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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovestorm

hiiiyyyaaa Rinkz!!! loved the part!!!
tannu's so sweet wid her mom and dad!! but i was like awwww 😭 wen she was talkin to kavya... it waz soo sad n how anju smacked her 😆 i'm srry i shudn't be laughin but it made me laugh; anju cares sooo much about him, itz kinda sweet and cute 😆 😳
n how rude of the gang to ignore her like dat!!!! dat was sooo mean, i mean gosh have some courtesy! 😡 😆 kt seems like a good frend 😛 n her singin dat particular hindi song n wid all her actions i cud jus imagine her crying n i was all like awwwww poor baby... 😭 n gud job tannu! proud of u for tellin dem off they soooo deserved it, the jerks!!jk, i still love the gang though n gud dat they're going to apologize 😊 they needed to! will be waiting impatiently for the next part 😛

hiiiii storm lol ur excited huh thnx im rlly happy u liked it.........i kno broke mi heart wen i wrote her like tat.....so mean to poor kavya....lol itz ok i was laughing too wen i was writing it...she so likes kavya lol i kno the gang waz rude but i had to get her to be friends with some other ppl and the ragging so had to do tat lol i kno kt sounds good....i was thinkin wat song to use and i was listening to tat song so just used it lol i kno the actions were sad huh? i kno poor bachi lol yup tannu told them off...after all itz tannu lol im glad ur waiting for the next part...i posted it and am hopin tat u like it....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwws so cute part

finally u gave eveybody alone their time lol

its simply beautiful and awesome

pleaseeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
awww samrat picked her up after college and explained himself?!?! 😛
😆 watching fida n crying wen shahid shot, and all 😛 wen kareena killed 😆 da confused boys don't know wats up!!! 😆 😆 so cute 😆
"6 hours?!?!" boys stunned and girls laughing 😆 😆 😆 oh gosh dat was hillarious!
sujal taking kashish to dance; angad asking kripa and den finally samrat comlimenting tannu n den asking her was soooo cute and the individual couple scenes were soo cute and you characterized them sooo well too! 👏
Edited by lovestorm - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww
this is really goooooood
cont really soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
aww thts cute kavya and anjali are togather! like the part soon angad and kripa will be a couple eh and tannu and samrat! wow .can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

The next morning Tannu woke up in her bed…next to the other girls. Since her bed was humongous, they all fit perfectly…with space for more people. Tannu lay on the left far side…with Kripa next to her…then Anjali and then Kashish on the far right. She got out of the bed and realized that she was wearing the clothes from last night. She looked at the clock…it said 7:30. She went to her closet and took out a black churidar…she felt like wearing that today. She went to the bathroom and took a long warm bath. She came out after 45 minutes and saw the girls still asleep. She went to her dressing table and put mascara, eyeliner, black eye-shadow and lip-gloss on. She picked up black chandelier type earrings and a silver chain with a heart locket. She wore some black small heel sandals with silver payals. She put on black bangles. She walked downstairs…her payals and bangles making a sweet sound. The adults were having breakfast and looked up surprised by her attire…they had never seen her wearing traditional clothes the time she had been here. She smiled and greeted them happily.

Anupum- is it a special occasion today dear?

Tannu- no dad I don't think so…why do you ask?

Kirren- your wearing a churidar

Tannu- I know

Cg- we've never seen you like this before so we're kind of surprised

Tannu- oh…well I just felt like wearing something Indian today

Adults- oh…ok you look very pretty

Tannu- thanks okay I'll see you all later

Kirren- where are you going at this time?

Tannu- to the studio in the back…to practice my dancing I'll be there today probably the whole day so if you need something, I'll be there

She left as the adults nodded their head silently. She went out to the backyard and entered a small house type thing. She walked down the hallway and entered a room that was clear of furniture except for a big sofa-bed on the right side next to the wall and the wall opposite of the doorway had mirrors everywhere on it not leaving even a tiny place not decorated with a mirror. There was a stereo next to the sofa and a small fridge. She opened the windows so the wind came in and played with her hair twirling around her. She stood there for a minute basking in the warm sun and the cool wind playing…caressing her face and shoulders. She went to the studio and turned it on to a random song. She went to the middle and knotted her dupatta at her waist. She waited for the song to end and the next one to start. It did…the song was Ishq di gali vich from no entry.

She started dancing…shaking her body to the rhythm of the song…her eyes closed. She ran from one side to the other…also doing some gymnastics. Her eyes stayed closed the entire time…it was as if she had been captured by some dancing spirit. The song changed and Mast Kalander from Heyy Babyy started playing. She kept dancing…never stopping…her eyes still closed. During her dance…the others entered and saw her dancing…their breath left them…it was as if she was a goddess…her moves were perfect and went with the songs so well…her expression was of full delight…happy to dance…dance like a free bird…the wind was also dancing with her…playing with her hair…twirling around her…happily…softly and lovingly. They were sitting on the sofa when she stopped and turned to them. Surprised that she didn't notice them enter…she went to the fridge and got a water bottle. She sat on the ground in front of them…not a word was said…the silence was killing Tannu…so she decided to speak.

T- when did you guys come here?

Sam- a long time ago…u were so into the dancing that u didn't notice

T- oh…sorry I was just letting out some tension

Gang- its okay…you're a damn good dancer

T- thanks [blushes]

Krips- u have to teach me how to dance like that…u looked like u were possessed or something…even the wind seemed to dance with u

t- thanks…its not that hard…just let yourself go and feel the music…forget about everything else and just close your eyes and your body will do the rest

She smiled at them and asked them what they were doing here.

Kash- well we woke up and you weren't there so we asked the adults and they said u would be here practicing we got curious and came to see you

They talked some more and then decided to leave. They entered the Kapoor house and saw like always the adults there sitting and talking. The guys went and sat on the sofa while the girls stood still talking about the dance.

Subash- kids start packing

Kids- huh? Pack but why?

Cg- we're going to our farmhouse on the outskirt of the city

Tannu- why?

Gayatri- you guys are out of college early…they'll sent your degree to the house…we're going there to start getting things ready for the engagement and wedding of Sujal and Kashish…soon Kashish will be Khanna not Sharma

Kashish blushed and ran upstairs to tannu's room. Everyone laughed and the girls followed laughing and talking about the wedding. They entered the room to see Kashish sitting on the bed hiding her face in the pillow. Kripa went to her and pulled the pillow down to show Kashish's blushing face and big happy smile. All the girls looked at each other and squealed happily getting in a big group hug. Downstairs the others heard the laughter and the guys got up curious. They entered the room to see all the girls laughing and hugging each other.

Kavya- ok I get Kashish being happy but it's not your marriage so why are you girls so excited??

Anju- because it's a wedding and our best friends so totally have the right

Tannu- I can't wait

She goes and sits on the counter of the window. The others look at her wondering.

Sam- for what?

Tannu- till I get married

Anju/Krips- me either

Tannu looked at them and says.

T- kab ayega woh…mera rajkumar…kya karongi mein jab uski nazar milegi meri nazar se

Krips- tum sharma ke laal ho jaogi

Anju- aur phir bagne ki koshish karogi lekin

Tannu- woh mera haath pakadke mujhe uske kareeb le jayega aur phir mujhe uski taraf turn karega…meri aankein juki hui sharam se…aur phir woh

Kripa- tumhe upar dekhne ko kahega…ek soft whisper me

Anju- tum upar dekhogi aur nazar milegi uski passionate and love-filled ankhoon se…tum uske kareeb jaogi aur phir…tumhare hont uske honto ko touch karne se pehle hi

K/T/A- neend toot jayegi

They looked at each other and started laughing. The guys looked at them weirdly thinking they've gone crazy. Kashish smiled and shook her head. The girls stopped and everything was silent each lost in their own thoughts…each thinking of their crush…K/S happy while the others wondered would they get to be like them…be together with—

Krips- Angad

Tannu- Samrat

Anju- Kavya

Angu- kripa

Sam- Tannu

Kavya- Anjali

This is it! Im soooooooooo sorry I know its too short and not a good update but im really tired and have a brain freeze…I thought of this in five minutes so not that good. :[ Thanks for your sweet comments sorry haven't updated in a while but been busy with my i-pod and my bro just came back from Philippines so hanging out with him and catching up and just got free today! Hope u like this small and not good update! Please comment! Thanks a lot!

Love

Rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear it was superb part loved it

girls r really crazy lol they can't wait till they fall in love with their lovers lol

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee bring angad and kripa together lol i am dying to read about their love story lol

i was like where did u go its been like two days u update lol its k i know everybody is busy so continue when u got some time

but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
gr8 part
amazing job
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx a lot for the sweet comments they are really encouraging me to write the next part a lot faster but.........................IM STUCK.......i have a brain freeze as to what to write next so if anyone wants to give me a idea i will love you forever lol but seriously i'll appreciate it a LOT!!!!!

rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
rinki if u want help wit this ff then i will help u

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