Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 272

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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx farha i love u ..................yaar i want to concentrate in FHD
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Posted: 19 years ago
haan amna dii last mein dono ki hi aapne maar daala
par kyun?????
kyunkii vasu sujal ki saas hi to thi
😆 ok all stories wah wah
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Posted: 19 years ago
aamna diiii u r tooooooooooooo gud wonderful just fab aik tyme ke liye tou mujay laga ke kisi ne fast forward ka button daba diya hai aur daba ke bhool gaya hai 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
amna i already gave comments on your both stories but agian saying both stories r really nice 😊 but the last part of ptht is very funny 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok herez the next part to (pyaar keh rang)....

recap:...sujal went to the college to see...kashish yaar......and now that he did see her....he's happy..lol!!

RnG office
sujal:...mornin rosy...
rosy:..good morning sir....sir apka wait kar rahe hain...
sujal:..i know...late ho gaya....(he winks at her to which rosy smiles....)

sujal:..sorry dad..woh bahut zaroori kaam tha....
lalit:..kya kaam tha?
sujal who was about to sit looks at lalit:..dad...ap muj peh shaak kar rahe hain?
lalit:......haan...
sujal:..dad!!!!!!!
lalit:...ek jawaan, handsome aur kunwara larka..itni subah subah ghar se chala jaye....binaa kuch kahe...binna kuch sunne.....kaam keh bare mein bhool jaye...meetings na attend kare....aur phir mere sawalaon peh choke....to har dad ko shaak to hona hi chahiye na......
sujal:...(smile)....dad...ap bhi na....
lalit:...haan sujal...mein bhi kabhie jawaan tha.....kabhie mein bhi yun achanak zaroori kaamon mein phaas jata tha.........par jab se tumhari ma.....
sujal:...aap phir mama keh bare mein shuru ho gaye....churein na dad.....
lalit:...mein bhi yehi soch raha tha...
sujal:..kya?
lalit:..yehi keh vasu ko chor don.....
sujal:...(shakes his head)...mein ne mama ko nahi unke bare mein sochne ko chorne ko kaha tha.......
lalit:..oh....(makes a dissapointing face)....
sujal:...ab kaam shuru karein....
lalit:..haan....ab yehi ek khushi hai meri zindagi mein.......


and both father and son get to work....... aur waqt beete pata hi nahi chalta...kab shaam ho jati hai......

sujal and lalit work in the same cabin...they have more of a friend relationship rather than a father and a son.....

lalit:.kafi late ho gaya hai...ghar chalein...
sujal:..hmmm...(they pack up)


idhar kashish and piyush ek restuarnt mein se nikle....
kashish:..you know piyush...tum sudhar hi nahi sakte...tum chaho na...phir bhi nahi...
piyush:...ab mein ne kya kiya?
kashish:..kya kiya?...tum abhi bhi yeh puch rahe ho......
piyush:...to.....kuch aur puchna chaiye tha? (gets confused)
kashish:..PIIIYUSH!!!....mere saath dinner peh aye the...aur saath apni girlfriend ko bhi bula liya...
piyush:..exxx cuse me.....woh meri girlfreind nahi hai.......
kashish:..to phir kon hai?
piyush:...woh.....bus.....tiiimmmee.....
kashish;..dont you dare...khabardar jo kisi larki ko time paas kaha to....(she was shouting at him in the middle of the road)
piyush:....nahi mera matlab....
kashish:..tumhare sare matlab mein achi tarah se janti hon.....
piyush:..acha yaar...ab sab ke samne danton gi kya?....
kashish:..agar dobara aisi har kat karo ge to yunhi danto gi...sari zindagi dantongi....
piyush:...sari zindagi mere saath jeene ka irada hai...(at saying this piyush became very serious....and kashish suddenly realized what she had just said)......

"BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP....BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP" (horn ki awaaz)....kashish looks around to see a car just next to her...(woh ek dum anjali (kavyanjali) keh style mein murti hai...with one hand on her eyes coz the lights were too strong).....

lalit:...sujal....lights halki karo......uski ankhon mein lag rahi hai....
sujal:......kkk....kkkkashish!
lalit suddenly looks at sujal in surprise......

ok it ends here.....coming up.....lots more....so stay tuned....oops...yeh to farahji telefilmns ki line honi chahiye 😆 😆
love
farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
kiran, amna nidhi and all others also great part
koi pls genious ko dhoond lao
aur rameena, sun, ko bhi pls
yeh log sare kahan kho jate hai samaj nahi aata
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Posted: 19 years ago
farah (pyaar keh rang)....is very nice story 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
to yeh raha...i mean yeh rahi.....KTH duittiiiii....

recap:...sujal whacks tooshar but is taken out of the court by akshat..(yaar kiran case ho sakta hai...for breaking the law you see.....ab mein kuch kuch logic la rahi hon..lolzzz)

ok..here it cont.

akshat:..(releases sujal)...TUM HOSH MEIN TO HO....KYA KAR RAHE HO SUJAL....CASE SHURU HONE SE PEHLE HI HUMARE KHILAAF FAISLA HO JATA.....

sujal:...TO KYA KARTA MEIN.......APNI MA PEH LAGTE HUWE ILZAMON KO CHUP CHAAP SUNTA REHTA....NAHI AKSHAT....ABHI ITNI SHARAFAT NAHI AYI MUJ MEIN.....NAHI AYI!

akshat:..sujal!..(puts his hand on sujal's shoulder who was resting on the stair pillar thingy).....humein thande dimaag se kaam lena hoga....bhai to yehi chahte hain keh tum ghuse mein ake koi aisa kadam uthao...jisse woh faida uta sakein........tumhe samjhana mera farz hai...agaye tumhari apni marzi.......(akshat goes inside)

swayam:...oh ho...to mama's boy ko ghusa agaya.....
sujal looks up at him....
swayam:..muje bhi maroge.....lo maro...ao na?
sujal:...tumhe to mein ek hi dafa maronga....aur jaan se mar donga.....baar bar haath gande karne ka shauk nahi hai muje......(hehehe wah wah...)
swayam:...are...mein to daar gaya!
sujal:...daar tumne abhi dekha hi kahan hai swayam.....
swayam:...try hard sujal....par daar aur haar dono ka maza is baar mein tumhe chakhaonga......
sujal shifts his gaze....everyone comes around him as the court has been adjourned....

akshat:..(looks at swayam and then at sujal):..sujal.....court ki date agaye ho gayi hai.....
swayam:...hey buddy....(everyone looks around to see toooshar and swayam hugging each other).....tooshar wipes the blood around his lips)

toooshar:....yeh tumne acha nahi kiya sujal....iska hisaab....
sujal:....mujse hisaab lene keh liye agar tumhe dus janam bhi lene pare to bhi kam hain.........aur is khoon ko behene se mat roko.....abhi aur bhi nikalna hai......


(the camera does a close up on sujal's eyes.....and we see the anger in them...woh piyush keh time wala sujal...kya cheez!!!)
ok abhi kum kum ane wala hai...isliye tata.....but stay tune...kyunki sujal, akshat aur kashish keh ala plans....to harofying swayam and tooooshar......so take care
love farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi farah ye pyar ke rang n kthdutii r really nery good but plz in pyar ke rang dont let piyush to cum btn kashish n sujal,plz its an humble request.n yes cont soon. bye. take care.
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi kiran u just eally too good n especially kashish pyar ki is to good i dont know but everytime i read a smile cums on my face. i like it. thanx a lot 4 writnig all the 3 stories . great work. bye. n cont soon. take care.

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