Rain:the ultimate..!!! Pg18 p. 8B

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: 26javey26
great part

Aww...thanks😊!How sweet of you ....!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: deeya123
very nice part
luved it

Thanks😊... I tried my best and I m so glad u liked it! Hope you like my next update which will be posted by the end of this week! See I'm organized😉😃...lol!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great part.. 👏

Hi...thank u ...😊... glad u liked it... !

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: freaky_angel
that was awesome!!! i luved it it was so sweet and cute!! keep up da good work!! 😃 i luved da angad n kripa part u know the stange attraction... 😉 😛

Thanks you! It was ?? Nah I dont think so ...I think it was way below average yaar! Lol... yeah yeah I know "the strange attraction😉" just hope you like the next part!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction
nice !!_-
so a whole month on the island !!-- it'll be interestin to see wat happens in that month !! :D

Thank u 😊*bows down*... yeah ...a whole month...right now I'm kinda jealous of my own FF characters😡...............lol😆😆😆!! Yeah ..we'll see what happens and what doesnt!

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#36

Originally posted by: lalala10

Thanks you! It was ?? Nah I dont think so ...I think it was way below average yaar! Lol... yeah yeah I know "the strange attraction😉" just hope you like the next part!

am surie i will😆

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ha! U know what?? ur right.. I'lll make a new version of a real island!

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#38

Originally posted by: lalala10
ha! U know what?? ur right.. I'lll make a new version of a real island!

just an idea like u gave me an idea!😉 about Angad POV

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

just an idea like u gave me an idea!😉 about Angad POV

OMG ! Ur going to write from his POV??? That's gr8! Cant wait man! Hope he likes her!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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All the girls are in the cafeteria...
K:Wow! A school trip to an island cool.... we will all go right??
An: Of course ..whats the name again??
Kt: "Hawai" (alright this is my own version of hawai..its supposed to be a tropical island .)
Aa: The name sounds cool..
K: I cant wait!!
Aa: Same here!
An: Alright.. soo KK dont forget to bring to your CDs and CD player !
Aali you bring your guitar ,
Kt you bring your handicap and digital camera.
and I'll bring my sport goods.And we can write new songs there ..you know theres no better place to write songs than an island??
K+Kt+Aa: ALRIGHT!!
Aaliya goes to her house because her parents just came in the country and she has to go meet them.
Anjali and Kt go to the nurse to get Kt's leg checked .

While Kripa makes her way to the detention room. When she enters she sees half the room empty.She decides to sit in the corner.She was quietly doodling on her notebook when she heard the maths professor come in.
MP: And I hope Mr.Khanna you will not do it again in class.
A (in a careless tone) :Yes sir.
MP: Now sit and do your work.
And saying this he leaves.
Angad notices Kripa and he sits besides her.
Angad bends over her ear while sitting down and whispers "hi"
K (whispers back): Hi.
A (whispers ): What are you here for?? I thought you were the goody-good types??
K (whispers): Skating in the hall.Dont judge a book by it's cover .
A (whispers):O ok.... What ever that means.

Just then a girl comes and sits besides Angad and gives him a flirty smile and Angad smirks at her.Then he looks at Kripa and decides to test Kripa by making her jealous even though he wasnt sure what he wanted to test her about.
A( a little loud so Kripa can hear): Hey gorgeous!
Kripa looks up with her eye brows raised but looks down before Angad notices her looking at him.Angad kept on whispering sweet things to the girl which made Kripa mad.

K(thinks): Why I m mad ??? His life ..he can do any thing he wants....but why am I feeling bad? ..No..of course not..I m probably mad at the teacher for giving me detention and I'm taking it out on him."

But this didnt please Kripa she had her face turned but it was red from anger.

While Angad who didnt notice Kripa staring at him is very uncomfortable that Kripa isnt looking here so he moves a little closer to the girl and takes her hand in his and starts caressing her palms while looking at Kripa from the corner of his eyes.

Kripa who had already seen all this just closes her eyes with her back towards them and trys to reason her self.
" Chill KK! What happened ?? He is just a guy ..just ignore him." But she is still feeling very insecure and she just wants the clock to strike 5:30 and to her delight it does.She quickly grabs her stuff and goes to her room.

We see Angad making way to his room looking furious.
A(thinks):God! That girl is sooo soo arghhh I dont know what!! I try to make her jealous but no! That stupid journal of her's is more important than me. And I actually thought she was beautiful for the first time I looked at a girl's eyes not her body and that girl gives me no importance?? Hell with her... even she doesnt mean anything to me! Who does she think she is ?? I can get any girl I want...why should I chase after her??God ! How I hate her!

While Kripa lying in her bed is staring at the ceiling .
K(thinks): I felt so special when he would compliment me ..but now I know that he does that to every girl..he 's a player , a casanova , a flirt he could never have any feelings!! I knew he would hurt me but still I cant help thinking about him ..why ....why??? and he is over there probably making out with a girl.Shhheeesh..!!!! God! How I hate him!

And at that moment both of them decide to ignore the other person completely.

Kripa is in bed when Kt and Anjali come in .
K: Hey ..so hows your leg??
Kt: It's fine I sprained it...I'll be perfectly fine in two days!
An: Hey lets go watch a movie.Aaliya said she is coming here in 10 minutes. Come on watch a movie.
K: You guys watch I have to do some work.
An:Okey dokey!

It's 6:00 already and Kripa goes down and meets Laksh in the cafeteria.
L: hey!
K: Ssup.
L: You look kinda tensed.
K: o..yeah just loads of work.
L: Awww...dont worry ..its just work dont take it "too" seriously. K: Now you see why I love you ( as a friend)....?? Nyways whats up??
L: Work , work and wait work!
K: Ok! So you are going to the trip right??
L: Wouldnt miss it for the world!
They keep talking about this and that!
K: Well , Laksh I have this brilliant idea due to which you and Kt can be friends.
L: Ok ...let me hear it.........but wait let me pray.....Oh God ..have mercy on my ears!
K: Shut up Laksh.
She hits him playfully.
K: tomorrow I will be in the library with Kt and when I go you will come and......................................................... ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ..

Aaliya comes back to the room and finds Anjali and Kt watching Tv.

Aa: Hi guys.
An: Hi!
Kt: Hi ..did you enjoy ??
Aa: Nopes like always they could only give me half an hour.
Kt and Anjali console Aaliya.
Kripa comes there , she had heard everything from outside the room. She pretended not to hear anything ..she came in casually.
K: Hey guys! Come on lets go get some hot chocolate and the we can rehearse.
Kt: Good idea!
Aa: Nah ..not in a mood.
K: Kiun ?? kya hua?
An: Kuch nahi ye sab dramay baazi hai..chal uth!
Kt: Come on ...
Aa: No..
K: Aaliya.
Aa: tum log jao.. mera mood nahi hai.
Kt: Forget it ..lets leave...her parents are very important to her and we dont mean anything to her.
Aa: Guys ..it is nothing like that.
An: No..it is like that.
Aa: Come on ..you guys..
K: Agar aisa kuch nahi hai tou phir chal ...come enjoy with us.
Aaliya stares at Kripa..
Aa: Tum log ye emotional black mailing chor do haan?..........................Ab chalo bhi.
An+Kt+K: Yes!

At 9:00 the boys are settled in their room and are playing truth and dare.
L: Hmmm.. truth or dare?
K: Dare!
L: Hmmm...interesting!
The screen goes black and the next moment you see Kavya with a tie tied around his head and one of his hand on the middle of his belt (you know how you wear a belt and your thumb is hiding behind the belt and all the other fingers are outside ..that way).

" Yahooooooooooooooooo!!!
Chahay koi mujhe jungali kahe......"
Then he takes the bed sheet and covers his head with it. And walk around the guys like a shy girl. He then goes to the window and puts his head out of the window. He spots to guys walking .
" Hey dostoon ...kya tum jaante ho??Main har din apne daant brush karta hoon....hehehehe ..kissi ko batana mat! Aur suno tum donon ko akele itni raat ko nahi ghoomna chahiya ....log kya sochen gay???? Gay...hahaha!!
Mauja hi mauja!!"

Before he could continue Josh pulls him in . Kavya was drunk...so he stretched on the floor laughing and singing :
" Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall.
humpty dumpty had a great fall.
rain rain go away
come back another day!"

A: Alright lets just continue.. he will act like that.
Kavya keeps on laughing and murmuring things to himself.

Josh spins the bottle and it come on Angad.
J: Truth or dare?
A: Dare!
J: Laksh?
L: yeah?
J: Take your cell phone out. And he smirks.
Next you see a drunk Kavya holding Laksh's leg or more like hanging on it , Angad holding Laksh from behind and Josh in front of him!
J: Dont move Laksh ..Angad hold him tight.
L: Dude Josh this is not good.
J: Well if you let me do it properly it will look good na??
Josh finishes what he was doing and then grabs a fistful of Lakshs hair and puts it in a pony . Next he garbs a scarf and wraps it around him. And then quickly takes his cell phone.
The picture is taken with Laksh wearing make up , a scarf and a pony tail with hearts and balloons drawn all over his face!! Angad leaves him but too late!! Josh had already sent to all his contacts.
Laksh quickly rushes to the washroom.
J: Alright
A: And then they were two!
J: Dude ..Just spin !!
A: Chill..
Angad spins it and it lands on him.
J: Truth or dare??
A: Dare!
J: Ok...hmmm ...tomorrow in Robbie's party you and I ............................................................ ............................................................ .....

The next day:

Kt: Kya hai Kripa? Why did you bring me to the library?
K:kuch khaas nahi ..you always come here and I was about to borrow some books...so I bought you here wih me.
Kt: O ..ok!
K: Ok ..Kt you wait here I will go find that book.
Just as Kripa leaves Laksh comes pretending to look for a book.Kt notices him.
Kt: Hi ..your the one that helped me that day...
L: Yeah... How is your leg now??
Kt: It good.. thank you so much ... uss din app ko thik se thanks nahi keh paayi.
L: Uss ki koi zarrorat nahi!
Kt: My name is Kt . She puts her hand forward.
L: Laksh .He smile and shakes her hand. As soon as their hands touch both stare in to each others eyes. They stay like that until Kt realizes what's going on! She takes it back and as she was doing so Laksh felt as if an important part of his life was taken from him.
Kt: Waise app yahan kia kar rahe hain??
L: Oh...books dondh raha tha parhne ke liye..you know ..shayad ek tutor lena pare... but cant find any so ajj kal books parhta hoon but still no good....
Kt: I can tutor you and you helped me alot so I can make it up to you too.
L; You can??.ohh.. jeee thanks ...
Kt: meet me tomorrow in the library with your books at 5 PM .
L: Ok ..I'll be there..bye .
Kt: Bye.
Kripa comes .
Kt: Did you find your book...???
K: Yeah..come on lets go!
While going out Kripa gives thumbs up to her and he gives her a flying kiss.

Aaliya was shopping for a dress to wear to the party. She was in a store with beautifl dresses ......she couldnt pick on out!! She bought one or two dresses but not whole heartedly because of yesterdays incident. When she went back to the dorm. , she was in her room, when she heard a knock on the door .
" Come in" but no one came so she went to open the door but found no one there.There she found a package ...it had a card on it. She took it in and opened the card.

"You will look beautiful in each and everything but if you will wear this , you will look outstanding because this dress will bring the glow of love on your face ...the glow of my love on your face.
Always yours ,
XXX"
Aaliya stares at the dress.

Aaliya wonder's how it is???? Her heart skips a beat as she thinks of Josh. But she just thinks that why would he love her?? and tells her self not to expect so much out of things and decides to wear it.
She smiling reading the card when Kt and Kripa come in....... she quickly outs the dress under the bed. Kt and Kripa see her smiling.
K: Thank god! Now tell us what is the miracle that made you smile.
Aaliya just shakes her head and hugs them. Both are confused of her this behavior but are happy to see her happy.

Anjali was strolling down the path way when some one blind folded her eyes and with one hand grabbed both her hands and with the others her mouth.
He then threw her in a room ...she didnt no where she was.
A: Where am I??
S: Now that honey ..you have to figure out!!!
And he leaves before she could remove the blindfold.Next she sees Ajay the geek thrown in room.
Ajay looks at Anjali and give he a nervous smile...Anjali replies with an unsure one....
An: Look Ajay you need to tell me who bought you here.
Aj: I cant they'll beat me up.
An: No ..they wont..I wont
She comes closer to him but trips over him and Ajay falls with he .Anjali is underneath Ajay and before he could stand up... Miss.Bronze opens the door.
M.B: WHAT IS GOING ON IN HERE??
An: Miss there was nothing going on.
M.B: Yes ! I could tell....BOTH OF YOU IN MY OFFICE !!
Aj: Miss please listen to us we were
M.B (louder ): NOW!!!!!!!!
They both now its not going to argue so theyt both go.As they were leaving a guy from behind the door smirks.You see his face and it's Kavya.

They go to the office and M.B calls their parents.After talking to the principal the parents come out.
Anjali's mom , Bani. Asks her to coldly to come home with them as they need to talk to her.
Her dad Jai is driving the car. There is a cold silence.
Finally they reach home. Anjlai goes to her room.At dinner.There is a cold silence until Anjali finally speaks.
An: Mom , Dad ...I w-
J: We dont want to hear anything.
B: How could you ?? We gave you everything you ever wanted , love , money, education what not and now you go betraying us with some boy.???
An: I was not doing
But she stops as Bani leaves from there.
She looks at Jai.
Anjali is in tears.
An: Dad I didnt do anything,.... trust me
J: I do honey ..but people will talk bad about you and make up rumors.
An: I dont care because I know they wont be true!
Jai just gives her a sympathetic smile.
After half an hour of pacing in her room Anjali goes to her parents room. Jai had gone out for some meeting.
An: Mom??
B: Now what do you want????
An: Mom please listen...
B: There is nothing left to see or listen how could you??
An: Mom please I didnt do anything.
She tells her what happened. Bani still didnt look satisfied.
An: Mom ..if you still dont believe me ......then take my word I will marry only the person you want me to.
Anjali hugs Bani and hugs her back. Bani wipe her tears and makes her cookies.Then she goes to drop Anjlai to the hostel.

As soon as Anjali her room enters all the girls rush to her.She tells them everything.
K: Who could play such a pathetic joke?
Aa: Some low person .
Kt: Anjali ..just calm down!
Aa: Yeah come on lets get ready for the party.
An: yeah it will take my mind out of it.

They get ready for the party.
Anjali wears this:

Kt wears this:

Kripa wears this:

At the party all the girls are wearing blue dresses while all the guys are wearing blue or black suits or jeans.Everyone there is enjoying the party...when they hear a glass crash... they look in the direction and see a girl staring at the door way with a horrible expression on her face...every one look at the door.Josh smirks.
You see Angad wearing this:

Everyone is shocked. Then everyone bursts out laughing ....Angad just shrugs it off! He still enjoys the party but isnt getting that much of female attention as before.

Preview:- The party.
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I know this part is short but I have got exams in a month and I have tests too! Really sorry!!!!!
Do comment please..I need to know how you guys like it cuz I m thinking of finishing it as I m not getting many approvals.

Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago

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