Pyaar Zindagi Hai - (Updated pg.96!) - Page 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
awesome,brilliant can u sontinue plz
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yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it was lovely plez continue
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thanx guys! i'll post the next part soon!
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PART 4

Kripa's driving her car smoothly with slow music on. She takes right n stops on front of a house, which is surrounded by bunch of trees. Its 2 story building house, n it has garden besides it. Then u see a girl in the center of the garden, looking at her watch. She's wearing blue capris n a red t-shirt saying 'Too Cute 2 Be Desi!', though u cant see her face. Right then Kripa yells her name…
K = Hey Heenaaaaa!!!!
As Heena looks up, u can her cute face, (Heena is played Reemz from YMLH), it has 'O thank God' look on her face. She hurries to the car, n slides in saying…
H = kya Kripa, kab se wait kar rahi hoon. Kahan thi, traffic mein stuck hogai thi kya?
K = I'm choooo chorry! I was late again!!! Anyway wht r u doing after college today? If u r free, then maybe we could go for shopping…cuz I want to buy some clothes before I go to Mumbai.
Kripa waited for her to answer, but she didn't, she looked outside the window. So Kripa asked…
K = Heena? Kya hua? R u ok? Did somebody said something bad to u? kuch bolo naa?
H = kya bolun? …..Kripa, tumhara Mumbai jaana zaroori hai kya?
K = I soooo sorry….mujhe bhii nahie jaana, but I don't have any choice! Aur waise bhi, I'll call u everyday n tell u everything. Aur main kal nahie ja rahi. I m going after 2 weeks, so u have plenty of time to spend with me! Now cheer up!
K = sooooooo….. r u coming with me today evening after college to the mall?
H = hmmmm….ofcourse! itna toh mein apni friend ke liye kar sakti hoon naa!
With that they arrives at their 'University of Kolkatta College'. They both got out of the car n head towards the main enterance door. As they entered the college, everybody stopped wht they were doing n greeted kripa n heena with a smile plastered on their faces! Then they both went to their 1st class, which was boring! Then the rest of the day passed by quickly doing their work n shopping. And so does the 2 weeks were passing by quickly, n everybody who knew Kripa were sad!

Finally the last day for Kripa in her college came, n everybody were wishing her good luck n were saying their final fare well. The day ends quickly n Kripa goes home. As she enters her house, her whole family was nusy packing their stuff. Kripa went to her dad n asked him…..
K = Dad, cant I stay here? I don't want to go to Mumbai!
Mr. SC = Beta, I understand ur problem, but ek na ek din toh hume move hona hi hai, so y not now? And as for Mumbai, its not bad at all. You r going to find lots new friends n we'll be staying with Dilip uncle, Naina aunty. You can be friends with Aaliyah, Angad, n Karan! You them don't u?
K = nooooo!!! I remember Naona aunty n Dilip auncle, but not Aaliyah, Angad,n Karan.
Mr. SC = don't worry u'll know them, n now go start packing up ur stuff, cuz u might now get enough time to do that 2morrow.
K = ok…if u say so.

With that she goes to her room n star packing up her stuff. After finishing her work, she opens 1 of her photo album, n start looking at her pix with her friends. Tears start rolling down her cheeks, but she rubs them away, n just stares at those pix n fall asleep with photo album in her hands!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i know that this parts r boring rite now!!! but i'll do my best best best to make it better!....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Plz cont soon..it's getting so good..i cant wait until angad and kripa meet..plz hurry...
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow...gr8 story...can't wait for the next partz...plz cont. soon... 👏
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thanx guys! well heres the next part!

PART 5


In Mumbai

Its 11:30 a.m. when angad comes downstairs to have breakfast. He comes down n take a seat on the empty dining table. When he doesn't seem to see anybody, he calls them. (more like yells!)

A = Mom??? Mom??? Aaliyah??? Dolly?????

Dolly comes first n ask….

D = yes sir?

A = Dolly mere liye breakfast leke aao.

D = yes sir…saying that she leaves.

Then Naina comes in…

NA = kya hua Angad?? Kyun shubah shubah shor macha rahe ho??? Kya hai jaldi se bolo, mere paas ajj time nahie hai!

A = kuch nahie, vo to bus app log dikhai nahie de rahe the isiliyeh. Waise mom, me n my friends r going to a party tonight, n rite now we (him n his friends) r gonna hang out. Ok

NA = beta tum abhi hang out kar sakte ho…..but u cant go to the party tonight!!

A = WHT????? But y mom???

NA = because aaj suresh uncle, sandhya aunty, priye, n kripa r coming tonight. Aur voh
Humara saath rahenge for some time….untill they buy their own house…..so I want u to clean ur room…..rite now!!

A = wait a min…Suresh uncle, n Sandhya aunty from Kolkatta??? Wow they r coming here in Mumbai?!! That's cool…but voh humara saath kyun rahenge?!?! Now that's odd mom…

NA = Angad quit complaining….n quit ur room.

A = o.k…but y cant I go to the party??? Mom it's a bachelor party!!! Its soooooo important!!! Mom plz try to understand!!! plz

NA = I understand beta…but I want u to be here when they arrives

A = when r they coming?

NA = at 11:45 p.m.

A = ooh! Mom…how abt I come fome at 11:30 p.m. then it'll be fine naa..aur waise bhi…yeh party buhot important hai….plzzzzz

NA = o.k. fine. But I want u to be here at 11.30p.m. n that's final

A = aawwwww thanx mom…ur the bestttt!!!...

NA = o.k. ab maska maarna bandh karo, n go clear your room…

A = o.k. with that he goes to his room…



In Kolkatta

Kripa, Priya, n their parents were doing some last packing. It was almost time for them to leave to go to Mumbai, when Heena calls Kripa. Kripa picks up the phone….

K = hello?

H = hi Kripa

K = Heena?? Hi!!! How r u??

H = I m o.k…. Kripa when r u leaving for Mumbai?

K = I m going to airport in abt 5 min.

H = oh o.k.

Then they chatted for a while, then they hangs up.

P = kripa r u ready??

K = yes di

Mr. SC = ok then lets go….

Then they all leave to go to airport. After a while, they reach the Dum Dum airport of Kolkatta. They were abt to go in when some1 calls Kripa's dad…. (but u cant hear wht the other person is saying…)

Mr. SC = hello?...

Mr. SC = wht?...

Mr. SC = r u sure u got the right information…

Mr. SC = o.k. I m coming…..n saying that he hangs up n turns to his family.

K = kya hua dad?

Mr. SC = beta mujhe yahan Kolkatta mein 2 weeks rehne padenge!

K, P, n Mrs. SC (together..): wht????

Mr. SC = haan…mujhe abhi office se phone aaya…n theres a problem…so I n Sandhya have to stay here…

P = par dad…mein aur kripa Mumbai mein kisiko jaante tak nahie.

Mr. SC = don't worry beta….Naina Aunty aur Dilip uncle hein wahan par….n I m 100% sure they will take such a good care of u both….n now no questions

K = dad kya mein yahan nahie ruk sakti….aapke saath?

Mr. SC = nahie beta…agar tum yahan ruki toh phir Priya ka kya hoga….isiliyeh tum aur Priya go ahead…now go go go, or else u guys will be late for your flight.

Kripa n Priya take their blessings n go inside. The security guards check their bags, passports n other things. Then they give directions to Kripa n Priya, n they leave. After few moments, they reach the plane…find their seat, n sits down. The plane took off after 15 mins, n Kripa n Priya took 1 last look at the Kolkatta city! Both of them r sad, but they didn't express it, they don't need to. After a while both of them were sleeping with their heads on each other. Later on, Priya wakes up when she hears the announcement saying, "Please put your seatbelts on, the plane will be landing in few minutes." So Priya decides to wake up Kripa….then both go to restroom to freshen up. After a while, they both comes out n takes their seat. The plane lands n they both go to the Immigration Custom Checking. Over there, the security guards check their passport, n they go to pick up their bags n heads out.

Outside the airport, Naina Aunty n Dilip uncle were already waiting for them. As soon as they see Priya n Kripa coming out, they both goes to them. Naina Aunty Dilip Uncle were soooo happy seeing them. Naina aunty couldn't control her happiness n hugs both of them! After a while they all get apart n Dilip Uncle says…

(Mr. DK: Dilip Khanna)

Mr. DK = kitne dino ke baad meine tum dono ko dekha…kitna bade ho hogaii ho…hai na Naina?

NA = haan…buhot bade aur buhot pyaare bhi hein. Dono apne parents pe gaye hai! Btw Suresh bhaisaab ne phone karke hume batadiya hai…so don't worry!

Mr. DK = ab yahan baatein hi karte rahenge ya phir ghar bhi chalna hai!

NA = ya lets go…Priya aur Kripa bhi thak gaye honge..hai naa??

Kripa n Priya just nods n they leave.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesome parts 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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do guys really think...that i should continue this fan-fic?!?!?!?????? 😕 😕 ...

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