Kismat Ka Karishma( new ff)*pt 8 pg 38* - Page 5

Originally posted by: *K@nik@*

nice intro..!! Will be waiting for the parts! 😉

thx kanika 😃

Originally posted by: vidu93

hey sakshi and muskaan
the intro is really very impressive

this ff is gonna rock 👍🏼
continue soon

thx vidu thats very sweet of you

Hi everyone thx a lot for all of the lovely comments and response i hope we continue to please you 😳

It was early morning around 6am. In the gupta house there was the beautiful humming of an aarti. When she turned around there stood her dad smiling with a tear in his eye.
R: arre papa aap roh kyu rahe hain? she said with a face full of concern while still holding the aarti thali.
Sh: beta yeh toh khsuhi ke asoo hain jab mujhe itne pyaari betiyaan hain toh mein kyu udaas hone laga.
R: papa aap bhi na and she put forth the thali
An: sorry di im late agin she said while smiling
The girl with the aarti pulled her little sisters ear R: anjali atleast wake up in time for aaarti har din late kab sudrogee tum she let go of her ear while laughing
An: zindagi bhar nahi tum hoh na now also laughing
R: putting the aarti foward maharani sabhai koh dekhiyeh toh humme permenant nokrani banane ka iradha hai kya she said while laughing 😆
An: waise toh nahi tha par aab tum itne pyaar se suggest kar rahi hoh toh sochna toh parega na 😆
R: putting the thali down hmm shaitaan now running after her
An: aare meh toh sirf maakaz kar rahi thi while runing around the house please di mein thak gayi hoon
R: stopping teekh hai chalo neeche maaf kiya
An: maaf toh tumhe karna he tha while making her way down as fast as possible
R: running after her tujhe toh mein abhi dekh thi hoon
Both girls saw there mum standing there or should i say riddhima's step mum and anjali's real mum.
P: riddhima yeh kya hain woh toh abhi bachi hain par tum toh samajh daar hoh na jab dekho dohno masti karte rehteh hain.
Hearing this riddhima felt bad but just kept a smile on her face and bended down and said
R: maa aaj mere akli din haincollege mein arshiwayad deejhi yeh ke main saphaltah pahoon aur sanjeevani mein kam karne ka moka mil jaye.
P: bas bas khush raho.
A: maa mujhe bhi mein kyu peeche raho she said while laughing
P: haan meri beeti khush raho bhagwan tumhe haar khushi deh.
Shashank (dad) walked over and said
s: yeh kya baat hain maa kya aayi toh papa koh bhool gaye
R and A: bending down at same time papa aap bhi nah
S: meri dono betiyaan zindagi bhaar khush rahein aur humesha aise hasti kehelti rahein.
Hearing this padma got jealous and walked in to the kitchen.

Meanwhile in another part of mumbai there was chaos in the malik house
K: arre rohan jaldi seh kapre pahen loh aur nashta kar loh meine tumhara nashta table par rakh diya hain khoobh acha parna she said while kissing the forhead of her 8 year old dekho na abhi papa koh jah kar bhi uthana hai aur phir aapke pyaare armaan chachoo koh bhi she said while moaning.
Ro: mummy mein chachoo koh utha tha hoon he said while runnig off before he got a response.
Rohan stepped into a room and poured water over his chachu.
R: ha ha ha aap bheeg gaye jaldi seh uthiya aaj aapka llast din hain college mein 😆
A: acha baba 😲 WHAT kya oh no rohan aaj last din hain aur late tumhe pata hain aaj mujhe pata chalega ki mein sanjeevani mein kam kar sak tah hoon yah nahi wish me luck and ran out of his bed bye bacha have a good day.
R: chachu mera toy dont forget and haan good luck
A: acha mere baap nahi bhoolonga
at the same time in another room in the malik house
K: shubhankar utho subhe keh saaat bhaj chuke hain office nahi jaana hain kya ek tum aur ek mere ladla armaan pata nahi kab sudhrohgeh
S: acha keerti panch minute mein aata hoon
K: tumhe pata hain pichle ek ghanta seh tum yeh keh rahe hoon keerti paanch minute abhi utho isse waqt.
S: getting out of bed teekh hain jaan but gussa mat hoh
K: chalo flirting bhand karo aur neeche nashta karne aah jahoon.

Precap:
Armaan and riddhima find out there results
Rahul and Muskaan introduced

That's all for now guys please comment and suggest your views 😃

hey muski nd sakshi-wow yaar i am vry impressd wth ur intro it ws to good nd armaan ws engangd intrestng nd wth he lvs her gud nd ridz eldr sis vry nce nd shub nd keerti lke AR totaly i lvd bth ur ff seems to be nce vry nce yaar nd precap ws gud lts see wht happnd............luv u bth.keep it up guys u bth rckd...........
luv yachna 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: yachna

hey muski nd sakshi-wow yaar i am vry impressd wth ur intro it ws to good nd armaan ws engangd intrestng nd wth he lvs her gud nd ridz eldr sis vry nce nd shub nd keerti lke AR totaly i lvd bth ur ff seems to be nce vry nce yaar nd precap ws gud lts see wht happnd............luv u bth.keep it up guys u bth rckd...........
luv yachna 😃 😃 😃

thx yachna di am soo glad you liked it you made my day 😃

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Hey Muskaan n sakshi!!

gr8 2 see u guys hv started an ff!!!!

luv ur character sketches...n da 1st part was really cute!!

Keep it up!!


Marisha
PS:thanq so much sakshi 4 da pm!!

thx sooooo much marisha di im really happy that you liked it 😳

nice part
plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

thanks for the pm

thx for the comment shalika 😳
anytime for the pm 😃