Pyaar Zindagi Hai - (Updated pg.96!) - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey guys...THANK U soo much....but i m sorry i couldnt continue...cuz my moniter is dead 😭 ....n i have to buy a new !....anyways i got to go before my computer teacher catches me n takes 5 points off!! n i will post the parts as soon as possibble!!!....
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hey guys.... my moniter is ok...soo here r some parts....

1st PART

The sun is rising, lighting up the whole Mumbai city. As the camera takes you around the city, you can see people going to work…u can see people jogging…n bunch of traffic on the road. Then the camera focuses on a guy who's driving a car that stops in front of a huge house, made of pure white marble. The guy gets out of the car n runs toward the main door. He rings the door bell n after few moments a female maid name Dolly opens the door n greets him.
(Dolly = D)
(Guy = G)
D = Good morning sir
G = Good morning Dolly!
…n she lets him come in. As soon as he enters the house, he sees a lady doing her breakfast. He goes n greets her…
G = good morning Naina aunty!
(Naina Aunty = NA)
NA = good moring Mannan…how r u beta? Nasta karoge?
M = I m fine thank u…aur maina nasta already kar diya. Anyway abhi tak aap ka ladla beta utha ya nahie?
NA = o no beta..abhi tak vo soo raaha hai! I think kal raat der se aaya na..isliyeh!
M = waise bhi kab time pe aata hai! (in a low voice)
NA = kya kaha tumne??
M = sahi to kaha! (under his breath)…I mean kuch nai..kuch nai!
NA = whatever…Dolly? Jao ja ke Angad ko utha lao!
Dolly climbs the stair n stops in front of a door…First she knocks the door 2, 3 times…n finally she unlocks the door n steps in. The room is soooo messy!!...u can his clothes on the sofa…on the bed….on the table…n much more. You can see his lots of pix his guitar, some trophies on the bluish wall. N then u can see a guy sleeping on the bed, hiding his face in pillows…Dolly goes n opens the curtain of the window…letting the sunlight come in the room, n making it warmer. Then she goes to the guy n tells him..
D = utho sir…madam ne aap ko ready ho na ko bola hai… sir utho naa…its 8:30 n ur college starts at 9:30! Sir plz utho naa!!!
G = so na do naa dolly! Bahot neend aarahi hai!
Right then mannan comes in the room n winks at Dolly n tells her to go downstairs….n now Mannan goes to the guy n pours a bucket of ice water on his face!....
G = Mannannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! (N now u can his face n its none other then our ANGAD!!) Me tumhe nahie chodunga! Wait abhi batata hoon! N runs after Mannan, who runs out of the room. Now Mannan goes running down the stairs n now the guy was about to catch a hold of him…when Naina aunty comes n stops him.
NA = angad wait…maine hi mannan ko kaha tha tumpe pani dallne ke liye! Ab jao..take a shower! Ur getting late…
A = mommmm!!! Aapne mannan ko kaha tha! I don't believe this!!!
NA = angad jao ja ke shower leke aao!
A = oh god! Thik hai..thik hai!
N he goes to his room to take a shower. After 30 mins he comes out of his room…looking as sexy n as handsome as always! He's wearing a cool blue jeans, n a white T-shirt saying 'NO. 1' on his back!
A = chalo Mannan, ab chale!
NA = beta nasta nahie karoge?
A = no thnx mom! Waise mom aaliyah kaha hai?
NA = vo to kab ki chali gai uski saheli ke saath!
A = oh ok! So I'll see u later!
A = c'mon mannan…lets go!

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PART 2

While on the other side of India, the camera takes u around the city n stops in front of a big house on the top of the hill. Then it takes u inside the house, n u can see a maid making a breakfast….n others doing morning chores. Then it takes u up the stairs n stops in front of a room. You can hear music playing in the room. Slowly the door unlocks n u can see the room. You can see the girl's pixs on her baby purple wall. Butterflies n angels r hanging on her ceiling. Then u see a girl coming out of the bathroom wearing a bathrobe. Though u cant see her face. She slowly walks to the CD Player n puts the song 'Hum to Bhai Jaisa hai waise rahenge', n sings along with it. Then she goes to her closet n remove a pair of blue pants n a white t-shit saying "CUTIE" in baby blue with white glitter on it. She goes into the bathroom n changes into her clothes n then comes out drying her hair. Then she goes to the mirror n wear baby blue jhumkas, n put brownish lipstick on her lips, n rubs them together for final touch. After few moments, she puts light make-up, wears blue n black color sandals, combs her hair n turns around. And then u can see its none other than our Kripa.

She takes her purse n cell phone n goes downstairs. There u can see a young lady in a black skirt n red t-shirt discussing something with a lady in a bluish saree….n with a man in black pants n white shirt n wearing a tie. Kripa goes down n take a sit beside a young lady saying…..
K = good morning mom, dad, n di.
(P = Priya;
Mrs. SC = Sandhya Chopra
Mr. SC = Suresh Chopra)
P; Mrs. SC; Mr. SC (together): good morning Kripa.
P = Kripa, tumhari saheli Heena ka phone tha. She told me tell to that she's waiting for for u, bechari kab se wait kar rahi hai. So now hurry up!
K = oops! I forgot. (getting yp) bye mom, dad, n di..
Mrs. SC = Beta nasta to kar ke ja!
K = mom me late ho rahi hoon. Fine I'll take this apple. ( saying that she leaves.)
Kripa goes to her car which is Lexus in navy blue color, n slides in, n wear sunglasses n drives away.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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well guys thats it for now...but i might post the next part before going to bed....

i hope u guys like it!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr8 story...i luv it...ur doin an awesome job...plz cont. 👏 >
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Originally posted by: taniya_22

gr8 story...i luv it...ur doin an awesome job...plz cont. 👏 >

thanx taniya!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wheres everybody else???????
sab log sooo gaye kya!!!! 🥱 😭 ...
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PART 3

Back in Mumbai, angad n mannan r in Angad's red beauty sports car, n chit chatting a little.
M (loud voice) = yaar angad, gadi dhire chala. Marva yega tu mujhe!
A = chill mannan chill. Kuch nahie hoga.aur waise bhi angad aaise hi gadi chalata hai! ( n he has a cool smile on his face)
M = angad dhire chalana. Dekho sab ladkiyaan hume dekh rahi hai!!
A = let me correct u my friend…sab ladkiyaan hume nahie mujhe…sirf MUJHE dekh rahi hai!!
M = job bhi ho…..
M = finally finally college aagaya!!! Thank u god….thank u sooo much!!
And angad stops the car making a big noise. After few minutes, him n mannan gets out of the carchewing a gum n wearing cool sunglasses. As soon as they both enter the University of Mumbai college's caf, everybody stop doing wht they were doing n looked up at Angad, the hottest n the coolest guy of the college. Other guys of the college were burning n their faces were turning red as chilli. Some of the guys' grip got tight on their GF, as they were afraid their GF might go running down to Angad!!As angad was walking, he was looking for some1. So mannan asks…
M = angad…who r u looking for???
A = mannan, Tania (his GF) aaj dikhai nahie de rahi??? I wonder whts wrong with her?? Do u know anything abt her??
By now mannan was laughing like crazy, n by looking at him…Angad was getting irritated n mad.
A = ab has kyun rahe ho??? I didn't said a joke!!
M = chill Angad chill!!
A = mannan vo kahie dikhaii nahi derahi, aur tum keh rahe ho ki chill!!! How can I chill when I, the collest n the hottest guy of this college; don't have my girl with me?!?!?!!!
M = wait a min….did u just said UR girl?!?! (n grined at angad). Angad did u for got that u broke up with her the night before yesterday! N now plz don't ask me Y? HOW? Aor WHERE???
N with that the bell rings n angad go with a confuse look on his face…while mannan goes in with smiling!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr8888888888888 👏
con soon keep it up but rite othere parts plzzzzzzzzzzz soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesome..plz continue! 😛

YummY 😳

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