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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5

A month had gone by since the marriage of Tannu-Zaib, Gauri-Shiv, and Kripa-Angad. The couples were really close to each other and did everything together. Today the guys decided to have some alone time with their wives. Shiv took Gauri to the beach…Angad took kripa to the mall…and Zaib took Tannu to his studio. Not exactly the best places for some alone time but that was all they could think of.

Angad watched as kripa ran around from one store to another. He shook his head…why did he agree to bring her here? Kripa came and dragged him into another store. She went and tried on some clothes…he looked at them and shook his head.

K- kya Angad koi to choose karo?

He walked to the rack and got a green and yellow sari with embroidery on the neckline, pallu, bottom and looked really pretty. He had her try that one and she looked really pretty. He nodded his head for the first time in the last 2 hours. He bought it for her and they went to the food court. Kripa sat and waited while Angad got the food…he came back with pizza, coke. They ate the food and soon desert arrived…strawberry ice cream…kripa's favorite. She smiled like a little kid and started eating it eagerly. Angad sat and watched her with a smile. She looked up and saw him. She raised the ice cream to him but he shook his head. Shaking her shoulders she continued eating her desert. Soon they were done and started leaving for another shop…hugging and looking at each other with loving gazes.

Zaib was singing a song for Tannu and she listened to him…for a while at least. She soon got bored and left without telling him. She walked around the rooms in the big studio. She heard some music from one of the rooms…she entered and sees a girl dancing. She was wearing a miniskirt and a small tank top…Tannu was disgusted because she danced really badly. She watched as the girl ran around shaking her body like she was all that but it just made her look really really bad. Soon she thankfully stopped and looked at Tannu in surprise. Tannu was wearing a silver churidar and looking really pretty. The girl walked to her and asked her who she was and what she was doing there.

T- I'm Tannu…I came here with my husband and was looking around…who are you?

G- Im mishti and a dancer…who's you husband?

T- Zaib

Mishti smirked and thought this was the perfect time to cause trouble and starts telling Tannu lies.

M- Oh im so sorry for you

T- Why?

M- Your married to Zaib

T- Yea what's there to be sad about being married to him?

M- You don't know what kind of guy he is…taking girls out to dates…using them and then throwing them away after he's done with them

T- What?

M- Yes he did that to me too…he got me pregnant and when I told him he said it was someone else's and kicked me out of the house

T- What happened to your kid?

M- I had to abort it what else? I couldn't go around walking pregnant my parents would kill me

Mishti had crocodile tears in her eyes and was crying…sure that Tannu would believe her. Tannu was shocked and looked really mad.

T- What else?

M- Well sometimes he would hit the girls he dated

T- WHAT????

M- Yea…he hit me some times and before that his other girlfriends had bruises on their faces almost all the time they were with him…he was really abusive and threatened them if they told anyone he would have them killed

T- Come with me

She walked out of the room angrily…with a smirking mishti following her. They went into the singing room where he was screaming at a guy. He looked up and saw Tannu…running to her he started hugging her and kissing her face over and over.

Z- Where did you go? Scaring the hell out of me…don't ever do that again!

Tannu pushed him off and looked at him angrily…raising her hand she slapped him hard across the face. Everyone gasped and watched as Zaib looked at Tannu in shock. Mishti was smirking evilly now…her plan worked the stupid gawar fell for it.

Z- Tannu what's wrong? Why did you slap me?

T- Why shouldn't I Zaib? How could you? How could you be so stupid?

Z- What are you talking about?

Tannu turned and walked to mishti and pulled her up to Zaib by her arm. He looked even more confused.

T- Why the hell would you keep this wench in your studio?

Everyone was shocked especially Mishti…what the hell was this girl doing this was not in her plan.

T- Do you know what kind of things she says behind your back? She says you're abusive…cruel…a player…and a father of thousands of unknown kids.

Z- WHAT!!!

T- Yes now I want you to kick her out of this studio and I never want to see her face anywhere around this place or you! I mean it Zaib now!!!!

Mishti was thrown out of the studio and fired as a dancer. Tannu was now calm and breathing normally…she looked at Zaib and walked out of the room telling him she was leaving. She goes home and meets the others. Kripa had lots of bags and was giving them to everyone. She looked at Tannu and called her over.

K- Tannu here's your bag

Tannu ran to Gauri and hugged her hard…crying. Everyone was surprised and worried.

G- Tannu kya hua bacha?

T- di woh Zaib…zaib

S- kya kiya zaib ne?

Tannu tells them everything…what Mishti told her and what she did.

A- yeh mishti ki to main

T- nahin Angad now's not the right time. Right now I want you to tell me all of Zaib's favorite dishes.

Tannu made all of his favorite dishes and when he came home…was told to go to the outhouse. He entered and was surprised to see it decorated with candles and a table with all his favorite dishes. A big bear was shoved in his face…it said "SORRY" and he took it revealing Tannu with a sorry expression. She looked scared of what he would do…but all he did was burst out laughing.

Z- Your face…ha ha ha so cute…you looked so scared

T- Shut up

Z- Ha what did you think that I would be mad at you?

T-……………….yes

Z- Like I could be mad at you

They smile and had the dinner…feeding each other like love sick puppies. They sat down and watched the TV. Looking at Tannu…Zaib was not shocked to see her sleeping peacefully. He picked her up and carried her to their room…laying her down he took off her jewelry and sandals. He changed her clothes into a comfortable gown and fell asleep next to her…holding her close to him with a smile on both of their faces.

I know really short and not that much happened but im too tired to write a lot and frankly I just wanna get this fic over with yaar im already bored with it lol. I'll see maybe I'll make it so they have their kids and live happy ever after in like 5 more parts who knows tell me what you think I should do.

Please please please comment I only have like 3 people commenting constantly. I want to know what the silent readers think too so please take a min to write one sentence even and tell me what you think.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute yes tanu really trust zaib that she didn't believe misty


arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i hate misty soooooo much thank god they throw her away from studio

awwwwwwwwww they love each other soooooooooo much i hope they don't get separate

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
loved it am just so happy and fascinated with the way tannu hadled the situation just loved it this is called trust cute and great
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part. I knew Mishty was going to try and cause trouble, but at least Tannu didn't believe her . Continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute yes tanu really trust zaib that she didn't believe misty


arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i hate misty soooooo much thank god they throw her away from studio

awwwwwwwwww they love each other soooooooooo much i hope they don't get separate

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal 😛 😛 😛

lol yea tannu trusts zaib but does he trust her??? 😉

yea mishti th evil witch is gone for now at least but she might come back soon and maybe this time succeed in the break up

i kno their love is soooooo kute i love writing about it lol i dont wanna break them up but................................we'll see

u kno getting separated strengthens the love or sumthin like tat lol

i will continue asap but my mind keeps on comin up with some other ideas and i start them so i can do them later so im gonna do this maybe now and hopefully post a part by nite

lub

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part. I knew Mishty was going to try and cause trouble, but at least Tannu didn't believe her . Continue soon

yea tannu did a good thing but mishti wont leave so fast ha ha thanx for commentin

i cont asap

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaghan0

loved it am just so happy and fascinated with the way tannu hadled the situation just loved it this is called trust cute and great

yep tru trust huh? so ur happy tat she slapped zaib 😆 lol jk thnx a ton for takin time and commentin i cont asap

rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hey rinki!
the trust that they both have in each other is incredible! n i hate that mishty 😡 she's such a pain in the... you know wat 😆 n both of them are so cute together... itz a shame someone wants to break them up
great part 😛 contd soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovestorm

hey rinki!
the trust that they both have in each other is incredible! n i hate that mishty 😡 she's such a pain in the... you know wat 😆 n both of them are so cute together... itz a shame someone wants to break them up
great part 😛 contd soon 👏 👏 👏

hi storm...yea the trust is soooooo special and yea its important to have it in a relationship. i kno i hate mishti too though i never watched kyph lol yep shes a big pain the [beep] lol awww thnx yea they r really kute.......i kno like everytime someones happy somebody gotta butt in haha thnx a lot for takin ur time and commentin means a lot to me ill cont soon im writing the next part rite now but i think u might get mad😕......cuz its not a happy one😭...it is a little in the beginning but later.....uh yea ill let u read it and find out lol

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 6

Another two months had gone by...Gauri was pregnant. Kripa had decided to wait for some time and then have kids and Tannu…she would love to have kids but she thought it would be natural whenever it happens she was fine with it. Only the girls knew that Gauri was pregnant…she wanted to tell Shiv in a special way. And today was that day…to tell Shiv he was going to be a father in 7 months. Gauri had planned a special dinner for just them and the other four would stay home away from the couple. Right now the three were waiting for their husbands to come home…getting impatient as it was already 10 at night. Just then the door opened and the three idiots entered laughing with each other…their giggles stopped at the looks on the girls' faces. Gauri looked like she was going to cry and the other two looked pissed off.

S- Gauri kya hua?

K- Oh wow jiju aap bhi na

S- Maine kya kiya?

T- Aap ko aaj jaldi aane ke liye kaha tha di ne aur aap ho ki koi parwa nahin hai aap ko

S- Haan lekin woh aaj office mein ek emergency aa gayi thi isliye hum late ho gaye im sorry Gauri

T- Ok ok now go to your room jiju with Gauri di and make up

Gauri goes upstairs with Shiv following. Ten minutes later, Shiv's happy yell was heard. The boys stood up scared and looked at the girls laughing and smiling. Shiv comes running down and hug everyone still yelling "YES".

Z- bhai whats wrong with you?

S- oh my god Zaib Angad u guys are going to be chachus soon

Now all three brothers were laughing and yelling happily. The girls giggle at the guys' excitement. Tannu's phone started ringing so she went outside to answer. It was a number she didn't know. She picks up the call. Five minutes later she comes back inside looking frightened. Before anyone notices she puts a fake smile on her face. Everyone goes to bed with a happy smile…except Tannu.

The next month goes by with everyone having a good time together………and Tannu distancing herself from everyone. She acted like a bi*** to Zaib and everyone. They all thought it would pass by and she would her sweet self again…but it didn't happen. She started staying out late at night and sometimes came home drunk. The family's friends would tell them about seeing Tannu with some guys hugging them and getting really close to those guys. Zaib was hurt and mad at her.

Today everyone was downstairs talking about the baby and Tannu was in her room reading some book. Zaib comes home looking pissed off with some papers in his hands.

Z- where's Tannu

S- Upstairs in her room why?

He doesn't answer and goes to the room…everyone follows worried. They come in to see and hear him yell at her.

Z- Here…sign this and get out of my house

T- What's this?

Z- Divorce papers

Everyone gasped and Gauri asked Zaib what he was doing.

Z- Im doing the right thing bhabhi…I can't deal with her anymore. Going and hanging out with some guys every night…coming home drunk…she's even sleeping with those guys not just dating them

He shows them pictures of Tannu and some guys in a bed…their bodies covered with blankets but you could tell they were naked. Gauri looked at them and at Tannu…she went up to her and asked her if this was true. No answer…meaning it was. She slaps her across her face.

G- How could you? I can't believe im related to you…disgusting. You broke my trust in you…main kabhi bhi believe nahin karti agar tum bas ek baar keh deti ki ye sach nahi hai lekin tum toh kuch bhi nahin bhol rahi jis ka matlab ki ye photos sach hain. Get out of here now Tannu and don't you ever dare come near me again…get out.

Everyone left…Zaib being last. He looked at her standing there silently not saying anything looking at the floor. How could she do this to him? He went and waited downstairs with everyone for Tannu to leave. Upstairs she falls on her bed…crying. She goes to the closet and takes out her clothes…placing them in a suitcase. She picks up Zaib and hers wedding picture and put it in the suitcase. She looks at the other picture of just Zaib on the wall and runs her hand over it. She looks around the room…remembering the nights she stood at the balcony waiting for Zaib to come home…the nights of passion they spent in the bed…the cuddling they did when she didn't feel good…him bringing her coffee and taking care of her.

She looked at the papers and signed them running her hand over Zaib's name. She got her suitcase and walked downstairs…the papers in one hand. Her tears were gone…dried but will return later. She looks at everyone sitting on the sofas…Zaib standing. They turned to her as she went to the table in the middle and placed the papers on it…well aware of everyone's eyes on her…accusing and disgusted. She turned and started walking to the door…but her pallu was pulled on. Turning back she noticed it was stuck on Zaib's watch…she watched silently as he took it out all the while staring at her with hatred. She turned around and started walking as he ran upstairs slamming the door loudly.

Looking around the living room…memories of her and Zaib come running through her mind…him coming behind her and hugging her lovingly…him carrying her in his arms and many more. She walked out of the house…with a heavy heart. Walking in the street…going to a hotel and renting a room.

She bought a small house that showed the beach…pacifying her at night. A month had gone by since the divorce…it was all over the news and still is. Now Tannu teaches at a small orphanage that she also owns. A lot of things about her that she didn't tell anyone like she had opened an orphanage 2 yrs ago. She had more than enough money to last her for twenty lifetimes…but she didn't show it off to anyone. She lived as a normal girl and behaved like a normal girl. She was very happy…she had learned that she is 2 months pregnant. But she remembers she has no one to share this happiness with and her smile dies.

Ok that's it………i know u guys hate me for separating them…but had to be done…im sorry :[ plz comment and tell me if you liked it

I kno nothing happened much but in the next part u'll see Tannu living her new life and the entry of some new ppl hint [K/A] who could it be?

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