Mehr......Sujal&Kashish.....last-part....8/10 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago

great part kashish!!!!.........i feel soo bad for sujal....he has lost the love of his life...and he doesn't know how too tell ayan that his dear mom is not comming back ever again....noooo!!!!!.........bechara abhi jued nahie sambha aur ayan kou yeah bata kar aur tuet jaega!!!.........cute scene yaar.....it really seem that sujal and ayan got lost somewhere in their own world far away from the reality...sujal really need that....coz now he has too live for ayan n himself!!!!!!!!!.......soo emotional part girl!!!..........but i still have douths that kashish is dead....i mean they didn't find her body did they?..........do continue soon plzzzzzzz............waitting eagerly for the next part!!!!!!!!!!........

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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 plz kashish ko wapis le aao
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
kashish mar gayi thts really sad 😭😭😭.....how can sujal and ayan be without kashish..i cant see ayan crying for kashish....plzzz do something and bring kashish back yaar....
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW wonderful part👏 Very emotional n touchy😭 I really liked the father son relation.....it was beautiful..really hope Kashish comes back.....Plzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-21

Aaj Kashish ko gaye huye ek hafte se jyada ho gaya hai........sab be Ayan ki khushi ke liye phir se jina shuru kar diya hai..........lekin Ayan hai jo abhi bhi apni Mama ka intzaar kar raha hai..........ab Sujal ki zindagi me kuch reh gaya hai to Ayan aur uski Khushi.............Sham ko Sujal office se jaldi gahr aata hai jaha pe Ayan Prerna ke saath behas kar raha hota hai........

Sujal: Ayan.......Dadi ko kyun tang kar rahe ho........

Ayan: dadi ko kuch nahi aata.....aap Mama ko kyun nahi bulate..............

Sujal: mama kya hua.......kis baat ko leke yeh behas kar raha hai.......

Prerna: kuch nahi Sujal.........school se aaya tab se keh raha hai ki bhukh lagi hai aur jab maine sandwiches banake diya to kehta hai ki Kashish ki tarah nahi...........ab main kya ise samjau........

Sujal: ap rehne dijiye main ise samjata hoon.........

Prerna: ab tumhe hi ise sambhalna hoga...........

Sujal: Ayan.........tumhe yeh sandwich nahi khani na koi baat nahi.....main aaj tumhe bahar le jata hoon.....chaloge.........batao kaha jana pasand karoge........

Ayan: Mama muje Park me le jati thi waha muje bhi jana hai........

Sujal: thik hai chalo......

Sujal Ayan ko apni god me uthake car me bithata hai aur woh log park pahunch jate hai..........Ayan zule pe betha tha aur Sujal use zula raha hota hai........

Ayan: papa.......

Sujal: hmmmmmmmm........

Ayan: kal hamare school me Singing Compitition hai........aap aayengena........

Sujal: haa.........zaroor aaunga..........kaun kaun aa raha hai........

Ayan: sab aa rahe hai..........main....Armaan........Aaska.....Aashi......sab to participate kar rahe hai.........lekin Mama to nahi hai........

Sujal; Mama jaha kahi bhi hai woh apne Ayan ke saath hai........waise tumhari taiyari ho gayi....

Ayan: haa ho gayi......lekin muje darr lagta hai kahi main haar gaya to.........

Sujal: darr kis baat ka.......aur khel hai......kabhi haar to kabhi jeet hogi.......ek haar se hum ruk to nahi sakte......aur muje pura yakeen hai ki tum first aaonge.......

Ayan: Papa........mama kab tak aa jayegi.........woh to kabhi itne dino tak bahar nahi jati.........kal mere liye sabse zaroori hai mama ka waha hona aur woh hai ki..........

Sujal; woh bahot hi jaldi wapas aa jayengi.....

Ayan: kya aap kal mama ko leke aayenge......

Sujal: koshish karunga.....ab chale waha pe jake ice-cream khate hai.............

Ayan: Ice-cream.........main do khunga.....

Sujal: jitni chahe utni khalo...thik hai.......chalo......

Sujal Ayan ko ice-cream khilata hai..........

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Agli Subaah sab log Ayan ke school pahonch jate hai........sabhi bacho ne apna performnce de diya hota hai ab aakhir me sirf Ayan bachta hai.........Ayan Stage pe aata hai...........

Teacher; Ayan......tum bade hoke kya banna pasand karoge........

Ayan: waise to main bada hoke Pilot banna chahta hoon........lekin phir Mama kehti hai ki Papa bahot hi akele hai business ko sambhalne ke liye....woh bahot akele hai aur main unki madad karna chahta hoon.....is liye main Mama ke liye bada hoke apne Papa ki tarah businessman banna chahta hoon.......agar main aisa karunga to meri Mama wapas aa jayegi.......woh abhi mujse naraz hai kyunki main bahot sararate karta tha lekin ab main bilkul badal gaya hoon........

Teacher: bahot hi achcha khayal hai Ayan........ab batao aaj ka gana kiske liye ga rahe ho....

Ayan: sirf aur sirf meri Mama ke liye........

Ayan gaana shuru karta hai lekin sab ki aankhein bhar aati hai........

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main kabhi batlaata nahi, par andhere se darta hoon main maa
yun to main dikhlaata nahi, teri parwaah karta hoon main maa
tujhe sab hai pata, hai na maa
tujhe sab hai pata... meri maa

bheed mein yuun na chhodo mujhe, ghar laut ke bhi aana paau maa
bhejna itna door mujhko tu, yaad bhi tujhko aana paau maa
kya itna bura hoon main maa
kya itna bura... meri maa

jab bhi kabhi papa mujhe, zor zor jhula jhulate hai maa
meri nazar dhoondhe tujhe, sochun yahi tu aake thaamegi maa
unase main yeh kehta nahi, par main seham jaata hoon main maa
chehre mein aane deta nahi, dil hi dil mein ghabraata hoon main
tujhe sab hai pata hai na maa
tujhe sab hai pata... meri maa


main kabhi batlaata nahi, par andhere se darta hoon main maa
yuun to main dikhlaata nahi, teri parwaah karta hoon main maa
tujhe sab hai pata, hai na maa
tujhe sab hai pata... meri maa

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gaana pura hote hi Sujal stage pe aake Ayan ko gale se laga deta hai..........

Ayan: Papa maine achcha gaya na.....

Sujal: tumse achcha kisi ne nahi gaya,..........i am so proud of u beta........

Teacher announced ayan as a winner of the compition,,,,,,,

Teacher: Ayan yeh rahi tumhari trofi.....congrets........

Ayan: Thank you......Mama agar aap muje sun rahi hai to yeh aapke liye......I Love You Mama.........ple come back.......I am missing u mama........

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Ek chote se ghar me ek aurat bistar pe soyi huyi thi......woh aankh kholke chikhti hai........

Kashish: Ayannnnnnnnnn............

Aurat: kya hua .....beti kaun ho tum.......

Kashish: Kashish......hum yaha pe kitne waqt se hai........

Aurat: ek hafte se jyada........

Kashish: kya.....ek hafta ho gaya........

Aurat: ab tumhe kaise mehsoos ho raha hai.........

Kashish: yeh sab baatein batane ka waqt nahi hume jana hoga........hamare ghar pe hamare pati aur hamara beta hamara intzaar kar raha hoga...hume abhi niklna hoga..........

Kashish chalne ki koshish karti hai lekin ek hafte ke behoshi ke laran uske pair me bahot dard ho raha hota hai..........

Aurat: dard ho raha hai na.....dheere dheere thik ho jayega......

Kashish: aap samaj nahi rahi ....hamara jana bahot zaroori hai.......Ayan hamare bina ........woh abhi saat saal ka bacha hai.......aur Sujal......woh to tut gaye honge.........

Aurat: thik hai.......kal subaah chali jana...abhi to waise bhi tumhe bus bhi nahi miegi......tab tak tum aaram karo main khana leke aati hoon..........

Kashish wapas beth jati hai lekin aankhoin se aanshu behne lagte hai..............

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Ab agle din subaah subaah hi Garewal House logo se bhar chuka hai.......kyun na ho aaj Ayan ka janamdin jo tha........Ayan abhi bhi apne Kamre me so raha tha jab Sujal use jaga ke neeche lata hai.........

All: Surprize..........happy birthday Ayan..........

Ayan khushi se pagal ho raha hota hai........Ayan sabhi se gift leta hai phir Sujal ke pass wapas aata hai.........

Sujal: to batao Ayan..........aaj tumhe tohfe me kya chahiye.......

Ayan: promise kijiye jo main kahunga woh aap lake denge........

Sujal: promise.......

Ayan: muje Mama chahiye........kya de sakte hai aap........

Sujal: jab promise kiya hai to muje lana to hoga........

Ayan: sach iska matlab aaj mama aa rahi hai........main abhi sab ko batake aata hoon..........

Ayan Khushi se sabhi ko batane chala jata hai...........

Maya: Sujal......yeh kaisa vaada hai.......ab kaha se Kashish ko laoge........

Prerna: aise joothe vaade nahi karte kisi se..........

Sujal: kya karta main........aap logo ne dekha nahi kitna khush tha woh.........aur main kaise uske chehre se yeh khushi aaj ke din chin sakta hoon.........ab tak sambhala hai to shaam ko woh kuch kahega to koi bahana dhundh lunga........

Maya: kab tak bahane dhundhenge hum.........ek din to use pata chalega hi........

Sujal: woh ek din ke liye main abhi se uski khushi nahi chin sakta..........main chalta hoon shaam ki party ki taiyariyaan karni hai.............

Prerna: pata nahi aaj ki party me kaun se naye rang dekhne ko milenge..........

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow a lovely part hope kashish manages to make it to the party cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
😳😳wow kashish its a very nicely written part👏.oh i m happy that finally kashish is back...................😳 and really ayan's character u av potrayed so well...............👏.............................and sujal is best dad😳..plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
kashish the part seriously touched my heart.... it was so emotional..bechara sujal.. woh kashish ko miss kar raha hai aur yeh baat woh jatha bhii nahii saktha..aur doosri taraf ayan.. ayan ko dekhkar tho meri aankhon mein aasoo aa jaathe hai.. he misses his mom so much.. woh ab bas itna hii chahtha hai kii uski mom wapas aajaye... joh baatein ayaan ne stage par kii woh baatein dil ko choo gayi... ayan sachchi ek mama's boy hai..he is really very sweet... phir ayan ka gaana..uski winning ke baad kii baatein..all this shows kii usko kashish kii kitni zaroorat hai.... aur doosri taraf sujal hai joh na tho khul ke apne dard ka izhaar kar saktha hai aur na hii ayan ko bata saktha hai kii kashish ab nahii aayegi.. my heart wrenches in pain for them....😭
lekin i'am happy kii kashish zinda hai aur usko hosh aagaya hai.. woh ayan aur sujal ke pass jaana chahthi hai.. tho it is decided kii woh agle din jayegi apne ghar... this thing has made me really happy... ab jab kashish ghar aayegi tho it will be the best birthday gift joh ayan ko milega... ayan ko uski maa mil jayegi , sujal ko uski zindagi mil jayegi... very gooddd.... please dear next part jaldi se post karna...i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..aur haan dear kashish ko apne ghar jaldi lekar aao.... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOWIE...i just know that kashish will make it to the party..
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Posted: 17 years ago
i feel really sad for ayan and sujal but i am happy tht kashish is alive...plzzz make kashish meet sujal and ayan soon...i hope she comes by party time....plzzz update next part soon

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