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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Guys,
Thinking wat she is doing here, she dont deserve to be here ? Sorry for being here..Par jo kaam shuru kiya tha usay khatam bhi toh karna hai..Isliye Im going to continue with The bore Nightmare.........

Come Fall in Love....

So Plz read it...

Rameena......
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Posted: 20 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=38502


RAAH - E - ISHQ…………..

Kashish,Kanan, soniya and Chameli goes to The Mall…….
Kashish takes an excuse from chameli by saying that she had to meet her friend…….
Kashish comes out of the mall and Goes straight to sujal's Office….
Andar chali jaati hai, Reception par enquire karti hai kay Sujal office may hai ya nahi…….
While soniya aur Kanan enjoys themselves at the mall aur Chameli kay questions answer kar karr kay thak jaatay hai………

Itna nervous hai kashish…..
Usay kuch sudhar nahi raha hai….Ek taraf khush hai kay sujal say milaygi par ek taraf Fikr bhi hai kay Sujal Kay office may agar Sujal nahi hua toh kya Hoga, aur Chameli nay kya kiya hoga…Itnay Tensions layti hai Bachchi……..
Sab fikr kay saath Itni door say Sujal say Milnay aagayi hai par ussay yeh chand Khadam Bahut mushkil lag rahay hai..Yeh Faasla Bahut Lamba Lag raha hai…
Par Usay yeh sab sahna hoga…
She goes and stands Outside his Cabin……..
Kashish Calls Sujal ……….
Kashish : hello.
Sujal : haan Bolo kashish,.
Sujal is Looking Busy……
Kashish : Main kya bolu, abhi busy ho baad may call karti hun…..
Sujal : Nahi ek client hai doosray phone par…..Ek minute haan…..
Kashish is waiting..
Sujal : Haan Kashish,
Kashish : Bas tumsay baat karnay kay liye Call kiya tha..
Sujal : Kyun Bahut yaad aarahi thi meri..
Kashish : mujhe nahi to..
Sujal : waise, aaj tumhari awaz bahut clear aarahi hai..Aisa Lag raha hai jaise tum meray Bahut paas ho..
Kashish : Main toh humesha tumharay paas hi hoti hun par tum hi nahi mehsoos kartay ho..
Sujal : achcha, Mehsoos kaise kartay hai…
Kashish : Tum nahi samjho gay..
Sujal : toh tum hi samjha do..
Kashish : Rahnay do, tum kyun karogay tumhari zindagi main meri koi jagah hi nahi hai.
Sujal : kashish, kaisi baatien karrahi ho , tabiyat to theek hai..tumhay pata hai tum nay meri kya halat kardi hai..
Kashish : Main nay..
Sujal : haan Tum nay , Jaagtay sotay uthtay baithtay bas tum hi nazar aati ho..Itna tense rahta hoon…Kuch samajh nahi aata.. tumhay bahut miss karraha hun ,kaash tum yahan hoti...
Kashish : Main tumharay paas hi toh hun, bas aankhien band karo aur mujhe hi paogay..
Sujal : Ab aankh band karnay ko bhi darta hun, kyun kay jab aankh band karta hun toh tum hi dikhti ho aur jaise hi aankh khulti hai tum ghayab hojati ho..kaash aisa hojaye kay main aankh kholu aur tum meray samnay aajao….
Kashish : Ok dekhtay hai tum aankh band karo...
Sujal : Kya ?
Kashish : Uffoh Tum ankh toh bandh karo...

Sujal apni aankh band karta hai aur Kashish sujal kay Cabin may jaakar uskay saamnay thair jaati hai…….
Sujal opens his Eyes…

Sujal : Kashish..(Woh apna haath bardata hai aur Jab Kashish kay Face ko chuta hai toh …)
Sujal : Kashish…
Song Time……
Dil Yeh Chahe Yeh Lamhe Bas Yahin par ruk jaayen,
Saamnay tum raho aur Hum tumhay dekh..............

Kashish : Surprise..
Sujal is soo Happy..
Sujal : Tum yahan, kab,Kaise ?
Kashish : Haan Main aur yahan..
Sujal : Kashish I don't believe this, tum yahan ? Main koi sapna toh nahi dekhraha na…
Kashish : Nahi Sujal , Yeh main hi hun aur koi sapna nahi hai…
Kashish : Baithnay kay liye nahi kahogay ?
Sujal : Baitho na tumhara hi to Office hai..
Kashish sits on the chair.Sujal is standing infront Kashish resting on the desk....
Sujal : Kashish kuch logi...
Kashish : Lungi na..
Sujal holds the chair and turns it.....
Sujal : Kya, bolo..
Kashish : Tumhay..
Sujal kneels downs towards Kashish...
Sujal : Banda Hazir hai.
Kashish pushes him away and stands up...
Kashish : Ab chalti hun, Kanan aur Soniya mera wait karrahay hongay..
Sujal stops Kashish by holding her Dupatta....
Sujal : Abhi toh aayi ho, theek say baat bhi nahi ki aur tum ho kay Jaana hai........
Kashish apna pallu sujal kay haath say churdaati hai......
Sujal : Kashish Plz ruk jao na , Tum say itni saari baatien karni hai..
Kashish : Baatien bhi karlayna Par abhi Jaana Hoga.
Sujal :Theek hai ek shart par.
Kashish : Kya.
Sujal : Kuch kahna Hoga.
Kashish : Achcha Kya.
sujal : I LUV U..
Kashish is quiet...
Sujal : Meray Sawaal ka Jawaab Nahi diya tumnay.
Kashish tries to go.
Sujal stops her and asks her again.
Kashish ; Personal Matters Office may discuss Nahi hotay..
Kashish comes out of His Cabin.
Sujal : Par suno to.

Lift Scene ;

Kashsih gets into Lift, Sujal comes....
Sujal : tumharay Papa ko tumhari shaadi ki fikr hai ya Nahi.
Kashish : nahi.
One Lady enters and Lift starts.......
Scene Zooms to the hands........
Sujal tries to hold Kashish Hand But ends up holding Lady's hand..
Kashish Laughs..
Lady : disgusting.
Sujal : i m sorry, woh main...
Lift stops..
Kashish, Sujal gets out.........

On The Road.........

Sujal Pagal Kashish ko follow karraha hai...
Kashish : Sujal ,mera peecha kyun karrahay ho, Log kya sonchaygay.
Sujal : Ab chahay kuch bhi kahen saari zindagi tumharay peechay hi guzaarna hai..
Kashish : Par main tumharay saath chalna chahti hun ..
Aur dono ek saath chalna shuru kartay hai...
Aur Sujal kashish ko Icecream parlour layjaata hai....

At the Parlour........

Wahan Dono Baat kartay hai..
Kashish Sujal ko Nani kay Baaray main aur Yahan aanay ki wajah batati hai.......
Itni saari baatien kartay hai ki Kashish bhool jaati hai ki Kanan aur soniya uska wait karrahay hongay aur Sujal apni Meeting bhool jaata hai.....
Sujal+Kashish kay liye Icecream laynay kay liye jaata hai, Kashish Table par wait karrahi hoti hai..
Utnay main Peechay say Koi................

Soooooo aagay kya hoga, dekhtay hai Next Part main..


Rameena.........
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
itzz not a bore rameena i really lik dizz storyyy n many other memberzz doo....soo ur finally bak man...was wonderin whoz gona cont...i didnt no ur name by denn bt now i doo...sooo plzz cont....


nids
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
veryyy gdd plzz or likho naa

nids
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
waisa izz no1 interested in da idea dat sum1 gave ka agar rajeev nahi hai kth mein kya hum assume nahi karsakta hai ke wo ab bhi hai...letss cont.. frm dat part jab snk dono khushi khushi milna araha tha nnn da rain cenee...i cant rite people ...plzzz tumlog story shurooo karo na...plllllzzzzz

nids
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
Oh thank god Rameena u r back with ur story.Today's part was just too good 👏 👏.Please write more
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
Hi Amna ...
Thanx for the same ...ur right ..both ur stories ROCKSSSSSSSS......have gr8 fun and keep smiling ...... 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
wasie Amna ...u can drop that "r" and "7382" before and after my id ...m Manu n glad to be a part of this forum ..but then plz plz post ur next part soon ......I have already checked this thread for the 20th time since morning for ur stories !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉
Edited by rmanu7382 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
This is for u NIDS
Hey man ur story's damm cool .........keep going .......bye 😊 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
great work rameena as alwayz 👏 👏 ...magar plz...ab so mat jana 😆 , jaldhi se next part bhi likhna!!.......i am realllly happy keh sujal aur kashish mil liye! 😛 😳 ...... continue soon plz!!! 😳

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