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Posted: 19 years ago
saweraa....yaar ham bhi tumhari story ka intzaar karte hain 😉 😉 newayz thankz4 the longovly (long+lovly 😆 😆 ) part
& harpy.....suspence to khol dala tumne 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeevAC

nidhi....ur jus too good.....u know wat actually i like all these rifts.....it makes the story interesting 😉 😉 da only thing that i hate is---MURDERS(done by the writers 😆 )......but u don worry ur story is fab......I M LOVIN' IT 😆



but i LOVE doing murders 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 going saweraaaa aur haan thankx keh tum ne meri baat suni aur uss piyush ke backe ko mara 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
amna dadi dont call me BACHOO KI GANGSTER warna aapke naam mein aur izzath daal dongi .
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Posted: 19 years ago
ambri....tumne to aj tak 1 bhi murder nahi kiya 😉 😉 bas kehti rehti ho 😆
ok ok mera mat kar dena!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow Savera ...gr8 going ....aage bhi jaldi continue karo ....
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Posted: 19 years ago
here's the other one

JEEYEIN TO JEEYEIN KAISE ......BIN AAPKE ...

KASHISH HOME

kesar - kashish utho chalo 8.00 baj gaye

kashish -smiles in sleep) open her eyes very quity and then say aaj
mera din bahot achha hoga

(yeh kashish ki aadat hai ki woh har din yeh kahati hai ki aaj ka
din bahut accha hai bco her mother tought her that 2day is present u
can't change ur past and u don't know future so 2day is always urs)

kashish-good morning maasi(with smile)

kesar - good morning beta,ab chalon uto aur apani maharanion ko
uthao mere se nahi uthengi woh..
.
kashish main abhi jati hoon maasi aur thodi der mein charu aur mouli
ke saath neeche aati hoon

kesar - acchaa hai

kashish goes 2charu and mouli's room and kisses charu's forhead
first and tell her 2 wake up

charu-dee plzz sone do na pahle mouli ko uthao na ,woh muzse badi
hai na
kashish laughs and goes to mouli kisses her and say good morning

mouli-good morning dee and kisses her forhead

kashish goes 2 her room and get ready and calls charu and mouli

charu and mouli get ready after fighting 4 baathroom and everything
and come down withkashish.

kashish - good morning papa,

mr.mittal- good morning kashish(lovingly said>

charu & mouli-good morning pa

mr.mittal-good morning, chalo aao nashta karten hai

kesar- haa jees,main biji ko bulati hoon

kashish - aap baitho aaram se nashta karon mein jaati hoon biji ko
bulane
kesar - theek hai beta

[kesar humesha kashish ko beta bulati thi,she know that kashish
bahot confident aur swabhimeni ha)

kashish goes in bijis room(biji bhagawan ki pooja kar rahi thi)
kashish unke paas jake baithati hai ,bhagawan ke samne haath jod kar
sabki khushi parthana karati hai

biji-(wonders)[bcoz she don't know when kashish came there> tum kab
aai kashish??????

kashish - jab aap pooja kar rahi thi

biji-accha meri aur bhagwan ki baaten sun rahi thi???????/
kashish -laughs) koshish kar rahi thi par sunai nahi di.bataiye biji
kya maanga bhagwanji se

biji- main boodi kya magungi ??????// pareewar ki khushiyan aur.....

kashish- aur kya ?

biji-tere sapanon ko rajkumar jiska tuze hai intzaar

kashish (shy) biji, chalon aap bhi naa,chaliye nashhta karne ke liye
biji-achha chalo

sab log naashta katate hai

kashish charu aur mouli ko college chodne jati hai


[papaka bussiness hone bawjood kashish apna khud ka interior
decoration and event orgenise ka kaam karti thi

wohh apani pehchan ms .mittal nahi to kashish bamnan chahati thi and
mr.mittal support her to

do that because he like that kashish jimmedariya janati hai>
kashish goes to her office and get into work
this is all abt kashish and her life


now next when both of them met wat will happen lets see.


sujal searching for new place 4 office to manage new project he get
deals with one property dealer

dealer - look mr.sujal plzzzz come with me i will show u ur new
office
sujal- lets go

they goe to the office place

dealer -dhekhiye this is very convinient for u,and very nice place
sujal- jagah ka location to accha hai par...

dealer-par kya?

sujal- muze yeh interior pasand nahi.

dealer -itanisi baat ??/ to aap isse badad dijuye na,
sujal- yeh bhi thik hai ,then deal fix

dealer - kya mein aapko interior decoration ke liye koi naam suggest
karoo
sujal- plzzzzzzzz,jaroor bataye na

dealer- my most of client toLd me that ms kashish mittal is very
good in decorating i have her card u can contact her

sujal-ohh sure .thanks

dealer - thanks

dealer goess from there by fixxing deal and sighinig papers and all
sujal call kashish on her mobile

kashish picks the phone

sujal-ms.mittal?????????

kashish - no,sorry,i m kashish

sujal-yes,that wat i said

kashish - no u mentioned me ms,mittal,i have my own identity that is
kashish plzzz call me kashish only

sujal-(impress by her thoughts)hummmmmmm good ,ok ms.kashish

sujal-i am sujal garewal,i want u 2 decorate my new office can v
meet
kashish-sure ,when i shud come in ur office 2 meet u

sujal-at evening 4.30

kashish-ok,i will be there.

sujal-good day

kashish -u 2

sujal thinking how attitute she is having ,she must be egoistick but
sujal is also impessed by her)
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at 3.30 pm in sujal's office
mr.shah camein cabin and tell him that mr.verma will be late for
meeting

sujal-ok,inform me when he will come

mr.verma come for meeting at 4.15pm ,sujal forget abt kashish he
told to mr.shah not to disturb them

kashish come sujal's office inquires abt him

kashish -dekhiye mr.sujal ne muze 4.30 ko bulaya tha

mr.shah- madam dekhiye plzzzzzzz baat samjiye ,he is in imp
meeting ,i can't distrb him plzzzzzz i can't

kashish -yeh baat hui phir muze kyon bulaya 4.30 baje

tabhi piyush waha se aata hai


piyush -kya hua mr.shah is there any problem???????

mr.shah -ji woh sirrrrr ..... yeh madam ......(piyush look at
her ...kashish wearing red and yellow combo panjabi suit ,brown
coloured eyes and all bangals in hand and looking most beautiful)

kashish -who r u?(little angreely)
piyush-i m piyush raheja

kashish -i m kashish
piyush -kyan hua aap gussa kyon kar rahi hai

kashish-gussa nahi karoon to kya karoon mr.sujal ne muze is waqt
bulaya tha aur ab wohkisi aur meeting mein busy hai.kya unhe waqt ki
kimat nahi hai??????

piyush-(wonder &impress) jaroor koi baat ho gayee hogi warna sujal
jeetana pawand insaan aisa nahi karta

kashish -pawand aur woh jinhe dusaron ke waqt ki kimat nahi

piyush -dekhiye plzzzz aap naraz na ho na chaliye aap ka yeh waqt
hum waste nahi denge

kashish-(wonder)phir hum yahan kya karen

piyush - chaliye mere cabin mein humse baaten kijiye

in meeting sujal look at watch its 5.00 pm he remeber abt kashish
and realise that he shud inform her abt late .bcoz in bussineess
sujal is very panctual

he excusess mr verma and come out ask mr.shah abt kashish

mr.shah- woh madam ekdam 4.30 ko aayee hai and naraz ho rahi thi ki
aapne unhe bulakar unka time waste kar rahe hai

sujal- where did she go then????//

mr.shah- piyush sir ne unhe sambhal liya ,she in piyush sirs cabin
now ,(piyush sir nahi aate to woh madam waqt ki pawandi ka lecture
sunakar aapko meeting se bulane par majboor karti

sujal- (kashish ...she is not only egoistick but very panctual too i
m impress)[in his mind he thinks and goes 2 piyush cabin
sujal sees kashish an piyush r laughing and jocking just like a
friends
sujal knocks and come in


piyush-are sujal aao na,yeh hai ....

sujal- ms .kashish

piyush -yes,she is waiting 4 u

sujal- sorry ms .kashish aapko intzaar karana pada,i forgot that i
had given time 2 u.mr.verma ki deri ki wajah se meeting was delayed
plzzzz
kashish-(feels good) its ok , but next time remeber this

sujal-plzzzz excuse me for 5 min ,mr verma is waiting
piyush -ya sure

sujal- mr.verma plzzz hum baaki details kal checke karange .
is it fine
mr.verma- why not? sure we will meet tomaarrow and he leaves his
cabin
sujal piyush ke cabin mein jaata hai ,(actually he is very tired but
he don't want 2 waste more time of kashish )

sujal-ms.kashish kya hum abhi discuss karen kaam ke baare mein

kashish - sure

sujal- chaliye mere cabin mein

sujal and kashish entenrs in his cabin

he ell kashish abt new office position and say that he want that she
shud do interior of this office

kashish-ok,i will do that.kashish telling her ideas 2 sujal
[sujal is tired so he can't concentrate on her and kashish notice
that>
kashish-mr.sujal kya aap bahot thak gaye hai?????

sujal-no,its fine with me

kashish - kyUN na hum baahar jakar cofee house mein garamagarm
cofee ke sath yeh baaten discuss karen?

sujal-ok ,lets go.
by that time piyush also leaving the office, kashish see him and ask
2 join them and sujal also say him to company

piyush -ok,chalo

then kashish ,piyush ,sujal coffee shop mein jakar kaam ki baaten
karate hain aur phir they go to their homes respectively

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Posted: 19 years ago
hihihh manu sissss......welcom bak 😃 gr8.....gr9 story 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWAL DARJAY KI GHATIA BAAT HAi ke TEEN TEEN parts likh ker bhi comment nahi karta koi...anyways SAWERA both of ur stories too cool...nidhi good yaar....ab main likh rahi hoon to comment akrna...aur haan farah both parts fantastic...AMNA DI I LOVE UR STORY!!

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