Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 146

Kahani Sujal aur Kashish kii.......(Part 9)

Reacp:Sujal fially accepts Kashish love......
Itz 2:am n still sum pl r not able 2 sleep who else r very ow sujal n kashish lets see wat r they doing.........

Kashish is talking to Sujal on phone..........

Kashish: Sujal tum kya kar rahe thay?????

Sujal: hmmm........ kuch khaas nahi bas aise hi

Kashish: bas aise hi

Sujal: haan aise hi

Kashish(in a teasing tone):Kuch tu kya karrooo ....kuck kaam wagra ahi hai kyaa

Sujal: hai naa tum say yar karna aur tumhein miss karna

Kashish(very hay 2 listen this 4rm sujal):really..............

In da meanwhile Kashish cud answer........

Enters Mr.Sinha

Mr.Sinha: Kashish y haven't u slept till now?

Kashish(really don't know wat 2 say): Wo ......dad....... main phone.............

Mr.Sinha: ye kaise baat kar rahi ho tum

Kashish: Mmmmmmain main kaise ???kaisay bhi to nahi mm...main h........humesha ki tarah hi to baat kar rahi hoon dad

Mr.Sinha (confused): I think u r not in ur senses we will talk tomorrow.

He leaves.

Kashish: Ufffff thank god

Sujal(badly laughing): ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Kashish: Has kya rahe ho? pata hai main kabhi dad ke saamne itni nervous nahi hui aur kabhi dad iss tarah mere kamre me nahi aaye aaj hi aana tha unhe. Sujal will you stop laughing now?

Sujal: No I cant control yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish: Ohhhh to tumhe mera mazaak uraane me maza aata hai

Sujal: Aur nahi to kya.... tum ho hi itni sweet -- aur pata hai kya gusse me to aur bhi khubsurat lagti ho!!

Kashish: bas bas itni tarif mat karo main digest nahi kar paongi

Sujal: achcha

Kashish: ok now good night

Sujal: good night wo bhi itni jaldi??

Kashish: Mr.Sujal Garewal mujhe kal college jaana hai aur pichli baar ki tarah main college miss nahi karna chahti .. tumhe yaad hai last time kya hua tha?

Sujal: Nahi kya hua tha

Kashish: pichli baar jab hum baat kar rahe the tab tumne phone nahi rakhne diya tha aur pata hai jab humne rakha to kya hua?

Sujal: Kya?

Kashish: Tabhi achanak mere phone par alarm baja --- and it was time for college

Sujal: achcha aisa hua tha kya mujhe to aisa kuch yaad nahi hai

Kashish: jhoote kahin ke ....... Ok now good night!!

Sujal: ..........................................................

Kashish: hmmm to ab kuch bologe nahi

Sujal: hun..................

Kashish: achcha ab phone rakho........

Sujal: tumhe sona hai tum rakho..........

Kashish: nahi tum rakho

Sujal: main kyun????????

Kashish: ok baba main hi rakhti hoon par pehle bolo good night

Sujal: GOOD NIGHT

Kashish: Sweet dreams

Sujal: Bye

Kashish: Bye

Sujal: Love u

Kashish: Love u 2

Sujal: love u 3

Kashish shyly smiles 2 herslef n say phir shruoo hogaya n

puts the phone down.

Sujal looks up and watched that his mom is standing out there.

ok continuing KTH 2....plz isse paro....mere trps neeche nahi girne chahiye samrene 😡 😆 😆

recap:...sujal is sad and sits by the lake....kashish meets him there but they are interuupted by toooshar!.phir sujal aur kashish mein marne marane ki baatein hoti hain..so now continuing...oh and yes...this part is dedicated to kiran.....(coz she told me too 😆 )

.......sujal:...keh mein sach much mar jaonga.....
kashish:..SUJAL......(she truns away)
sujal:...o o....sorry kashish....mein mazaq kar raha tha...
kashish:..muje tumse baat nahi karni.....
sujal:...kashish...mein ne sorry kaha na..plz
kashish:...aur mein ne bhi tumhe yeh baat itni dafa kahi hai.....phir bhi tum baz nahi ate...
sujal:..ok baba....ab se yeh lafz apni zabaan peh nahi laonga...
kashish:...jhooth bol rahe ho
sujal:..tumhari kasam...
kashish turns around and looks at him suspiciously...
sujal:..ab bhi bharosa nahi hai?
kashish:...zaida emotional hone ki zaroorat nahi hai....chalo ghar chalein...(she starts to walk when sujal grabs her hand and pulls her towards himself)
sujal:..pehle ek smile....
kashish:..sujal!....
sujal:.sirf ek smile....
kashish nods her head and then smiles slightly:..khush....ab chalein......
sujal:...ahn ahn.....
kashish:..ab kya?yehi sari raat guzarni hai?
sujal:...kya yeh waqt tham nahi sakta....
kashish:..mere bus mein hota to pyaar keh sare lamhe thaam leti....kisi dhuuk ki gunjaish hi nahi rehti....
par abhi bahut der ho rahi hai....chaloooo..(kashish starts to move when her pair phisalofies from the stone and she gets hurt and falls down......
sujal:..kashhiiish!...(grabs her quickly)...itni kya jaldhi thi...dekha na ...kitni zaida chot laggayi hai....
(he touches her feet....it was bleeding)
kashish:..aahhh!
sujal:...(gets really tensed...gets a rumal from his pocket and wraps it around her feet so that the bleeding stops....)....doctor keh pass chalte hain...
kashish:..nahi sujal....choti si chot hai...
sujal:...itna ghera zakham hai aur tum keh rahi ho keh yeh choti si chot hai.....
kashish:..sujal tum khamkha itni tension le rahe ho...mein theek hon....(she tries to get up but falls down again holidng sujal's arm....sujal raises his hand in the air to tell her to stop moving....he then picks her up in his arms....kashish warps her arms aound his shoulder and looks into his eyes.....sujal too constantly gazed at kashish....barish time.......and yes it starts to rain.....sujal aur kashish keh doosre ki ankhon mein aise khowe huwe the keh barish ka bhi ehsaas nahi tha unhe.....jab ek dum se bijli chamakti hai.....and kahsish hugs sujal..........
ab ek gana ho jaye......
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai...thoda hai baqi......
kashish and sujal still looking at each other.....(bechara thaaak gaya hoga kashish ko utha utha keh....lol)
so now dono gari ki taraf chal ke jate hain......obviously sujal still carrying kashish in his arms..
sujal makes her comfortable in the car.......and they drive back home.....

its pretty late in the night....so everyone is almost asleep....
kashish gari se utarti hai when sujal stops her
sujal:..yeh kya kar rahi ho
kashish:..andar ja rahi hon
sujal:is halat mein..
kashish:..kyun?
sujal:..koi zaroorat nahi hai pair peh zor dene ki.....mein araha hon
kashish:...sujal...tum thaak jaoge....
sujal:....agar tumhare paas rehna thakawat hai to mein roz thakne ko tayar hon....(he winks at her and she hits him on his shoulder)
kashish:..bahut be sharam ho gaye ho....
sujal:...pyar mein kaisi sharam.....(kaisi sharam kiran? 😆 😆 )
sujal gets down and again picks up kashish and walks to thier room!.....

ok....ab kamre mein....ahem ahem.....
sujal:...(kashish ko bistar peh leta ta hai and goes to get the medical box thingy).....mein abhi aya
he gets back and applies the ointment.......
sujal: ab kaisa hai?
kashish:..(smiles weakly)...theek hai!
sujal (looks closely at her aur ek dum se neeche jhuk keh kashish keh feet ko pyaar se kiss karta hai....):...aur ab?
kashish shies!.....
sujal:....(comes close to her and sits beside her....putting one hand across her!,....kashish looks down....with sharam.... 😳 aur uske baal uske chehre peh ajate hain......
sujal blows them with a halki si blow....then moves them back with one of his hand......brings his face close to hers and kisses her forehead......
song time again:....
seene mein dil
dil mein dharkan
dharkan mein kya hai
teri pyaas hai
har pyaas mein
dard hai sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas haiiiiiii
oh dilo janna....teri tamana...hai arzoooo
all this time they remebered their past romantic and close moments......
kashish:..aise kyun dekh rahe ho?
sujal:....apne khuwaab ko sach hota dekh raha hon....
kashish:...is sach ko pyaar mein badaldo.....
sujal:...yeh pyaar hi to sach hai....baqi sab sirf ek jhooth.....(hehehe confusing)
kashish:...i love you!
sujal:....yeh sunne keh liye kab se intezaar kiya hai....
kashish hugs him tightly!........sujal too brings his arms around her.....then slowly moves her hair to one side and kisses her on her shoulder....... 😳 😳 😳
aur agaye.....hmmmm...bahut kuch hota hai...... agle part mein bataongi..... 😳
dekha ppl...sujal zinda hai...nahi mara..... 😆 😆 😆 .......coming up.....what follows this romance......and ...some new twists too.....tc...love
farah!..(kiran khush ya aur bhi detail chahiye... 😛 )

hehehe kash_sujal.....great part.....it made me smile....i am still smiling...hehehehehe 👏
bechara mm keh haathon ka bakra banne ga 😛 😛

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all others continue
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rzoo is Dil Kii...

If Sujal thought that that wud give her solace he was so wrong for Kashish started weeping on his arm.Sujal was bewildered.but one thing was sure he cudnt bear her crying like that.he cudnt control himself n shifted in his seat so that Kashish put her head on his chest while still crying.He wrapped his arms around her n started running his fingers thru her hair murmuring comforting words like...dont worry...everything is ok....dont cry. Kashsih was still crying.Tears started to appear at the corner of his eyes.it was a long time since they sat like that in each other's arms.

then Kashsih said slowly: my mom died the same way....

Sujal cud feel her tears trickling down his chest.he wiped her tears n asked in gentle tones: tell me Kashish wat happened exactly?tell me everything.n his grip tightened arund her.

Kashish said haltingly trying hard to control her tears: i was 10 yrs old when me n my mum went for shopping.i saw a candyman on the other side of the road n asked my mum to bring me one.she went n when she was coming back i saw what candy she bought n told her that i wanted the other one.she was walking towards me n asking which one.suddenly she was hit by a truck.she didnt see the truck as she was busy talking to me.there was blood everywhere n i was just totally dumbstruck.didnt knew what to do.then few nearby ppl took her to hospital but she was declared brought dead.i lost her. n now dad is also not fine. when he suffered the heart attack once again that fear of lonliness gulped me.i was shattered.

Sujal: but didnt uncle marry again?

Kashsih: no he loved mum too much to marry again. he still cry for her at times when he thinks no one can see. but i have.it was all my fault.if i hadnt asked for that candy my mum wud be still alive.sometimes i feel so lonely. when i used to look at other children of my age coming to school with their mum i felt like dying.

Sujal:shh...dont say like that.it wasnt ur fault.jo hona hota hai wo hokar rehta hai.

Kashish:tumhe pata hai main sab ke saamne to strong bane rehne ka dikhava karti hu but i know how my each day passes.i have no one to share my sorrows.i cudnt talk abt mum with dad as i dont want to hurt him n nor with gudiya.she didnt knew her much.she was small at that time.mujhe ek ma, ek dost ki kami humesha mehsoos hoti hai.theres no one to understand me, to teach me,to share my feelings.i feel so alone.

Sujal carressed her cheek n said: u r not alone Kashish. i m there with u always.u can talk to me netime.

Kashsih felt a contentment spread thru her n hugged Sujal tightly.she wasnt embarrased for what she did now.she knew there was truth in every word , in every breath of Sujal.She trusted him from her heart n soul.then she released herself from his grip n sat back.he gave her his handkerchief n she wiped her tears.then Sujal put forward his hands n said: Friends...???

Kashsih gave a small smile n clutched his hand n said: Friends....n thank u Sujal.i know i behaved very childishly but all those memories came flooding back coz of that incident.

Sujal: oh common Kashish theres no thanx n no sorry b/w frnds.n as for ur childish behaviour tum bhi insaan ho koi pathar nahi.itne saalon se tumne itna bada dukh apne dil mein chupa rakha tha,akele hi sab kuch sehti rahi,tumhe bhi to koi samajhne wala hona chaiye.its part of human needs.now just promise me ki tumhe kabhi bhi koi bhi problem ho to tum mujhse share karogi..

Kashsih:ok i promise...ab chale.its already very late.

Kashish was trying to act normal but still cudnt.Sujal sensed it n gripped her hand comfortingly.

he said softly: dont worry Kashsih nothing will happen to uncle.

Kashsih was surprised as to how cud Sujal know wat she was thinking at that time.he removed his hand n started for her home.

Arzoo is Dil Kii...

They reach Mehra residence.both of them gets out of the car.Sujal observes that the house was very magnificent looking.it had a very big lawn in front with the sitting area n a swing.

Sujal: u have a very beautiful house

Kashish:thank u.lets go inside.papa must be waiting.

They reach the door n Kashsih rings the bell.it is opened by an old man.

Kashish: Sujal inse miliye, yeh hai ramu kaka.ye yahan pe tab se hai jab mein sirf 5 saal ki thi.aur ramu kaka ye hai Sujal.

Kaka: namaste saab.

Sujal:pls aap mujhe saab mat kahiye.main aapse umar mein bahut chota hu.

Kashish looks at Sujal when he says that n observes that he was smiling.she liked his gesture.

Kashish:ramu kaka papa kahan hai???

Kaka: betiya wo to living room main aapka intezaar kar rahe hai.aap log chaliye mein khana lagata hu.

Ramu kaka walks off n he is thinking to himself:ye Kashish betiya n aaj mujhe un saab(he remembered wat Sujal said n smiles) se aise kyun milvaya???pehle bhi to itne mehmaan aaye hai par unhone sabse to mujhe kabhi nahi milvaya.kher job hi ho wo saab hai bahut achche.

Kashish n Sujal enters living room.Rajat is watching television(he is watching newz n not balaji rubbish).he sees them entering n stands up.

Sujal: namaste uncle.kaise hai aap aur apki tabiyet kaisi hai???aap davayi to time pe le rahe hai na???aur ab aap apne aap ko zyada stress to nahi dete na???(he said all this in one breath)

Rajat laughs aloud: baap re itne saare sawal ek saath.tum to bilkul doctors jaise baat karte ho.pehle baith jao aram se phir main tumhare saare sawalon ka jawab de dunga.

Sujal smiles n sit on the sofa.Kashish is observing all this n is touched by the concern Sujal is showing towards her dad.

Kashish:aap log baatein kijiye main khana lagvati hu. saying so she leaves from there.

Rajat:ab pucho kya puchna hai.

Sujal enquires abt his health n Rajat answers him.then they talk abt the market conditions n business.

Sujal takes out the gift n hands it to Rajat:uncle ye aap ke liye.mana mat kariyega pls.i really respect u a lot n this is a small gesture from me.

Rajat: par beta iski kya zarurat thi????

Arzoo is Dil Kii...

Sujal gives him a pleading look n asks innocently:uncle aap mujhe beta kehte hai to kya aap meri itni si baat nahi manenge.rakh lijiye pls.

Rajat smiles: achcha baba ab emotionally blackmail mat karo aur itni masum si shakal mat banao mujhe hasi aa jayegi.

Sujal:thank you uncle.

Rajat: arre beta main to tumse puchna hi bul gaya.kya loge tum????he indicates towards the bar.

Sujal: nahin uncle thank u. I don't fancy drinking.wo to bus parties main kabhi kabar leni padti hai formalities ke liye.aur vaise bhi aap ko to doctor ne mana kar rakha hai na drink karne se. it was a statement rather than the question.

Raajat: haan wo to hai. par main kabhi kabhi drink kar sakta hu. aur vaise bhi aaj to celebration ka din hai.

Sujal: no uncle u wont.we can celebrate without drinks also.

Kashish sees them laughing n smiling n thinks to herself: Sujal kitni jaldi ghul gaya dad se.it seems as if dono ek dusre ko bahut pehle se jaante hai.dad is also looking so comfortable with him.(she looked as Sujal said something n Rajat was laughing n patting his back.)it looks as if ...as if....she is mustering courage to say those words...it looks as if Sujal is a member of this family.n when those last words came from her mouth she smiled unknowingly.

ramu kaka comes out n sees Kashish looking at Sujal n smiling.he treats Kashish as his own child n her feelings cudnt be hidden from his observant n experienced eyes.he came to know that instant the Kashish is in love with Sujal.

he goes near her says: kya dekh rahiho betiya???kahan kho gayi???tum to saab logo ko bulane jaa rahi thi na??

Kashish turns around n quickly hides her smile. she is very embarrased n says hastily: wo kuch nahi kaka. main abhi bulati hu.n saying so she leaves hurridly before he cud ask her another question.

Kashish enters the living room.both men look up at her.she is somewhat still red in face with embarrasment.Sujal observes this n raises his eyebrow in curiosity.he was amused by Kashish's expressions.

gud job ambarina
luved this part because of the romance

Pooja
cant wait for the next part and farha please do continue your story
and natz and rameena

please please some one write!!!

Arzoo is Dil Kii...

Kashish: um.. woh khana lag gaya hai. chaliye dining room main chalte hai.

Rajat: haan chalo beta.tumhe bhi bhuk lag rahi hogi.main bus abhi davayi lekar aata hu. n he leaves towards his room.

Kashish likes the way Rajat is calling Sujal beta.Sujal gets up n both r looking at each other.

Kashish:chale???

Sujal smiles n they walk out of the room.as they pass the lobby Sujal sees a photo of a lady with garland on it.he stops there to look at it.Sujal observed that it was Kashish's mother.Kashish had her mothers eyes n smile.

Kashish comes from behind n says slowly: yeh mumma hai.

Sujal looks at her with mixed expressions n says very gently: ur mom was very beautiful....he stops for a second n then says....just like u.

Kashish is surprised at his words n looks in his eyes n knows that instant that he was thinking abt the incident that happened in the car.she lowers her gaze n says somewhat shyly: thank u.

just then kaka calls them n they walks towards the diining table.all three of them sit.Rajat raises his glass of soft drink n says "to our dream project".Sujal n Kashish raise their glasses n repeat the words.they r talking abt nething n everything from corruption to crime rates to politics to filmdom.Kashish found Sujal very knowledgeble in every field.he seemed up to date abt everything.it seemed as if the three of them had a tiring day n were discussing abt it.they finished their food .

Sujal said:aaj bade dino baad ghar ke khane jaisa taste aaya.really felt very contented.food indeed was very tasty.

Rajat: kyun beta tum roz ghar ka khana nahi khate ho kya???

Sujal: nahi uncle aisi koi baat nahi hai.breakfast to main subah office main kar leta hu aur dinner raat ko kaka banake rakh jaate hai, wo kha leta hu.

Kashish: aur lunch??? aap lunch nahi karte kya???she was surprised n worried at the same time.

Sujal: nahin ab roz roz main bahar ka nahin kha sakta aur phir main is shaher mein naya hu isiliye abhi yahan theek se kisis ko jaanta bhi nahi hu.

Rajat: beta tum aise kaise keh sakte ho??? ab to tum hume jaant ho na.kal se tumhara lunch yahan se jayega.

Sujal: nahin nahin uncle iski zarurat nahi. main manage kar lunga.

Kashish: aap aise kaise manage kar lenge???aise hi chalta raha to thode din main aap bimar pad jayenge.its decided ke kal se aapka din ka tiffin yahin se jayega.

Sujal: par...

Rajat: par var kuch nahin.its my order.

Arzoo is Dil Kii...

Sujal just smiles: aap bahut achche hai uncle.really i give u so much trouble.

Rajat: uncle bhi kehte ho aur takleef ki bhi baat karte ho???

after that they have their coffee in the lounge n discuss abt the project.after sometime Sujal : achcha uncle ab mujhe chalna chaiye. bahut der ho gayi hai. aap bhi ab rest kar lijiye.

Rajat: beta bahut achcha laga ke tum aaye.aate rehna.Kashish jao Sujal ko bahar tak chod aao.

Sujal: uncle mujhe bhi bahut din baad ghar jaisa atmosphere laga.ab to aap nahin bulayenge to bhi main aa jaya karunga.bye uncle.n both take their leave.

Sujal n Kashish are at the door.

Sujal: thank u for the dinner.it was really very nice of u to invite me.i had a very lovely time.

Kashish: thank u to mujhe aap ko kehna chaiye.bade dino baad papa ko aaj aise haste hue dekha.nahin to wo humesha tension mein hi rehte the.aap yun hi aate rahiyega.

both look at each other n Kashish feels herself drowning in those black depths.she gathers all her will power n tore her gaze from him.

Sujal said softly: good night n pleasent dreams.meet u tom.

Kashish: same to u.

Sujal leaves from there.he is still thinking abt Kashish n the earlier car incident.he cud still feel her in his arms n blushes unknowingly.he stops the car on red light when a boy selling books come towards him.at first hi fends him off then suddenly he opens his door n calls him back.he buys the book n leaves.

he reaches home n takes out the book.then he realises wat made him buy this book.its title was "Arzoo is dil ki" n the author was someone called "Mannat".he remembered the name of the artist of that painting was "Arzoo" n thats what made him buy it.he felt connected to that painting n same was the case with the book.though he hadnt read the book still he felt he knew wat was in it. he put it aside n went to sleep.he was very tired n full n so slept deeply.

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