FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5 - Page 12

Hey Rida!!!

I am finally here with my comments....Like I promised!!! Sorry its soo late...i got busy😳 Ahhh now i shall proceed to my comment on ur update:

You updated earlier than i thought...but what a short update...but then again anything is better than nothing...Okies enough of my incoherent ramblings...

Aaahhh Rida a somewhat upsetting update...she left him on the beach!!! Well atleast its confirmed that its Ridz...I love the nickname she gave Raooooll (CCC) 😆 I couldn't resist....Skunk, I wonder if he really stinks..."go take a shower Raool!"

Okay enough of my silly behaviour...I just absoloutely adored the car scene... his thoughts were very well written... you write like an orthodox author... (Not in a bad way😳) It feels like i am reading a book rather than an FF..

The beach scene was just soo romantic...love blossoming under the starry sky... what more can anyone ask for? Just pure magic... you described it with such ease, i wish i could write romantic parts even half as good as you do. The kiss was so beautifully written.

You are so mysterious...we know that they both work in a hospital... but are they in the same hospital?? Hmmm... they better be Rida...Shubhu is Armaan's monitor...yeaaah... I like Shubhu better than Kirti... he sounds cool in here too...

Uff Rida.. 'Aapki tau jitni tareef karein... utni kam lagti hain...' continue with such wonderful parts!!!

Luv u

Nainu

XxX

Ps: Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: kumpal12

heyyy just caught ur ff...... its so nice......its mindblowing..... really its like a fairy....i wish dat happens to our AR in serial too.... oh god where am i going😉 .......

Thanx...even I wish some of the scenes could be performed in the show😳😉

dat was a short part 😭 .... but it was excellent....
I have two doubts....
y did she leave him like dat... bechara....
next if they are in same hospital how come they didnt see?

keep guessing...😉

i hope i get the answers for my questions in the comming parts......... continue it sooooooooonnnnnnnn....cant wait more 👏

you will😳

Thankoo for the wonderful comments!!😃

Originally posted by: cheen2005

OMG i just read all the parts and im glad i did...the story sounds marvelous, you're doing an awesome job 👏 omg the carnival n the beach was just sooooo 😍

can't wait for the next part...is it really gonna be 2 more weeks 😔

Thanx😳😳...and no I'll be updating it this weekend😃

Originally posted by: premdewaani

that was awesome......... but it was tooooooo short. plzz make the next part lil bit longer and post it soon na...

Ruchi

I promise I'll make the next part longer😳...Thankoo for the appreciation😳😃

Originally posted by: angelaisha

Well...someone finally decided to comment huh😡...thanx for the
much
needed support of my first FF

j/k...that sucks that you know some of the story already...guess I'll
change it somewhat now that you know😉


haha....i'm always there for you rida!! 😆 is it my fault that you cant
update any faster because of ur SATS?....nope....so i moved on to other
FF's.....jk.....hehe i'm gonna make you tell me the whole story cuz i cant
wait
until you update the next part....you cant change the storyline!!!.....you
just
CANT!!! 😡 ......hehe so i see u crossed ur heart on updating this week,,,u
better do it! 😃 ....cant wait....continue soon! 😳 👏 oh and btw i
love ur avi...need to change mine...too lazy to do it (*hint hint) 😳

I'll think about it😉...and yep, you do need to change your sig box ASAP😆😳

Originally posted by: Robin_M

awww she left him on the beach, she should have at least left him a letter, poor armaan, hes so desperate to find her. and may i say that was one romatic kiss!!!! hehe awsome part, really enjoyed it, please continue soon!

Thanx Robin😳😃

Originally posted by: charminggenie

enchantin n beautiful...........under dshade of stars luv bloosomed wid it's full bloom,but dont know y Ridz left him....hope they bang into each odr soon..............i simply adore this fanfic...rockin job
👏

You'll find out soon...just wait!!😃😉....Thankoo for all the wonderful comments😳

Originally posted by: urmila_17

hey its awesme like always 👏 so romantic but y ridz left with out saying him any thing 😕
hmm so arman is also in same sanjeevani
hope they will mee t soon
waiting for ARs meeting again
thanks for ur pm
plssssss continue soon

Will do...thanx😳