Pyaar Zindagi Hai - (Updated pg.96!) - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
yes yes yes cont😛
i luv this story dont stop 😭
ppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzDONT STOP 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
its lovely...u shud definitely continue it...post the next part soon pls.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
ur fan - fic is chooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

plz cond. fast i cant evevn wait for tommorow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


it is awesome n fabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys...thankooooooo chooooooo much! well i made up my mind....i will continue this fan-fic!!! so here it goes...

PART 6

In Car

Naina Aunty, Dilip Uncle, Priya n Kripa were chit chatting a little.

NA = so priya, tumhari mom keh rahi thi kit um office ka aadha se aadha kaam sambhal rahi ho?

P = haan aunty. Aur waise bhi mujhe office jaana aacha lagta hai.

NA = oh that's really good. Aur kripa tumhara kya khayal hai. Do u also want to join office after finishing college?

K = no aunty. I want to be a doctor when I finish my college.

NA = doctor?! That's really good too. Waise r u a senior this year in college?

K = yes aunty.

NA = wow that's great! Angad bhi senior hi hain. Aaliyah abhi softmor hai, aur Karan bhi Priya ki tarah office sambhal leta hai.

P n K = oh ok.

Mr. DK = lo, ghar aagaya.

They all geta out of the car n heads inside the house. When they enters the house, u can see a girl sitting in the living room with a magazine in her hand which covers her face. She has wore a blue jeans, n a red t-shirt with blue jeans jacket on it. Then u hear Naina Aunty say….

NA = arre Priya, Kripa aao na. come on, let me introduce u to my daughter.

Priya n Kripa follows Naina Aunty to the girl.

NA = Beta, inse millo. Yeh hai…

The girl puts the magazine down…n then u can c that its none other then our Aaliyah. Aaliyah gets up n interrupts…

Aa = yeh hai Priya n Kripa. Rite?

NA = rite.

Aa = hi Priya, hi Kripa. Kaise ho?

P n K = Hi Aaliyah. We'r fine, aur tum?

Aa = I m good too.

NA (to aaliyah) = beta, Angad, aur Karan dikhaii nahie de rahe?

Aa = mom, Angad bro abhi tak nahie aaya. Aur Karan bro ko zaroori kaam se Goa jaana pada, but don't worry, he'll be here by 2morrow morning.

NA = oh ok. Karan kit oh koi baat nahie, but Angad ko maine kaha tha jaldi aane ko. Usko toh mein kal subha dekh loongi!

NA = anyway ab mujhe lagta hai ki Priya aur Kripa ko aaram ki karma chahiye. Thak gaye honge naa. (turning towards Priya n Kripa) chalo beta, mein tum dono ko apna apna karma dikha deti hoon.

NA = arre Dolly, car mein se Priya aur Kripa ke bags leke aao, n bring them to their room.

D = yes ma'am.

NA = chalo beta

P n K = ok. Good night Aaliyah. Good night Uncle.

Aa n Mr. DK = good night.

With that Priya n Kripa leave togo to their room.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 7

Its 10:00 a.m. when Kripa, n Priya comes downstairs to have breakfast. Aaliyah, Karan, n Angad were already having breakfast. Aaliyah was sitting between her bros. Angad n Karan were busy eating their toasts. Right then Aaliyah's eye falls on both Kripa n Priya, who were coming downstairs.

Aa = Good Morning Priya. Good Morning Kripa.

K n P = Good Morning Aaliyah.

Right then Angad's n Karan's eye falls on Kripa n Priya. They both were just mesmerized by their beauty, that they couldn't take their eyes of them.

Aa = Priya, Kripa…inse milo. Yeh dono mera bros hai. Yeh hai ( pointing at Karan) mera big bro Karan. Aur yeh hai ( pointing at Angad) mera second big bro Angad.

P n K = Hi

But Angad n Karan were just staring at Kripa n Priya n were lost in their dreamworld, That they couldn't hear a single word. Kripa n Priya were feeling uncomfortable, because Angad was just staring at Kripa, n Karan was staring at Priya. Aaliyah notices this n pinch Angad n Karan on their hand, which brought them back to earth.

Aa = Bros yeh hai (pointing at Priya) Priya, aur yeh hai (pointing at Kripa) Kripa. Yeh dono Suresh Uncle aur Sandhya aunty ke daughters hai.

A n K = oh ya… Hi Priya. Hi Kripa.

K n P = Hi Angad. Hi Karan.

So now they all get back to eat their toast. But Angad wanted to talk to Kripa, he wanted to know her. So he ask her…

A = So Kripa, that's ur name rita?

But before Kripa could answer…Aaliyah says….

Aa = yes bro. that's her name.

A = nice name.

Aa = she knows. Rite Kripa?

Kripa just smiles n nods. So Angad ask another question.

A = So Kripa, r u in college?

Aa = yes bro. she's in college.

A = really. That's cool. So now let me guess. Ummmm..r u a senior??

Aa = yes bro. She's a senior.

By now Angad was getting irritated, cuz before Kripa could answer his question, Aaliyah always interrupts. Soo now Angad asks Aaliyah..

A = Aaliyah, Kripa ko bolna nahie aata kya??

By now, Kripa looked at Angad doubtfully.

Aa = nahie bro. she knows how to talk ok.

A = toh phir kyun tum mere sawaal ka jawaab deti rahi. N btw I was asking those questions to Kripa, not to u.

Aa = I know bro. u see, mujhe pata tha, ki u would ask Kripa a lot of Question to make her bore, so I answered ur questions.

A = whatever.

By now Angad's eye falls on Naina Aunty, who was coming towards them. She comes n stands beside Kripa n ask…

NA = aare Karan beta. How was your trip? Koi problem? Aur y did they called u Goa?

K = my trip was good, n as for y did they called me…then I had to sign some important papers.

NA = oh ok. N she turn to Dolly n was asking her something…

Angad (thinking to himself) = arre baapre. Before mom could ask me some questions about last night, I think I should leave!

So now Angad gets up slowly, n started to walk towards the main door. But before Angad could go, Naina Aunty stops him.

NA = Angad, wait. Kahan ja rahe ho? Come here.

A = mom, mein toh kahie nahie jar aha tha.

NA = vo toh mujhe pata hai. Anyway, ab tum bataao ki, where were u last night? I told u be home at 11:30 naa. So y were u late?

A = vo mom. Ummm… vo mom, kya huwa ki…ummmm…( he was searching for an excuse, when he sees Mannan entering the house. So he goes closer to his mom, and says…) mom mein kal jaldi hi aane waala tha, but u see Mannan ne bohut pee rakhi thi, so I had to drop him to his house. That's why I was late.

He walks to Mannan n puts his hand on his shoulder, n says…

A = kyun Mannan? Hain naa??

NA = Mannan kya tumne kal bohut pee rakhi thi kya??

A = wht?? Aunty yeh aap kya keh rahi hai!

Right then Angad punches him in his stomach, n Mannan looks at him making a face. He understood wht Angad mean n adds…

M = ummm.. aunty Angad is rite. I think I drank a lot yesterday!

Naina aunty looks at them doubtfully n says…

NA = whatever. Anyway Angad what r u doing today? If u r free then I was thinking maybe u, Karan, Mannan, n Aaliyah could take Priya n Kripa out. What say?

Angad was happy, but tries to hide it, n adds: ofcourse mom.

K = mom, I would love to go, but I cant. Whaht about office?

NA = Karan, i think u should take a break from office, n go, n that's final. Priya, Kripa, u both don't mind do u?

P n K = no we don't.

Aa n M = Great!!! Then wht r we waiting for. Lets go!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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well guys..thats it for rite now!! i m soooooo sorry!! 😕 😭 .....but i m sure i will continue when my brain starts to work! 😊 ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
wow that was great plz cont soooooooooooon 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
awesome part 👏 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cute angad bay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was gr88888888 i just read the whole story.. please continue soon... 👏

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