FF-Hate 2 Luv U finale pg27 28/7/08 updat - Page 10

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ooo its too good weellll done!
plz continue sooon!
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I am glad u guys are enjoying it. 😳
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Part 18

Recap-Kanya goes to check up on Aditya baiya's condition. Kanya goes home with Harpal to the Godbole house.

Preview..............

Everyone in the Godbole parivaar is tense. Still trying to come up with an explanation of Pooja's absence. Not knowing what to say they decided to play it by ear. First they had to make sure that Kanya was in a position to take the news and not break down. Kanya runs to her Mum and they hug each other for a few minutes. Pammi just kissing Kanya's cheeks over and over again. Kissing her forehead. Pammi totally in tears. Not being able to control herself.

K-Mamma U R smothering me. I was only gone a few days.

P-Mein kya apni beti se jhi bar ke pyar nahin kar sakhti. Tu ek hafte tak behosh thi. Ek maa ki dil hi jaanti hain kya uspe guzar thi hain.

K-......
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Part 18

K-I know maa ka dil and all but you R scaring me. Adita D is here. Cool. I'll go and see what she's doing.

P-Jaa aur ek jage main betna. Zyada chalna mat.

K-D why so sad? Haso tum log aise udaas rahoge to me wapas hospital chali jaongi phir waapas aongi jab ek smile mujhe milego. Koi tumhe dekhe sochegi ke tum mujhse milke kush nahin.

Adita-Aisi kuch nahin. Darr ke mare ab tu raj karegi aur humpe hokum karegi issiliye.

K-I'm not that bad. Suhaas Jiju ki tara nahin jo baat baat par chillane lagjate hain. Harry Pooja D kaha hain? Ankhen taras rahi hain unne dekhne ke liye. U know dil main ajeeb ajeeb kayal ate hain. Ghar akar maine samjha ke dil thori halka hogi par aisa kuch nahin.

H-Woh D she's sleeping! She needs her rest na. Doctors orders.

K-Mujhe unko ek baar dekhne tho do. I feel maine unko mahine main nahin dekha. I won't disturb her. Promise.

H-U can't! U know bacteria.

K-Shut up Harry. Bakwas band kar.

Adita-Harry sach bol rahi hain woh soh rahi aur tu uski disturb karegi.

K-Mamma se shikayath karungi. Hatto. Tum dono so mean. Sab ko mil chuki aur tum mujhe Pooja D se milne nahin deh rahe ho.

H-MAMMA. YAHA AO. D ZID KAR RAHI HO. MAMMA! MAMMA!

Kanya is about to enter Pooja's room that Kanya shared with her. Pammi comes running along with Anand. Shanta was in the kitchen for the first time actually doing some work. She was trying to avoid Kanya's eyes as she knew she couldn't keep Pooja's death hidden.

P-Kanya tu jaake waha pe beth. Pooja ko araam karne deh. Teri Papa bhi yahi chahte hain. Haina ji?


Kanya looked at her Dad who was having a hard time speaking. His eyes were bloodshot Kanya could sense something was up. She felt as if they were purposely trying to steer her away from Pooja.

K-Ap sab mujshe kuch chupa rahe ho. Main jaanti hoo. Harry tu bata warna main khabhie tujhse baath nahin karungi. Kya Pooja D kaam pe hain. No Ranbir khabie bhi use kaam nahin karvate is halat pe. D kaha hain? Mujhe unse zaroori baat karni hain.

H-Woh soh rahi hain. But she's not home! I swear.
Anand-Beti tu takhi hain. Baad me batayenge na.

K-Nahin mujhe abhi isi waqt jaan nah hain. Kisi bhi keemat par. This is worrying me even more than not knowing. I can take it.

Kanya runs to Pooja's room. After all the silence she couldn't take them dancing around her question. From what she saw there was a garland round a photo of Pooja. Kanya started getting a little hysterical.

K-Tum sab mujhse ye chupayi. Kya Pooja D sach much nahin rahe? (Tears falling. Kanya couldn't stop them. She felt deceived, hurt, every emotion was crashing against her being.) Tum sab choot kyun bhole ke D soh rahe hain. She's an early riser. U said she was at home resting.

P-Kanya! Samaj beti. Tu coma mein thi ek hafte tak. Pooja accident ke doosre din chal basi. Jab hume uski anthim sanskar ki tab hi tujhe hosh ayi aur maine socha ke its too much.

Anand-We already lost one daughter. Hum tujhe nahin ko na chahte hain. Tu humare sabse choti beti hain. Tujhe kuch hogayi to hum kahike nahin hote. Harry ko dekh woh kaise ye sab handle kar raha hain. Teri halat nazuk thi ken a batana humein sahi laga. Waqt ane par sach kehdeti.

K-Tum sab itni bari baath chupayi mujhse. Main D se kuch keh nahi saki. Akhri baar dekh nahi payi. Ap nahin jaante mujh pe kya beeth rahi hain is waqt! Main ek guridya nahin hoon jho toot jaungi. Mujhe jaana hain issi pal. I need to get away.

P-Beti tu kaha jayegi? Abhi bhi yaha aye hain. Araam kar. Thori samay leth jha. Adita tub eth Kanya ki saath. Harry tu use tang mat karna ok. Main jhake chocolate le aati hoon ice cream ke saath. Ya kucch phi ne ke liye lao.

Pammi hugs her daughter who is too saddened by her sisters death that she feels claustrophobic. Everything around her closing in on her. Her family that she loved kept this secret. She understood their reasoning but they were crowding her too much. She couldn't handle her intense emotions and knew she might say or do something extreme out of the anger that was venting up. She needed Ranbir. She finally understood why Ranbir had been distant from her but only visiting when her parents weren't around. Her parents blamed his family. Pooja was no more.

K-Mujhe Ranbir ke paas jaana hain. Use mujhe abhi bhi milna hain. Tum sab aise mujhe goor rahe ho jaise main kamzor hoon ya phir ghir jaongi is sadme se. Harry meri saath chalega warna mein akele chale jaunga. I need space.

Anand-Usse milna kyun hain? Uske party ke waja se Pooja ko hume kauna para.

K-Papa please yaha apne ek beti koi hain to unlogo ne to bhi ek beta koi hain aur doosre ko shayad ko sakhte hain.

P-Ab use aise baath mat keejiye. Sahi tho bhol rahi hain. Par Kanya tijhe ghar mein araam karna paregi.

K-Harpal haina meri saath. Yaha meri dam gut rahi hain. Do, teen ghante ki baath hain. Yu gayi aur yu ayi. I need air. Some thinking space. I need to go. Now. Please aap samajo meri baat.

P-Harpal tujhe Kanya pe nazar rakhna parega warna main tera khaal udaar loonga.

Kanya phones Ranbir up and picks her up from home while dropping Harry off to Simrans house. He was worried about Kanya's state of mind. He knew Pooja and Kanya were really close. He takes her up the cottage where Ranbir took Knaya on his date. It broke him seeing Kanya hurt. He felt helpless as if he couldn't be there for her. Ranbir promised Harry that he would bring Kanya home on time picking Harry up with them back home. Through the journey Kanya doesn't say a thing. She sits in silence the whole time. They get out of the car and Kanya gets out. Ranbir opens the door to the cottage. Kanya looks at Ranbir and flings her arms around him. Tears just flooding. Ranbir picks Kanya up and takes her to the main room and sits her down stroking her face time to time.

Ranbir removes Kanyas stray hair from her face and waits for her to say something. He holds her really tight. Kanya holds Ranbir's left hand. She cries and cries. Ranbir wipes her eyes.

K-Ranbir i feel so... i . alone.

R-Take your time! It's a big shock. U have your family. Me.

K-Tumne kuch kaha kyun nahin? U knew!

R-It wasn't my place Kanya. They R your parents unhe hak hain yeh faisla lene ke woh kya Karen. Tumhe unpe gussa hone jayaz hain par yeh bhi samjo. They were doing the best they could to protect U. What would u have done? I know tumhe dukh hain ke tumne ek bahen koi hain. Baat nahin karpay use ya dekh nahin paye. Tum unke point of view dekh rahe ho.

K-Yes! I'm not angry at them Ranbir. Just mad at my own kismet. Dekho tumhe Dad bohut nafrat karte hain. Saare dosh tumpe. It makes it hard for us.Pooja D ko me sab kuch share karthi thi. Woh Akash se pyar karne lagi aur yeh sab kya se kya hogayi. I even missed her funeral and wake up that same day. Kya kismet payi hain. Ranbir i need u.

R-U also need your family Kanya. Now more than ever. U already have me. I'm not going anywhere. Not without u but look after yourself and the little one. Pooja would want to see U carry on and be happy. Rhona band karo. Pooja ko yeh sab pasand nahin thi. Sirf uske soaps mein yeh achi laghti hain. Aggar tumhari kismet Karaab hain then i take first prize. Sab koh ke aya hoon. Phir tum milne ke baad i feel life is worth living. For your family pull through this and don't underestimate their belief in U.

K-I know. I needed to talk to somebody. Ghar me kya kaho? Kisse kaho? Adita, Mom, Dad sab mujhe aise dekh rahe hain jaise main is sadme ko bardasht nahin kar sakhti. I'm strong Ranbir. I've seen them. They look devastated. I didn't want them to break down. The thought of not seeing U Harry he seems grown up but he too is walking on egg shells. I can't take it. I'm tired of this but ghar mein i can't bring myself.

R-Kanya. U R the most bravest person i know. Talk to me all night but don't bottle anything up.

K-Ranbir. U R a great listener. Advice bhi ache dele te ho.

R-I think u talk to much. How R U feeling?

K-U make everything better. Just hold me Ranbir. This way i feel safe.

R-If i had my way tum roz aise hi mere baho mein hote.


K-Choote.

R-I know tum baho mein kya tum itne patle ho ke mein tumhe mere suitcase mein pack kar ke chupa leta sab ke nazro se aur rehte mere paas everyday. That way i could hide u from the world

K-That seems like the Ranbir Nanda i know.

R-I love U Kanya.

K-I love U 2.

Kanya falls asleep on Ranbir's shoulder and he lets her sleep. Ranbir watches over her. Guarding her with his body sheltering her from any more pain and wishing to take her pain.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update!
i hope they get together soon
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
aw...
such a sweet update...
pls continue soon
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really nice update, plzz continue soon
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dat was ACE!
pelas continue sooon!
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Part 19

Recap-Kanya learns of her sister's death. Ranbir and Kanya share a sweet moment.

Three weeks pass and Pooja's death has brought the Godboles to realise that life is shor and that they need to enjoy every moment. Anand finally stops blaming the Nanda for the accident and with Kanya's help he finds a different approach to dealing with his loss. Pammi and Harpal are impressed with the new Anand. Kanya and Ranbir only see each other once a week not to upset the family. Even though it killed them not seeing each other.

Ranbir decides that he timing is right to reveal his past to Kanya and he wants to marry her. Kanya in return is thrilled at the thought that she'd get to know all about Ranbir's past. She had a feeling that she wasn't going to like it but still if it gave closure to Ranbir then it would be worth it. Ranbir took Kanya to the farm house. The place had become their own safe house. A place that was their own with no disturbances. Kanya loved the place and knew that it was a haven for Ranbir. It was full of good memories for Kanya and Ranbir.

R-Kanya U know. I want to tell U everything about my past. There are things i've done that i am not proud of. U know that right. Well i guess i need to start from the beginning.

K-I'm listening. Tum batao main sunungi.

R-I was 20 then living in India. We weren't poor or anything just middle class family getting by. We were close every member. I met this really nice girl or so i thought. Every guy in college was after her. Chandi was her name. She was beautiful. I would have done anything for her. The girl had big dreams. Hopes and aspirations. She was vain i guess she thought she was better than everybody. I couldn't believe it when she chose to be with me. Of all people. I guess i was young and foolish. I got sucked in by her beauty and by her sweet talk. Well we'd been dating over a year. I even proposed and she accepted. I thought that was the best day of my life until i found out she already had a boyfriend.


K-Oh Ranbir. Thats terrible!

R-It gets better. The guy was a lot older than me by 15 years. She'd just wanted a good guy so that nobody would suspect her getting it on with a married guy who by the way was loaded with money and had 2 children of his own. She and her friends had found a fall guy. Well lets just say i found out the hard way. Chandni couldn't go through the wedding with me at all. We were young but i knew i could take care of it all. Of her. My Mom had a word with her to make sure she was ready. She'd played my Mother. In the mehendi rasam we had all our family over Sid couldn't make it for some reason turned out it was Rewa. Well she humiliated my family along with her friends saying is this all we could come up with. Her father was fuming with his daughter. He'd disowned her but she didn't care as she'd found the love of her life. I took her upstairs to stop her from creating a bigger scene than she already did. She told me a lot. I was no good for anybody. Just a plain suck up. No good for anything. I was a bad lover and a plain simple loser who wouldn't amount to anything. She told me money was everything and the fastest way to reach the ladder was to be ruthless and i didn't have that in my body. She could spot a loser from a mile off. I was it. She needed a guy that her father would approve of until the time was right. Chandni turned out to be a nightmare that i wanted to forget. Well she just put me down along with all the losers. I told her i'm young i can do it. Make her happy and earn a lot for her. Save every penny but she just laughed. She even declared that if a girl were to look at me in any way it would be sympathy and pity as i wasn't enough to please her. Money, Money Money was what it all boiled down to. Her own father had the money but he's bankrupt so she had to find herself a sugar Daddy. He would take care of her and her needs. She'd sell her own father out. She threw the ring in my face and left leaving me dumbstruck. I vowed that day to her i would show her and the world that i Ranbir Nanda could amount to something more. Only this time i would do it for myself. I even cursed them that may they never be happy and one day what they did to me will haunt them three folds. I was planning on finishing my studies here but i couldn't face anyone here. Not after that humiliation. Every member in my family never brought this up ever again. In America i had a chance to invent myself and change my identity and show people a different side to me. Girls there were fast and to be honest a little materialistic. I met some good and some bad but i never managed to forget Chandni.

A few years pass by i come to India and find that the guy Chandni was seeing had passed away. I think he commited suicide or something. He went bankrupt as he was spending money all over the place. In college girls, in bad investments. I guess he'd spiralled out of control. I never got to see the guy she was seeing but his family didn't deserve that. His two kids are all grown up now. They work in my company. I guess i felt guilty. Mom taught me never to wish ill upon anyone and this happens. As for Chandni last i heard was she was alone but rich. I think she inherited her husbands money. Husband number 2 i think but she has a daughter who can't bear the sight of her.

K-That's so sad Ranbir. But u R not to be held accountable for some woman's schemes. Look at the person U R now.Chandni doesn't kow what a diamond she' let go of. U R a geat guy who loves his family. U R loved here Ranbir by people that enuinely care.

Kanya holds Ranbir's hands. She caresse's his hair.


R- know that now. But back then i was so hurt and tried so hard to prove myself. Well it doesn't excuse the way i saw women. Just for one bad experience i thought they were all the same. I slept around. Used them as i knew that's what they wanted. It's. I guess i'm ashamed of myself. But meeting U has changed me for good. I never knew angels like U existed. Even Kat is one of those but she just loves fun but U need to know thats in the past we R not together. There's more. This is just about my sister that everyone seems to not mention her. I make excuses and Tom just babies her. She was fun loving. She still is.
Mom sent Archita my baby sister over but i was too busy with making it big i somehow forgot to see that she was turning to drugs and in with a bad crowd. This is the reason Archies not with us but in America. She is also the reason why i need to go back. As soon as possible.

K-Is this why Kat is saw Katty with me.She likes U a lot. So U R planning on leaving?

R-Yes but i want U with me Kanya. I wnat U 2 come with us. U can see Archie. I want us to get married. If thats what U want.

K-R U kidding me. Of course i want that but leaving my family for America.

R-We won't settle there. Just long enough for Archie to get better. Mom would kill me and her if she knew.

K-Proposal leke aana. Ok jaldi because this won't be a small bump it will get bigger and i don't want to be a fat bride.

R-Tum aur fat not with my nishani ever. I love U Kanya.

K-Don't U ever forget that. I love U with all your flaws.

R-I have flaws. What about U?

K-I'm perfect isiliye to tumse shaadi karna hain. Mujhe shaadi karne ki baad all your imperfections door bhaag jayega.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww dat was excellent....
i liked his story and the fact that kanya has sorta saved himm..
last part was cute!
continue sooooooon!

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