Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 5

nids, sun, kiran, amna, farah, rameena gr8 parts...
rameena atlast u came back... i thught u went to "neverland" and wont cum back.... 😆....

pleace continu with pyar to hana he tha pleace write soon i really wan know what happend next

Good to see u back rameena great going.

Farah jaldi next part post karna intezar karna mushkil hota hai.

Natz pls post the next part of ur story soon. Waiting for ARMAAN.

hi! friends continuing with the story "A LOVE STORY"

Sujal is unwell. Veena goes out and asks kashish to look after Sujal. Sujal's fever again begins to rise. Kashish gets food for him.

Sujal comes out of his past. He says to himself Diya ke ilawa meri zindagi mein koi nahin aa sakta. Aaj bhi mein sirf Diya se hee pyar karta hua par kyon mujhe Kashish aachi lagti hai. Sujal's heart goes for Kashsih but he refuses to accept it.

The day passes by. Its dinner time. Veena gets dinner for sujal. But sujal wanted to see someone else yes its Kashish. Downstairs kashsih parents call they are also coming to India as they want to settle in India. The merger is also taking place. Chetan convinces them to stay with them till they find a good house to stay. Kashish is really happy she wants to go up and tell sujal abt it and even suajl wants to meet kashish.

Kashish decides next morning she will tell sujal abt her parents coming to India. She suddenly starts to think kyon mein apni khushiya sujal ke saath share karna chahti hua. Kitna janti hua usa mein kuch din pehl hee toh mili hua usa phir kyon. Kashish yeh sochte hua so jati hai.

Upstairs Sujal takes out Diya's photograph and says to her pata nahin kyon kashish ki taraf khicha jaa raha hua. Aachi lagne lagi hai woh mujhe. Shayad isliya woh tumhare jaisi hai isliya. Thinking this he goes off to sleep woth Diya's photograph in his hands.

Four days have passed Sujal is now fine. Still a bit weak but no fever. ITs a Sunday morning but sujal doesnt remember that it is a sunday as usual he gets up at 7:30a.m goes to simran's room and wake her up.

Sujal: Chal gudiya uth jaa aaj maine tujh shool choorunga. Jaldi kar.

Simran: Par aaj tho chuti hai.

He kisses her and says chal sooja. He thinks it must be some holiday in Diya's school but still doesnt realise it is a sunday. He comes back to his room and gets ready to go to the office.It is 8:30am by now. He thinks aaj mumma nahin aaye shaya raat mein late sooye hoongi isliya.(Every morning Veena comes to his room to wake him up)

Just then veena comes.

Sujal: Good morning mumma.

Veena : Kahan jaa raha hai is waqt.

Sujal: mumma aab tho maine theek hua aur office jaa sakta hua.

Veena (smiles and pats sweetly on his cheeks): Sunday ko kaun office jata hai.

Sujal realises it is a sunday and says tabhi simran ne kaha aaj chuthi hai and hits his forehead with his hand and smiles.

Then veena sits ont he sofa and and sujal sits next to her. He keeps his head on her lap. Veena sujal ko pyar karti hai aur dekhti hai ki sujal thoda sa baadla hua hai uske chehra par kushi hai jo usne itne dinoon mein nahin dekhi. Veena feels happy seeing her son happy after a long time. As earlier he used to hardly smile.

Veena: tuthodi der aur sooja.

sujal: jee mumma

Sujal thinks kya hogaya hai tumhe itna bhi yaad nahin aaj sunday hai. agar kisi aur ko pata chalta tho woh kya sochta. ( he means kashish).

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It is suday and today sujal is having lunch with evryone. Rishi is cracking jokes to make sujal happy. All of them jst love him and kashish cld jst see it how much sujal is loved by all of them. Chetan and lalith are out of town for a business meet.

Later on all of them go and sit in the living room.
Rishi comes to sujal who is sitting with simran, piyush and kashish.

Rishi : chalo bhaiya Caram khelte hai.

sujal: tum loog kehlo maine nahin.

Rishi : no bhaiya u hv to ply.

Simran: Nahin bhaiya mere saath ludo khelenge.

Rishi to tease simran.

Rishi: nahin bhaiya mere saath caram khelenge.

Simran: bhaiya aap mere saath ludo khelenge rishi bhaiya ke sath nahin

Rishi: nahin aap mere saath khelenge.

Sujal jst smiles and looks at both of them. he cant say no to both of them especially simran . though he doesnt want to play anything he says

Sujal: maine gudiya ke saath ludo keleonga.

Rishi: mujhe pata tha aap simran ke saath hee khelenge.

Rishi: piyush bhaiya aap hamare saath khelenge aur kashish didi aap bhi hamare saath kheliya.

Kashish: maine kuch nahin kheloongo bas tumhe khelta dekhoongi.

Sujal: Tum mere aur simran ke saath ludo kyon nahin khelti.

Kashish: (cant say no to sujal some how) theek hai.

Simran runs to her room to gets her ludo. Piyush, akshat, rishi and varun all start playing carom.

Kashish: Bahut pyar karte hai sab tumhe aur tum bhi sab ko bahut pyar karte hai.

Sujal: Insab ke ilawa auur kya hai meri zindagimein bas inke pyar ke wajah se hee tho......

Jst then simran comes.

Three of them are playing ludo. Kashish could see that sujal is letting simran win and is not trying at all to win as if he is playing so that simran gets happiness. She could see the happiness on sujal's face evrytime simran was happy, evertime she lauged made sujal happy. time passes and it is eveing time.

Rishi : chalo aaj hum sab dinner karne bahar chalte hai. Kashish didi bhi thoda ghum lengi.

Akshat : a very good idea. par kahan chale.

Varun : lets go to chanakya puri.

Piyush:yah that is grt idea.wah fujiya mein dinner karenge. it is a nice restaurant kashish u wll like it.

Sujal jaise hee restaurant ka naam sunta hi tho uski aankhon mein aansoo aa jate hai. Woh utha kar wahan se jaane lgta hai. Kashish sees him going up. She calls sujal. Sujal has his back towrds kashish.

Kashish: Sujal kahan jaa rahe ho tum aarahe ho na hamare saath.

Sujal: woh maine apne kamre mein aaram karne jaa raha hoon apne kamre mein. Maine nahin chal sakoonga kal office jaan hai. thoda rest karna chahta hua.

Kashish thinks may be he wan to rest that is why.

Rishi: arye Big B kahan hai.

Kashish : woh tho apne kamre mein chale gaye hai. Kahe rahe thee ki restkarna chahte hai. woh hamare saath nahin aa rahe.

Rishi: yeh kya baat hua maine Big B ko bullata hua.

Piyush: Rishi maine sujal se baat karta hua aur dekhta hua woh hamare saath kaise nahin aayega.

Piyush goes to sujal's room. Sujal is standing in his balcony. He has tears inhis eyes remembering Diya. Piyush enters his room but sujal doesnt notice him. he is lost on his own thoughts. Piyush goes and taps on his shoulder.

Piyush : kya hua tu kyon nahin aa raha hamare saath.

Sujal: nahin bas rest karna chahta hua. tum loong jaao.

Piyush : mujh nahin batayega kya baat maine tere ko achhe se jaanta hua.

Sujal; kuch bhi tho nahin.

Piyush: tere aankhen tho kuch aur hee kaha rahi hai. mujh baata kya baat hai.

Sujal: Woh jahan tum jaane kee baat kar rahe thee wahan par maine aur Diya nee uska last B'day manaya tha. Maine wah nahin jaa sakta. (with tears in his eyes).

Piyush: samjh sakta hua. Hum wahan nahin jaange kahin aur chalenge phir tho tu chale ga.

Sujal: nahin tum loong jaao kyo mere wajhe se tum loong aapna program channge karte ho.

Piyush : kya matlab hai tera. kya hum sab ek nahin hai. Tu chal raha hai hamare saath . Maine naa nahin sunooga. hum kahin aur jaange aur tu bhi aa raha hai. that is final.

Suajl agrees and then piyush hugs him. Since Diya left sujal piyush has taken care of sujal. though he is younger to sujal bt treated sujal as his younger to him in the last 3 yrs. He understands him really well.

All of them go to Vasant vihar for dinner. Everyone is talking but sujal hardly talks. Kashish dekhti hai sujal bahut chup chap hai sochti hai usko pooncho ya nahin par decide karti abhi nahin poochegi pata nahin sujal ko achha lagega ya nahin. Evryone tells wat they wan to eat but sujal doesnt piyush orders wat sujal likes. Sujal looks towards piyush he feels how much he cares for me. All of them have there dinner and sujal and simran are eating in one plate as he knows simran will not eat on her own.

Then they all go around the market. Sujal is walking wth simran and is happy seeing all of them happy. Tabhi rishi aata hai sujal ke paas.

Rishi: Big B movie dekhte hai.

Sujal: nahin aab ghar chalo kal gudiya ka school hai usko jaldi uthna hota hai. (he doesnt wan to watch movie at priya as it was one place where sujal and diya had lots oof movies together)

Rishi:naihn bhaiya aap ko dekhni paregi. koi baat nahin gudiya ko kal chuti dilwadena.

Akshat : yes bhaiya movie dekhte hai na.

Sujal: maine kaha na mujh nahin dekhni tum loong dekho maine ghar jaa raha hua.( sujal speaks in an irritating tone.)

Kashish is suprised as too suddenly kya hua sujal ko.

Piyush: Rishi , akshat jab sujal bol raha hai ki usko nahin dekhni tho usko pareshan kyon kar rahe ho.

Sujal in the mean time jst walks away from there with simran

Rishi & akshat: bhaiya hamara woh matlab nahin tha. we are sorry.

Piyush goes after sujal.
Piyush; arye sujal kahan ja raha hai.

Sujal: I'm sorry maine kaha tha na mujhe nahin aana mere wajhe se sab ka mood khrab ho gaya na. Tum loong kyon ziid karte ho.

Piyush : rishi mein kitna bachpana hai tu tho jaanta hai na phir.

Sujal; ismein kiddo ki koi galti nahin hai. Galti tho meri hai kya karoon.

Tabhi sab waha aajate hai Kashish, simran, varun, akshat, and rishi.

Rishi: Big B we r sorry.

Akshat : yes bhaiya we r sorry.

Sujal : Sorry tho mujh kahan chaihya aise hee tum par chila diya.

Rishi; no big B aap sorry kyon bolte hai humko zid nahin karni chahiya thee.

Sujal : arya agar tum loong zid nahin karoge tho kaun karega.

Then rishi, akshat and varun hug sujal.

Kashish is happy to see how all of them love each other she has tears in her eyes . She remembers her sisters who also love her lot. Sujal looks at her and is suprised. Then they all r returning home . Rishi , akshat, varun and piyush sit in one car. And sujal sits in his car with simran. Sujal is going home where as rest of them are going for a movie. KAshish says 'm tired would like to go hime and she comes and sits in sujal;s car. Sujal feels good that kashish is coming with him.

Sujal: tum se kuch pooncho i hope u wont mind it.

Kashish: nahin pooncho.

Sujal; tumhari aankhon mein aason kyon thee.

Kashish: kuch nahin tum sab bhaiyaon ka pyar dekh kar mujhe aapne behno ki yaad aa gayi woh bhi mujh bahut pyar karti hai. Par shayad itna nahin jitna sab tumse aur tum sab se karte ho.

Sujal: maine kahan yeh sab mujhe bahut pyar karte hai. Maine tho aaj daant diya sab ko. mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiya tha.

Kashish: Koi baat nahin kabhi kabhi aisa ho jata hai. Agar tum unse pyar nahin karte tho tumhe itna bura nahin lagta unhe daantne par.

Sujal jst smiles at her. They reach home. Kashish says good night to sujal and simran. Then sujal takes simran to her rooom asks her to change and then puts her to sleep. He comes back to his room he is thnking kashish kitna aache se sab rishton ko samjhti hai. Bahut aachhi hai woh. Kya kashish woh ladki hai jo meri zindagi mein Diya ki jagah le sakti hai.( for the first time sujal feels he loves kashish) Then he says it is too early to think anything like this i still hv to know her and she doesnt evn know my past. and i dont know whether she loves me also or not and evn if she does once she knows my past will she fell the same for me also or not.

Here kashish in her room thnks kitna galat sooch tha maine sujal ke baare mein usko kitni fikar hai sabki. Sab ko daanta bhi aur bura bhi sab se zayaad usko hee lag raha tha. kitna pyar karta hai sab se. Then she thinks kyon soch rahi hua sujal ke baare mein itna . kahin maine usko chahne tho nahin lagi, kahin mujhe usee pyar tho nahin hogaya hai. Shayad haan.Par paata nahin woh bhi mere baare mein aisa sochta hai ki nahin. Then she close her lights and goes off to sleep.

Golu -- I have alread y read ur stroy beforehand in a grp ... hint hint ... remember me?? ... anyhoo .. like always .. now ill let everyone here know that ur story is truly awsome and superb ... keep it going

Farah -- lovely parts ... well not the best ... well u kep our jodi apart ... so .. well i think charu is gonna tell rishi and rishi will tell sujal and of course he will come and try and stop kashish ... i seriously cnat wait for ur next past.......hurry ...

Kashish-Rox -- sangeet and mehndi were just marvelous ... i had a big grin on my face .. ur are really talented ... romance between the couple was great .. please post soon

other stories ... AARMAN, PYAR TO HONA HI THA , KEEP IT GOING, RAAH-E-ISHQ, ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY, AND SO ON ... all continue very soon .. ur stores are fantastic

👏 👏 wow golu....finally!...plz keep the rythm going....its great 👏

oh so sorry ja'na.vi.....chalo hopefully agli bar..itna dukh nahi hoga! 😉 ......hey par dont leak the story out 😉

da storiezzz man rrrr sooooooo ggggrrr888888!!!!!

plzzz cont....

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