Kismat Ka Karishma( new ff)*pt 8 pg 38*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys,

me(sakshi) & muskaan having been reading wonderful ffs on this forum & have finally gained courage to start one ours..It is our first attempt at writing an ff but we both have worked really hard on it!we havent fully decided the storyline but lets see how the story shapes up but we'll try our best to give u interesting parts to read. since it is our first part plz forgive our mistakes.DO give ur suggestions so we can improve upon & give u beautiful parts to read/.

we r giving our introduction of charachters below:

do read , coment & tell if we should continue or not

INTRO:

ARMAAN MALIK(21 yrs old): He is a rich guy from mumbai. wants to pursue medical & become a famous doctor. He is good guy, flirtious but good at heart. he loves to play basketball.HE is young man of today . He is skeptical about marriage initially but agrees to marry & he falls in love with grl whom he is engaged to.(LETS SEE WAT FORTUNE HOLDS FOR HIM)

RIDDHIMA GUPTA(20 yrs old) : She is very simple grl from a small village madhupur. SHE has breathtaking beauty, is coy, intelligent & wants to become a doctor. The most commemdable thing abt her is that she respects her parents & loves her dad the most.She walks on the path made by her father & achieves most beautiful thing in life(her love)whom she was waiting for.

SHASHANK GUPTA: He is small buisnees man living in madhupur. He is a lovable father who wants to see her daughters happy & gives support in everything they want to do in life. He is an encouraging father who has a wish to see both their daughters settled in every way in life(be it career or marriage)

PADMA GUPTA: She is riddhimas step-mom & angali's real mom.She is a mean lady who is envy of ridz beauty & doesn't like her she barely talks to her& whenerver she does she either scolds or taunts.Often she n her husband have fights.

ANGALI(19 yrs old): she is younger sister ridz. she is very humourous & naughty. she is influenced by the movies & wants to show she is hip & trys wearing different clothes jeans, skirts & stuff not common in madhupur indeed. she is jhali but gud at heart & loves her sis a lot

ATUL(20 yr old): He is armaans best friend from school days . a modern boy but he is a total brat. Likes to flirt around & Doesn't believe in love. His parents live in america & doesn't care for him.(lets see wat fortune holds for him

MR MALIK: He is armaan & shubhankrs dad. a kind hearted man who becomes a child with his grandchild. He is an owner of big company yet his is down to earth & likes to spend time with family.

ill be introducing more characters during the story!!!!!!
DO COMMENT GUYS EITHER ITS GUD OR BAD. YOUR COMMENTS MATTER TO US A LOT

love:

Sakshi & Muskaan

~.~

INTRO CONTINUED- PG3

PART 1- PG 6

PART2- PG10

PART3-PG 16

PART4-PG 21

PART 5- PG 24

PART6- PG 26

PART7- PG 31

PART8- PG 38

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sabi2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great character sketch
do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabi2010

hey great character sketch
do continue

thanks sabi. waiting for more replies then we'll continue thanx alot sweety!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG
all opposites og DMG soooo good
well done muski and sakshi continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: swansea

OMG
all opposites og DMG soooo good
well done muski and sakshi continue sooon

thnx swancy for appreciating i know its all opposite!!!!but it will be fun to read then!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx & we'l try to post one tommorow!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sakshi n muski
wow yaar bada acha ff shuru kiya hai app ne to
very gudddddddddd 👏
luved da intro cont super sooooooooooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey sakshi n muski
wow yaar bada acha ff shuru kiya hai app ne to
very gudddddddddd 👏
luved da intro cont super sooooooooooooooooonnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

mahu(can i call u). thank u for ur gr8 comment luved it completely!!!!!!
most probably we'll post the 1st part by tommorrow!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.bahree

mahu(can i call u). thank u for ur gr8 comment luved it completely!!!!!!
most probably we'll post the 1st part by tommorrow!!!!!!


ofcourse yaar y not
will be waitin 4 tommorow
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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luved it do countinue it kidda sounds like the movie Vivah you know amrita and shahid arranged marrage but then started loving each other and amritas aunt did not like her. but still nice ff cant wait do pm me when next chapter is up.Thanx

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