Mehr......Sujal&Kashish.....last-part....8/10 - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 My god.......Abhi to dusri story me sujal zinda hua tha......aur ek story me dono marr gaye and yaha bhi kashish gayab !! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 can't believe that kashish ie dead................ woh tu sujal se baaat kar rahi thi per achank yeh kya hoga...............sujal aur ayan kaise jaye gay............abhi tu ayan samjh gaya kay woh dehli gai lekin baad mein 😭 ...............con't soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg ......... 😭 now kashish is no more.wat is this going on........so sad......poor sujal and ayan............bt wat was thst brake fails........i mean some1 has purposely done this 😕 .plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
kashish is no more 😭 plzz kashish ko jaldi wapas ley aana 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Kashish is dead Oh NO this cant b true...Poor Sujal 😭 Wht will he do now??? n Ayan howz he goin to live....Plzz bring Kashish back soon....Plzz continue asap
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-20

Aaj Kashish ko gaye ek hafta ho gaya tha.......aaj bhi sab ki aankhein bata deti hai ki woh log kis dor se gujar rahe hai..........Ayan subaah subaah zid karta hai ki use wapas apne ghar jana hai..........Maya aur Prachi use kab ka samja rahe hote hai lekin woh kisi ki baat manta hai nahi..........

Prachi: Ayan.....dekho beta.......tum to hamesha yaha pe aana chahte the na Aaarav ke saath khelne ke liye..........

Ayan: lekin ab muje ghar jana hai......waha pe mama mera intzaar kar rahi hogi.........

Maya: koi baat nahi.....maine mama se keh diya hai ki Ayan yaha hai.......

Ayan: nahi Nani........waha pe mama muje nahi dekhegi to pareshan ho jayegi.........aur phir woh muje dategi.........

Prachi: koi tumhe kuch nahi kahega.......

Ayan: nahi aap nahi janti Bua.......mama ne kaha tha ki main use bina bataye kahi naa jau.........aur phir Papa bhi ghar pe akele honge na........muje mama aur papa ki bahot yaad aati hai.......

Maya: thik hai main tumhe tumhare papa ke pass le jaungi lekin tumhe promise karna hoga ki tum hamare saath wapas aaoge.........

Ayan: thik hai main mama se puchkar aapko bataunga.........lekin yeh Mamu aur Nana kaha hai........unhe bhi kaho na hamare saath chale.............

Maya: Prachi......jake tumhere papa aur Neev ko bulao hum abhi Ayan ke saath Garewal House ja rahe hai.......

Prachi: jee mama.........

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Ayan ke saath puri Singhania Parivar aata hai..........Sujal, Prerna aur Rishab hall me khamoshi se bethe huye hote hai jab Ayan ki aawaz aati hai........

Ayan: Papa...........Papa............

Ayan Sujal ke gale lag jata hai teen din ke bad woh Sujal ko dekh raha hota hai.......

Sujal apne aanshu pochta hai........

Sujal: kaisa hai mera beta.......

Ayan: first class...........Papa Mama aagayi.......

Sujal: woh beta.............

Ayan: apne kamre me hai na........main abhi use leke aata hoon........

Ayan daudte huye kashish ke kamre me chala jata hai...........

sab log ki aankhoin se phir se aanshu behne lagte hai...........Ayan daudta hua wapas aata hai........Ayan zor zor se rone lagta hai..........

Ayan: Mama achchi nahi hai.........Mama Ayan se pyaar nahi karti...........woh abhi tak wapas nahi aayi.....use pata hai ki Ayan ko kahani sune bina neend nahi aati lekin phir bhi woh chali gayi...........maine ab shararat karna bhi bandh kar diya.........aap bua se puchiye Papa ab main TV bhi nahi dekhta..........Mama mujse naraz hai............mama mujse pyaar nahi karti........

Sujal Ayan ke pass jake use apni god me leta hai.........

Sujal; kisne kaha Mama aapse pyar nahi karte.........aap ki mama aapse duniya me sabse jyada pyaar karti hai.........aapki Mama duniya ke best mama hai..........Mama Ayan se bahot pyaar karti hai aur Ayan Mama se.............

Ayan: Papa.......main wapas Nani ke saath nahi jaunga..........muje waha pe achcha nahi lagta.....main aapke saath rahunga.....hum dono milke mama ka intzar karenge.....ple papa......

Sujal: thik hai tum mere pass hi rahonge..........Prachi Ayan ko uske kamre me leke jao.........

Prachi Ayan, Aarav aur Aashi ko leke kamre me chali jati hai..................

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Sujal; Ayan Kashish ko kabhi nahi bhool payega...........woh thi hi itni pyari.......muje aur Ayan ko Kashish se jyada koi pyaar nahi kar sakta........Kashish se achchi patni aur ek maa nahi mil sakti hume.........pata nahi Kashish ke bina main aur Ayan kaise rahenge..........

Prerna: sach kaha........Kashish thi hi aisi.........sab ka dil jeet leti thi...........

Maya: pata nahi meri beti ke saath hi aisa kyun hua..........kitne khush thi apni zindagi me ........lekin pata nahi kiski nazar lag gayi meri beti ki zindagi ko..........

Sujal: woh jaha per bhi hai woh bhi hume itna hi yaad kar rahi hogi..........

Neev: lekin jiju...hamare saath hi aisa kyun hua..........mere liye meri Dii sab kuch thi...........

Sujal: mere liye woh meri zindagi thi............mere liye mera pyaar thi woh.........hum dono me jitna pyaar aur vishwas tha use koi nahi samaj sakta..........koi nahi...........main aaj bhi Kashish se utna hi pyaar karta hoon aur shayad karta rahunga........kyunki usne muje pyaar karna aur pyaar nibhana shikhaya hai............

Jab Harsh rone lagta hai.............

Harsh: tum sahi the Sujal..........tum hamesha se sahi the.........aaj muje apni beti ki kami mehsoos ho rahi hai........aaj pata chala ki uske jane ke baad ki beti ka pyaar kya hota hai............usne to hamesha meri nafrat me bhi pyaar dhundha........woh bahot hi achchi beti thi.............lekin main kabhi ek achcha pita nahi ban paya......kashish ho sake to apne papa ko maff kar dena..........

Sujal: aaj Kashish bahot khush hoti..........aaj woh yaha hoti to apni khushi ko rok nahi pati.......woh aapse muh se yeh shabd sunne ke liye kitni bekarar thi.........Kashish ne nahi chaha tha ki woh kabhi aapko aise rote huye dekhe.........is liye aajse koi nahi royega.........suna aap logo ne koi nahi............mere liye na sahi.........Kashish ke liye na sahi.......lekin hamare Ayan ke liye.........maine hamesha Kashish se vaada kiya tha ki main kabhi Ayan ke aankhoin me aanshu nahi aane dunga..............aaj se meri zindagi me sirf Ayan aur Ayan hi hai............uski khushiyaan meri khushiyaan.........use main kabhi Kashish ki kami mehsoos nahi hone dunga lekin saath me main kabhi Ayna ko yeh bhi bhool ne nahi dunga ki uski Maa kaun thi..............

Sujal chal ke Ayan ke kamre me chala jata hai.........

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Jaha pe Prachi hoti hai.........aur sabhi bache Painting kar rahe hote hai...........

Sujal; kya kar rahe ho......

Ayan: yeh painting bana raha hoon...........kaisi hai.......

Sujal: bahot hi achchi hai.........lekin yeh kiski hai......

Ayan: yeh main hoon........yeh aap hai aur yeh mama hai.........hamara chota sa parivar..........

Sujal ki aankh bhar aati hai.....

Ayan: kya hua Papa....kuch kahiye na.......

Sujal: kuch nahi..........haa beta hamara parivar.........bahot hi pyari tasvir hai.........

Ayan: aap meri madad karenge.........

Sujal; haa bolo kya karna hai........

Ayan: aap main jo color kahoon woh muje dijiyega.........aap muje woh neela wala color dijiye........

Sujal Ayan ko hara color deta hai.......

Ayan: uffo........aapko to kuch nahi aata.........muje neela chahiye..........main aapki sikayat mama se karunga..........aur yeh bhi kahunga ki woh aapko color ki tution de..........ab chaliye dijiye na muje neela.......

Sujal Ayan ko neela rang leta hai........

Ayan: Papa..........aapko pata hai Neela rang Mama ka sabse favorite color hai............unhone khud muje kaha tha.......isliye main unki saree aise neele rang ki karunga.........

Sujal: bahot kuch jante ho apni mama ke bare.......

Ayan: haa.........kya aapko pata nahi........Mama ko barish achchi lagti hai..........Mama ko painting karna achcha lagta hai meri tarah..........aur haa mama aur muje ek saath aankh micholi khelna bahot achcha lagta hai.........mama hamesha muje pakad leti thi.......ab jab mama wapas aayegi na hum teeno saath me khelenge........

Sujal: haa beta....tumhari mama jab wapas aayegi tab hum use kabhi nahi jane denge...........

Ayan: aap ne kya kaha.........

Sujal: kuch nahi.......tum muje bhi painting karna shikhaoge.......

Ayan: thik hai.........yeh color pakdiye..........aur jaisa main karta hoon waisa kijiye.......

Ayan Sujal ko color karna shikhata hai..........aaj bilkul Kashish ki parchai ho Ayan........wahi kala wahi Rang......jaise kashish karti thi........Sujal aur Ayan apne kaam me kahi kho gaye the..........yeh dekhkar Prachi ki aankh bhar aati hai........

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭 wat a part yaar!!!!!!!

it was so emotional!!!

poor ayan!!!!!! he is missing his mother so much!
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow very nicely written.... 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻.......u av explained emotions of each and ever character in a lovely manner.........👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 and ayan omg he is so cute .............🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰.............converstion b/w sujal nad ayan was lovely............bt plz bring kashish back.plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
GREAT PART. sujal n ayan r so sweet together. pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
very sad part................................😭..........................can't see ayan and sujal like this.................................kashish kaha ho plz come back...............................con't soon

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