Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 271

ALLRIGHT POSTING THE NEXT PART OF 'A LOVE STORY'
RECAP:well i know that the rift created by me b/w the duo is not liked but anyways they cant stay away from each other for long rite on lets begin......
sujal realizes everything,he clinches his fist and gives away a blank expression but he cudnt stop the tear which rolled down from his red eyes but manages to grasp some words and says--i totally forgot i am am sorry
VEE-now go plz go sujal and just talk to her for once i think there is a big misunderstand ing b/w u both plz go
S-(looks at her in dismay but his anger cudnt hide the sorrow in his but he manages) look mama i want to make something really very clear i will not do this coz the person who betrays me will pay the price very early i will not leave her she will pay the price of each tear and pain she gave me till now she saw a transformed sujal but now she will meet the flip side of me in this world there is just tit for tat if she doesnt loves me i .....i........ also dont love she.......she ditched me for that akshat i will also prove to her that sujal has a life beyond her and.......
V-(shouts)stop it will you how cud you say this amt of lie in one go sujal i know you i am seeing the pain the sorrow the tears which u r hiding u cant forget her i know sujal tu use bhula nahin payaga!!!!!!!!!!
S-(with a determined look) main use bhul nahin paunga main use bhula dunga aur waise bhi its not necessary that a marriage always works out at times when two persons marry in rush then there is a solution they get di divorced and same will happen here she doesnt want me i also dont want her i.....iii.......will also ditch her she betrayed me and i will.......(a voice interupts from behind it was archie)ditch her for for aaarrcchhiieee!!!!!!!!!!!
A-hey sujal kaise ho
S-i am fine but am having a little headache
A-wat so so you have to relax go and have a good sleep u'll feel better i will cum some other time
S-well as u say see yaa byee
A-bye(and she leaves)
sujal was also about to leave but mehak stops him and was about to say something but instead vasu taunts--arre mehak jaane do naa use zindagi mein pehli baar usne kuch theek kaam kiya and then also u people are such.......lalit was about to interupt but vasu continues wait lalit i havent finished i mean kash has done a bad thing she is on the dark side this time accept it her a so good image cudnt help her for long sujal got to know everything naa thats enough u shud be thankful that your son's life is saved and lalit now u can continue but lalit remains silent mehak gives a crude look to vasu and goes to her room sujal goes upstairs leaving an environment of tension and dismay
mehak in his room going round and round and round thinking-no it cant in this short span of time i have leaned wat type of a person kashish is she cant do like this but if she isnt guilty then why didnt she said anything to sujal and without saying anything went out of the house at one place she is a outspoken and a bold girl then why she acted like a mouse why why i think to know each and everything i must go and talk to kash to clearify everything i must leave at once she picks her purse n cell and leaves
sujal in his room is sitting in distress in pain in hatred in sorrow sitting with a broken heart which is paining,beating,waeping just for kashish sujal everywhere he sees in each and everything he sees he only sees kashish's innocent smile her innocent face sujal is livid with him self and wants to destroy each and everything in which kash is there and it includes himself also coz he is living but kashiah is breathing he is thinking but the thoughts have kash he listens but the voice which knocks his ears is of kashish
he shouts-why hwy damit why u did this to me u u betr.............words failed him and he ended up in uncontrollable sobs
meanwhile downstairs someone enters and none other than CHARU who has just returned from her trip in goa
C-di di where r u kashi yaar i am back
every1 get up and an expression of somewat hatred roll over their faces and charu realizes the tension in the house
C-ohh!!!!!!!!i am sorry aunty woh di aur jiju kahan hai.......
sujal cums down and seeing charu a question mark displays on his face as wat to and wat not to tell to charu as he knew that she luved akshat
S- hey............cha..charu hows life
C-hey jijs woh main..........(she pauses as her sight falls on a side table on which the photos of kash and akshat were kept
her face grew pale as she picked up a photo sujal rushes 2wards her and seeing a blank expression on her face which was asking for explaination sujal drags her outside in the lawn
S-charu ...how....... well and then sees that charu wasnt in her senses he shakes her charu wat happened charu and then slaps her
charu realizes and starts crying and falls--how cud he do this to me my love and my big sis........
S-i know this is difficult but the truth is a truth..........charu plzz control i.. i.......... will tell u the whole thing
NEXT SCENE
kash sitting in her huge bunglow in the living room on the floor besides a sofa her bag was kept besides her she didnt even unpack it her face was blank her condition was undescribable in mere words there wasnt a single tear in her eyes it seemed that the tears too have dried up and then mehak enters.........

NOW WAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT IS LIKE I ALWAYS SAY IS FUTURE PLZ GUYS STAY TUNED AND I WILL CONTINUE KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI VERY SOON AND THIS ALSO PLZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT-NIDHI(LKLK)

nidhi....ur jus too good.....u know wat actually i like all these rifts.....it makes the story interesting 😉 😉 da only thing that i hate is---MURDERS(done by the writers 😆 )......but u don worry ur story is fab......I M LOVIN' IT 😆

well same here richa i also like these choti choti nok jhok yaar singing near trees is old 😆 now there shud be some rifts and your story is going too good with the rifts cool 👏 but yaar u are also going to write a murder sequnce am i right or wrong well but in my story some blood wlood cums well lets see 😉 --nidhi(lklk)

well nidhi im not sure watz gonna happen 😆 😆 😆 u'll have to wait 4 the writer 2 write.........ooohh....writer to main hi hoon 😆 😆 ok wait & watch!!

haan !!!! haan i know richa now u will write after 4-5 weeks and we will die yaar plz richa do write fast coz i will die otherwise--nidhi(lklk) 😆

Hii guyz i read another story at yahoo grps....i wud like to share it wid u also...so itz title is "Lamhon Ki Guzarish" n itz writtren by "Tammana" all credits goes to her...soo here the 1st part....
Lamhon ki Guzarish may touch upon some issues which r sensitve to d societal nature n so ne one who wishes to dicontinue it at ne point of time r free to do so.wont mind at all.though dere is no offence meant to ne one in particular....
Again rite now just our Hero n Heroine...Sujal Garewal n Kashish Sinha....i wud introduce others lin d course of time....

Lamhon ki Guzarish
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There was storm brewing at d far end.It was raining imperiously both liquid n frozen water.The mountain road was as usual broad enuf just for allowing two vehicles to pass at a time but in such a condition there was a risk.The sky continued to roar n thundering went on non-stop.The atmosphere was murky grey and it wud be a dangerous and at d same time a foolish decision to travel in such weather.But yes someone had taken that decision.A solitary car cud be seen weaving its path along the tricky way.The car wipers were doing their best to keep d water away from d screen but in vain.It was all a blurr of images.But the man inside was least perturbed abt it.He had no expressions what-so-ever on his face.His face was impassive n it had been like dis past 7 yrs.He just continued to drive as if dere were more important things in his life then worrying abt d weather.suddenly his cell rang....oh wait forgot to introduce him..he is Sujal Garewal...(as if i needed to tell dat)...oks...his cell rings...its his mum....Mrs. Veena Garewal
Sujal:Hello..mumma aap soyi nahi abhi tak...
Veena:tum theek ho na Sujal???time pata hai kya ho raha hai???
Sujal looked at his watch n replied slowly:2 baj rahe hai..par mumma..
Veena:par kya...maine tumhe kaha tha na ek itni raat ko mat jao...aur woh bhi aaj ke din..par tu kisi ki sunta kahan hai???
Sujal said sweetly:Mumma zaruri kaam tha...aur aapko pata hai...main apne kaam ke saath koi laparwahi nahi karta...aur phir muhe kya pata tha ke halki-phulki baarish....itna bada toofan le aayegi....
Veena:lekin ab toh toofan aa gaya na...
Sujal said almost to himself:mumma toofan toh bahut pehle se hi aa chuka hai...
Veena askes concernedly:Sujal???
Sujal came back to present n said quickly:mumma aap meri chinta karna band kariye...mein bilkul theek hu...aur agar aap merse baat kart rahengi toh mein gadi kaise chalaunga...aap so jayiye...mein pohonchte hi aapko phone karunga...n he disconnected d phone...
after sometime again his cell rang...he saw d name n went few hours back...
Flashback:
The Garewal masion was buzzing wid guests n relatives...this was d hottest news in d area....n dat too after such a long time....Garewal Mansion hadnt been dis lively past 7 yrs....but now since such an special occasion was here....Sujal Garewal...deir eldest son had come back from London....after setting up deir business dere....n dat too wid another big surprise....it was indeed a gaity atmosphere....
Veena called up Sujal n said:yeh lo beta anguthi....
Sujal looked at her n widout saying nething quitely took d ring n put it on d girl's finger standing beside her.Veena dint notice d quiteness on Sujal's face or rather pretended not to notice it n gave d other ring to d girl:yeh lo beta,ab tum pehna do.The girl put her hands forward to place d ring n Sujal put his hands forward mechanically.everyone cheered n clapped...no one seemed to know wat was going in Sujal's heart.He left d hall as soon as he got d chance n went to d balcony.Tearss were flowing from his eyes,silent tears,tears of anger,tears of memories,tears of anguish,tears of love,tears of hatred.Suddenly his phone buzzed n he picked it up.he controlled d tremble in his voice n said:haan theek hai...main abhi nikalta hu.haan mein pahunch jaunga kal meeting ke time tak.
He wiped his tears n went back to d hall.he looked for his mother n said:mumma mujhe abhi Delhi ke liye nikalna padega...bahut zaruri meeting hai kal...
Veena:lekin aaj...sab log kya sochenge beta...aur bahu ke baare mein toh soch...
Sujal:mumma aap pls usko samjha dena aur jahan tak duniya ka sawal hai maap janti ho mein unki parwah nahi karta...mein nikalta hu...n he went before Veena cud stop him...since den he had been driving along...
he came back to senses n ooked at his phone..dere were 10 missed calls from d same no.he continued driving.it generally took 4-5 hours from Shimla to Delhi but coz of d weather today it was getting late.he was on d outskirts of Delhi n again his phone rang...n again from d same no.he looked at d time.it was 5 in d morning.he picked up d call n said:Haan Ghazal bolo...
Ghazal was d girl whom he got engaged wid.
Ghazal:Hello Sujal,tum phone kyun nahi utha rahe ho???
Sujal:woh shayad non-reachable tha...mausam itna kharab ho raha hai na par tum abhi tak jaag rahi ho???
Ghazal:woh tumhara phone nahi lag raha tha na isiliye neend nahi aayi...
Sujal:mein theek hu Ghazal bus Delhi pahunchne wala hu...
Sujal:Ghazal main tumse baadme naat karta hu.n he disconnected d phone.
n suddenly he screeched d car to a halt.

Plz doo comment...
tell me shud i conitue posting if u like it....

Nidhi nice part...i agree wid u choti nok jhok tu honi chaiye...write soon...... 😊

Richa jaldi likhna plz....Nidhii k liye hiii sahii😭 😭 😭

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i m crying u guys even not ...comment on last part of pthht

😆 😆 but amna i am laughing liek anything...hehehehhee...that end was somehow funny.....sujal aur kashish dono ko hi mar diya...heheheheheh....isse kehte hain na ek dum FIT kisam ki ending.....par end kyun ki????????????......itni achi kahani ja rahi thi......i still remember woh funny bits...sujal and vasu k....man i loved them....chalo hope to see something like that in the new story too!!.......
👏 .....great work amna....really proud of the GREAT BKWL 😆
ab rona mat.....lol