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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
awwwwwwwwwwww so cute part finally they r together forever lol i am sooooooooooo happy yay

yes it was misty that idiot yuk thank god she went to jail forever ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

awwwwwwwwwwwwww they got married again that was so sweet of zaib

this ff is going to be end soon i am gonna really miss this ff

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon and i also know that u gonna start new ff soon hopefully its about angad and kripa ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: jdsean

Just got caught up. I knew Tannu, wouldn't have acted like that deliberately. At least Mishti is going to pay for what she didn. Glad Tannu is back with her family now. Can't wait for more.

aww thnx im glad u liked it...i know i just had to get rid of the sadness and make it disappear....im glad also....i will continue asap....thnx for commentin

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

awwwwwwwwwwww so cute part finally they r together forever lol i am sooooooooooo happy yay
aww thnx lol i kno together again...i can feel ur happiness lol
yes it was misty that idiot yuk thank god she went to jail forever ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
haha i kno i had to get rid of her lol yep now shes stuck in jail
awwwwwwwwwwwwww they got married again that was so sweet of zaib
lol yep the romantic zaib lol
this ff is going to be end soon i am gonna really miss this ff
i kno dont want to end...maybe i'll write some more parts but this time all romance and happiness...have the kids grow up wat u think??
pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon and i also know that u gonna start new ff soon hopefully its about angad and kripa ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
haha i remember mi promise dont worry...angu/kripa it shall be lol dont worry i will comtinue that fic as soon as i finish this one...but some ppl dont want it to end so im thinking of writing some more and than ill finish it and then start on the krips/angu one yea?
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
will continue asap promise
love ya
luv u 2
mittal

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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: lovestorm

aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! yipeee!!!! omg i'm sooo happy dat dat stupid "witch" ๐Ÿ˜‰ is in jail now!!!! ha! lol i can feel ur excitement she wanted to take zaib away from tannu? yep she thought she could but never gonna happen ๐Ÿ˜‰ now she's away from the civilized society! ๐Ÿ˜† haha so true i had to get rid of her somehow so jali it is lol wen she was talking to tannu i honestly wanted to kill her ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก aww i kno i wanted to kill her two she was soo mean n rude n well jealous she made me soooo angry ๐Ÿ˜ก haha i can feel ur anger i was just like i'm goin to hav to get mi danda to stop her haha danda and beat her up lol but den i guess zaib came so i let her go b/c i thought it wud seem more romantic for her hero to save her ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† awww so aweet of u letting zaib handel her lol
wen they spoke about tannu's wedding to zaib she was ๐Ÿ˜ณ n dat made giggle ๐Ÿ˜† it was soo cute and den zaib was all ๐Ÿ˜ƒ n dat made giggle too ๐Ÿ˜† haha i kno i thought tannu hadn't blushed for a while and zaib hadn't been naughty for a while so added that and besides had to get them together again
n wow! the "suhagraat"! so intense ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† !!! totally loved it! hehe i was like oh man hope i dont write somethin stupid and it came out like that...so glad u enjoyed it and aww u dedicated the part for me? you're sooo sweet! ๐Ÿ˜›thnx...i told u that i would get their distance away and get them close so...yea dedicated to u since u gave me lots of ideas without even knowing it lol n y do u want end it? ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ plz dont ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ it makes me go all ๐Ÿ˜† but if u need to itz fine i guess... aww i dont want to...ok how abt i write more like get the kids grown up and then end it happy and romantic what u think?

rinkz

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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

yep would love to see some romance and happiness before u end this ff and ofcourse children grow up lol

continue soon

love ya

mittal

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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

Part 10

The next morning greeted a sleeping Zaib with a chirpy tuneโ€ฆhe groaned unhappily and reached for Tannuโ€ฆonly to find cold air. He opened his eyes and saw Tannu no whereโ€ฆhe listened for sound in the bathroomโ€ฆbut the familiar sound Tannu was not heard. He picked up his phone and sent her a messageโ€”"where r u Tannu?" Her reply came only a second later. "im in the living roomโ€ฆwith pari and krishโ€ฆget ready and come down ill make breakfast 4 u". He smiled as he thought about Pariโ€ฆhis pari she was so beautiful and perfectโ€ฆthe result of his and tannu's loveโ€ฆand Krishโ€ฆhis new son he learned from Kavya everything about him and was glad that Tannu adopted himโ€ฆhe was so cute and like an angel. He went up to the bathroom and got ready. 15 minutes later he came down wearing blue jeans and a white sleeveless shirt. He saw Krish looking after Pari with an overprotective gaze, his arms crossed over his small chest and standing there looking around for any sign of dangerโ€ฆjust like a bodyguard. Zaib smiled and went to the kitchen to see Tannu dressed in a white sari with the pallu wrapped tightly around her waist and her hair clipped backโ€ฆshe was making omelets and toast. She turned off the gas and placed the toast and omelets on a plate and turned around to see Zaib leaning against the fridgeโ€ฆwatching her with a smile. She walked to him and handed the plate to himโ€ฆhe didn't take itโ€ฆstill smiling and looking her up and down. She frowned and shook her head. She placed it on the table and walked back to the living roomโ€ฆhim following her with the plate. She sat down and picked Pari upโ€ฆplaying with her. She looked up and saw him still not eating.

T- uff zaib will u eat already?

Z- no

K- why not dad?

Z- simple ur mom is not feeding me

T- zaib ur not a kid eat it urselfโ€ฆim gonna put pari in her bed.

She went upstairs and laid the sleeping the baby in her and Zaib's room. She made sure there were pillows around her so Pari wouldn't fall out of the bed. After kissing Pari's forehead she went downstairs to find only Zaib there.

T- where did Krish go?

Z- he's playing with the others in the backyard

T- oh ok then

She sees the food still untouched and glares at him.

T- what is this zaib? Please eat

Z- not until u tell me what's wrong with u

T- what r u talking about?

Z- u've been acting weirdโ€ฆand I noticed you not looking in my eyes for more than a second

T-โ€ฆuhhhโ€ฆI don't know what ur talking about

Z- yes u do now tell me

T- wohโ€ฆwhat mishti said in the hospitalโ€ฆabout u and herโ€ฆis itโ€ฆis it true?

Z- what did she say?

T- u and her togetherโ€ฆin a physical way

Z- hell no like I would ever touch her in that way

T- ohโ€ฆwell ok then

Z- waitโ€ฆthat's what been on ur mind?

T-โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.yea

Z- idiotโ€ฆI admit I dated her but the farthest I've been with her is kissing and that wasn't pleasant either.

He pulls her in his lap and hugs her close to himโ€ฆshe rests her head on his chest and smiled happilyโ€ฆyes he was hersโ€ฆand only hers.

~~15 years later~~

We see a woman's back as she opens a doorโ€ฆmessy and definitely a guys. There were posters of cars, girls, sports, and singers on the wallsโ€ฆa plasma 21 hanging off the wall, a desk with an apple laptop. There were clothes everywhere on the floor, the chairs, and table. She shakes her headโ€ฆher black hair falling down her back in layers. She was wearing a red sariโ€ฆher eyes are shownโ€ฆgreen. She goes to the guy lying on the bed. His face is hidden in his pillowโ€ฆhis black hair messy and long. She goes to him and starts shaking him. Her whole face is shownโ€ฆits Tannu she looks older but still her beautiful self.

T- wake up Krishโ€ฆu have college remember

K- ugghhhโ€ฆlet me sleep momโ€ฆim soooooo tired

T- im not surprisedโ€ฆu were partying yesterday now get up don't make me get your fatherโ€ฆu know he'll pour cold water on u

K- no don't call himโ€ฆim up im up

He sits up and shows his faceโ€ฆhis hair falling on his forehead and his blue eyes were innocent and naughty at the same time. He looked sleepy yet his sleep seemed to vanish after his mom mentioning his dad and cold water. He gets up and hugs herโ€ฆtowering over her small frame. He was now 6'2 taller than his dad by one inch. He was wearing loose jeans and no shirtโ€ฆshowing his six pack and muscles to the world. She walks out of the room as he goes to the bathroom he comes out 15 minutes later with a towel wrapped around his waistโ€ฆdaring to fallโ€ฆhis hair wet and sticking to his neck and forehead. He opens his closet and takes out blue loose jeans and a sleeveless green shirt. He puts them onโ€ฆcombs his hairโ€ฆmesses it up by running his hand through it. He gets his black sunglasses and put it in the pocket of his jeans. He gets his keysโ€ฆwallet and walks down the stairs. He sits down and starts eating. He looks up as Zaib comes downโ€ฆstill the same but older. He was wearing jeans and a white shirt. He sits down and greets everyone. 5 minutes the three looked up as a girl came down. She was wearing a black churidar and looked beautiful. She looked just like Tannu but her smile and eyes were Zaib'sโ€ฆthis was the beautiful and innocent Pari Khanna. She sits down and eatsโ€ฆafter their done the two kids leave in Krish's sports car. The parents watched smiling softlyโ€ฆtheir little babies were grown up. Tears came in Tannu's eyes as memories of the kids growing up flashed in front of her eyes. Zaib wiped them and kissed her forehead as they stand at the doorstepโ€ฆwatching silentlyโ€ฆhappilyโ€ฆlovinglyโ€ฆtheir two kids drove away in the sun. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

~~THE END~~ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

ok this is the official end of this storyโ€ฆfor real this time lol

Thanks a lot to sweet_mittal BABY-GIRL7 cutie13 jdsean armagham0 prabhi and of course lovestorm for ur commentsโ€ฆthey really encouraged me to write the story faster and fasterโ€ฆim sad that this story is done yet happy because now I can write more fics lol I hope you all had a fun time reading this story and will hopefully be with me on my next story commenting as sweetly and kindly as you have done on this one :] ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Luv

Rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

yep would love to see some romance and happiness before u end this ff and ofcourse children grow up lol

continue soon

love ya

mittal

haha ok i finished it for real and didn't write a lot hope ur not diappointed but i wanted to get it over and done with lol so srry if u dont like it๐Ÿ˜ญ

rinki

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
aww tht was a cute ending..but i'm sad it's over.. I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOUR NEXT FF ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜› i hope it's about angad/kripa or even zaib/tannu. can't wait plz continue soon! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
hey dear it was simply great ending i am gonna miss this ff very much

but i am sure u will start the new one soon

awwwwwwwwwwww so cute part krish and pari grown up so fast

lol krish is like zaib late night parties and late for the schools ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue soon the next ff
love ya

mittal ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
heyy!! this last part ๐Ÿ˜ญ waz aweesooommeee!!!! ๐Ÿ˜†
i've always loved the idea of one of the two waking up and the first thing dat the lover thinks of his premika ๐Ÿ˜† (i thought i'd be overusing the word lover if i said it again๐Ÿ˜† ) but seriously i just love that concept itz soo cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ n haha he sent her a text!! dat was definitely very very original ๐Ÿ˜† loved it ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜›

the part where krishh was guarding his baby sister made my heart glow, totally loved dat part too ๐Ÿ˜›
wen kripa was making food for zaib n he wudn't eat b/c mommy wasn't feeding him made me giggle soo bad ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† n b/c kripa was still bothered about wat mishti said waz sooo cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜› i was likee aww she cares so much obviously if the thing had been reversed angad wud have brought the house down with all his white spitting rage ๐Ÿ˜†

n the way you described krishh ๐Ÿ˜ณ sounds pretty ๐Ÿ˜› hot hot ๐Ÿ˜‰ funny how after father i'm crushing over son ๐Ÿ˜† n jiya seems pretty sweet and innocent itz very cute n how both of them look over the days both of them have seen together was very cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ i'd love to have someone like dat wen i grow old ๐Ÿ˜ณ really l000ved the way you ended it was sooooooooo soooooooooooo soooooooooooooooo sweeet ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜†

i really loved reading your ff soooooo soooooo sooooo (ok imma stop dat now) n i'm counting on you for the next ff!!!!!! so u betta... or else... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† jk

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