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Posted: 17 years ago
Kanya is gonna die????NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOO!!!!she can't die man she can't die.u brought tears in my eyes when u said the last part. 😭 😭 😭 plez continue soon i wanna know what happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
a happy and a sad update plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg i jus read all off it omng ur scaring mee itz soo catchy!! plezz cont sooon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU SAID YOU WON'T KILL HER!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭 sorry, i'm just really sad over this part buthope you don't make her die.. 😭 make her go into a coma or something..thatsfine 😆 but don't kill her
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Posted: 17 years ago
why did you stress so much on the YOUs towards the end 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
dt ws gr8t plzzzzzzzzzzzz dnt kill kanya plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cricketlover

why did you stress so much on the YOUs towards the end 😕



all in good time yaar...you will find out everything...but all in good time 😈...😆
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey all...here is the next installment...😃😃😃...enjoy...😉...please dont come after me...😳

Part 14

That night/day was burned into Ranbir mind and would stay with him until the day he died. It was 2:30am, the streets of Mumbai were clear. Kanya was sitting next to Ranbir with a protective hand over her stomach as if shielding her baby from any harm. Ranbir on the other hand was a nervous wreck. He was gripping the steering wheel so hard his knuckles were white. He remembered when Pooja Bhabi had her baby, they were all there. This time it was only him and Kanya and soon their baby too. They told Aditya Bhaia and Pooja Bhabi that they were going to the hospital. They had wanted to come but couldn't because they didn't have anyone to watch the babies so they stayed home. They both promised they would get their neighbor to watch the boys in the morning and would come to the hospital. Pooja Bhabi had assured Ranbir that they would be there for the birth, that it would take time. Since it was Kanya's first delivery it would be a while until Ranbir would get to see his baby.

Ranbir felt his heart drop when he heard Kanya gasp and grab the handle of the door. She told him it was nothing, just another contraction. They were getting stronger and more close together. She assured him it was all normal and that the real pain hadn't even begun yet. She soon settled back in the seat and relaxed a bit. Ranbir, however, was still a nervous wreck. Looking at Kanya made him more uneasy. She was looking paler and paler every time he looked at her. It was like the color was leaving her face. Ranbir just put it down to a normal part of labor. After all, it wasn't a walk in the park.

They finally reached the hospital and checked Kanya in. An orderly wheeled Kanya into a deliver room, private of course. When they had arrived Kanya's doctor was paged, and was on her way. Once they got Kanya settled in Ranbir went in to see her. He didn't much like what he saw. She had an IV in her arm, she was hooked up to monitors, and some sort of belt was wrapped around her belly. Sensing his uneasiness Kanya called him over and smiled at him lovingly. She then explained to him that these were all standard delivery things. The IV was to keep her hydrated and what not; the thing around her belly was connected to the monitor. It was keeping up with her contractions and the baby's heart beat to make sure everything was going smoothly. He settled in a little, but was still on the edge of his seat. After about 15min or so Kanya's doctor walked in to examine her so Kanya asked Ranbir to get her some ice chips since that was all she was allowed for now.

Ranbir took his time and came back after 10min or so. As he was entering Kanya's room the doctor was leaving. Ranbir looked at the doctor and something didn't settle with him. She looked worried for some reason. When he asked the doctor if everything was ok, the doctor gave him vague answers. She said that Kanya was fine at the moment; her contractions were getting more powerful and closer together. She still had a while to go though. The doctor told him she would be back in 30min to check up on her again. It struck Ranbir as odd because he didn't remember such frequent check ups when Pooja Bhabi was having Aryan, of course he wasn't there so he wasn't sure. He pulled up a chair next to Kanya, who looked weak and so pale now. He fed her ice chips and stroked her hair. Whenever a contraction came he helped her by holding her hand and counting for her, and telling her to breath. Kanya's focal point was Ranbir, she kept her eyes on him.

After one contraction that seemed very intense Kanya slipped back onto the bed and closed her eyes. He thought it was just her recovering, but in the next second something went off and started beeping. Ranbir was at his feet as two nurses came in and started checking the baby's vital signs and checking Kanya. One nurse yelled for the other to call the doctor STAT. Once the doctor got there Ranbir was rushed out of the room, much to his protest. After a while, but seemed like hours, the doctor came out and had a look on her face that scared Ranbir.

R- Doctor what happened? How are Kanya and our baby?
Dr- Mr. Nanda your wife is refusing the epidural that I have recommended to her. Taking the epidural would make this delivery easier. She would feel less pain, and if something were to happen then we could perform an emergency C- section with out delay.
R- But why is she refusing the epidural?
Dr- Mrs. Nanda says she want to have a natural child birth, as much as possible. And I cannot go against her wishes. See if you can talk her into it. I'll be back later.

Ranbir walks in to room to see Kanya lying there with her eyes closed, hands on her belly. Ranbir goes over to her and sits next to her, holding her hand. He tried and tried but to no avail, to get Kanya to consent on the epidural. He didn't like seeing her in this much pain, if there was something to make it better why didn't she want it. Kanya's answer was that so many women had their babies naturally and she was going to be one of them. She wanted to feel every moment that led up to her baby's birth no matter how painful it was. Ranbir was putty in her hands so he could do nothing else.

It was almost 9am when they finally said that Kanya was at ten centimeters and that it was time to take her to a proper deliver room. Ranbir insisted on being with her but Kanya was reluctant, like she didn't want him there. He told her and he too wanted to be by her side as their much awaited child entered the world. It took them a few minutes to get Kanya prepped and Ranbir took that time to scrub in himself. When Kanya saw him she let out a weak laugh. Seeing Ranbir in scrubs and a hair net was funny. He liked that she smiled because of him. Ranbir was astounded at what came next. He couldn't believe what was happening in front of his own eyes. Seeing Kanya do this sprang a whole new type of love and respect for her. She was going through so much to give him a child. He knew that no one could ever replace her, in his life or his heart. It was totally hers. Kanya held on to Ranbir's hand and squeezed like nothing. It hurt but he kept quiet knowing his pain was nothing compared to Kanya's. Kanya let out one final scream and one hard push and then he heard it. It was like music to his ears, his baby crying…and what a set of lungs. The doctor congratulated them…it was a GIRL…Ranbir did the honors and cut her umbilical cord. "Kanya we have a daughter. We have a beautiful baby girl." Ranbir leaned down to kiss her forehead and thanked her for giving him such a great gift.

Then again suddenly monitors started beeping and the whole room turned upside down. He was rushed out of the room and sent to the waiting room. He was dying not knowing what happened to Kanya. He couldn't even go to the nursery since they were cleaning up the baby too. After about 1hr the doctor came out with a firm look on her face.

Dr- Mr. Nanda I have some bad news, please sit down.
R- What happened? How is Kanya and our baby?!
Dr- Your baby is perfect Mr. Nanda. She is 6.5 pounds of pure innocence and beauty. Everything is fine, her check up was perfect. Kanya however…
R- What happened to Kanya!!???
Dr- Mr. Nanda I was not supposed to tell you but now there is no point in hiding the truth.
R- What truth? What's going on!?
Dr- Mr. Nanda I had told Kanya from the beginning that her pregnancy was complicated and her delivery would be too. I had advised her to not keep this baby because it was a hazard to her health.
R- But…but…she told me everything was fine. That after the first trimester it was ok, that she was going to be fine.
Dr- Sorry but she lied to you. From the point when her pregnancy test was positive I told her that her life was at risk if she went through with this pregnancy.
R- What!? But I was at every check up and you always said everything was fine. Why didn't you tell me?!
Dr- First of all I only said that everything was fine with the baby, they baby was healthy. Kanya on the other hand was getting weaker by the day, her health was severely compromised. I couldn't tell you because of doctor patient confidentiality.
R- I had a right, I'm the baby's father I'm her husband.
Dr- When it came to the baby you knew everything. I couldn't tell you about Kanya because she had specified from day one that you were to get no reports on her health what so ever.
R- What? But why..why did she do this?
Dr- To her, giving you this baby was more important than her own life. She put her life on the line to give you this baby.

What the doctor was saying rocked his world. Why did Kanya do this, why? She put her life on the line for his happiness.

Dr- I'm sorry to say Mr. Nanda but that life is not going to be with us for too much longer. Kanya is now going in and out of consciousness …she had lost too much blood, the hemorrhaging wont stop, and her body is already weak from the pregnancy now add the complications of the delivery…I'm sorry…Kanya doesn't have much time left.

JAZ

PS: i know many want to kill me for where i left off...but just remember...that if u kill me...you wont know what happens 😉...and keep in mind...I LOVE YOU ALL 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
It was AWESOME
But sooooooooooo sad
Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭😭😭 that's gotta suck for poor rannu and the kids..n obviously kanya too what a sad story.. 😭

PS you need to change the pg# in the title (you wrote pg16 instead of 18)

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