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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
hi tia thanks for the pm,tia first of alli would like to apologize for not writing comments on your previous FF,have ben reading it silentlsorry busy with work,wil try my best to write comments,
For this new FF,i would like to say AWESOME,FANTASTIC,FABULOUS,EYE-CATCHING,CREATIVE,and lots more...really can't wait to know how the first meeting is,will riddz be kidnapped by ryan since she's the daughter of a business tycoon,or not,oh God really am eager to know how their first meeting is,galyou are so talented,do write more and if i don't write comments that does not mean im not reading it.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
luv the new concept 👏 👏 👏 ...sound very interesting....can't wait till ur update....totally looking forward to it.... 😳 😳 😳

continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

The concept is great, but where is the story? . 😭


My dear friend , I am waiting for the story. 😊
I love it 😊
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With lots of love 😛

Edited by ganguli - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
hey very gud concept tia......... another blast story........... wooooooooooooooo do cont soooooonnnnnnnnnn........ do pm me if u will cont...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Ohhk everyone,hers's the first part......

PART 1

One fine winter morning in Seoul..........

MITTAL MANSION
(Rosy is riddhima's governess since she was 2yrs old.....n now over the years,she has emerged to be her friend,guide and confidante.....Rosy,is just like a motherly figure to ridz....infact she cudn't have loved her own child more than riddhima...always beside her side wenevr ridz was in any problem......though ridz hardly was in any prob......rosy was extremely proud of ridz and secretly always thanked god and Mr.Mittal for such an upbringing in a foreign nation...)

8:00 am
Rosy:-Ridzi baby,wake up......papa is already at the breakfast table...now come on darling,u hv college today also....plzzzz get up.....now come on,be quick....

The scene shifts to a young girl in a large-four poster bed.....with black and red drapes.....she's totally buried inside her blanket.....but on hearing rosy's voice she looks up with half an eye-open....
Ridz:-Rosy........let me sleep na......itni sardi mein mein utne ka mann hi nahin karta....
Rosy:-(can speak hindi but in an anglicized tone)"baby,ab jaldi utho.....papa is already up ...he'll be leaving in a few minutes....n ur mom has already left for one of her charity functions.....papa naraaz hoga na....to see u late...come on..come on...
She added teasingly..."aur waise bhi tum itna sota rahega ...toh tumhara prince charming aakar chala bhi jaayega...phir hamesha wait kartein rehna....."

On hearing the word prince -charming...ridzy was wide awake in a jiffy....she smiled shyly.....this was the dream which she saw every nite...abt her prince-charming n how one day he'll come to take her.....in a grand way......
Ridz:-"accha,aisa kaise chala jaayega...main toh usse tightly pakad ke rakhoongi.....jaane hi nahi doongi....
n woh mujhe chchod ke jaa hi nahin sakta..aur waise bhi mera shehzada toh millions mein ek hoga...jiska bahut bada empire hoga....jo sabse zyada famous hoga,,,duniya ke har leading newspaper mein uski photo chchapegi....lekin abhi toh mujhe apne sweetheart papa n tumhare sath hi rehna hai...main itni aasani se tum logon ko nahin chchodne waali..."
Rosy:-"achcha baby,n woh kyun...???"
Ridz strted singing in her sweet voice...acttually it wass more of jumping on her bed and in her room....
"Hmm.... hmm....

Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge

Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2
Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge, apni adaa
Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

Hmm€ ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
Haan€ ham dil ki shehzaadi hai, marzi ki mallika
Sar pe aanchal kyun rakhe, dhhalka toh dhhalka
Ab koyi khush ho ya koyi roothhe, is baat par chaahe har baat toote
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

Hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
Ho.. hamein shauq mehendi ka na shehnaai ka hai
Hamaare liye toh apna ghar hi bhala hai
Sunta agar ho toh sun le kaazi, lagta nahin kabhi ham honge raazi
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2
Ab koyi khush ho, ya ho khafa, ham nahin badlenge apni adaa
Samjhe na samjhe koyi ham yahi kahenge
Ham toh bhai jaise hain, waise rahenge -2

Aa aa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, oh ho ho ho ho ho ..."

Ridz freshened herself up simulatneously......
It was always a pleasure to see ridz like this.....As ridz got ready,rosy's eyes were brimmed with tears......of happiness n pride.....as always,inspite of born n brought up in Seoul,she was Indian to the core....Ridz wore a salwaar-suit as uaual...and went down to her dearest papa,.....

AT THE BREAKFAST TABLE
Mr.Mittal was reading the elite newspaper "International Herald Tribune"...and the local daily"Seoul times".....but all of them were splattered wid the same headlines"Ryan...Ryan,....and Ryan..."
He read the same article in all the papers....
"Ever since the Abu Dhabi blasts..., both Ryan and his closest aide John Memon have absconded from Dubai. Ryan is currently believed to be living in some part of Korea,probably Seoul itself.....after moving from Dubai and Mauritius.... Whereas John Memon is believed to be staying in either Kenya or Malaysia or Calgary (Canada). In 2007, the Interpol, on being asked to issue a warrant for his arrest by the CBI, did so but Dubai and mauritius chose not to execute the warrant. He continues to operate extortion rings in the Soth -Asina and Middle-East countries....through his men in in the leading citis of these countries.....and is rumored to own several D-companies in South-East Asia, Africa and the Middle East. Several of his former gang members such as Al Capone,and Bernardo Provenzano have formed breakaway gangs of their own and continue to operate in the suburbs of Dubai. The Ryan gang are very innovative in their extortion tactics, using the likes of dreaded Seoul based Orthopedic Surgeon Dr. Malcolm Pestonji,M.S., to recover the loot on his behalf. The vicious doctor summons businessmen to his nursing home in Seoul and threaten them to pay up, or die! Nabbed by a police undercover team a few years ago, Dr. Pestonji cooled his heels for some time in jail, under Seoul LAw, before being released....Meanwhile Ryan continues to roam free....noone has ever seen his face...it's a hidden identity...but his eyes continue to haunt the hearts of many.......(and a picture of ryan's deadly eyes..with the remaining face covered up ina black cloth was given.....)

This is a everyday business Mr.Mittal thought.....and it was their greatest misfortune that This Ryan and gang were currently based in Seoul.....He loathed such people....they were burden to the world and to humanity...Mr.Mittal thought such people shud be slain or slaughtered or given capital punishment without any trial..wen caught...
Just then the apple of his eyes...his princesss came running down the stairs....
Ridz:-"goodmorning papa,sorry thoda late ho gayi....aap kaise ho.."Ridz finished in one breath..
Mr.Mittal:-"bas bas,pehle saans toh le lo...come n have breakfast first...phir baat kartein hain...now come on,be quick..."
Ridz came n sat down.."papapapr mein kya news hai...."
Mr.Mittla:-"kuch nahin beta,wahi har roz waali baat ...gangsters and mafia and murder..chalo strt ur breakfast...
The breakfast was finished in silence.....as per Mr.mittal's rule.....As ridz finished her food,Mr.Mittal kissed her on her forehead and bade her goodbye...giving the usual round of instructions which he kn he needn't reind her about.....
AS he left for his office,Ridz picked up the paper from her father's side...an the first thing she lookede at was ryan's deadly eyes...she read the article in silence....."baap re,aise log....wt to say....i hope mera saamna aise logon se kabhi na ho....main inse door hi bhali...warna kya pata...mujhe bhi khatm kar de...lekin yeh log bachpan se toh aise nahin honge...zaroor koi na koi majboori toh hogi hi...par aisi bhi kya majboori ki logon ki jan lene pe utar aaye...anyways,i shudn't bother with this Ryan or.....his gang ..wtevr..."
Ridz folded back the paper....and left for her collge.........

MEANWHILE,in A REMOTE...literally UNDERGROUND AREA OF SEOUL.....
Few people were feverishly discussing sumthing.....
one of them, spoke up....."sir,wen shud we carry out the nxt mastermind plan of urs...we think it's nearly time.....
A man..wearing a black dress,with a black headband,stubble,and blood-shot eyes...looked up..from the plan he was studying and finalising on a table...."Silence...im waiting for abbajaan's order...n then ....BANG!!!!! UR GONE MR.MITTAL!!!!!!Srt counting ur days....."

TO BE CONTINUED....
Guys,i hope u all njyed it...well,it's just the first part n so i had to strt like this...but im sure u all can guess....wt's gonna happen in the nxt few parts....NJOY READING AND PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ POST UR COMMENTS.....NEED THEM TO CONTINUE FURTHER......
Will post the nxt part asap..... 😊




Edited by tia_ahuja2007 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
this is just amazing and addicting
👏 👏 👏
its great yaa please do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sabi2010

this is just amazing and addicting
👏 👏 👏
its great yaa please do continue soon

thanx a lott for ur comment😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
hey cool concept haan... 👏
continue soon...
it is qt different to imagine armaan aka ryan as a ganster.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
wooow
nce updte
vry addictin ff lol
nyywz really gd
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part
updte soon plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: akki2211

hey cool concept haan... 👏
continue soon...
it is qt different to imagine armaan aka ryan as a ganster.. 😉

thanx a lotttt...i know it's difficult to imagine armaan as ryan...tht's why wanted to give him a new avatar😊

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