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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome!!!Too good!!!!

The flashbacks were too swet and funny.I loved the "my Mann" and "Veer's Mann".Haiii 😳 !!!So sweet and so possessive!!! 😉

As for Scrabbles....well this was a few years back so very possibly this rat was named after the Scrabbles....so no problem in that!!!!And rats don't live for long....so now its dead!!!

And in the flashback Naina called Raj.."Raj"...strange!!!

As for Col.Sahay...well Parmeet Sethi is ruled out and you have never seen Suresh Berry.

So I think you should finalise it at Kiran Kumar...he has the fatherly element and the required gentleness as well.Well I think you should finalise him.Announce it in your next update!!!

As for Nandini well for her role I would like to suggest Narayani Shastri!!!!!

That goes everthing I think!!!!

Well hope you have Yudi Shalini pair!!!

And great idea of Naina to teach that MC a lesson!!!BC ka MC... 😡 !!!And Shalini is such a sweetheart to keep that chudail Ritu away!!!!

And Raj should react more at Huda's flirting!!!Khair!!!!Whatever!!!

Haiii!!!Yeh Naina bhi na thoda toh samjho Raj ko!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

dat was superb updt............. 👏 👏 👏

thankuuu soooo muchhh dearrr🤗

take care and keep smiling.....
sheenu...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

hahahahahahaha....hilarious update.....u r simply suuuuuperb dear....i was imagining the whole scenario and laughing like hell....situations described with amaaaaazing flasbacks were just outstanding....i really love to read these beautiful flashbacks....a great appalause for u for writting soo beautifully....thanku sooooo much for this marvelous and hilarious update.....excellent and now just concentrate on ur study and all the best for ur sem.we will wait for ur next rocking update...

thankuuuu soooo muchhh dearrrr……🤗
u love to read the flashbacks and I get nervous while writing them….. its good that u love them coz I think I include so many flashbacks that people might get bore of them… and thankuuu sooo muchhh for commenting….
thanks dear and now I will update after my exams…😊

take care and keep smiling….😊
sheenu…😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

😆 OMG!!!!! that was hilarious,thankuuuu soooo mucchhhh dearrrr.....🤗 ha ha!! naina is so shararti a mouse lol i could never of thought of that,ha ha... thanks....😆 seriously sheenu the update was tooooooo good, loved the flashback, especially the first part where mann wakes up feeling an gaze on her and it turns out to be veer and she tells him about her class, i thought that was sooooooo cute 😳 😳thanks for the beautiful comment.😳..hmmm but yaar that ritu better stay poles apart from my raju oops!oye.. don't worry yaar... i will keep her miles apart from raj... oops mann's veer.. 😆sorry naina's raj other wise i am gonna rip her into peices i would like to join you for this work.. 😆😆glad to have atleast someone warning her not to make a move as he is taken..... hmmm dr love 😆 i thought this would suit her better then dr. shalini... coz dr. love specifies her both qualities..😆 dr. as well as match maker...😆she could really pass of as a match maker even i think on the same terms.....😆 god knows who made her a doctor he he 😆DJ's made her a doctor 😆and then transformed her into a match maker...awwwww scrabbles id dead 😭 may it's soul RIP seems as naina loved it alot.... i will reveal about it's death in next update.. and yes Naina loved her scrabbles a lot...

anyways once again the update was too good 👏 👏 thankuuu soo muchh for commenting...😊
continue asap 😃 will continue after exams...😃

take care
yasmin

take care and keep smiling....😊
sheenu...😊

Edited by rogerfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: feedback

great job!! keep it up and good luck for your exams

update soon

thankuuu soooo muchhh dearrrr🤗
thankuuu sooo muchhh... will update after exams...

take care and keep smiling....
sheenu....😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Awesome!!!Too good!!!! thankuuu sooo muchhh dearrr........🤗

The flashbacks were too swet and funny.he he..😊. 😆thankuuu... u know what i was nervous about this flashback thing from starting... u see my fic has more flashbacks then present situation.... it was like i am writing a story only in flashback..but now i think that fic will gain some pace... when everything will be clear....I loved the "my Mann" and "Veer's Mann".Haiii 😳 !!!So sweet and so possessive!!! 😉 thankuuu ...😳

As for Scrabbles....well this was a few years back so very possibly this rat was named after the Scrabbles....so no problem in that!!!!And rats don't live for long....so now its dead!!! emm... there is a small story behind it's death... coz scrabbles didn't die natural death..... but will tell it in next update...😊

And in the flashback Naina called Raj.."Raj"...strange!!! ya i noticed it... i changed it... i think i was too much tensed coz of exams that i got distracted while writing (also i don't have habit of calling him veer so.😆.) and then i didn't read the update again so ... but never mind i changed it to veer...😊

As for Col.Sahay...well Parmeet Sethi is ruled out and you have never seen Suresh Berry.

So I think you should finalise it at Kiran Kumar...he has the fatherly element and the required gentleness as well.Well I think you should finalise him.Announce it in your next update!!! ok... i finalise it.... and will announce it.....yes he has required gentleness as well....😊

As for Nandini well for her role I would like to suggest Narayani Shastri!!!!! i think i need to remind u this time..😆 i finalised her in the start as well when u suggested her.... but to tell you the truth she might not get much importance.. and her entry will be pretty late.. so don't worry...😊

That goes everthing I think!!!! ok...😊

Well hope you have Yudi Shalini pair!!! now pairing toh i can't reveal na... but don't worry everything will be fine..😊

And great idea of Naina to teach that MC a lesson!!!BC ka MC...i have read in many fics the diff. ideas of teaching him a lesson so i thought why not use a rat this time...😆 😡 !!!And Shalini is such a sweetheart to keep that chudail Ritu away!!!! ... don't worry yaar i won't let that chudail to come near our sweetie...😊... shalini will always be there to help him..😊

And Raj should react more at Huda's flirting!!!Khair!!!!Whatever!!! yaar i didn't make him react more coz he knows huda and he also knows naina... and perhaps naina wudn't like him reacting more....and also raj never reacted to huda's comment in the serial also...he was always like.. ok its gud for naina and all..(arghh 😡i hate him for doing that...) but seriously i like him that way...😊..

Haiii!!!Yeh Naina bhi na thoda toh samjho Raj ko!!!!

samjhegi jaldi hi mann bhi apne veer ko samjhegi... akhir kab tak door bhagegi.....


chalo u now take care and keep smiling...
sheenu....😊
Edited by rogerfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey itz awesum dear,gud ud dear, 👏

itz realy intrsetn 2 read dear n also a diff concept,
All the very best 4 u'r next updates, 😊


gr8 dear,do contn soon dear,

Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 Great update...keep writing. All the best for your exams
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too goo very nice 👏 loved it now waiting for next asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome 👏 .plz cont soon......

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