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Posted: 17 years ago
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Im so very sorry for being late in updating the next part since i was busy with studies😳

Anyways , here it is😃

Part 5: )

The next morning at Armaan's house.

Armaan is making breakfast for himself and Pia when she enters the kitchen.

Pia : "bro , nashtey mein kya hai?" rubbig her eyes

Armaan : "parathey toh nahin hain!" he laughs "omelette chaley ga na , papa aaj jaldi restaurant chaley gaye , so"

Pia : "of course , chalega"

Armaan : "ye lo sweetie " and joins her at the table with his breakfast.

Pia : "bro"

Armaan : "haan" takes another bite

Pia : "aap sach mein canada jaana chahtey ho?"

Armaan keeps quiet for a second

Armaan : "ab tujhey mujhsey door rehna pasand nahin toh mein tujhey chor kar kaisey jaaon?"

Pia : "aap yahaan par khush raho gey naa?"

Armaan : "terey saath toh hamesha" but then has a sad expression on his face

Pia : "mein yahaan akele aap ke bager nahi reh sakti bro" and her eyes fill with tears.

Armaan : "aree ab tu kyun ro rahi hai? , mein jaanta hoon is liyey kaheen nahin jaoonga" and hugs her

Pia hugs his brother very tight : "Im sorry"

Armaan consoles her and says : "koi baat nahin"

At Riddhima's house

Riddhima is on the breafast table thinking about last night. A sigh of hope flashes on her face.Hope that Armaan wont let his dreams shatter , hope that everything will turn out normal.

Armaan calls Riddhima just after the breakfast.

Armaan: "Riddhima!"

RIddhima : "Armaan!kaisey ho?"

Armaan : "mein theek hoon , thanks for yesterday"

Riddhima : "David ne kal kaha tha na no thanks!phir ab mujhsey bhi?!Ammy!"

Armaan : "You guys did cheer me up , seriously"

Riddhima : "Im happy to see you happy!" and gives a light blush

Armaan smiles and then ays : "mein shayad yaheen Orchid University mein jaoon" compresses his lips hard.

Riddhima : "kya? tum... tum.. magar uncle ne toh kaha tha..."

Armaan : "Popsie ne kya kaha?"

Riddhima : "ke tum hamarey saath aaogey"

Armaan : "nahin Riddhima , mein yaheen rahoonga Pia ke paas" "Papa merey faisley se khush hain kyunke woh akele bhi nahin reh saktey"

Riddhima : "magar.."

Armaan : "Ill miss you.." compresses his lips more harder.

Riddhima : "Armaan.."

Armaan : "bye Ridzi , ill call you later..."

Riddhima : "Armaaaan." baffled , she didnt know what to do or what to say "umm..byee"

Armaan rushes towards his room , picks his soccer ball up and heads towards the field.

"Pia mein bahar jaa raha hoon , thori der mein aa jaoonga"

Armaan at the soccer field

As he practices some tricks he thinks about the way Riddhima felt how she and was anxious about him.

He thinks to himself : "Why do I feel this way? I dont know If I'm sad or happy.Yeh kya ho raha hai , baar baar Riddhiima ka khayal kyun mujhey aa raha hai"

He sits on his soccer ball and grasps his hair thinking WHY CANT I GO WITH HER?WHY?

He receives a call from David

David : "dude , yeh kya hai..cmon man! i cant live without you!"

Armaan tries not to have an emotional chat : "Abey oyee I never knew you liked mee?"! and gives a sarcastic laugh.

David : "you remind me of the time Seema accused us of being gay! " they both laugh

"No seriously dude , I will miss you , even more than my mom n dad..kuch aur nahin ho sakta kya? try coming naa , please"

Armaan : "salee!kaha naa its final..and you go out there study and chill! will come to your place for dinner tonight"

David : "k cool"

At Riddhima's house :

Angie : "chalo Ridz , were going for shopping to get clothes for Canada"

Riddhima : "hum Armaan ko chor ke kaisey jaa saktey hain di?"

Angie : "Ridzi , we cant be stuck to him forever naa? Sab kuch waisey nahin hota jaisey hum chahein gey..I know everybody will miss him , even me..Hum definetly uss se mil kar jayein gey and we will keep contact"

Riddhima : "haan dii , magar..."

Anjali sits next to Riddhima and places her hand on Riddhima's

"I know Armaan means a really special friend to you , but its life jaanu , ab chalo tayar ho jaoo , theeke" gives her a smile and leaves.

At night in Armaan and Riddhima's house radio is turned on and "pehli nazar mein" is requested

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you … so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u


Armaan : "Baby I love you , I love you , ILOVEYOU RIDDHIMA"





Riddhima is lost in her thoughts as she remembers her moments with Armaan and closes her eyes

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

she suddenly imagines herself hugging Armaan , how she wanted to be with him , HOW MUCH SHE WANTED HIM at that moment.
she finally rests herself on the bed and goes to sleep clearing all her delusion thoughts from her mind.

Armaan : "I knew it , this isnt any attraction what Ive always felt for you , I knew it"
"We can never be together but I can atleast dream"
Holds his and Riddhima's photo and goes to sleep.




A get together is held at Sunaina''s house to plan their travelling to Canada
The didnt invite Armaan because they knew he would feel bad while they make preparations.

Divya : "great!so we will finally leave on the 3rd!"

Sunaina : "this is going to be tough , ill miss Mumbai and family"

Amey : "I know , par ab kya karein , its the beginniing of a new life"

David : "egjactly! Ive got mixed emotions lined up in my heart!"

Riddhima : "Armaan ke ghar chalein abhi?"

Anjali : "thats a great idea , chalo lets give him another surprise!"

David : "woh khud apney dad ke saath shopping gaya hai"

Divya looks at Riddhima as she is stressed out.
She says to her softly

"Ridzi , dont worry , Armaan will be fine here"

Riddhima : "I know he will , I trust him" and gives a wide open smile and hides he emotions at her back



~I know nothing except that I cannot live without you
What is decided by God?
Will I every meet him again?
Can I let out a breath without her?






















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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
awwwwwwwwwwww
dat was such a cute n sweet updte
n armi realised his feelings
awww cnt wait 4 da nxt udtes
ur ff is great
ur doin a great job
updte sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
thanku very much sweetiee 😃 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
amazin sweeety
sooooooooo sad poor armaan
thanks so much for the PM
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
swansea
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
hey wow yaar so sad tht he's nt goi specially ridz goi 2 miss hm soooooooooo mch n dwow he confessd himslf tht he lvs her wow excitng hota aa raha hai amazingggggggg yaar evry1 so excitd tht thy wre goi on 3 bt sad allso armaan ws nt goi nd he also bcm sad awwwwwwwwww yaar kash wo hi chalta ridz kitna khush hoti bth wre remembrng their momnts wth ech othr wch th hd spend ..............
cont sooooooooooooon nd thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
aww that was very sweet swansea and yachna😃 I will definetly try to make the next part even better . thankuuuu😃😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
hey its awesome 👏 its awesome beautiful
u r really an awesome writer
wow finally they realised their love
but i cant live with out arman and ridz can never live with out him except in dmg 😉
let them confess their love pls
thanks for ur pm
pls continue soon


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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
thanx so much for d pm...... 😛
awesome part 👏
ridhimaa is gonna miss him so much if they are seperatd...
waitin for their confession 😳 😉
pls cont soon...
~@$hm@~ thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankuuuuu and confession will surely be happening 😳 but not soon 😉 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

OMG...ur ff is so cute!
plz continue soon...i cnt wait 2 read more!

Marisha

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