Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 104

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Posted: 19 years ago
please someone write their story

Pooja 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww...tht was soooo cute...all the stories are lovely...pls continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol... iv got my xams in 2 hrs time n im cheking out if ny1 hs ritten a part!! 😆 😳

plsss cont. all of you!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

EAST OR WEST PYAAR IS THE BEST
reacap : hua tha..kuch chatpata romance
😆 ..piyush :
ghumshuda...meri dil rooba..ghumsudaa..meri..dilruba..rehti hai yeheen nahiin..dhekhne main hai woh haseen..kho gayi...haa..kho gayi(khilona hai jo ho jayegii kya)..
vassu :
uffff...mirchi.. 😡 ..
vassu is celebrating..kyun kay usne kashish ko apne jaal main phasa liya..kashish tho uski beti hai..lekin..lalit ki nahiin..still laalo luvs her.... shocked ?
lalit..bechara..har roz pii kar ghar lothta hai..apna gham celebrate karne ke liye..wais ehai to woh innocent..lekin..vassu has manipulated evry1z nimd in such a way...
cg...bechaara..usse to yeh bhi nahiin pata..keh uski bachpan kay dost kii beti..uske ghar ayi yui hai..kal uthkar phone karegaa.bajaj mere yaar..kaise ho ? vishaka tushki kooki sab kaise hai ?
bajaaj kahe gaa..meri beti..to tere yahaan hain na..?
😕
cg kahega : hein ???????lol..bolo..lol(kyun lolly)
haha..ok
ok..now itz been a few days..lalit and rishi..are still in jaipur..i snt them there..kash still hazunt met thm..
sujal and kashish again have a ..quarrel..but its slightly serious thz time..sujal accuses her..of being a dhokebaaz..blahblah..
kashish apne kamre main behte roye jaa rahi hai..usse nahiin pata..kyun uske saat aise ho raha hai...
kashish : kyun meri hi kismat itni kharaab hai..kyun hamesha..mere saat hi bura ho tha..kyun koi mujhe samaj tha nahiin..sujal is bahar...he hears evrythng..(oh itz night time)..he knocks on kashishs door..kashsih hastily wipes her tears...and sys in a feeble voice : c..cum in ?
sujal wlks in..kashish looks at him..thn looks down..
sujal : TUM ro rahi thi..
kashish : main..nahiin..nahiin to? main kyun roongii..roye mere dushmann..
sujal : main tho nahiin ro raha tha..
kashish : tumse kisne kahaa tum mere dushmann ho...she stops as she realizes wht she has said..she loox dwn..sujal moves closer to her
sujal : kashish..tum ro KYUN rahi thi ?
kashish : main nay kahaa naa..main nahin ro rahi thi..tum hota kaun ho mujhse yeh sawaal karne waale..anywayz huh ?
sujal : thtz quite beside the point kashish....apne aansoon mujhse chupaane ki koshish mat karo..nahiin hoga tumse...
kashish loox at him..
sujal grabs her hand and take sher downstairs..he tn removes a few thngs out..kashish is asking him to leave her..sujal brngs her into the kitchen and leaves her hand..
sujal :When things in your life seem almost too much to handle, when 24 hours in a
day are not enough, remember the mayonnaise jar..and the 2 cups of
coffee...

sujal stood b4 kashish with some items in front of
him. wordlessly, he picked up a very large, empty
mayonnaise jar and proceeded to fill it with golf balls. He then asked the
kashish if the jar was full. kashish not knowing where thz waz leading thm 2 agreed it was.

sujal then picked up a box of pebbles and poured them into the jar.
He shook the jar lightly. The pebbles rolled into the space between the
Golf balls. He then asked kashish again if the jar was full. she
agreed it was.

sujal next picked up a box of sand and poured it into the jar. Of
course the sand filled up everything else. He asked once more if the jar
was full. kashish responded with a unanimous "yes."

sujal then poured two cups of coffee into the jar, effectively filling the empty
space between the sand. kashish laughed weakly.

sujal:"Now,I want you to
recognize that this jar represents your life. The golf balls are the
important things - God, family, your children, your health, your friends
and your favorite passions - things that if everything else was lost and
only they remained, your life would still be full. The pebbles are the
other things that matter, like your job, your house, and your car. The sand
is everything else; the small stuff.

"If you put the sand into the jar first there is no room for the pebbles or
the golf balls. The same goes for life. If you spend all your time and
energy on the small stuff, you will never have room for the important
things.

"Pay attention to the things that are critical to your happiness. Play with
your children. Take time to get medical checkups. Take your spouse/date
out to dinner. Play another 18. There will always be time to clean the
house and fix the disposal.

"Take care of the golf balls first - the things that really matter. Set
your priorities. The rest is just sand."

kashish getting his point smiled at him and inquired what the coffee
represented. sujal smiled. "I'm glad you asked. It just goes to
show you that no matter how full your life may seem, there's always room
for a couple of cups of coffee with a friend...sujal thn looked at kashish..
sujal : aisi hai humari zindagi kashish..i care for u isliye..sujal stops realizing wht he said..
kashish is a lil surprised..sujal thn loox arnd..
sujal : agar...if u ever need anythng..plz dont bother bothering me.i have better thngz to do..thn to wste my time on u..and ur problems..as a host..maine tumhe samjhadiya..kay i dont want u spreading manhoosiyat in the house by cryng 24/7..so plz..live..and let live.
kashish is stunned..who even asked him to butt in in the frst place..and wht the blazes duz he mean bu mahnoosiyat..at another time..kashish wld have slapped the persons face 😆 ..lekin thz time she flt hurt..tears strted forming in her eyes but she controlled thm..yet she waznt able to hide the pain in her eyes...sujal immediately strted cursng himslf..y do i do thz alwayz..cnt i put my attitude to a side at lst once ? kyun main hamesha na chaate hue bhhi kashish ko dard pohonchaata hoon ?aur fir uska dard dekh bhi nahiin sakta..kashish runs back to her room..locks the door..and cries hrslf to sleep..sujal CANT sleep ...he duznt sleep the whole night..he knows he loves kashish...tomorrow.kal main usse apne dil ki baat batadoon ga..or maybe ill juz apologize to her..who knows !?!?sujal aur kashish..kitne ajeeb hai naa..lekin guyz dont worry..mera koi iraada nahiin hai..inhe..itne jaldi apnay pyaar ko confess karne kaa..abhi do mehnay aur..yaar not 2 din..bohot ssaareee probz hogi..ill give u li'l jhalak..piyush..vassu..lalit/rishi/kashish...akshat..kripa & angad...cg..har koi aik mushkil bane gaa..in their own good way..lekin it wil beee(ac makhi waapis agayi..can i borrow sum anti makhi now )fun..it will be kaal kaal may humtum kare dhamaal..move ur body to the taal taal..right no witz the kaal kaal ppl..srk looked so hot in tht sng..neywayz...
take care
commentofy
dnt frget
juhi 😃


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Posted: 19 years ago
Sujal without telling kashish and anyone else plans to go to Rajasthan for his honeymoon. He doesnt let anyone know abt it.

All of them leave for the airport. Akshat-Charu, vArun - Mehak check in. Sujal and Kashish are in a seperate car. The flight is abt to leave for goa in 20min time but sujal and kashish hvnt reahed the airport. Akshat is alling Sujal but sujal is not taking his call as he knows they would want to know wen they are reachinghte airport na dhis and kashish's flight to jaipur is after 2 hrs.

kashish: Sujal humein der ho rahi hai. Flight mein bas 15 min rahe gaye hai.

Sujal: Nahin hamari filght mein abhi 2 ghante hai.

Kashish: kya matlab hai tumhara.

Sujal: hum goa nahi jaa rahe we are going to Rajasthan and our flight to jaipur is after 2 hrs.

KAshish: par sab hamara intezaar kar rahe honge.

Sujal: Woh tho ab flight mein hogi aur samajh jayenge ki hum nahin aa rahe.

Kashish: Sujal tum bi naa bahut zidi ho jo chahte ho wahi karte ha.

Sujal: Woh tho hai.

Akshat tries sujal number for the last time. Sujal picks up the phone this time.

Akshat: aap kahan hai bhaiya flight 15 min mein take off karne wali hai. WE r waiting for u. Where r u

Sujal: Actually mein aur kashish nahin aa rahe tume loog jao

Akshat : Wat do u mean bhaiya???????

Sujal: I mean wat i said.

Akshat: Sab samajh gaya bhaiya. Aap bhi nnaaaa

AKshat keeps down the phone. Charu, Varun and mehak ask him abt sujal and kashish. He tells them they are not coming with us. Hearing this they all start laughing.
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Here sujal and kashish reach the airport and take the flight to jaipur. Sujal has made arrangements in a resort in jaipur where they will be staying for 2 days and proceed further.

Sujal and Kashish reach the airport. A car is waiting for them. They reach the resort. It is 7:30 in the evening. The resort is all lighted up and decorated with flowers.

Kashish gets down from the car. There is a person standing with a rose for her. He gives her the rose. Then a path of flowers is made. She looks at sujal. Sujal ishara karta hai usko un par chalne ke liya. Andar jaa kar they are taken to there room. The whole room is decorated with flowers. There are red roses all over. There are rose petals on the bed all over.

Kashish is really happy to see all this. Sujal closes the door of the room. And goes near kashish.

Sujal: Do you like it?

Kashish: I love it.

She hugs sujal and says itna pyar karte ho mujh se.

Sujal - isa bhi zyaada. Tumne jo khushi mujhe di hai yeh sab uske samne kuch bhi nahin hai.

Kashish - I love you and really love u very much. She kisses him on the cheek

Then both of them get close to each other.
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Posted: 19 years ago
golu and vicious great story 👏 rajeevac plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 stories guyz plz continue soon 😊
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After 2 weeks sujal and kashish come back home. Sujal and kashish go and meet veena and then simran.

Simarn: Bhaiya i was missing u.

Sujal: Me too gudiya.Aur baata kaisi hai meri gudiya.

Here rishi comes from behind and starts teasing Sujal.

Sujal: Idhar aa tere ko baatata hua.

Rishi: Sorry big B he laughs and runs away.

Suajl is also smiling as he knows rishi loves doing all this.

But kashish are embarrased. Both of them go to there room.

It is kashish's Birthday after 2 days Sujal wants to give her a surprise but doesnt know wat to do.

Kashish has gone to meet her parents along wiht charu and mehak.

Sujal is sitting in his room and thinking wat shld he give kashish for her b'day he wants to give her a surprise. Rishi enters the room.

Rishi: Big B kya soch rahe hoo.

Sujal: ABas kuch nahin tu baata kaisa hai.

Rishi: Mein tho theek hua par aap theek nahin lag rahe bahut khoye khoye se lag rahein hai. Kya baat hai kashish bhabhi ko miss kar rahe hai. Abhi ek ghanta pehla tho woh gayi hai. aur abhi se unhe miss kar rahe hai.

Sujal: Rishi tu bhi aisi koi baat nahin hai.

Rishi: sachi aisi koi baat nahin

Sujal: Rishi youuuuuu (there is a magzine in his hand and he hits rishi with it)

Adn then both of them laugh.

Sujal: Rishi meri maadad kare ga

Rishi: boliya, kya kashish bhabhi ko abhi wapis le aaon.

Sujal: rishi bas kar meri baat suna. Woh na mein kashish ko uske b'day par surprise party dena chahta hua. Will u help me????

Rishi: why not bhaiya yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai aap boliya.

Sujal then tells him his plan. Rishi says why not bhaiya.
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It is the evening before kashish's birthday. Sujal comes back from the office at 6o'clock

Kashish: Aaj itni jaldi aa gayi kya hua.

Sujal: woh mujhe mumbai ke liya aaj raat ko nikalna hai. Bahut imp meeting hai kal subha.

Kashish: Aap aaj raat ko jaa rahe hai.

Sujal: kyon kya hua?????

Kashish: kuch nahin bas waise hee. (in her mind she is thinking sujal doesnt even remember my b'day)

Sujal: kashish pls help me in my packing my flight is at 11o'clock.

Kashish: ya sure (says it in a sad tone)

Sujal knows that kashish is not liking it but he ssays to hmself jab tumhe surprise doonga tho tum kitni kush hogi.

Sujal has asked rishi to make all the arrangements for he party. Rishi takes mouli's help.

Rishi and mouli have booked a hotel room in marriot.

Sujal asks kashish to come and drop her at the airport. Sujal and kashish leave for the airport. Rishi gives a call to sujal that all the arrangements for kashish's b'day have been made and he could take her there. Rishi wishes sujal aall the best.

Sujal: wat the flight has been delayed by 2 hrs.

Sujal turns to kashish and says

Sujal: my flight will take off at 1:00 am i have some time lets go somewhere.

Kashish is upset with sujal as she thinks he doesnt even remember her b'day. Kashish says lets go to the airport u wait for ur flight and i will go back home.

Sujal: why kashish wat happened chalona mere saath. (he makes a sad face and kashish cant see him like this so she agrees)

Sujal takes her to marriot. He opens the door of the room and tells kashish to move in first as she enters the room ose petals are from the top fall on her. She is surprised sujal enters and sings happy b'day to you. Happy b'day my dear wife happy b'day to u.

Kashish is really happy.

Kashish: sujal yeh sab.

Sujal: tumhe laga ki mein tumhara b'day bhul gaya hua.

Kashish nods her head.

Sujal: Tum bilkul pagal ho mein tumhara b'day bhul sakta hua tumne aisa socha bhi kaise.

Sujal and kashish cut the b'day cake and they both are sitting on the bed and are chatting. Kashish realises that in 1 hr time sujal flight will tkae off

Kashish: Sujal tumhari flight miss ho jayegi humein ab chalna chahiya.

Sujal: Kaun si flight. Woh tho maine jooth bola that tumhe ghar se akela bahar nikalane ke liya.

Kashish: I love u a lot sujal pls dont u ever leave and go anywhere i wont be able to live without u and ur love. She has tears in her eyes.

Sujal wipes her tears and says:- kaisi baat kar rahi ho mein tumhe kabhi bhi chod kar jaa sakta hua. I also love u and love u a lot.

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