FF about RN- In a diff. style (ud P35) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Very nice!!!Too good!!! thankuuuu soooo muchhh dearrr.....

For the cast of Arjun Sahay...bad idea!!He doe not suit the role.i kind of thought a fartherly figure for raj and Navin... thats why i chose him.... but if u think he does not fit for the role then i will change him....I will give you three suggestions...choose one from it....
Suresh Berry(Major General Gaur in LRL) never seen😕
Parmeet Sethi gud one.... but will look like a big brother...
Kiran Kumar(AOC Suraj Singh in Saara Akash) i like him for the role.... u tell....


Now as for Naina becoming friends with the cadets...very nice...but she still a Captain....how can they call her by her name?? yaar in friends position doesn't matter... they will call her by her name only in friendly meetings... professionally she will be their senior

Good choice for Simi.And Vidhya was also in my list!!! yups i have picked her from ur list only..... i had a look at her only after u suggested her...

Rajveer is fine but Captain is not fine.It is still odd in front of everyone!!! ok dear.... she will call him rajveer.... but she can call him captain sometimes also...may be akele mei.😉.. gusse mei...😉

thanks for commenting....
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu....😊

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

it was fabulous updt......too good.......

carry on n updt soon

thankuuu soooo much dear.......
will update today only...
take care and keep smiling....
sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: koolarch2001

pls update soon.. 😊

thanks dear..... i am updating now only....

keep commenting...
take care and keep smiling...

sheenu...😊

Originally posted by: yyyy

👏 👏 👏 nice update but short..please update soon 😛

thanks dearrrr.... i am updating a longer one this time.... now if this is short then i simply can't say what is big....

take care and keep smiling...

sheenu..😊

Originally posted by: hinal60

very nice UD

thanks dear.... i think this is ur first comment.... thanks for commenting...

take care and keep smiling....
sheenu..😊

Hi friends sorry I am late this time… but exams are going on….. This is a very long update coz I don't know when I will be able to update next….. Enjoy the update……

PART 9

S: capt. Aap kitna bhi bhagne ki koshish karo… par ye shalini aapke aur Naina ke bich ke distance ko jarur kam karegi…. Chalo dr. love …. I mean dr. shalini apna kaam karo……

And saying this she goes towards mess…..

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In mess:

Naina was sitting with first year cadets when shalini enters….

Shalini: hey Naina…. Have you had something???

Naina: yes Shalini… now I just want to have some rest… I am very tired….

Shalini: oh…. How can I forget this?? You came here today only… u must be very tired.. lets go to your room…. And cadets go back to your classes…. Lunch break is over… I think you have class of major Lolita at 3…

Cadets: yes maam…

And both heads towards Raj's room….

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In room:

Shalini: now Naina have some rest… if incase captain comes to know that I made you work for long then he won't spare me.…. he loves u very much…

Naina (ignoring): oh… by the way Shalini do you know when he will be back… I mean should I leave the door open ……

Shalini: no Naina no need for this… you should close the door… because he must be having duplicate keys…. So don't worry…….. now I will better leave… take care…. Will meet in the evening…. If you will have time for me….

Naina: what????

Shalini: nothing… ur captain will be with you in the evening na… so I thought you won't have time for me…

Naina: oh.. shut up shalini…

Shalini: ok ok…. B bye….

Naina: bye…. And closes the door….. and says (looking in the sky) : kab tak bhaiya??? Kab tak…… kab tak mujhe ye natak aur karna padega… mai uska face bhi nahi dekhna chahti aur yahan pe mujhe uske sath rehna hai….aur shalini…. Kaise samjhaun usse bhaiya…..uski baatein…. Bhaiya plz help me…. Bhaiya I can't live anymore… I want to come there… I have no one left over here… *pauses*… why bhaiya… mei wahan bhi nahi aa sakti….. mere upar do do jimmedari hai.. ek aapko begunaah saabit karne ki… aur dusri simi ki…..

Sits on the sofa and held her face in her hands….

Why bhaiya…..aur kitne saal…. Mainee army join ki taaki aapko insaaf dila sakun is army mei reh ke…. Lekin kuch bhi sahi nahi ho raha hai… aapka kaatil meri aankon ke saamne hai par fir bhi mai kuch nahi kar sakti… par I promise u bhaiya jis din mai aapko begunaah saabit karungi.. wo din uska is duniya mei aakhri din hoga…*pauses* aur mera bhi……

And cries and sleeps on the sofa…..

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It was 8 in the evening:

Raj was on his way back to his room when he spots shalini with……….. Ritu….

Raj: oh hi shalini and hi dr. mishra……. Where is Naina shalini????

Shalini (with mocking anger): I am not her bodyguard captain…

Raj: oh sorry shalini… I dint mean it that way… I mean I was just asking… I mean u know she is new… and stops after seeing shalini's expression…. What shalini???

Shalini (laughing): ha ha… captain… look at your face… I was just joking…. I wass actually pulling your leg… and u r so dumb…

Raj: oh shut up shalini……

Shalini: okok captain… no more jokes… she is there in your room…. She was tired… so I told her to have some rest until you returns coz then you won't let her rest….

Raj (kinda confused): what????

Shalini: nothing leave it……

Raj: ok b bye…. Bye dr. mishra….

Ritu: captain… I just waana ask something….

Raj: ya go ahead dr. mishra……

Ritu: was it a love marriage??….

Raj: wat??? I m not getting wat u r trying to say…

Ritu: I was just asking about ur marriage…. Was it love or arranged????

Shalini (sensing the situation): obviously it must be love…they both look cute together… and very much in love….

Ritu: then why she was not there with him when the session started….

Shalini: she must be having some work na…. after all she is also a captain and that too a capt. Dr…. so you see dr. have lots of work… she might not be able to leave her patients… why are you taking tension??... I mean now she is here so leave it….

Ritu (mutters): I can't leave it dr.…he can't do that with me and you won't be able to understand the reason… but unfortunate to her shalini heard her…

Shalini: oh captain… now we will take your leave… your wife must be waiting for you…. I will wait for you in the mess for dinner… bring Naina along with you..

Raj (thanking shalini in his mind): ok dr…. I think I should go now…..

And turns… ……… but turns back and says……

Raj: it was love dr. mishra…my marriage was love marriage… (Mutters) at least from my side….… and goes……….

Ritu stands there thinking something very hard…. And was not believing what he said to her just now…..

Shalini (kinda understands her situation) : and says…. Stop thinking about him ritu…. I know u were having crush on him…. But look he is married… I can very well sense that he loves Naina a lot….

Ritu: huh…. No actually I was thinking something else… actually I was thinking why dint he tell us this in the start???? …..

Shalini: oh leave it ritu… you know he is not a kind of person who discusses his personal life very often… so that may be the reason….

Ritu: ok let's go to the infirmary…

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Raj's room:

Naina was still sleeping on the sofa with her head tilted on one side of the sofa with her hands beneath her head and legs folded up on the sofa…(yaar like small kids sleep on the sofa with folded legs and hands beneath their head…) when raj enters…

A smile comes to his lips seeing her like this….which soon replaces by a sorrow…

He brings a blanket to cover her and says…

Raj: you are still a kid Naina…. My little mann…. You can never change… its true that now u r tougher… but I know u r still Mann in your heart… my Mann…. I will bring my Mann back…. Navin I have promised you that I will take care of Mann… but I wasn't able to fulfill that promise…. But now I promise you that I won't let her go away from me again….

Mann you have left me thrice in the past… but this time I won't let you run away from me…. And this is my promise to you…

She feels uncomfortable… as if she can notice some one staring at her in her sleep… and opens her eyes….. and saw …… raj… she was not able to comprehend anything…. May be because she was very tired and this leads her in to her past….

And she says: Oh veer… plz go… I am not going to park today…. I am very tired…. That varsha maam…you know she made me stand over the desk and you know….why because….. …. And stops because realization drawns upon her once more….. and she stands and goes from there in the bedroom…….

Here raj was standing in the living room and was remembering that incident of the past…….

A 10 year old girl was sleeping on the sofa suddenly a 13 year old boy comes

Seeing girl sleeping like this he smiles and keep looking at her as if don't want to disturb her in the sleep… or may be he was liking looking at her sleeping like a baby…

Suddenly the girl feels uncomfortable as if she can sense some one there… and open her eyes…..

Girl: veer…. Sorry I won't come to playground today….

Veer: kya hua mann???

Girl: I am very tired…. U know that varsha maam made me stand over the desk for the whole day and you know why because that stupid akaash was pulling my hair so I pushed him and he fell…….

Raj: what???? That stupid akaash pulled your hair… I won't spare him tomorrow…. How dare he touch my Mann??? ………

Naina (giggles): now mr akaash will come to know what it is to mess with veer's Mann??

Raj: yups…. No one can touch you as long as I am here………and you go and have some rest on the bed… stupid… sofa won't be comfortable…. Chalo…. Lets go to your room… even I won't go to park today… we will sit in your room and play your fav. Game….

A smile comes to raj's lips as he remembers that incident…u still remembers everthing Mann….. I know you can never forget your Veer…. Now I will bring you back… and goes in the bedroom…..

Raj:ahhh… wo actually dinner time is 9 … and it is already 8:45… so you get ready……

Naina: I won't go….. not with you…

Raj: what??? I mean you have to come with me…. Shalini will be waiting for both of us…. So plz get ready…… I know what u r going through… but

Naina: no rajveer…. You can never understand that…. Because you don't have heart …. I will get ready in 10 mins.

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Both were walking towards mess when Shalini spots them….

Shalini: hey captain…. Hi Naina…

Naina: hi shalini….

Raj (relaxed after not seeing ritu): hi shalini…… shall we proceed???

Shailni: sure captain…. I am feeing very hungry….

And the trio proceeds towards mess……

In mess:

Our six cadets were already there

Pooja: oye wo mucchad bhi na…. sahi kehti hun ali bas ek baar is academy se paas ho jaun fir dikhati hun us mucchad ko…. Hamesha mere connection mei problem karta hai…. dekh lena uska connection to is academy se mai hi katungi…..

Naina goes towards the cadets….

Shalini: I know captain that you are relaxed that ritu is not here….

Raj:huh…… its not that shalini that I don't want her here but its just that her talks… I mean how she asks ques. And all…..

Shalini: u don't need to explain that captain… I understand u well…. That's why I told her to have her dinner at 9:30 and take care of infirmary until I return….

Raj: thanks shalini…. U r such a true friend…

Shalini: no need captain…. Can I ask u something???

Raj: ya…..

Shalini: is there any tension going on between you and Naina……

Raj:………………………………..

Shalini: its ok captain… I understand…. You don't need to answer…. But plz know that whenever u need a friend u can always call me…..

Raj: thanks shalini…. Now lets have something…..

Naina was talking with first year cadets…..when raj comes

Raj: so cadet huda…. What are you saying to Naina……

Huda: sir I was just telling her that you are lucky….. if I had come in her way three years ago na then I will be in your place…..

Raj: so you are flirting with my wife cadet Huda…..

Huda: sir huda to har janani se flirt karta hai…. fir chahe wo koi bhi ho…. Akhir chance maarne mei kya jaata hai…..

Raj: ok ok cadet… I understand u completely…. Now lets move towards table…

Raj, shalini, Naina sits on one table and cadets on other…. When major Nair enters the mess………

Pooja: look who is here??? The Hitler part 2…..

Naina hears this as both tables were close… and smiles and look towards the door….

Seeing major Nair brings a small smile to her face which gradually becomes bigger as she remembers the incident when she had come to academy for 1 month…..

Raj sees her and was amused to see her smiling like this… he turns his eyes to where she was looking and found major Nair….

He also smiles as he also remembers the incident……. major Nair sees both of them and frowns seeing Naina……

Shalini sees both of them and asks…. What it is???? Why are you both smiling??? And that too after seeing major Nair….and why is he looking angry???.she was practically shocked……

Both turn towards her…

Raj: wo nothing much shalini…. Actually we both remembered something….

Shalini: what it is??? That can bring smile to your face after seeing MN…

Raj (laughing lightly): ha ha… nothing much shalini… actually when Naina came here for a month she played a prank on him….. and he too remembers this…..

Shalini: and what was that????/

Raj: actually she had a pet scrabbles (he he I took that name from Harry potter……. So don't kill me….. I actually was not able to think of a name for a pet mouse)……

Navin: aahhhh…. Is major ki to mai….. kal hamara graduation day hai…. aur aaj bhi ye…….cadet Navin aap yahan nahi ja sakte…. Cadet abhi aap officer bane nahi hai isliye lights out hone ke baad kahin bahar nahi aana hai….

Yaar raj ek baat bata… kal to hamara graduation day hai… to fir ye ham eek din bhi aaraam se ghumne kyu nahi deta…..

Raj: yaar seriously is major nair ki to mai…. Dil karta hai isse kaccha chaba jaun…. Par kya karu I m pure veg………..

Naina: relax veer…. Relax bro…… aaj jab se mai yahan aayi hun you both were talking about this major…. You don't even have time for me…… kaun hai ye major…..

Veer: mann tum major nair ko nahi janti…. He is very strict more than your varsha maam…..

Naina: shut up veer….. bhai plz batao na….. waise bhi ab mai is major ko nahi chodne waali jisne mere bhai aur veer ko itna pareshaan kiya hai….. abhi tum batao….

Abhi: Naina……… aap unse durr raho… wo ladkiyon se waise bhi chidte hai….

Naina: array tum batao to sahi…. Aaj ke baad wo mujhse chidenge nahi darenge……

Raj: haa ha…. Tum jaisi bhutni se to koi bhi darr jaye… major kya cheez hai….

Naina: veer…uuuuuuuu…. I'll kill youuu………………. Thik hai mai kuch nahi karungi…. U go and handle your major…….

Navin: sorry naina… plz na…. help us na…. hame usse do saalo ka maza chakhana hai….

Naina: thik hai bhai…..

Raj: kya karne waali ho tum????

Naina: mai kuch nahi karungi…….. jo karega scrabbles karega…..

Raj: scrabbles???? Ye kis chuhe ka naam hai…..

Naina: you bet…. Chuha hi hai…. my pet white rat scrabbles…… and she picks out a sweet white rat from a box which was kept on the floor….

Raj: CHUHA?????? Mann have you gone mad or what???? rat in academy…. That's why you were not letting us to touch that box…. And since when you have this??? ( ( pointing towards mouse who was sitting comfortably on her palm)…

Naina: shut up veerr…. He is scrabbles…….and I found him in a store 2 years ago…. He is really very sweet…. Don't worry he won't say anything to you….

Navin: but Naina…..

Naina: trust me bhai….. ye scrabbles he ab aapka badla lega…. Just wait and watch… jara mujhe major ka karma dikhana….. waise bhi raat ke 11 baje hai to he will be sleeping…..

Raj: mann khud to marogi hame bhi marwaogi…..

Chalo…………

And she says: chalo scrabbles…. Its all depends on you now…. Don't touch major…. But don't leave any other thing…..and she sends the mouse in his room from the window…..

Shalini: ha ha….. mouse in major nair's room…… now I can imagine the scene…..

Raj: no shalini you can't….. actually when he woke up next day then ………

Major: what the hell Is this????

He saw his room in mess…. All his clothes were in pieces…. Everything was ulta pulta…. Wardrobe open…. and then he saw a mouse running out of his room window…..

Major(shout): CHUHA?????? Ye sab kya hai…. everyone came to his room running and after seeing his room everyone was laughing like hell………

Outside naina exchanged high fives with others……

Nandini: ha ha…naina you are the best…..

Naina: I know…. Ha ha……

Abhi: sach mei major ki haalat dekhne waali thi…. But tell me one thing Naina…. Uski saari files and uniform was alright…

Naina: mere scrabbles ko pata hai ki kya kya kharab karna hai…..

Raj: ya ya….. your scrabbles…… well I must say he is very cute………

Naina: haan haan akhir kiska pet hai………

Raj: ok stop that…. But I will always remember major's face………………

Shalini: even I can imagine his face now….. Naina you are too good……..

Raj: ha ha…. You know what shalini…. Major nair ko us din ke baad itna darr laga ki unhone apne kamre ki window pe taala lagana shuru kar diya…..

But no one notices look on Naina's face…. It was of pure sorrow….

Shalini: ha ha…. Major aur chuhe se darr gaye…… accha tell me one thing Naina where is scrabbles now? Have You bring him here with you?????

Raj: ya Naina tell us….. even I haven't see him since morning….. where is he now…?????

Naina: he is no more….. excuse me….. and she goes from there

But raj can see tears in her eyes….

Shalini: I think….

Raj: I will just come….. I think I should go………..

Shalini: don't worry I will go to infirmary…. You go………b bye….

Raj: bye…… and he goes after Naina….

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End of part……..

Finally this was a very long update…… actually I can't tell when I will be able to update next…. Coz my semester exams are going on….. practicals are over and theory will start from 5^th may….. and will last till 16^th may…. So next update will be after 16^th …. may be on 17^th……..

Please leave your comments….. I love reading them./………

Take care and keep smiling……

Sheenu……….

dat was superb updt............. 👏 👏 👏

😆 OMG!!!!! that was hilarious, ha ha!! naina is so shararti a mouse lol i could never of thought of that, seriously sheenu the update was tooooooo good, loved the flashback, especially the first part where mann wakes up feeling an gaze on her and it turns out to be veer and she tells him about her class, i thought that was sooooooo cute 😳 hmmm but yaar that ritu better stay poles apart from my raju oops! sorry naina's raj other wise i am gonna rip her into peices 😆glad to have atleast someone warning her not to make a move as he is taken..... hmmm dr love 😆 she could really pass of as a match maker god knows who made her a doctor anyhoooooooo awwwww scrabbles id dead 😭 may it's soul RIP seems as naina loved it alot....

anyways once again the update was too good 👏 👏
continue asap 😃

take care
yasmin

great job!! keep it up and good luck for your exams

update soon