'Saath Tumhare' last Part IV(Short story) - Page 4

Originally posted by: monikaseth

bhoomi i want to hug you ! awesome , mindblowing , amazing dear . you are toooooooooooooo good . i love it what a short story sooo nice sorry i am late .iam waiting for next sweeet story. 👏

Oyee Hoyee Monika... hug ki kya baat.. yeh lo..jhappi... 🤗... Hhehehe so mcuh u enjoyed.. wow!! i feel so happy to know that u enjoyed so much readign the small story.... Will be postign my next one very soon.... Hope u enjoy it as well...😃..aur haan yeh Sorry dosto mey achhii nahi lagti.. theek hai...😃

Originally posted by: togepe30

Aakash: Why did u.. ??? I was just correcting his love letter….he had made many spelling mistakes..(smiling as a matter of fact) 😆

Superb meri Enid Blyton 😆 .....Meri J.K.Rowling........Another rocking fan-fic 👏

Hi Vandu dear.... areee baapre kya ky anaam dediye.. waise one of my close friend adores J. K. Rowling.. and when i read u writign here.. me was .. woh padhti to kehti Bhoomi kahan aurr woh JK kahan.... Jeet kalra nahi haan😉 😆.....

Awww dear thanks for making me so special .. I know main kuch bhi nahi .. just learning with each story and hope u enjoy reading.. kahin neend jyada naa ajayee din mey bhi..😆.. chalo chalo neend ayii to apni cofee to hai hi ..na.. We can enjoy havign that together...😃..🤗

Originally posted by: zen girl

ooooooo wow!ur writing is soooo good
(as always lol)

loved it!

Hi .... Aww thanks so much for appreciating my writing... I hope u continue to enjoy my work... and have a ncie time reading them...😃

Originally posted by: ssh57

Another beautiful story. Loved it. For a first one it was verrrrrrrrrrry good.

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy bhoomi
well u gave a appropriate names to ur leads describing their characters
really loved this story