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Posted: 19 years ago
ok here is part :2 of FASLEY HEIN DARMIYAAN hope u like it

PART:2

KASHISH again start crying then a girl seems to be aged in between 20 to 22 years old …she see kashish crying and gets hurt she come closer to her and weep kashish's tears …and finally speaks;

Girl: kab tak apney app ko takleef do gi kashish di

Kashish: aur ker bhi kya sakti hoon CHARU ….marey pass aur chara hi kya hai …roney k ilawa meri zindagi to khatum ho chuki hai

Charu suddenly put her little hands at kashish's mouth and say …..with hurted expressions!

Charu: essi batein kyun kerti ho di …maat kya karo …

Kashish: sach hi to keh rahi hoon …sansien to khatum ho chuki ik zinda laash ki terha to jee rahi hoon …..jis k jeeney ka sirf ik maqsad hai ye bachi ….MERI BETI

Charu: di main janti hoon ik din …..SUJAL JIJU ……..ko apni ghalti ka ehsaas zaroor ho ga wo zaroor samjein gye k tumhari koi ghalti nahi thi …..tum ney kabhi kisi aur say pyaar nahi kya ……aur ye bachi kisi k pyaar ki nahi ….balki hawaas ki nishani hai ……un ko zaroor manna parey ga ….k tum ney us kameenay shakas say pyaar nahi kiya tha …balki us ney tumhara …..RAPE ….kiya tha …jis ka natija hai ye bachi ……………….!

Kashish at listening this all cry bitterly and leaving her baby ….at floor sit on kneens …and screams …loudly ….!

Kashish: merey sath hi kyun howa essa ………kyun kiya us ney merey sath essa kyun …jis per main ney ik dost samjh ker bheroosa kiya us nay hi meri zindagi barbaad ker di kyun …….kyun …kyun …………..mera sujal mujey chor ker chala gya ….main tumhey kabhi maaf nahi kerongi ….SWAYUM ……kabhi nahi ……bas ik baar aur tum merey samney aajao main tumey jaan say maar doongi ……..!

Charu runs towards her …and hold her trembling di …….who is shaking like a crazy….!

Charu: di samhalo apney app ….kyun essy …..buzdil logon ki terha react keri ho …lerti kyun nahi apney haq k liya ……kyun nahi APNEY PATI ……ko ye sabit kerti k us ka dost ik rapist hai …..!

Kashish: charu kitna aur yakeen dilaon usey …k wo meri baat ko samjey ….wo to meri shakal bhi dekhna nahi chahta ……….charu main sujal k bina nahi jee sakti …….!

Charu: di …..mujey yakeen hai ik din wo app ki baat zaroor sunein gye …un ko app per yakeen kerna hi parey ga ….di trust me haan ….!
Kashish: haan charu haan !

Both sisters share a hug ……then apart …charu weeps kashish tears and kashish weeps charu tears .

BACK GROUND:

Kashish is a very beautiful and innocent girl ….sujal is very handsome guy …their parents are very good friends ….Chetan agarwal and veena agarwal are parents of kashish , charu and rishi ….kashish is eldest , rishi is second one while charu is youngest ….! Lait grewal and vasundra grewal are parents of sujal grewal and akshat grewal …sujal is eldest and very charming person and akshat too. Sujal was coming from London after completing his MBA IN FINANCE …akshat is studying at local university with rishi and charu ….. all are very good friends …! When sujal come back his parents fixed his engagement wt kashish ….both are madly in love ….BUT ONE DAY …..sujal's friend actually his so-called best friend swayum came from London , he was a kind of person ….who gets what he want ….he fall for kashish too ….sujal was out of city for a project …when swayum propose kashish …which she did n't accept …he tried to come close to her but she gave him a SLAP ….on this act …he decided to take revenge……sujal next time went to America for the conference …this time swayum got chance ….one day when kashish ….was coming from some where swayum kidnapped her ….and raped her …..she was a victim …….rishi was passing from there when he heard noises ….of screaming girl …..at hearing rishi's foot steps swayum ran from there ……when rishi entered there …..IT WAS THE POINT FOR A BROTHER TO DIE ….WHILE LOOKING AT HIS SISTER IN THIS CONDITION ….HE WITH TREMBLING HANDS …COVER KASHSH'S BODY WITH HIS SHIRT …TAKE HER HOSPITAL …..INFORM PARENTS ….KASHISH WAS IN STATE CAN'T TELL ANY BODY WHAT HAPPENED …..WHO DID THIS ….kashish's parents infor lalit and vasu about what happened when vasu came there with lait ….she said its must kashish's fault …but then lalit kept her quite …when sujal came ….they got married ……sujal come to knew whole situation ….he accept kashish as a wife …but then after that kashish got pregnant …the situation was critical she can't abort the child … tere vasu was busy in spoiled sujal's brain she made sujal accepted the fact it was not rape and what ever happed that day was with kashish's wish …and not kashish but swayum was victim of kashish…………sujal after some foul proves given by vasu and swayum accepted that lie ….and left kashish ….but he did not give her divorce ….because he thought kashish was the person who ditched him …..now if he divorced her she get chance to play with another life so till present they are husband and wife …but live separately…………………………….!


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Coming up: kashish promise her self to fight for her right …sujal's entry !

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Posted: 19 years ago
ayeeeya amna dii khataknak story 😆
yaar ye vasu har jagah 😡
samrene jii aapki wish puri next part thoda chota
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Posted: 19 years ago
harpy ...tujh say khartarnaak to bilkul bhi nahi i bet .................... 😆 😆

samerene ji main app say naraz hoon kabhi to comment karo yaa ...and vivacious u too haan .............going gr8 wt ur story ....

kiran tera ....toooooooooooooshar ......terey liya ...fit hai ...... 😆 😆 😆 nahi to farha ko de dena ...us pyaar k rang main kaam aye .....ga 😆 😆 farha janu ur story ......fabbbbbbbbbbbbbb 👏

harpy ...meri to khatarnak ....tumhari story ka naam decide karoon new one 😆

amby baby ya ....bachoon ki ganster ...kahan gayab ho gye 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome story... loved reading it...pls cont it soon cute_face.
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Posted: 19 years ago
richa mindblasting part just awesome i just loved it plzzzzzzzz write soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
"KAHANI SUJAL AUR KASHISH KII"


Recap:Akshat tells Rajeev abt Piyush he goes to meet him...

Rajeev leaves the house leaving Kashish confused.....
Kashish(thinks):yeh Rajeev koo achanak kya hogaya abhii tu mood sahiii tha ab itnay ghussay mein...aur Piyush say kya baat karni hai abhii subah tu aya tha woh..............

Rajeev reached Piyush's house....n bangs the door as the door is opens by a servan't...he shouts for PIYUSH.....just then Piyush cums out 4rm his room.....n they r in sitting room......

Piyush:Rajeev..tum kuch kaam tha abhii subah tu.......
Rajeev hold him 4rm his collar.......
Rajeev:tum itnay ghitya hosakatay hoo meinnay socha bhiii nahi tha....tumhari soch itni giri hoi hai.......
Piyush:par..bataoo tu mein nay kiya kya hai........
Rajeev:abb yeh bhii mei bataoo....tumnay Archie nay milkar mujay aur Kashish koo door karnay...koshish kii thii...woh sab abb mujsay chupa nahii hai......
Piyush...Rajeev say apna collar chorwata hai n relaxs hiself n says.........
Piyush:oh...to tumhein sachai kaa pata chal hii gaya...acha hai abb atleast tumharay samnay tu acha honay kaa natak nahii karna...paray gaa....aur mein nay tum dono koo alag karnay kii koshish nahii kii thi.....mei us mei kamyabb bhiii howa...waisay bhii jahan tak mujay yaad haii tum log eek hii kab howay k mei tumhei alag karo.......(he winks at Rajeev)......Kashish tu....
Rajeev:tum apni iss gandhii zubaan say Kashish kaa naam naa hii loo.....tumhein is naam say bulnay kaa koi haq nahii..usko calll her Mrs.Kashish Gerewal.......
Piyush:yeah yeah watever.....Kashish hoo yahan Kashish Gerwal....she is damn hot man......usay to koi bhii naa choraay...
Rajeev:u bas***d........(Rajeev giv him a punch on his face some more punches in his stomach.......he has his one teeth broken Rajeev is beating him very badly...he has now fallen on floor..his mouth is all bleeding..as Piyush is being beated he still tries to speak say.....)

Piyush:maar loo jitna marna hai Rajeev.....par mein Kashish koo paa kar hii rahoo gaaa.......

Rajeev:naa khabhii Kashish tumharii thiiii aur naa hii khabhii hogii...aur eek baat kaan khool kar sunoo ainda Kashish k ass pass bhii dekhay tu mein tumhein jaan say maar doon gaaa....STAY AWAY 4RM HER........he is abt to leave we Piyush interrups.......
Piyush:agr apnay pyar par...aur Mrs.Kashish Gerewal par itna hii bharoosa hai...tu tum Kashish koo nahii batoo gay k aaj humaray beech kya howa........phir mein dekhta hoo k tum Kashish kooo mujsay door kasiay rakhtay hoo....
Rajeev:mujay apna pyar kisi koo sabit karnay koo koi zaroorat nahii...lekin tumharay galat fehmii koo door karany k liye yehii sahii.....mein Kashish...koo kuch nahii bataoo ga...meray hotay howay don't u dare to cum close to her..i think i made myself clear.....he kicks once more in his stomach...n leaves..........
Piyush is left there he is all bleeding his face is looking like a smashed tomato....his jaws r swelling.......n he is taken to hospital by the servants...........
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Rajeev cums..out drives home..his hand is bleeding as during beatig he also got a little hurt.........but he still havn't noticed..........as is still in thinking shud he tell Kashish or not.....but finally convince himself itz wudn't b the rite time if Piyush wud doo somthing again he will handle it himself.......he has been wondering all day out thinkging abt the incident..he goes home in evening....Kashish has been waiting all afternoon but there was no sign of Rajeev n she was very dissappointed.......n angry.......
Here at home....Archie & Akshat... r back....
Kashish ,Akshat n & Archie all r sitting we Rajeev enter...he see Archie..n givs her a angery look goes directly to his room.Kashish follwos as she see him angry n is worried abt him n in this 4 get her anger... n Aksaht is worried abt Rajeev reaction........
In Room:
Rajeev:Kashish hum aaj hotel mei shift kar rahay hai ....pack all the things......
Kashish:par kyun....hum tu yehii rehnay walay thay....aur waisay bhii parsoo tu hum ghar jaaa rahay hai.......tu yeh hotel..........
Rajeev(shouts):mein nay jab eek bar kaha k pack up the things....tu karo...meray saath argument mat karo........
Just then Akshat enters.........n see tears in Kashish eyes....
Akshat:Rajeev eek min bahir chaloo..mujay tumsay kuch baat karniii hai.........
Rajeev moves out..........
Akshat:yeh sab kya kar raha hai..........
Rajeev:yaar abb mein iss ghar mein aur nahii raha sakta....
Archie....meri itni achii dost thii usay meray saath itna bada dhoka kyun kya mein eek dhokay bazz k gahr mein nahii raha sakta.......
Akshat:tu eek baat bhool raha haiii yeh mera bhii ghar hai...ruk jaaa eek hii tu din hai yahan par meray liye.......
Rajeev:nahi yaar mera maan nahii haii...
Akshat:bus keha diya too keha diya...
Rajeev:tu bhii aa..chal bus sirf eek din.......
Akshat:haan...haan..abb Kashsih koo jaa kar mana lay....
Rajeev:kyun usay kya howa.....
Rajeev didn't realized tat he shouted on Kashish....
Akshat:wah..tu kisi aur kaa ghussa us bechaari par uttar aya haii aur ketha hai k usay kya howa...........
Rajeev:ohh..no...chal acha mein chalta hoon....
he sees Archie standing there n givs her a look full of disgust....n leaves........
In Room...
Rajeev:Kashish...
Kashish:mei nay saara kuch pack kar diya hai........
Rajeev:koi baat nahii mei unpack kardoo gaa.
Kashish(confused):kyun hum jana nahii rahay........
Rajeev:nahii..woh.......
Kashish:ok...mein neechay kitchen mein jaa rahii hoo dinner kaa tim horaha hai...........
Rajeev:I am sorry Kashish......mein nay kisi aur ka ghussa tum par nikalal diya.......plz maaf kardoo.......
He is holding his ears.........wen Kashish notices blood on his hand........
Kashish:arre yeh kya..howa...
Rajeev:kuch nahiii chotii sii chot..hai..
Kashish:iskoo tum chotii sii chot kehtay hoo......mei abhi first aid kit lekar atii hoo...
Rajeev:rehnay doo..but Kashish has left already.....
Kashish wile puttig the onitment.....kaisay lagii..
Rajeev:bus gari say..acha tum jaldi say taayar hojaoo remember our plan 4 2nite...........waisay bhii mein aaj shopping k liye nahii aasaka ...............sorry again....
Kashish:itz ok...abhiiii...paar..tumhari chot....
Rajeev:haan......chot haath par hai...i hope tumhein gud mein uutta kar tu lekar jana nahii soo koi fariq nahii paray gaa....
Kashish hitz him playfully..........n say Rajeeeev tum mazak karnay say baaz nahi ayooo gay..........ok acha mei chage kar letii hoo tum bhii fresh hojayo..........
Rajeev:chalo...mera mazak hii tumharay chreay par muskrahat lay ata hai.........

Here the part endz...
(Ambarina ur wish fulfilled....Rajeev beated Piyush...now doo cooment.....)
Plz do coment guyz...
(Sawera)
Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Richa sukar hai tumnay likha....mindblowing part yaar👏👏👏...i realy loved wen Kashish slappe Piyush....u r just 2 gud..now write soon....

Amna..ur both stories r aswesome👏...contiue soon...... 😊
Edited by Kash_Sujal - 19 years ago
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GUYS I AM STARTING A NEW FAN FIC WELL IT IS INDEED A FICTUOUS STORY ITS NAME IS K2H2 MEANS KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI WELL IT IS SOMEWAT A LITTLE DIFFERENT AS I HAVENT USED KASH AND SUJAL BUT I HAVE USED AAMNA RAJEEV CHAITNYA SURVEEN VIKAS AND ETC IT MEANS IT IS BASED ON REAL NAMES BUT THE STORY IS DIFF I JUST WANTED TO EXPERIMENT IT
THIS IS JUST TO HAVE FUN NO OFFENDS TO ANYBODYAND IF SOME1 FEELS OFFENDED PLZ LET ME KNOW I WILL STOP AT ONCE THIS IS MY THOROUGH IMAGINATION AND NOTHIING ELSE--NIDHI(LKLK)
OK SO 1ST HERE IS A SMALL INTRO
AAMNA SHARIFF:-BEING FROM A CONSERVATIVE MUSLIM FAMILY HER WAY TO STARDOM WAS A LITTLE DIFFICULT SHE DID MANY ADS AND MUSIC VIDEOS BUT NIETHER OF THEM HELPED HER TO GAIN A FOOTHOLD IN THE INDUSTRY OF FAME BUT SHE GOT A FINAL BREAKTHROUGH .SHE WAS SELECTED TO PLAY THE LEAD IN THE BALAJI SERIAL KAHIN TO HOGA .NOW CUMING TO THE CHARACTERSKECTH(I WILL RATHER MAKE IT SIMPLE)SHE WAS A HUMBLE GIRL THE PEOPLE SHE LUVED WERE THE 1ST PRIORITY FOR HER HER WORRYS HER CONCERN WERE ALL VERY GENUINE SHE WAS AN INTROVERT AND A RESERVED KIND OF A PERSON AND SHE WAS AFRAID AS SHE SHUD BE A LITTLE OUTGOING PERSON.

RAJEEV KHANDELWAL:-IN 1 WORD I WUD DESCRIBE HIM AS A SOLDIER WHO IS DETERMINED THAT HE WILL WIN THE WAR IN THE SAME WAY RAJ WAS DETERMINED THAT HE WILL ALSO WIN OVER MILLIONS OF HEARTS BY HIS TALENT BUT LIFE WASNT EASY FOR HIM . AFTER WINNING THE GRASIM MR. INDIA AT 23 HE GOT A GUD BREAKTHROUGH AT THE AGE OF 24 HE WAS CHOSEN TO PLAY THE LEAD IN KTH AS SUJAL OPP. AAMNA SHARIFF WHO WAS TO PLAY KASHISH HE ACCEPTED IT AND LET DESTINY DECIDE FOR HIM THE FUTURE ..... HE WAS A BUBBLY AND A CHEERFUL PERSON HE WAS A VERY FUNNY HUMAN HE WAS A BEAUTIFUL PERSON FROM INSIDE.........
TWO COMPLETELY DIFF. PEOPLE BUT THE AMBITION WAS THE SAME WE WILL SEE HOW THEY SET THE TV SCREENS ON FIRE WITH THIER CHEMISTRY,,,,,,,,
COMING TO THE SUPPORTIVE PERSONS
CHAITANAYA CHOUDHRY:-NEWSPAPERS ARE FULL OF NEWS IN THE SAME WAY KTH IS FULL OF HOT HUNKS AFTER RAJ MY FAV THE SUPPORTIVE LEAD IN THE SOAP AKSHAT NOW PERSONALLY HE IS A BIG FLIRT A CASNOVA (IMAGINATION) A COMPLETE OPP OF THE CHARAC TER HE PLAYS IN THE SOAP
SHABBIR :- PLAYING THE MAIN VILLIAN IN THE SOAP A VERY VERY SEXY PERSON BUT IN THE SERIAL A FLAMBOYANT AND IN REAL LIFE JUST WAITS FOR THE ONE PERFECT GIRL OF HIS LIFE HE IS ALSO THE OPP OF RISHI THE NAME HE PLAYS IN THE SOAP
NOW THE DIRECTOR HER NAME IS NIDHI SAXENA WHO IS SOME TIMES SEEN SURFING INDIA FORUMS WITH A USERNAME LKLK AND NOW WAIT AND WATCH WAT FUTURE HOLDS FOR U

GUYS I KNOW THAT I AM RISKING BUT RISKS ARE A PART OF LIFE AND IF U LIKE IT PLZZZZZZ COMMENT AND IF U DONT LIKE IT THEN ALSO MENTION THE POINTS ON WHICH I HAVE TO WORK I WILL POST THE NEXT PART OF 'A LOVE STORY' AND NOW 'KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI' SOON PLZ COMMENT--NIDHI(LKLK)
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TOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD KASH_SUJAL SUPERURB I LOVED IT 👏 --NIDHI(LKLK)
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 idea Nidhiii 👏 👏 👏 ....write soon 😊

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