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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Everyone,

First of all an apology to all the avid readers of this story, it took me a while to get to this story and come up with a good update that i actually liked... so to make up for that.. this is the longest update in the story so far=] hope you guys enjoy it and leave loads of comments for me and Naina... Thank you to every one who read even the silent readers but a double thank you to all those who commented..
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from SugaNain a.k.a Naina (the co-author)

Hi Everyone! So I hope you guys love this update because I know this story will get more fun. And Sara wrote this update.. And my sister got sum creative juices flowing in her veins! Give her lots of comments! Cause She deserves them! And if you guys need a flash back please go to this link! http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=862585 U will know what I mean when you get to that part! ENJOY!

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Chapter 7- FULL BLAST KICHDI

All of a sudden the phone in the front window rings… Dimple goes and picks it up..

Dimple: Hi….

ON the other side: HAHAHAH…. Liked my surprise???

Dimple: dad yeh kya hai…

Ranbir: tsk tsk tsk….. aur jo tumne kiya missy…

Dimple: but babajani I am a kid…

Ranbir: I know sweetheart but like you said I am ur baba jani..

Dimple: sighs ab kaun si punishment hai??

Ranbir: yeh to tumko baad main pata chal jayega.. sabko mere taraf sai love and by ……………..the way don't disturb us… ok?? Buh Bye!

Before dimple can say anything Ranbir hangs up the phone.

**Ranbir sitting in a comfortable sofa with the phone against his chin lost in thoughts**

Kanya walks in

Kanya: Ranbir you ok??? (touches his forehead) aaw is my baby sick….

Ranbir: sighs no just thinking ke bacha party ko kitna bara surprise milne wala hai…

Kanya: who sab bahut khush ho gaye… don't worry…

Ranbir: I hope so….

Kanya: Ranbir stop this nonsense…. You are the best father in the world… stop always doubting yourself…

Ranbir: but…

Kanya: ohho I said stop it na… that happened a long time ago…. Forget about it dear…. (referring to Naina's Story the prequel to Pyar Ki Presents)

Ranbir: I just feel so miserable about it….I hope everyone involved likes the present they will be giving each other…

Kanya kisses ranbir's cheek

Kanya: I didn't know my husband was so sentimental..

Ranbir pulls kanya into his lap….

Ranbir hugs her tightly….

Ranbir: aaaaah how in the world did I get so lucky… I must have done something good in my previous lifetime to be able to get you in my life and keep you there..

Kanya: I thought it was me who had probably done something good in my previous lifetime…

Ranbir: haha… and lightly kisses her lips.. After a while things get heated up…..

Unfortunately for them the phone rings at the wrong time…

Ranbir: (in an angry tone) Hello….

On the other side: r u oki???

Ranbir: Rohan beta… whats up???

Rohan: u know you could have told me beforehand….

Ranbir: where would the fun be in that….

Rohan: what are they getting punished for this time….

Ranbir: nothing really… just had to scare Dimple a bit… I just wanted them to have more time w/ their older bro for two three weeks….

Rohan: hahaha yeah right…. U just want two three weeks alone w/ Kanya mom…. Where is she??

Ranbir: u know Rohan…. Ur the prince of wrong times…. I get rid of those bacha's and my oldest one calls at the wrong time….

Rohan: ohho Ranbir Dad u need to learn to take opportunities when they present themselves to you not try to do something that is not fated to happen…

Ranbir:: what does that mean….

Rohan: nothing… when you figure it out you can tell me…

Ranbir: anyways.. how was ur latest mission?

Rohan: it was oki.. I got out alive…

Ranbir: cools… and Hows Sara?

Rohan: she's good… she just misses mom a lot.. she's stopped going on mission for the past two months…

Ranbir: Take good care of her….

Rohan: How can I not.. God may have taken away my mom but he also gave me two other mothers…. I don't ever want her hurt…

Ranbir: that's good…. Where is she??

Rohan: she is probably feeding the hungry little brats….

Ranbir: Here Kanya wants to talk to you..

Kanya: Hi Rohan.. kaise ho beta…

Rohan: fine Kanya mom and you??

Kanya: fine beta enjoy with the bacha party…

Rohan: Kanya mom ur coming for my 23rd birthday right….

Kanya: I wouldn't miss it for the world beta… u know that…

Rohan: yaaay all of my family together.. I love you guys… you have never let me feel that I was a lone in this world…. U, Ranbir dad, Sara mom Thank you so much…

Kanya: what is there to thank about?? You are my son…. U r never alone in this world…

All of a sudden Dimple comes and takes the phone from Rohan who looks like he has tears in his eyes…

Akaash walks upto him and gives his older brother a hug…

Dimple: hi mom… thank Dad for the best present ever…

Kanya: of course beta…

Dimple: muahs to you and dad we are going to go and have fun now… you enjoy your vacation…. And hangs up the phone…

Kanya just looks at the phone and rolls her eyes…

Kanya: typical Dimple…

Ranbir: hey kya hua??

Kanya: we're going to the UK for Rohan's B-day right??

Ranbir: nope me and Sara were planning his b-day to be on a cruise this time… What do you think??

Kanya: why was I not informed of this before?? (in an angry tone)…

Ranbir: we just talked about this a couple of days ago…I was going to tell you…and he tries to kiss her neck…

But Kanya pushes him away…

Kanya: When???

Ranbir a bit impatient bites her neck a bit too hard…

Kanya: OUCH!!!!!! You beast stay away from me…. And pushes him away…you never answered my question… when were you going to tell me???

Ranbir: soon.. and tries to kiss her again…

Kanya: narrows her eyes at him…. How soon???

Ranbir: can we please continue where we left off….. and well I am sorta planning something for Sara and Rohan….

Kanya: why do I know nothing of these plans that are running around in ur head like mice???

Ranbir: nice reference Kanya… I shudder to think of other references you would make…

Kanya slaps him on the back…

Kanya: TELL ME NOW…

Ranbir: oki oki babba calm down… Now I know where Dimple gets her stubbornness from.. I always thought it was me… but now I Know better… its you….

Kanya: stop trying to change the subject and tell me….

Ranbir: Well Sara knows that the cruise is for Rohan's B-day party….

Kanya narrows her eyes at him

Kanya: what are you planning for Sara….

Ranbir: well its not really me that is planning but me you and Rohan will be planning…. And we can get the kids involved…

Kanya: she's spent a lot of time taking care of Rohan… and never once though about herself…

Ranbir: and yeah now Rohan wants to do something for her… Can we now continue…

Kanya: if your talking about what we were doing before the phone interrupted us then yes….

Ranbir moves towards Kanya with a wolfish-devilish-sexy look in his eyes..

**Scene fades away**

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Hope you guys enjoyed and leave loads of comments =]




Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

That was a brill update...

i loved it... and those kids i just love them...

and as for sara's suprise... can i guess what it is?... lol

pls continue soon

Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Haila!! That was wonderful!! Soo cute! LOVE U SARA!!😃😃😃

Dimple: such a clever girl!

Rohan: Good to have a character back from my prequel

I love everything!!

*Now I'm in charge of next two updates! HehheheMuhahaha!
I actually started writing the next update and it is going to be soo much fun!**😉
*Hint sum new characters possibly**😉😉😉
Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow
sara excellent!
i thot u wuldnt update dis but thanx!
and plz continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
YAY u updated the update was reli good it was awsome 😊 and why did u have to fade the scene away couldnt u describe atleast sum of the romance 😭 and i have a Question if dimple and akash r like 7 then shouldnt rohan be like 19 or something cuz when dimple and akash were getting born rohan was 12 so how cum he is like turning 23???????? 😕
Edited by candy princess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: candy princess

YAY u updated the update was reli good it was awsome 😊 and why did u have to fade the scene away couldnt u describe atleast sum of the romance 😭 and i have a Question if dimple and akash r like 7 then shouldnt rohan be like 19 or something cuz when dimple and akash were getting born rohan was 12 so how cum he is like turning 23???????? 😕



We are like Ekta, we can change anyones age around. 😆😆 Muhahaha!
& Glad you noticed that, that means you really read Pyar Kiya Toh Darna Kya?😃

Thanks!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

reserving spot! I read half of it.My head hurts so bad! So I will come back and finish it later.

But so far it was amazing. you guys are great writers!!! ( I love both of you!!)

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Posted: 17 years ago
thank u for finally posting it,it was awesome,continue soon
suganain thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Well, It will be my job to update! It will be awesome!!
Coming Soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
read the update it was superb. it was a really short update after such a long time......
plz update soon like in the next few days.

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