Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 270

pyaar to hona hi tha

Last Part:

Kashish and are both living in apartment now …in present situation now kripa wants to marry angad as she realized that sujal only meant for kashish ..so she has also become friend of kashish . Angad now live in his mansion ….as he is well-off person …sujal is like WHAT –SHOULD-I-DO-NOW. He is missing kashish like a hell;

Scene 1:

Sujal is sitting on bed have a photo frame in which there is picture of their wedding.. Tears are rolling down from eyes making their way to his cheeks. Veena comes in and gets hurt by seeing her son in such state;

Veena: kyun takleef deta apney app ko sujal

Sujal: aur ker bhi kya sakta hoon mamma

Veena: maan kyun nahi letta kashish ki baat

Sujal: mamma kashish ajj ik jhoot ka sath nibha rahi hai

Veena: dekh tu janta hai na kashish ki tabyat kesi hai aur phir kripa k bachey ka baap kon hai ye bhi hum sab jantey hein tu kyu tu us ki madad nahi kerta

Sujal: kya karoon mama kripa nay kashish ko aur mujey dukh hi dukh diya hein aur kashish us hi ka sath de rahi hai

Veena: kashish say pyaar kerta hai usey pehchanta bhi nahi kyun ….sahi kaha na main ney

Sujal: mamma

Veena maan ley meri baat sujal

Sujal: mamma sochonga

Veena: sujal

Sujal: mamma plz I need some time plz

Veena: theek hai jessey teri marzi

Scene ended*****

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Scene 2:

Kashish sitting on bed in an apartment….kripa come over there ….and speaks to her

Kripa: kashish tumhara bacha kitna khush naseeb hai usey apney maa or baap dono ka pyaar miley ga or mera bacha ……she cries

Kashish weeps kripa's tears ….look her with full affection:

Kashish: haan merey bachey ko maa or baap dono ka pyaar miley ga magar tab hi jab tumharey bachey ko bhi us ka baap mil jaye ga

Kripa : kashish kyun tum apney app ko takleef de rahi ho tumey arram ki zaroor

at hai

Kashish: tumey nahi hai kya ….

Kripa: kashish magar

Kashish: chup ik dum chup …ajj tum kuch nahi bolo gi …main kaha na ajjmain ANGAD say milney jar i hoon bas tum dua karo ….

Kripa: theek hai …

Scene 2 ended.

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Scene 3:

the big white marble mansion is seem ….then we see a big hall in which angad nad kashish is standing ………another person enter …..its SUJAL…………!

SUJAL: kyun bulaya hai mujey

Angad: mujey khud nahi pata tumhari patni nay hi tum ko invite kiya hai

Sujal: kya baat hai kashish ….

Kashish: main tumharey samney angad say baat kerna chahti thi

Angad: phir wo hi bakwaas kero gin a tum ….

Kashish: haan phir wo hi bakwaas ……..jis ki hakeekat ko tum bhi jantey ho mr.angad khanna mager phir bhi manna nahi chahtay hai na

Angad: come to the point …kya kehna chahti ho jaldi kaho

Kashish: wo hi jo peechlay ik mahina say keh rahi hoon

Angad: to mera jawab bhi wo hi hai jot um ko ik mahina say mil raha hai

Kashish: tum ko kripa say shaadi kerna hi parey gi

Angad: main nahi keroonga

Kashish: tum karogye angad khanna……main nay suna tha jo loog gana gatey heei bhoot sensitive hotey duniya sab say zayada ghum ko ya khushi ko wo hi samjtey hein mager tum to pathar ho pathar …..ik aurat ko tum ney us waqt istemaal kya jab us ko saharey ki zaroorat thi …….aur jab tum ko us ka jism mil gya to tum usey chor diya mr.khanna kripa koi tissue paper nahi hai k tum us ko use and throw karogye ….samjey

Angad; bol chuki tum ab meri suno ….main nay kripa ko hamesha apnana chaha …mager us ki jaan ko khatra tha is liya us ko apna nahi paya

Kashish and sujal get confused and finally sujal speaks …

Sujal: kesa khatra …..

Angad: kripa ko ik larka prithvi pasand kerta hai us nay mujey warn kiya tha ki ager main ney kripa say shaadi ki to wo kripa ko jaan say maar dey ga

Sujal: ager ye masla khatum ho jaye to kyat um kripa say shaadi kerogye

Angad: main hamesha say ye hi chahta hoon sujal

Sujal: theek hai to chalo …….kashish ….tum apna khayal rakhna aura b tum kripa k pass jao usey leker apney ghar jao hum attey hein mamma tumhara intezaar keri hongi

Kashish; happily ….theek hai magaer tum apna khayal rakna …..

Sujal: ok …..

And both angad and sujal leaves …kashish drives back to apartment ….tell whole thing to kripa …she feel worry about angad …kashish say relax …they both pack luggage and heads to grewal house……

Scene 3: ended

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Scene :4

angad and sujal heads to prithvi's apartment make the situation that prithvi accepted his crime and police …..arrest him ……..angad and sujal happily heads to home …..there angad and kripa .. its was like this

kripa when see angad …her eyes …sparkle …but then she become sad again ….angad goes to her ….he make her face to him

angad: kya kripa tum say baat nahi kerogi kya main itna bura hoon

kripa: nahi angad buri tu main hoon tum ko hamesha ghalt samja ….

Angad: kripa ye sab bhool jao aur meri baat ka jawab do

Kripa: pooch

Angad: mujh say shaadi kerogi

Kripa: hmmmmm haan …

Angad: thanks …and then he hugs her

Kripa: pata hai angad tumharey janey k baad mujey ehsaas hua k main ney tum say pyaar kya tha sujal k liya merey dil sirf mera infactuation tha ….jo tab door howa main ney realize kiya k sujal sirf kashish ka hai or in dono ko koi alag nahi kersakta …..

Angad nods ….and say …" haan tum sahi keh rahi ho jis terha ye ik doosrey k liya baney hum bhi ik doosrey k liya hi baney hein

They all laugh …..and then kripa become serious …..and moves to kashish and sujal

Kripa: kashish sujal kyat um dono mujey maaf kersaktey ho …

Sujal: is main maafi mangney wali kon si baat hi

Kripa: plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Sujal: ok now don bother us

Some one enter guess who its VASU ………………….

VASU: kyat um dono mujey maaf nahi kero gye

Kashish: mamma

Vasu: beta sujal

Sujal and kashish hugs vasu …then sujal comes to angad …and speaks to him

Sujal: meri zindagi main ik alien ki kami thi jo meri saas nay puri kerdi

They both laugh …………….

Gals: kya howa

Angad: alien

Kripa: kya

Sujal: is ko nazar aya tha

Kashish: dono pagal ho gye hein shayad

Both: ho jayegien …………………………

Scene4 ended ….

Kripa-angad and rishi-charu's wedding day

Scene: 5

The mandap ….first kripa and angad get marry they took phera ….angad applied sindoor and tied mangal sutar …..now they are happily wedded couple .
Now its charu and rishi ….charu has tears in eyes so has akshat …..rishi bfore enter in mandap speaks aloud

Rishi: main ye shaadi nahi kersakta kyun k main kisi or say pyaar kerta hoon ….sneha

Every one is like what …………………………..

A gal enter in bruide's dress …its sneha from KZK ……

RISHI: sneha say meri shaadi hog imager main apni sab say achi doost ko bhi akela nahi chor sakta to ……………toooooooooooooooo toooooooooooooo charu tumhari shadi jo hai na akshat k sath ho gi

Charu was speech less she tightly hugs rishi and goes to akshat then hugs him too …sujal is really very happy comes to rishi

Sujal: sweetheart mujey tumhra bhai honey per garv hota hai

Both brothers smiles ….

So these two couples gets happily married !



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AFTER 1 YEAR:

Kashish and sujal has a baby girls ……….kripa angad have a boy ……..

Kashish sujal's daughter name is POOJA ………and kripa angad boy name is Aditiya

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AFTER 20 YEARS

Sujal kashish daughter getting marry to ….POOJA played by ……pooja of YMLH …..to ronit ……..of YMLH

Both sujal kashish look older their get ups change …vasu become more horrible …veena has died ………………..!

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AFTER MORE 4 YEARS …..

Kripa angad 's son played by …abheshik bachan ………getting married to ….kareena ….played by kareena kapoor …………………………..!


AFTER 50 YEARS ……….

We see two photographs ….old age kripa and angad …sitting and crying …along with rishi , sneha , charu , akshat and ……..pooja ronit ----- abheshik kareena …………………the death bodies …two death bodies are lying side by side …every one wearing white dress ….tears rolling down from every one's eyes ….DO YOU KNOW WHOES BODIES THEY ARE …..KASHISH AND SUJAL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


THEY WERE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER ……LIVED WITH EACH OTHER ….DIED WT EACH OTHER ……..BUT THEIR LOVE STORY WOULD NEVER COME TO END ………………………………………………!
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Thanks. 😊 Well I agree wid u cuteface.... & yup I knw accounts. Well so now will wait for ur Faasley hai Darmyan eagerly 😛 which will set the new Trend something different.. 😉 Go ahead.... 👏

Originally posted by: vivacious_virgo

hey ppl//ill con tomorrow....and farah...josh it is...and i WONT patch them up fpr a year...BAD group kay liye punishment...haa.. 😆 ...waise guys..y dont u harry potter fans head over to the harry potter forum plzzzz 😳

yeah dadi.....me to already'v gone😉 😆

hi every one im back after a long time i had gone to pune n lonavala and its just mind blowing there haan n i have chiki fudge punes cake for all of u so enjoy
now comming to stories all of u rock ammna farah juhi kiran ghogo rajeev ac (at last u wrote) sawera nidhi harpy sorry if i have missed anyone but all of u rock aur sab kahan hai ambarina tum kab likho gi
genious kahan ho yaar
sun tum kab likhne ka sooch rahi ho
aur rajeev ac tum to ab 4-6 hafte baad he doosra part likho gi lagta hai pls all cont fast

sawera great part wow pyuish had been beated by rajeev 👏
amna both the stories r really good 👏
harpy great going 👏
nidhi i like the intoduction continue the story soon 😊

thanks for ur comments...oye hoye...amnadi ur story rox...farahji telefilms aj kal tallay per hai...hehe
ok now MERA NAAM HAI MOHABBAT
Ghar main enter hottay hain Sujal aur Kashish to sab log pareshan bethey hottay hain keh Kashish ko kia hua....Sujal nenter hotta hai Kashish ko shoulders se pakar ker who is pretending to be quite weak...(all is a plan)...hall main veena, Prerna, Kasak, Gunn, Akshat,Vassu, Tanisha, Mehek, Krishna, Varrun, Akshat, Shruti, Sameer, Rishab aur Lalit hottay hain (mashallah kafi barra khandan hai)
Woh jab enter hottay hain to as usual poori paltoon darwazay ke qareeb aker kharray ho jattay hain
Veena: Kashish....tu theek to hai na? Sujal....
Kashish pretends as if she can not talk (kafi achi actress hain)
Prerna: Sujal bolo na kia hua Kashish ko? sab theek hai?
Sujal(yeh bhi kafi barray actor hain): mumma...woh....
Gunn: bhaiya bolain na Di kaisi hain?
Just the Kashish pretends to collapse down
Mehek, Gunn, Kasak aur Shruti ussay help ker ke ooper ley jattay hain...with Sujal and then teh whole paltoon follows them in the room....Kashish ko bed main litaya jata hai aur madam abhi takk acting ker rahi hain
Lalit: Sujal bolo na kia hua Kashish ko?
Akshat: ab aissa kia ho sakta hai jo ap bata nahi rahay?
Shruti: Sujal...tum kyun bata nahi rahay? Kashish tum bolo...
Kash: main woh.....
Prerna: dekho...agar koi problem hai to bolo?
Sujal: mumma bohat barri problem hai
Veena: Sujal...jadi bol....mera dil bhut ghabra raha hai
Sujal: mumma....ab Kashish ko aissi beymarri lagi ha keh ab woh theek nahi ho sakti
Prerna: yeh tum kia keh rahay ho Sujal?
Sujal: sach keh raha hoon...aur hum kuch nahi kar saktay...iss ka koi ilaaj nahi hai
Gunn: yeh ap kia keh rahay hain bhaiya?
Sujal: haan Gunn....yeh sach hai
Veena: hay bhagwann!! (in her usual style)
Sujal: aur sirf yeh nahi mumma....ap ko bhi iss ka khyal rakhna hai...balkay hum sab ko...ab double zimadari hai
Prerna: kaisi zimdari?
Sujal: main janta hoon mumma ap ko acha nahi laggay ga lekin karnay to parray ga...afterall hum donon akela kitna karain....ab kabhi to ap ko doodh banana hoga, nappies change karni hongi aur...
Veena: yeh kia keh raha hai tu?
Kasak, Gunn and Shruti understand.....
Gunn cries out happily
Gunn: Bhaiya...ap ka matlab....?
Kashish now comes out of teh bed....woh Prerna ko ja ker shoulders se pakarti hai
Kash: mumma...koi yeh nahi manta keh ap meri mumma ho to koi naani kaisay mannay ga?
ok now the slow dumb-heads get the meaning.....akhir kaar samajh a hi jati hai
Prerna hugs Kashish and then Sujal and then Veena is going amd with happiness....sab hi itnay khush hain...ab sab gallay mil rahay hain aur khsuh hain
Prerna ab Sujal ke kaan pakarti hai
Prerna: kyun Sujal? dara diya humain...kia bemari hai...pagal yeh to khushi ki baat hai...jaan nikal di thi
Sujal: bass dkeh lain...kaisi acting kerta hoon?
Veena: ab aissa na ho keh tera bacha bhi teri tarah actor ho...warna sach ya jhoot hum pakar hi nahi payengay
Varrun: well this calls for a celebration!
Krishna: bilkul...balkay Mehek ki engagement ke din hi party rakh letey hain
Gunn: great ideaa!
Veena: acha ab bohat raat ho gayi hai...kashish tum ab so jao...tu bhi so jaa!(to Sujal)
They all go outsid aur Sujal bhi kuch dair ke liye bahir jata hai.....Kashish changes into her nightsuit and sits down in her bed....
Tab hi Sujal enter hota hai with a glass of milk...and let me tell u...kashish simply HATES milk....woh samajhti hai keh Sujal apnay liye laya hai
Sujal bedside table per doodh rakhta hai...he is about to sit down when Kashish comes out of teh bed and comes and stands in front of him
Kash: Sujal....
Sujal: haan Kashish bolo...
Kahs: tum ne kaha tha ke tum emre liye gift laye ho...kahan hai?
Sujal: oh haan...pehley tum yahan aker betho!
woh ussay dressing table ke samnay la ker bithata hai aur uss ki ankhain band karta hai...phir aik DAZZLING sapphire ka necklace with beautiful earrings pehnata hai
Kashish opens her eyes and sees it...she is awed as it is so beautiful
Kash: Sujal....bohat khubsurat hai
Sujal: actually main aissa kuch kharidna chahta tha jo meri Kashish jitna khubsurat to ho...kuch nahi milla...phir meri naar iss per parri...lekin phir bhi tum se ziada khubsurat nahi hai
Kash: nahi...bohat pyaara hai...thanks!
She gets up and hugs him...they hug for a long time
Sujal: arey...aiik aur gift hai tumharay liye
Kash: aik aur? kia hai?
Sujal: woh meri zindagi ke aik aik pal ko apnay andar samaye huay hai....khud hi dekh lo
He hands her over a diary...not the gandi wali type...the cool type...
Kash: yeh kia hai?
Sujal: iss main apni zindgai ki harr aik ahem baat likhi hui hai main ne...khud hi parh lena...lekin abhi nahi
Kash: kyun? abhi kyun nahi?
Sujal: kyuni doodh thanda ho raha hai
Kash: DOODH???
Sujal: haan...mumma ne bheja hai..aur tumhain pillana meri zimadari ahi
Kash: plz Sujal...mujhey doodh se sakht nafrat hai...main nahi peeti
Sujal: ab to peena parray ga....come on Kashish
woh uss key lips ke saath zabardasti glass lagata hai...Kashish peechey karti hai
Kash: Sujal...plz nahi...main vomitt kar doon gi...mujhey aadat nahi hai plz
Sujal: Kashish!! aadat dallo gi to aadat hogi na...chalo saans bandh ker ke pee lo taste nahi ayega
Kash: no plz...mujhey zaroorat nahi hai
Sujal: tumhain nahi lekin meri beti ko hai...come on
Kash: arey wah! beti ki ab se parwah hai aur biwi ki nahi
Sujal: tumhari hi to parwah hai...come on Kashish!
woh zabardasti ussay pilata hai....Kashish makes a sick-type of a face...Sujal smiles, then kisses her on the forehead and tehn tehy go to sleep!
plz give ur comments

now Kashish Pyaar Ki
ok so we continue the stry...lets see what sujal kashish were talking about

Kashish and Sujal are sitting together and they are talking
Kash: to...tum batao London kaisa laga??
Sujal: yaar kia bataon...its fantastic...lekin wahan insan bhut akela parr jata hai jab apna parivaar saath na ho
Kash: haan yeh to hai...to koi friends banay??
Sujal: of course yaar jahan rehtey bhain wahan friends to bann hi jattey hain...(smiling)
Kash: tum jantay ho main kin friends ki baat kar rahi hun
Sujal laughs
Sujal: haan woh friends bhi bohat si banni
Kash: janti thi main..wahan ja ker kharab ho jao gay...abhi Bari-Ma ko batati hun
Sujal: arey nahi meri ma...aissa kuch nahi hai...main ney ap key orders key mutabiq koi friends nahi banayi...wiasey bhi tumharay hotay huay main ksisi ki barray main soch sakta hun??
Kash: kia matlab??
Sujal: matlab key apni sba sey pyari dost ko yahan chor gaya tha aur tumhain bhut miss kia!
Kash: hmm....arey yaar tum kitna kamm kha rahey ho aur khao na...yeh lo na samosay (she piles 3 samosas in his plate, SUjal: kashish yeh...), aur haan yeh palak paneer bhut tatsty hai try to karo na ( woh dher sara salan uss ki plate main dalti hai , Sujal: Kashish bass....) arey bass kia...abhi to utm ney kuch nahi khaya hai...aur haan yeh Choti-Ma ney tumhari pasand key chawal banaye hain...lo na(woh bhut ziada chawal Sujal ki plate main dall deti hai, sujal is startled) aur haan yeh...
Sujal uss ka haath pakar leta hai
Sujal: KASHISH!! yaar tum ney kia samajh rakha ai mujhey...yaar main itna sarra kaaisey kahon ga...insan hoon haathi nahi hon main
Kash: ley...khao gay nahi to sehat kaisey bani gi??
Sujal: mujhey sehat bananay ki zaroorat nahi hai i am perfectly alright...tum dekho...khud to kha chuki ho chirya jitna aur merey liye kitna sarra khana...main kaisey khjaon ga??
Ashu: acha tum naraz na ho(cute face banati hai)...main tumhari help kar deti hun...kha leti hun na tumharay saath
Sujal: better!
woh dnon aik plate main kahna shuroo kartey hain
Sujal: to tum mujhey batao keh tum waisi hi ho...yaa....
Kash: kia matlab?? waisi hi hoon na main...kia hua hai mujhey...aur jis tarah ap ka mind chal raha hai to main ap ko bata doon keh koi larka meri zindagi main nahi hai...happy?
Sujal: great...tumhain kaisey pata chala key main yeh sawal tum sey poochney wlaa hoon?
Kash: dil ko dil sey rah hoti hai darling!!
she laughs and gives a very light slap on his face
sujal bhut hi cute face banata hai like a baby's
Sujal: marra kyun?
Kash: is liye mara hai takkey tum ainda aissey sawal na karo...tum jantey ho keh tumharay ilawa meri zindagi main aur koi larka nahi hai...u r my bestest friend!!
Sujal: hmm....to kashish agar main shadi kar loon to tumhara kia hoga+?
Kash: kia kaha tum ney??shadi...main tumhari shadi hi nahi honney doon gi...
Sujal: kyun??
Kash: kyunki main...main...main nahi samajhti keh tumhari shadi honi chahiye (she is confused)
Sujal: kyunki tum yeh baat bardasht nahi kar sakti keh tumharay ilawa meri zindagi main koi aur larki ho
Kash blushes
Kash: jee nahi aissi koi baat nahi hai...mujhey kia farq parta hai...jao shadi kar lo
Sujal (smiles): madam...shadi key liye larki ki zaroorat hoti hai...smajhi?/
Kash: aur woh kaun pagal hogi jo apna sar tumahrauy saath phoray gi??
Sujal: tum
Kash: kia??
Sujal: haan matlab keh tum as a friend apna sarr to phr chuki ho na merey saath
Kash: hmm....chalo aik kaam kartey hain...main tumhaeay liye larki dhoondhoon gi..ok?/
Sujal: tum??? phir to rehney hi do...ho gayi shaid...acha aik kaam karain gay...hum donon ki agar 30 saal takk shadi na hui na...too...
Kash: to hum ik doosray sey shadi kar lain ag
Sujal: done??
Kash: done!!
they bth laugh...phir sujal uss key cheeksko pakarta hai and says
Sujal: u r very cute!!
KAsh: u are also veerrry cute...acha ab chup ker keh khana khao...
They start eating

Sorry but taht's it...i know it is short per sorry...i didn't have time...do give ur comments luv kiran!

now my fave TERE LIYE
Sujal and Kashish meet for the first time and become good friends...They are having breakfast over at Akshat's house when the doorbell rings
Ishita: lagta hai Shobha agayi....Tushar ja ker darwaza khol
A very lame looking, stupid kind of guy with a very long face comes there...he has the look as if he will cry now...no expressions...he comes there wearing an apron, a brown untidy shirt and old jeans...He puts down the parathas
Tushar starts going bac to teh kitchen
Ishita: tu ne suna nahi main ne tujhye kia kaha?
Tushar doesn't listen as if he is dead...Kashish laughs and nudges Sujal..as if she is going to do something funny
Kashish: mumma rehney do....umm....(she speaks loudly) Tooooooooshar!
Tushar suddenly moves around quickly
Tushar: kisi ne bulaya?
Kashish: Tooooshar...woh darwazay per koi aya hai na Tooooshar...to Toooshar tum plz ja ker darwaza khol do...
Tushar: huh?
Kashish: Tushki baby.....jao darwaza kholo! (teasing him)
Tushar: mujhey tushki na kaho....bolo kia kaam hai?
Kashish: (in Sujal's ears) chaar ghantay cheeko gay phir bhi iss dumbo ko samajh nahi ayegi....umm...Tooooshar...DARWAZA KHOLOO!!!
Tushar: chilati kyun ho...kholta hoon
Kashish: nawazish apki...tum na kholtay to mein to marr jati..jerk! mumma...plz issay nikalay...plz! bhut irritate kerta hai...aur uss se zoada stupid ekta-mayi...oh Sujal i wonder...tum ektamayi se to nahi millay na?
Sujal shakes his head as a no
Kashish: great main millwaon gi...she is a character....Tooooooshar...kaun hai?
She turns in her seat to see keh kaun aya hai
She sees a woman clad in a black sarri with short hair...very attractive..behind her is walking a short chubby cute sa man and behind him a girl of round about 20...she is wearing a blue T-shirt and jeans...
They very friendly meet everyone...kashish is still not getting who these people are
Misha: Ishita...alu ke parathay? baray dinnon baad banaye hain..
Ishita: haan aj Kashish ka birthday hai na iss liye (she nods and smiles at Kashish)
Till then no ne has seen Kashish cuz she is sitting at a side...Misha turns to see who Ishita is talking about
Misha's mouth opens and a smile appears...she comes towards Kashish and Kashish stands up to meet her
Misha takes Kashish's face in her hands
Misha: kitni barri ho gayi hai....Kashish...apnay naam ki tarah bhut khubsurat hai! Ishita...bilkul Kusum jaisi dikhti hai na (kusum is Kashish's mother)
Kashish: ap meri mom ko janti thi?
Misha: haan...Kusum, main aur Ishita bhut achay dost thay...college se hi...phir main London shift ho gayi shadi ke baad...
Kashish: oh....main apni mom jaisi lagti hoon kia?
Misha: lagti ho? lagta hai Kusum ki copy ker ke khara kar dia ho...(she laughs)
Kashish smiles...
Kamal comes over
Kamal: Kashish...bhut pyara naam hai aur bhut pyari ho
Kashish: thanks a lot!
Kamal: introduction karwatay hain...main Kamal hoon...Sujal ka chachu!
Kashish: ap...Sujal...tum ne bataya kyun nahi?
Sujal: bolnay kahan deti ho tum?
Kashish glares at him
Charru comes over
Charru: hi...
Kashish: let me guess....tum Sujal ki choti behen ho...umm...
Charru: Charru....Charru naam hai mera
Kashish: oh haan...Charru...cute name
Charru: thanks...oh by the way...Happy Birthday!
Kashish: thanks a lot...all of u are invited to my birthday party tonight...ap sab please ayie ga!
Misha: haan haanz aroor ayen gay...
Just then the doorbell rings again
Tushar goes tomsee who it is
Shobha enters...she meets all of them...after some time Kashish and Sujal leave for their shopping spree for the party!

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oh no...i posted teh same part...sorry...i will post the other one now
Kashish and Sujal leave for the shopping spree for the party
They sit in the car...a black Mercedes...Sujal's car
Kashish: Mercedes! i love Mercedes
Sujal: i love it tooo...and i love the colour black
Kashish: don't tell me....i love it too!
Sujal: hm....acha to batao ke abhi kahan jana hai?
Kashish: ummm......mujhey party ki shopping kerni hai iss liye Riwaj ki shopping centre main jattay hain...wahan se party ki cheezein bhut milti hain
Sujal: haan..theek hai...to tell me tumhara best friend kaun hai?
Kashish: mera best friend? naam ka to Akshat hai...lekin uss ke pass mere liye kabhi time nahi hota...but he is a good guy...bilkul aik bhai ki tarah hai
Sujal: ahan....
Kashish: tum batao ke tumhara best friend kaun hai?
Sujal: meri best friend...meri best friend Pooja hai..she is such a sweety...she knows me perfectly!
Kashish: acha? aj ki party main ussay bhi le ker ana..i want to meet her
Sujal: i will try...woh apnay fiance ke saath agyi hui hai
Kashish: kia? uss ka fiance hai...woh tum se pyaar nahi karti?
Sujal: pyaar....mujh se...Pooja? (he starts laughing) haha....nahi nahi...woh meri achi dost hai lekin pyaar nahi hai
Kashish: weird! mujhey laga ke jahan avhi dosti hoti hai wahan pyaar bhi hota hai
Sujal: nahi Kashish...aissa nahi hota..pyaar ke liye dosti se bhar ker kuch chahiye hota hai...jiss se hum pyaar kartay hain uss per bharosa, aitmad kartay hain aur jab takk ndil main uss insan ke liye true feelings na ho to pyaar nahi hota
Kashish: lagta hai kafi experience ho chuka hai pyaar main
Sujal: nahi..aj takk mujhey kisi se pyaar nahi hua...
Kashish: lekin mujhey hua hai....
Sujal looks at her shocked
Sujal: kia? tum kisi se pyaar karti ho?
Kashish: haan na...woh Tooooshar hai na...uss se
she bursts out laughing...Sujal also smiles (kharoos kabhi to hansa karo..hehe)
Kashish: tumhain kia laga? main seriously kisi se pyaar karti hoon? nahi Sujal..main ne aj takk kisi se pyaar nahi kia...lekin main itna to janti hoon ke duniya main koi aissa to hai jo sirf mere liye bana hai aru main jiss ke liye bani hoon....ab dhoondhna hi parray ga...matlab sarri mehnat khud hi karo!
Sujal: ho sakta hai woh insan tumharay samnay ho lekin tum usey pehchanti na ho?
Kashish: yeh bhi hai...lkein pyaar ho jaye ga to mujhey to atleast pata chal hi jaye ga na...arey ruko centre agaya hai!
They get off the car, do their shopping then Kashish takes him to her house
Kashish lets Sujal carry everything from the car to gthe house...becahar sujal..he is laiden with all the stuff....
Kashish: oh...i am so sorry! main ne hi dekha hi nahi...lao mujhye do...
she takes some stuff from him
Kashish: haan to kahan se start karain? hall se?
Sujal: as u wish....
They start making preparations...after some time Shobha, Akshat and Charru join them....

COMING UP: Party scene and some new interesting characters!

nice parts KirAn... 👏

cuteface...write "Faasley hai Darmyan" soon...wiating anxiuosy.....