot for reading n commenting
it means a lot...............
will def PM u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sea_nyx

lovely update especially the AR moments...can't wait for the RM story and thanx so much for the pm

thaannxxxx........yup will update soon def ......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: shilpakaran

hey thanks for informin me bout this story. or else i would never know. please post the next part soon n pm me wen u post okay? thanks

awwwwwwwwwwww ma pleasure.......yu[p will def pm u...............thanx again for readin
Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: dmgfan

hey superb part...really good :)


thaaaanxxxxxxxxx yaar..............ek ek comment motivates me n means a lot to me😊😊

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