Dreamy reality last part page 10 03/29 - Page 6

Originally posted by: lovestorm

heyy!!
sry a couple ppl dropped in itz like 11 at nite n they were all hungry 😆 n obnoxious 😆 lolz
well anywayz i loved the part!!!! itz was sooo touchinggg... the part where she kisses the picture and he feeels it and she kisses n he feels it 😭 😭 😭 n how both of them just knew who was on the other side of the phone... it broke mi heart 🥺 n wen he's like "goodbye" he meant like forever and she's like "see you"

i hope both of them get together soon... or at least meet.... oh n is she goin to tell him shez pregnant... she shud before he found out from someone else but then wat if he doesn't believe it's his child that wud be heartbreaking 😭

ooo n the lil boy krishh is sooooo cute!!! i just love him!

oo n the next part for my fic? well i havn't even started writing it 😆 I'm sry but imma try to do it soon since it's such a grand demand 😆 i'll try though...

aww so late at night its like 8:52 where i live rite now at nite lol so imma be up and writing more parts lol

i kno its like they know the other's every touch sound and everything i thought it would be cute.....and i hear that true lovers can actually feel the other's presence😳 so tried to place that feeling in it😆 im rlly glad that you liked it i just had to add the phone thing in it......i felt itz been too long since they heard the other's voice😕.....as for the "goodbye" meaning like forever im sooooo glad u caught that.....i dont think a lot of ppl would think of it like tat and thats kind of what i was trying to say by making tannu reply "not goodbye but see you" cuz i will make sure they're together soon........but have to torture them first.......and they'll fall deeper in love after being separated for a while lol

you just gave me an idea for the next part........make them see each other across the room....go up to one another awww so romantic and sad scene thnx a lot.....well im thinking of making him learn that she's pregnant wen they meet and she's like showing and probably in like her seventh or eighth month.....he will probably think that its someone else's but will learn that its his from like simi or something and i'll have a flashback to "the nite" the baby was made😳 haha hope i write it rite lol i kno hearbreakin😭 that he would think its sum1 elses and then heartwarming wen he holds it for the first time😳

i kno krish i think i'll use him as an excuse to bring zaib closer to tannu what do you think? oh yea should the baby be a girl or a boy? i dont kno what to make a kute guy like his papa or a sweet girl like his mommy lol

ummm next part for ur fic and u didn't start it😡 ok i understand u must be busy but plz por favor start it little by little and then finish it soon and then post it! yay!😃 yes u have to do it soon becuz itz RINKZ demand 😆😆.....but plz do try tats counts the most tat u try to update fast😳 ok imma go......have to do mi spanish packet....borin....and then maybe later i'll start on the next part hopefully😃 wow i wrote a lot....the first time i wrote such a long reply....but i loved writin it so much fun haha ok ill ttyl

rinkz

Originally posted by: armaghan0

thts so sad how did they got seperated cant wait really exciting pls do con soon

aww thnx i kno soooo sad but had to happen....thnx for commentin will cont asap

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part . Feel so sad for Tannu and Zaib. Loved how when she touched his forehead in the pic, he felt her actually touching him. So romantic. Wonder what really happened and why would she act the way she was acting? Continue soon

thnx a lot...i kno i feel sad too...thnx i tried to make it romantic and tat came up so did tat...dont worry you'll find out after some more parts the reason of her behavior and everything will become clear...she acted like it becuz she was.....wont tell now but u'll find out soon promise...i'll cont soon

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aww so late at night 😆 hahaha.. i know its like 8:52 where i live rite now at nite btw where do u live? lol so imma be up and writing more parts lol hehehe... i get really lazy😆

i kno its like they know the other's every touch sound and everything i thought it would be cute.....😳 awww.... dat is cute and i hear that true lovers can actually feel the other's presence😳 i've heard that too... somewhere... i wonder if it's true n if it were dats soooo cute so tried to place that feeling in it😆 im rlly glad that you liked it i just had to add the phone thing in it......i felt itz been too long since they heard the other's voice😕..... awww ya it has been long... jus imagine 2 lovers talking to each other for hours everyday and then all of a sudden they stop, you miss them a lot.... as for the "goodbye" meaning like forever im sooooo glad u caught that..... I know i'm just soo smart and quick like that😆 i dont think a lot of ppl would think of it like tat and thats kind of what i was trying to say by making tannu reply "not goodbye but see you" cuz i will make sure they're together soon........ gotchya but have to torture them first.......awww... do you have to??? and they'll fall deeper in love after being separated for a while lol yaya! datz sumin positive to think of😛

you just gave me an idea for the next part........😳😆 no probs! anytime hon make them see each other across the room....go up to one another awww so romantic and sad scene thnx a lot.....well im thinking of making him learn that she's pregnant wen they meet and she's like showing and probably in like her seventh or eighth month.....he will probably think that its someone else's awww... i feel so bad for them... seeing each other and not being able to properly talk to each...😭 but will learn that its his from like simi or something aww... can't kripa just tell him? if simi tells him then won't he be angry with her? and i'll have a flashback to "the nite" the baby was made😳 haha awww... that wud be really really really cute😳 hope i write it rite lol i kno hearbreakin😭 that he would think its sum1 elses and then heartwarming wen he holds it for the first time😳 awwww..... i wonder how tannu wud react...? wud she let him believe it's his or wud she deny it because of the reason she left? o n i'm dying to the reason!!!!

i kno krish i think i'll use him as an excuse to bring zaib closer to tannu what do you think? aww... dat wud be sweet n den u can make krish act naughty n everything😉 oh yea should the baby be a girl or a boy? i dont kno what to make a kute guy like his papa or a sweet girl like his mommy lol awww you should make it a girl n den u can have a scene where angad promises to look after his baby girl and keep her beautiful self away from all the naughty boys

ummm next part for ur fic and u didn't start it😡 lolz sry... ok i understand u must be busy but plz por favor start it little by little and then finish it soon and then post it! yay!😃 sounds like a great plan😆 yes u have to do it soon becuz itz RINKZ lolz demand 😆😆.....but plz do try tats counts the most tat u try to update fast😳 ok imma go......have to do mi spanish packet....borin....lolz i'm learning french... itz prolly jus as borin😆 wat grade u in? and then maybe later i'll start on the next part hopefully😃 yyaaaa!! u shud do dat😆😆😆 wow i wrote a lot.... lolz! i guess u did the first time i wrote such a long reply....but i loved writin it so much fun haha ok ill ttyl awww ur so cute n thanks for honoring me wid dat😆😆😆 well i'm goin to start the part 2B tonight but i don't think i'm goin to gett too far but i'm promising that imma start it tonight hope dat makes u feel better😆

rinkz

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Originally posted by: lovestorm

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rinkz [i luved urs 2] 😆

i think we should start a new post now lol

Originally posted by: lovestorm

^^ sry about the angad and kripa mess up 😳 i've been reading too many angad kripa ffz n i hav a tendency for believing that they're the main characters😆 sry again... 😳
i live in cleveland, ohio... n i'm fifteen
n wowowo we did right a lot 😆 it's 2:10 a.m. rite now n i shud prolly go to bed now 😆 oo n i finished 278 words for the next part 😆 great accomplishment, eh? well, im off to bed gud nite!
"aww make me blush....thnx i think ur sweet and kute too...love readin ur replies their so sweet...ur welcome and yes u should feel honored lol yea u should start and then finish it later...it makes me feel rlly happy and smiley lol " awww mee too! 😆 thanks you make me blush too 😳 see! 😆 😆

haha yea we did write a lot...itz ok i kno sometimes i mess up too cuz everyone writes abt kripz/angu a lot soooo popular lol itz ok dont worry...ohio i've never been there...wats it like...im fifteen too but will be sixteen in octuber cant wait...lol itz 11:26 rite now...im still workin on the packet...yea u prolly should get some sleep...yay so u wrote some and then later on write some more lol yep big accomplishment...gud job...ok gud nite sleep tite...lol yea i can see the red cheeks lol

ps- congrats now ur a groupie like me lol

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

haha yea we did write a lot...itz ok i kno sometimes i mess up too cuz everyone writes abt kripz/angu a lot soooo popular lol itz ok dont worry...ohio i've never been there...wats it like... wat's it like? nothing but snow but thank god it stopped alreaddy im fifteen too but will be sixteen in octuber cant wait... really? i'll be sixteen in december!!! i'm really excited😃 lol itz 11:26 rite now...im still workin on the packet...yea u prolly should get some sleep...yay so u wrote some and then later on write some more lol yep big accomplishment... yeah gud job...ok gud nite sleep tite...lol yea i can see the red cheeks lol 😆😆😆

ps- congrats now ur a groupie like me lol yay! but how do i become one?

Originally posted by: lovestorm