FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5 - Page 8

Originally posted by: qazplm

Thankoo so much Kat 🤗 ...that means a
lot coming from a brilliant writer like yourself 😳

Oh no not you tooo.... i think this place is so full of talent....im happy to be reading great masterpieces from everyone😃

Love Kat😳

Originally posted by: visalover

omg!!!!!!!!! that was amazing 👏 do continue -
SOON 😉 😆

Originally posted by: twinkle94

that waz so.... sweeeeeeeeeeettttttttt something defferent from tha otha FF that they start out wth them fightin no offence 2 any if u! 😛

Thanx...I really wanted them to start out more differently from the serial😳

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Been a silent reader so far...but ur brilliant writing has forced me 2 comment on ur absolutely phenomenal way of writing!

Good job! But you took ages 2 continue...so please...continue soon n do PM me if u can!!

Luv ur simplistic way of writing...n im sooo curious 2 know hw dere relationship proceeds and whu that gurl is (plz temme she's Riddhima n not Anjali or Muskaan)


Marisha

Thankoo😳😳...And I promise the next update will be really soon😃

And you'll find out who the girl is very soon😆😉😳

What an exquisite FF 😲
So unique I Must Confess. 😳
I wonder How come i never came across it before. 😭 *OMG Asthu*
Just reading the few words I felt addicted to this FF , It has the effect on me now. 😍

I Hope The girl is Ridhima , It Sounds it 😳

ThankYou So Much Fo The Pm

"Then suddenly he realized that his stare was being returned. When their eyes met, his heart lurched, perhaps from embarrassment for having been caught staring. But he didn't look away." the way you described how armu felt I was like WOW this girl knows the moves of forming emotions into words.

He tried to Keep her stay with him longer, when there hand brushed he felt the shock, I must say the way you set it out in words can make the reader think how must armu expressions his reaction to her no would be, how must the breh would be feeling. His feeling gives us a hint that he has felt the love breeze.

I can go on and on , but I don't know how to put it tbh , the whole thing is written out so well , outstanding , the grace of your FF , the way you have written it is so attractive that once the reader reads it they just want to read on and never want it to stop,

romantic bits were so breathtaking , every little bit. I love the bond , the way they are feeling for each other. im curious to know how dere relationship proceeds Now , and what fate has planned for them or more like you 😉

The spirit you put in to fit the situation was so grand. Fine enough the reader picture raise the scene. I told this to Two FF writters Kat and Jia to Publish there FF You should do it straight away , from what you just wrote will be enough to make you archive what you deserve As a Writter. 🤗

A brilliant job Done By You. Gosh wat beautiful description on each Part , i was like this girl will Kill Me with her FF.

I want to Give You A standing ovation 👏

Hmmm , that's all I can say right now. Eheh 😆, Please do Pm when you update. 😉

Love Astha ☺️
🤗

Originally posted by: urmila_17

hey u made me speechless with ur part👏 👏
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its so romantic and beautiful loved it a lot
thanks for ur pm
now i really cant wait for next part
plssssss continue soon

Originally posted by: pink_09

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what fate has planned for them or more like you
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face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">The spirit you put in
to fit the situation was so grand. Fine enough the reader picture raise the
scene. I told this to Two FF writters Kat and Jia to Publish there FF You
should do it straight away , from what you just wrote will be enough to
make you archive what you deserve As a Writter.
🤗
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<P class=MsoNormal><FONT
face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">A <FONT
face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">brilliant job Done By
You.<FONT face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-
serif;">Gosh wat beautiful description on each Part , i was like
this girl will Kill Me with her FF.I want to Give You A
standing ovation
👏

<SPAN><FONT
face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;" size=2>Hmmm , that's all I
can say right now. Eheh 😆, Please do Pm when you update.
😉</SPAN>

<SPAN><FONT face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;" size=2>Love
Astha ☺️🤗</SPAN>