Rain:the ultimate..!!! Pg18 p. 8B

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: sameira-90
hey great into.. can't wait to read more..continue soon 😊

thanks .. i just hope u guys like my fic ...its my first on ...real nervous but your comments are very encouraging..! thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: freaky_angel
yh great stry continue soon! 👏

thanks.... well I'm glad you like it ...thanks again for the comments.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: jdsean
Great intro. Continue soon

Jee thanks... all of you are really sweet and encouraging... I did and I hope you like this part...!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: 26javey26
intersting intro

Thanks ...hope u like the parts too!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: *MS Princess*
This is very interesting.looking forward to the rest....great thinking................. 😃 😃

Thanks alot.... I hope u like this part and umm.. when u guys comment I just feel so happy and these emoticons are icing on the cake.!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutie13
gr8 intro
i also love rainy season 😆 😉
cont season

Thank u soo very much... ooo you do?? arent they just the best ...I love playing soccer in the rain , I love dancing in it and when mom tells me to stop fooling around...I start drinking hot chocolate while sitting by window or terrace which is also fun ...what do u do??

Lol... that happens alot to me too I mean the typing thing ..like when I was writing this part my mom came and told me to do kitchen chores... so I 'm like "You see a huge kitchen with 2 bunk beds"

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its really good i like your style of writing lala can u tell me how my ff love impossible is? tell me if i should continue plz........ and keep up the good work!! UPDATE SOON

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Posted: 17 years ago

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my my arent u sweet.. thank u so much ..well i m not really experienced in this thing ..this is my first FF..so u should most probably ask someone else. But I did read your FF and I like it is pretty unique and something different. You should continue it. So what is Angad's age in ur FF???

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Posted: 17 years ago

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he is 27 thk u for reading it! update soon

i changed his age he is 20

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