FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5 - Page 13

Originally posted by: niya

😳 That was beautiful...seriously...its was soo cute! 👏

Thankoo niyu🤗...I'm glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: pink_09

What can I say now , jus suffered from a heart attack …
what a breathtaking update … 👏

Thanx😳

Hawt I must say with the kiss scene and the way you described how ridhima felt 😳😳😳
I was like WOW , You no how to carry out emotions in words.

Honestly, I do struggle with that...but thankfully it comes out right in the end😆😳

Poor armuu, all the rage he was holding to himself on not knowing anything bout ridhima , and how he will find her is driving him krazy , he such a darling , so cute … angry at the fact how come he never woke up and that she never left a note.

OMG. The way you described them being so comfortable with each other, even through being complete strangers … allowing each other to sleep away in each others arms … I mean the way you set it all out was showing they both are attracted to each other and the sparkles of Love is forming between them. ☺️☺️

I'm glad I could make you believe in that setting...that's the hardest part I think...making your readers see your imagination😳

Both in Ssanjeevani , I wonder when they will meet 😍
Armaan will be on cloud nine when he sees her ☺️
Hai, So Cute.
Another Great Update, Love it. ☺️☺️☺️

Please update soon and Thanx fo da Pm

Love Astha 🤗

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments astha🤗...they really mean a lot to me coming from a great FF writer like yourself👏👏

Originally posted by: Naina123

Hey Rida!!!

I am finally here with my comments....Like I promised!!! Sorry its soo late...i got busy😳 Ahhh now i shall proceed to my comment on ur update:

It's not late at all nainu...your always there to comments...that's what matters most🤗

You updated earlier than i thought...but what a short update...but then again anything is better than nothing...Okies enough of my incoherent ramblings...

hehe...thanx for understanding...didn't have much time...will update a longer part next time DEFINITELY!!😆😳

Aaahhh Rida a somewhat upsetting update...she left him on the beach!!! Well atleast its confirmed that its Ridz...I love the nickname she gave Raooooll (CCC) 😆 I couldn't resist....Skunk, I wonder if he really stinks..."go take a shower Raool!"

Okay enough of my silly behaviour...I just absoloutely adored the car scene... his thoughts were very well written... you write like an orthodox author... (Not in a bad way😳) It feels like i am reading a book rather than an FF..

an orthodox writer haan...hmmm...I'll have to ponder on that😳

The beach scene was just soo romantic...love blossoming under the starry sky... what more can anyone ask for? Just pure magic... you described it with such ease, i wish i could write romantic parts even half as good as you do. The kiss was so beautifully written.

I'm sure your underestimating yourself...I have read your writing and I'm pretty sure you can pull it off...every writer struggles with some form of creative writing😳

You are so mysterious...we know that they both work in a hospital... but are they in the same hospital?? Hmmm... they better be Rida...Shubhu is Armaan's monitor...yeaaah... I like Shubhu better than Kirti... he sounds cool in here too...

Shub is cool...I love the guy...will try to give him a nice part😳

Uff Rida.. 'Aapki tau jitni tareef karein... utni kam lagti hain...' continue with such wonderful parts!!!

Luv u

love you too😳

Nainu

XxX

Ps: Thanks for the PM

Thankoo so much for such sweet comments nainu🤗

Originally posted by: saira_1

beautifully written 👏 !
hope ar meet soon 😉 😳

Thanx saira😳

Originally posted by: jia..

Rida......finally caught up with ur ff.....OMg am kicking myself for not having read it till now...... 😕How cud i ever miss out on such a beautiful piece of creation till now?????

Awww...thanx jia😳😳

Nyways its one of the most wonderful and beautiful piece of creation as i told u ......u have definitely captivated me now...from the first para itself...u have got me addicted...

if i were to start picking my favorite lines or scene i will land up writing a comment longer than ur part......i stand up to give u standing ovation....specially for the most recent part 4......u deserve a huge round of applause.....

a comment longer than my part😆😆😆...was that supposed to be sarcastic😆😉

thanx a ton for the pm..pls pm mewen u update next...i dont wanna miss out on nything...

Cheers
Jia

Thankoo so much jia😃😳

Today i read it for d first time... & i loved it...
Although u did mentioned it dat u will update it every 2 weeks... but i thinks dats a bit tooo very long time... Gud things r supposed to happen more frequently...
Cant u increase d frequency... ??? 😕 😕 😕

Plzzzzzzzzz update ASAP...

Actually managed to finish a part just for you guys 😃 😳 ...Hopefully you'll like it!! 😳

*reserved*

Have to go now .. will comment after I read it!! 😳

EDIT ::

Wow Ridaaaaaa! 😳 Amazing parttt! 👏 You write very well! 😳 Continue soon!!

Love,
Sanyaa

reserved
school... sleepy time!! 😛

firstly 👏

next reaction: YYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY they will meet.....yipee!!!!

thirdly: thank u so so so much for the really quick update!!!!loved to see the pm from u hun!!!continue soon again!!!!