*Dilojaan tujhpe nisaar*[Upd - page 28 (26/10)] - Page 2

wow, that's wonderful response!!

thanks every1, aap logon ke pyaar ne mujhe part 2 likhne ko majhboor kar diya hai, so here we go.....

A brings Aaloo ka Parantha with dahi for food

A : ye lo riddhima , khana khalo

R : mujhe bhook nahi hain😡

A : bakwaas bandh karo aur chup chap khalo, natak mat karo

tumhaare chehere se dikhta hai ki tumhe kitni bhoook lagi hai !!😆

So, R takes and tries to tear the parantha but isn't able to do that as she feels pain in her hand (her hand was also injured)

R : oouucchh !!!

meanwhile Amy is enjoying and eating vigorously😆

A : ab Kya huaaaaaaa, chen se khaane bhi nahi dethi ho !!

R : armaaaaaan !!!!

A : oh i am sorry , tumhare haath mein bhi laga that na ?

and then armaan riddhima ko pyaar se parantha khilaatha hai (choo chweet, ishq leta on background)

but while eating, ridzii starts to cough and accidentally bites amy's fingers

A : aaaaahhhhhh ( but seeing R cough , A brings her a glass of water and beats her head)

R : i am sorry armaan, dard to nahi ho raha na ??😭

A (emotionally and sadly) : jo dard and jakhm tumne diye hain, unke saamne to yeh choti moti chotein to kuch bhi nahi hain ( copied, sorry guys, i know , actually dialogue ki kami hai na !!😆 aaj kal ache dialogues milte kahaan hain)

R (mann mein) : main to tumhe khabi bhi koi bhi dard nahi dena chahathi thi, hoon, aur aage bhi nahi dena chahoongi, balki main toh tumhare dard ki maram (medicine) banna chahathi hoon, kyaa karein, lekin tumhe khush bhi toh dekhna chahathi hoon

ok guys

will continue tommorrow😊

hope u all like it and pls do comment !!!

urs, vaishnavi😳

hi guys😛
how r u all ??
so here is 2days update, part-3

after that emotional and sad scene, suddenly, A remembers that they left in
btw the race and shud inform every1 else
so, he calls angie!

An : hello, Armaan, tum log kahan ho, hum sab yaham kabse tumhe doond rahe hain

A : hum, hum race ke beech mein gir gaye the aur riddhima ko bahut chot aagaee thi , toh mera ghar pass me that isliye main use yahan le aayaa!

An : oh my god, tumne pehele kyun nahi bataya ? Ridzii teekh toh hai na ??

A :haan vo ab teek hai aur use hosh aagaya hai. tum use aakar pick kar lo

An : teek hai mein abhi thodi deer mein pahunch jaungi. Ridzi ka khayaal rakhna.

A: tum uski chinta mat karo ! bye jaldi aana.
Call ends

R : Di aarahi hai na ?
A: haan haan aarahi hain

Suddenly Angie calls back Ammy

An : Armaan mein aa nahi paungi bcz mera page aaya hai ICU mein emergency hai so I'll have to go.
A: par Ridhimaa ?
An : Tum plese use ghar drop kardo.
A: Par....
An : parvar kuch nahi pls use drop kar dena, I am getting late bye
Call ends

A (thinking) : ab ye bhi. !!! main jitna usse door jana chahata hoon kismat hamee utna hi kareeb le aathi hai.

R: kya hua armaan di ne kya kaha?
A : tumhari di ko page ayaa hai vo nahi aa sakti to tumhe mere saat jaana padega.
R : kya tumhare saat No way😡!!!
A : mujhe koi shauk nahi hai tumhe le jane ka, wo to tumhari di ne kaha isliye
chup chap chalo !!

Riddhima maanjati hai👍🏼, and when she tries to get up, she falls and amy catches her ( ek main aur ek tu........ eye locking session with plain asmani tune in background)
and then they both release each other n armaan riddhima ko pakadakar gaadi tak le jaata hai
and then they both sit in the car and they r ready to leave

our epi ends here
ok guys, i hope u all will enjoy reading this
will update part 5 tommorrow, till then
take care,

vaishnavi 😊

wow vaishnavi just caught up with ur ff its wonderful but if u dont mine small suggestion try to write longer parts but its truly awesome 👏 hope they confess their love soon and if u dont mine try to pm me after ur part
pls continue soon

oh thanks a lot for replying yaar 👏
and yes i'll try my best to write some longer parts
actually, i've never writen any FF before and so, i feel nervous whether it wud be appreciated by all or not and so, i write small small parts , so that every1 cud read and understand easily 😊

gr8 posts, just started reading thm and really enjoyed myself

hi guys how are u all??

thanks for all ur responses & replies

now here u go the fourth part

part-4

In the car :

Ridzi tries to speak to amy but amy is not just ready to speak to her😡

so, Amy drops her home. Ridzii can still not walk and so amy drops her inside the home

and says

A : bye riddhima, apna khayal rakhna

Ridzii just waves her hand and they both see off each other

Amy returns to the car and feels very very upset and almost cries

Next Day at Sanjeevani (locker room)

Atul : hey dost, kya haal hai, tum beeechmein kyun chale gaye the ??

Angie : atul' ridzii ko chot lag gayi thi , so then Armaan ko use ghar le jaana pada

Musky : hero, actually hua kya tha ??

A : woh actually hum jab gire the toh riddhima ko paer mein bahut chot aagayi thi, and so, vo ghabrahat ke vaje se behosh hogayi thi

Rahul : oh my god !!! vo ab to teekh hai na ??

A : ha shayad se, tum angie se poch lo, use pata hoga

Angie : nahi vo teekh nahi hai, use kal raat se bahut tez bukhar hai, almost 103 degree😭

All other interns, exept Amy, say : OMG, fir toh uski halat bahut hi kharab hai, so, why not hum sab use milkar aate, duty ke baad,

Musky : kyun armaan, tum chalo ge na

A : par' vo'. Main' I mean''..😕

Atul : par var kuch nahi, tumhe chalna hi hoga !!

Voice comes : ALL INTERNS COME TO THE NURSE STATION PLEASE !!!

Ever1 at the spot,

Atul : oh no, aaj toh Gabbar hum duties degi, oh no, anjali''''

Anjie (starring) : Atul ''.. wat ??

Dr Keerti arrives with her famous bhootnaak score ( I will call her GS-gabbar singh)

GS : Good Morning Interns, So, aaj Dr.Riddhima nahi ayi hain, toh, aaj main aapko duties allot karoongi

She cont..

Dr.Armaan special ward

Dr.Anjali OPD

Dr.Muskaan general ward Dr. Rahul ke saat

Musky : (whispering to herself) oh no gabbar ne kardiya syappa kan kajoore ke saat duty dedi ab pura din ise jhelna padega, babaji bachalo😭

GS : Any problem Dr. Muskaan??

Musky : no maam kuch nahi

Dr.Atul pathlab

& after that GS goes

Atul : Duniya hamesha hume juda kardeti hai anjali. Patanahi kyun hume koi saat nahi dekna chahta.😭

All other interns laugh while

Angie : Atul bakwas band karo.

Interns go to their respective wards.

They check their patients while DMG's title track plays.

All the interns go to meet Dr. keerthi for permission for going to home early so as to meet Ridhimaa.

Angie : may we come in Dr. keerthi?

GS : yes plese, kya baat hai? aap sab log saat me, kya hua?

Musky : vo hain na Dr. keerthi Ridhimaa bimar hai na, to hum soch rahe the ki''''.

Atul : ki use mil ayyein

GS : toh aap mere paas kun ayein

Rahul : to maam hum jaye milne

GS : wat abhi aapki duty khatam hoe me ded ghanta ( one & a half hours) baki hai😡

Musky : humne to saare patients ko check karliye

Angie : & baaki ka kaam bhi khatam ho gaya

Just when GS is about to say something shubbu enters

S: keerthi & pauses & blushes seeing her in yellow saree & thar Shubankar music plays😳

All the interns laugh within themselves😆

GS: shubankar

Shubbu comes out of his dream & rectifies his ties

S: tum sab yahan?

All interns except Ammy surround himm

S : guys main senior Dr. hoon

Musky : isliye to sir Dr. keerthi se kahiye na (in his ear)ap kahenge to vo maan jayeengi sir

Atul : pls sir ab sabkuch aapke haat me hai

S : kya baat hai interns

Angie & rahul explain him the matter

Shubankar says : keerthi dedo na permission

All interns exept Ammy : pls maam'''

Musky : armaan hero tu bhi bol na. Tu to hitler ka fav hai

A: kay main

Atul : nahi yeh deewar, is deewar ka naam Armaan hai aur hum issse baath kar rahe hain

A: champ''

Atul : to bol na

A : pls Dr. keerthi

GS : teek hai

They all start to go when shubbu interupts & says

S : keerthi infact hamee bhi jaana chahiyee Dr. Ridhimaa ko accha lagega

GS : main nahi aasakti meri duty hai

Musky : yehi to hum bhi kehrahe hai sir ( in a hurry) sir sir aap kyun itni takleef leete hain sir aap to senior dr hain sir hum tio junior dr hain aur senior dr ke bina hospital kaise chalega sir aur vaise bhi hum hain na sir hum Ridhimaa ko bol denge. 🤣

A : ( in shubbu's ears ) vaise bhi sir Dr. keerthi nahi aarahhi hain aur sochiye sir aapke bina unka kya haal hoga sir.

S : haan haan guys u r right after all main sr dr hoon 😳

All the interns wink at each other

All interns say together : ishqqq haiiiiiiiiiiii

Shubbu turns back but they all disapperar & shubbu ko paseena aata hai & he rectifies his tie again

OUTSIDE SANJEEVANI

Atul : Thank god!! Gabbar maan gayi yaar

Musky : ha yaar, kaise pataaya na ??

Rahul : waise maza to bahut aaya !!😆

Angie : ya right

Musky : hero, tumhara line hai yaar, tumhe maza nahi kya ??

A : mmmmmmm, bahut maza aayega !

Musky : ayega nahi, ayaa

A : haan haan, wai wai !!

AT RIDDHIMA'S HOME

Ridz is very bimaar but in her senses, and she is very thirsty and the jug behind her bed is empty so, goes to kitchen 4 a glass of water but, when she reaches kitchen, she feels dizzy and faints and falls down

Angie, Atul, Musky, Rahooool and Amy enter Ridzii's home

But they don't find ridzii and so, they search for her and Amy finds her in the kitchen and is shocked to find her behosh😲

He then immediately, sprinkles water in her face, and calls every1

A : riddhima, utto, Anjie, Atul, Riddhima yahan hai

Anjie : ridzii utho, kya hua, ridzii ( and she cries)😭

Atul : (consoling Anjie) Anjali, Ridz ko kuch nahi hua hai, vo bas thodi kanzor hai aur isliye behosh ho gayi hai

Angie : lekin Atul, Ridzii kyun nahin uth rahi, mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai. Nani bhi nahin hai ghar pe😭

Atul : darro mat Anjali

A : Anjali, Muskaan, ise bed tak le jao and litakar, iske muh par pani chidhkkar uthane ki koshish karo

Anjie and Muskaan together while picking up Ridz say : oh no ! isska haat toh jalne ki tarha garm hai, zaroor bahut tez bhukhaar hai

After sometime Riddhima comes to her senses

R : Di aap, aap sab kab aaye ??

Angie : tum teekh toh ho na ??

Atul : tum kitchen mein kya kar rahi thi ??

Musky : hum sab to bahut ghabra gaye the tumhe behosh dekhkar

R : vo, vo main pani peene gayi this, mere jug mein pani nahi tha !!

A : tumne kuch khaya bhi hai ki nahi ??

R : Mujhe bhook nahi tha< isliye maine kuch nahi kahya !!
A : isliye toh tumhari ye halat hai kabhi to apna khayal rakah karo !!

Angie : use abhi to mat danto yaar, bechari ki halat kharab hai. acha ridz tumhe bhook lagi hai kya

R: nahi di bhook nahi hai (coughs)

A : isse kya pooch rahi ho tum lekar aao nahi to firse behosh ho jayegi

Angie : main lekar aarahi hoon & tumhe kahna padega
Ridzi, kya banaoon....... toast uske siva to mujhe kuch atahi nahi hai

Musky : Anjali main bhi chalti hoon tumhari madad karne

Rahool : oye muskaan tumhe aata hai😆

Musky : chup kar kankajure halat to dekhliya kar.

Anjie& musky goes to kitchen

Suddenly Anjie shouts : Atullll .... jam khatam ho gaya tum plese jam lekar aaoge 😳

atul & rahoool go to the kitchen

Atul : lekin anjali butter to hain na use laga do

Musky : aree riddhima ko bhukar hai vo butter kaise khaegi

Rahool : Congrats muskaan pehli baar akalmandi ki baat kari hai tumne😆

Musky : chup kar kankajure jaldi jaa vanaaaa😡

rahool & atul : accha bhai jaate hain

NOW RIDDHIMA & ARMAAN ARE LEFT ALONE IN THE ROOM WHAT WILL HAPPEN????????

IN THE NEXT PART😉

Till then take care

hope u all like this part

will update tommorow

Vaishu😊

Sooooo cooool plz cont. sooon 😉

Wow!!...So cute ff 👏 👏 👏 .... Continue soon