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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Ravinder duggal

well written a great part
cont. soon


thanks



Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey thanks for this part..interesting...possessivness creeping in...lollove is incomplete with out possiessiveness dont u think so????...cant wait for the past of Kripa to come to light i hope to ae it a dynamite ...continue soon...


thanks 4 ur comment
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Posted: 17 years ago
KRIPAS PAST:

As soon as Kripa closed her eyes her mind went 5years back in past. She remembered walking in Prithvis room coming straight from her camp to surprise him from her early visit but instead was shocked herself seeing him in the arms of another woman who he claimed to b his best friend. More she heard them talking abt her saying that she was such an easy target for money they had fooled her so easily she had trusted Prithvi blindly & would never believe that Prithvi was after her money & had nothing to do with her. She remembered walking back home as quietly as she had walked in totally shattered. She wanted to remove her anger on some1 but didnt know how to?? As soon as she entered her room she started throwing all the things Prithvi had given her all over room when they were finished she started throwing all the things there were in the room.
Listening to all the commotion Sujal came running into her room. Seeing her throwing a trauma he was dumbfounded Kripa was never the person to throw traumas like these. He had tried to calm her down but in vain finally he decided to call Kashish as his parents were out of town & he knew Kripa needed a woman to talk to right now.
It had taken Kashish abt 3 hours to calm Kripa down. But at the same time it had left a mark on her heart saying that no1 would love her for the person she was she would b loved for her money only Kashish & Sujal both had tried to talk her out of it but in vain.
Knowing what Prithvi had done to Kripa, Sujal saw to it that Prithvi was thrown out of the city along with his girlfriend that to mercilessly. Arman had taken special interest in this case along with his boxing buddies & had seen to the matter personally knowing how much Kripa was hurt. He considered no difference between Kripa & Kasturi both of them were his sisters But still Kripa was not able to overcome her 1st heartbreak not knowing that a bigger heartbreak was on its way towards her.
The youngsters knew that it was necessary to get Kripa out of this place for sometime to let her overcome this phase of life. She has been & still was the delicate darling for all of them being the smallest in the group. They decided to send her with Kashish to Delhi to complete her studies.
Kashish was studying interiors in Delhi. No1 there knew that she was a millionaires according to every1 she belonged to a middle class family. It was the pretext which helped her to understand people around her & gave her ability to value money.
It was decided that Kripa would follow the same thing it would give her the ability to come out of the mode that people in this world would love her for money only. The only thing the youngsters didnt know was that this would b the turning point in Kripas life. After this break they would see a completely different Kripa. A Kripa for whom nothing mattered more that money a Kripa whose heart will beat only for her family but the others will know her as ice hearted. A Kripa who will turn into an emotionless doll.
Kripa was against the idea at first but Kashish & Ridz talked to her. They explained to her that it would give her a chance to meet new people lead a different & new life. Even that had failed.
Arman had come in to help that Kripa definitely needed a change. He simply took Kripas side & stated that Kripa was unfit for that lifestyle as she had been born & brought up with all the luxuries. She would never b able to lead an ordinary life. This had got Kripa charged & she sort it to b a challenge to change her life to which she agreed. She said that she will lead an ordinary life with a little allowance for 1 whole year & prove every1 wrong that she couldnt change her life style but only god knew that the next year would not only change her lifestyle but also her life FOREVER
A knock on the door brought her out of those horrible memories. She straightened herself & cleared her eyes which were abt to shed out some precious tears. When she was ok she mumbled a humble come in & got into another meeting to keep her past away from her at least till the night when she fell on bed & close her eyes to dream abt her past which had turned from a fairy tale into a horrible nightmare



COMMING UP NEXT: Tushar's party... good or bad????


hope u guys liked this part. it was just the intro of the year which changed KRipa's life.
the next part will b fro SK fans espically so keep reading & do leave ur comments.
Love
ADI 😊
Edited by sujalangad_rock - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part 👏 poor kripa 😭 really anxious to know kripa's past 😉plz continue soon 👏 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwww. Bechari Kripa. I think so Angad has come in ehr life now. Or some turning point. Cant wait for next aprt. Cont sooonn.
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow i pity kripa and i await the next part cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
very well written part dear .damn gud 👏 .
plz continue soon b'coz i m waiting 4 sk part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 omg prithvi 😡 I hate this man , i hope angad kripa ke sath wo khel na khele 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 part
prithiv aghhh 😡
but he is still cute 😆
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part..wonder what happened with her and zaib...uhh prithvi...has to do something wrong...
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part! aww kripa 😭 soo sad...i wonder whats gunna happen next...continue soon :)

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