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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
that was awesome and fantastic
GREAT!
PLZZZZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Guys ,I really am so happy that u all r liking my FF,I am just thinking of adding some more masala to the story to make it happy ,so hang in there!
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
very nice FF...pls continue..! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
This is soooooooo good! Please continue soon!!!!! LOL for the first time in weeks, I have a smile on my face after reading something about these two cartoons!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Ok ,on your requests,here's the plan

Nana asks Ridz tu pyar karti hai na hero ko?

Tune usko I love u bola?

She goes quitely Ha!

To ab tujhe bas yehi gussa hai ki usne tujhe bataya nahi Muskaan ke sath jane ke bare me?

She says ha!
Tujhe aur koi problem hai usse?

She says bas uske attitude and behaviour se mai pareshan ho jati hoo
aur wo mujhe sochne par majboor kar deta hai!

Nana goes ek minute,mujhe ek baat bata?

Hero ne kabhi tujhse bewafai ki?

kisi aur ladki ke bare me socha?

tera kabhi faida uthaya?

kabhi tere bare me bura socha?

Ridz goes into flashback and thinks of the scene when Armaan said

Mai kabhi bhi tumhare bare me bura nahi sochta ,
Tum bohot khoobsurat ho scene and
the scene where Armaan had learnt Urdu to impress her

Then she thinks to herself that Armaan always made great efforts to impress her and keep her happy

She now starts thinking of all the times when Armaan always stood up for her and supported her,

Vivek scene,

Anjie adoption scene,

Vijay dying scene and lots more

and she starts to realise that Armaan changed himself so much just to keep her happy and suddenly she thinks of the scene

when Armaan before leaving Sanjeevani said that

Mai roz subah sochta hoo ke aisa kya karoo jisse tumko problem na ho

and the scene today where he said maine apne aap to kitna badla ,bas tumhare liye
and tears start rolling down Ridz's cheeks!

Nana thinks ke plan batane se pehle hi ispe hero ke pyar ka asar hona shuru ho gaya!

Nana says O' bulbul matlab Dr Riddhima

then Ridz starts wiping her tears off and says

Nana mai Armaan se bohot pyar karti hoo,

Mujhe uske sath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha,

Usne mujhe Muskaan ke bare me nahi bataya to kya hua,itna to kaha tha ke wo kisi dost ki madad karne jaa raha hai!

and she gets all charged up and says

Nana aap mujhe batao mai kya karoo?
Nana goes tu hero se uski dil ki baat jaanna chahti hai na?
to sun ................................


and then they go into the silent mode where they r planning and we can't hear anything and Ridzie is so involved and really wants her plan to work


Now we will go to the scene where Armaan tells Ridz off for following him!

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
plz cont asap frm wer did u get the ideas????

they r jus ausomi i wish this happens!!!!!1
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
heyyyy!!!!
jst red yr ff
its choooooo gud!!!!
cant wait till u cont da nxt part!
its getin intrestin!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! Plz continue sweety.. I m dying 2 know..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

contd.......

Armaan yells at her and says

Why are u following me like a baby?
She is still smiling away and Armaan yelling at her made no difference

Armaan takes her to a corner and says madly
Tum mujhe batao ki tumhari problem kya hai?
Kyu mera peecha kar rahi ho,mujhe akela kyu nahi chod deti?

Ridz's smile slowly turns into a sad face
and she starts crying

He then gets really worried
Kya hua Riddima?
she's still crying
Kya hua bolo to?

and then she starts laughing like a maniac again

A very surprised Armaan thinks ke ye isko hua kya hai?

then he thinks ke

Arey isne bhang to nahi pili?

Ridz still in a naughty and funny mood
keeps laughing and starts dancing

Dancing around the whole BB court and singing to herself
"Ye Ishq hai baithe bithaye jannat dikahye"

Armaan remembers the time when he said this to her and they had shared a cute moment!

Armaan gives one of those frowny and painful looks jaise kyu tumne mujhe itna gham diya ? and mai tumse bohot pyar karta hoo look!

Ridzie is lost in her own world singing and dancing and now she stops by everyone and sings the song to each and every person

Angie and Atul come to their senses and think ye Ridzie ko kya hua hai?
kyu aise paagalo jaise gaa rahi hai?

Atul goes shayad usne bhang peeli hogi Anjali
and Anjie thinks ya! may be

Muskaan tries to stop Riddhima from making a fool of herself and says

Tumko kya hua hai Ridz?

Meri baat maano aur yaha thodi der ke liye baith jao!

Ridz goes Nai!
Armaan tumhare sath gaya tha na Punjab?

Muskaan thinks ke isko kaise pata ye baat?

and Ridz says isliye mai usse naraaz thi!
still drunk and not knowing what she is saying
Ridz keeps talking about Armaan to her!

Armaan sees all this and says to himself

Isko rokna hoga kyuki isko khud nahi pata ye kya bol rahi hai
aur jab nasha utrega jab bolegi,maine aisa nahi kaha

Now Ridz moves on from Muskaan and starts going round the Bb court like nutter!

Nana sees all this from far and says ,

Ye Dr Bulbul bhi bohot achi kalakaar nikli re and he notices Armaan getting very worried with Ridzie's craziness!

Lovely ji comes there and says

Oji Dr. Riddhima ji apko hua kya hai ji,

Aap kyu itna paagalo ki tarah naach rahe ho ji?

Ridz says Lovelyji Ye Ishq haai!

Lovely says ha jee Rahul jee shyly

Ridz shouts Rahul nahi ARMAAN!in the most drunken way

Everyone just turns round when Ridz says this

Armaan thinks of stopping Riddhima before she collapses and confesses her love , that is if she loves him still!

and he goes towards her

Ridz is standing in the middle of everyone now!

and everyone is just stunned to hear Armaan!........


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Do u really think I shud continue?
Then the story wud soon end
we've got a whole long weekend people
Ok I will continue soon if u guys like it ,please lemme know of who I shud focus on

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